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 Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 10:26 pm
I really like the plot idea. It's planned out very nicely. I can't wait for the upcoming chapters because I think this story has great potential ^^ The prologue wasn't too bad for a beginning. I enjoyed reading it xD Sasuke's a bit OOC as is Sakura but that happens when kids start to grow up. *Sigh* Haha! xDD
Edit: Ohyeah...SaixIno! Never seen that happen, EVER. Very unusual but it really makes the story more original xD Bravo.
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Posted: Wed Jun 21, 2006 11:27 pm
Thank you very much. <3 I'm glad you enjoyed it.
xD Haha. Hormones in Teens...the best excuse for OOC-ness. <3 I try. >w<
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Posted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 12:01 pm
Very nice! Can you tell us your Penname for ff.net, cause I really want to be one of the first ones to comment your story! 3nodding It's really good, though you have to watch mixing up words like laboratory and lavatory but hey! that's what betas are for right? xp I can't wait for the first chappie. This will definitely turn out as a hit! 3nodding whee
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Posted: Thu Jun 22, 2006 12:09 pm
xD Yeah. Sorry about the errors. I was my own beta for this prologue.
My penname on ff.net is Iia, but I didn't post the story up yet, I want to get at least the first chapter done. <3 And I'm still working on it.
>> I'm gonna get Kairi to fix all the errors on the prologue before I put in on ff.net as well. xD
Thank you so much!
*w* A hit? xD That'd be NICE. But my story won't touch the hits. I know I'm not NEAR as skilled as the authors who write hits.
heart But damn, that'd be SO awesome.
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Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 6:58 am
Wow!!!! So far it's really good. Now I want to read the rest >.< Anyways can't wait to see more of it if you post it on Gaia. mrgreen
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Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 7:39 am
Thank you very much!
I'm working on Chapter 1. n.n I'm about halfway through. Once I finish, I'm gonna get Kairi.nin to beta the prologue and chapter 1, and I'll post them on ff.net. I'll post of the link when that happens. <3
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Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 9:37 pm
Earlier Than Expected
Thanks for all the support, everyone! The fic is now online, and all you have to do is click the link to read it! And then send me lovely reviews. <3
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Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 10:08 pm
I just reviewed the first chapter. ^_^
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Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 10:17 pm
<3 *luffs*
xD The length came out perfect, as well. That was 9 and a half pages...I have to remember to try and stay in that range. :3
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Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 10:25 pm
Now a days is hard to find any good fanfiction this one seem to be going really well keep working hard maybe if you lucky you win some fanficton awards biggrin
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Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 10:38 pm
xD I don't think I'm thank good yet. <3 I like writing fic mostly to write, because I love to write/type. The second reason would be for others to enjoy.
Awards aren't too much. <3 But if I work hard and impove, I just might! Thank you!
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Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 11:03 pm
I love it. I thought the interaction between Sakura and Sasuke was really cute. ^^ Especially the part when Sasuke picked up Sakura. The chapter was awesome overall.
I'm looking foward for the next chapter. ^^
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Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 11:19 pm
Kawaii_Angel05 I love it. I thought the interaction between Sakura and Sasuke was really cute. ^^ Especially the part when Sasuke picked up Sakura. The chapter was awesome overall.
I'm looking foward for the next chapter. ^^
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Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 11:28 pm
I like how Tsunade React to Sakura Pregant*Oh crap I spell that wrong!!*please do the next chapter!
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Posted: Mon Jun 26, 2006 11:29 pm
crying heart I feel so special.
Thanks, Tao! n.n
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