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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 7:27 pm

Hmm... I already did a story about Zero infiltrating Poll Central (*shot*), so I think, later tonight maybe, I'll do a story about Zero or Tarisu infiltrating Poll Alley. >>

Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 7:42 pm

Tindzel

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*Relases his Demon powers to get free and goes with Kai_Chi, hugs and kiss her* heart
wait.... should i save the others? xd

Man, you dead. xd

me? dead gonk never xd
Bring DG I'll fight now, lol blaugh xd

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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 7:47 pm

Piya

*giggles again about being mentioned* X3

your not alone hehe

Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 9:36 pm

I'm still reading the story and will give my real comment once done but I have another critque for you...

"The four moderators watched in horror, as a white, ghostly figure evaporated from them, and flew into the portal."

You said it was me, blends, LTD, and Kobras... not to be mean but she is not a mod here... sweatdrop

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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 9:43 pm

It was good though, I'm worried about everyone that is captive... crying Damn DG and her wicked plans... gonk

Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 9:44 pm

Suzaka Mizuhane

I'm still reading the story and will give my real comment once done but I have another critque for you...

"The four moderators watched in horror, as a white, ghostly figure evaporated from them, and flew into the portal."

You said it was me, blends, LTD, and Kobras... not to be mean but she is not a mod here... sweatdrop

But she was a mod at PC. 3nodding

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Posted: Mon Apr 18, 2005 9:46 pm

Tindzel

Suzaka Mizuhane

I'm still reading the story and will give my real comment once done but I have another critque for you...

"The four moderators watched in horror, as a white, ghostly figure evaporated from them, and flew into the portal."

You said it was me, blends, LTD, and Kobras... not to be mean but she is not a mod here... sweatdrop

But she was a mod at PC. 3nodding

But you wrote it in story phrase and not saying it that way...... Damnit I'm caring too much and getting Deja-vu at the same time. sweatdrop