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 Posted: Wed Aug 02, 2006 7:17 am
what you have done
what have you taken away?
a haze of betrayal as sentiments seep.
once we drank of bliss,
innocent and childlike,
but your thirst perished.
a vengeful cloud of lies -
thoughts follow pain, follow hate,
love taken away.
in a haze of vengeance,
i reject you.
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Posted: Thu Aug 03, 2006 7:42 pm
Imprisoned
Slender beams of accusation enter
this darkened prison as I kneel,
always in pain, always a slave,
frozen here,
waiting.
Tortured forms wrought in panes of glass loom as
dust dances in the air,
forming an image in my mind,
penetrating my exposed flesh.
Blood on an angel's face.
I raise my head, now submitting to
this oblivious darkness.
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Posted: Fri Aug 04, 2006 7:12 am
 Phantom Pain
Around, all around, the angels gather.
My dread grows as the headsman's axe falls against my head.
It severs me, and darkly my
blood drips
to the thirsty earth.
In a haze of shock I fall limply
while death laughs cruelly.
Now alone, my cascade of tears falls upon darkened eyes.
This is my Hell
I heart this, as it brings me immense entertainment.
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Posted: Mon Aug 14, 2006 8:15 pm
Oh yes, fear my mad Goth-O-Matic skills
It is a night of dark desire, a song of sorrow,
wolves vent their loneliness. The beautiful one
awakes.
Fog shrouds her pale form,
an everlasting wanting.
Her raven hair cascades over
translucent ivory shoulders, and her
full crimson lips part slightly, to taste the
blood streaming from the
pale flesh beneath
her.
Now a night of ecstasy,
I rise.
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 12:03 am
Demise
Around, all around, the sinister creatures gather.
My dread grows as the angry hand of Heaven falls against my heart.
It smites me, and darkly my
blood drips
to the thirsty earth.
In unholy terror I call your name
while Death's shadow takes my hand.
Now alone, my cry of mercy falls upon dead eyes.
This is my salvation
LOL @ MY POEM
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Posted: Tue Aug 15, 2006 6:46 pm
Dark Betrayal
Around, all around, the angels gather.
My dread grows as the headsman's axe falls against my neck.
It severs me, and darkly my
life's blood drips
to the broken ground.
In unholy terror I beg forgiveness
while death takes my hand.
Now alone, my cascade of tears falls upon blind eyes.
_-_-_
What's sad is that's not a horrid poem. Well, it's pretty cheesy, but as far as descripiv poetry goes, this thing's not bad xd . If you really look at how they construct their poetry, it'll probably help you with writing some of your own.
Speaking of cheesy:
_-_-_
Untitled
Around, all around, the sinister creatures gather.
My dread grows as the Dark One's touch falls against my eyes.
It smites me, and darkly my
vitae drips
to the wicked earth that is my prison.
In a strange and terrible glee I hang my head
while Hell laughs cruelly.
Now alone, my love falls upon wailing eyes.
This is your love
_-_-_
That's the worst one I could manage.
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Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 1:13 pm
the blackest gift It is a night of dark desire, a song of death, wolves vent their loneliness. The immortal one rises. Death shrouds her pale form, a timeless desire. Her midnight hair cascades over pale shoulders, and her full scarlet lips part slightly, to taste the blood streaming from the pale flesh beneath her. Now a night of taking, I hunger. Wow, that's one deep 'vampiric' poem I made; I love it!! twisted [LoL] [Major vampire lover, jus wish in the poem it was a "he" not a "she" though......] emo
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Posted: Sat Aug 19, 2006 6:14 pm
the night falls with a silent sigh, entwined are we.
the salvation for which you lust
flares once, then dies,
smothered by guilt.
all hope must surely perish.
your heart beats no more.
how could you cause such hurt?
angels surround us, crying,
we are fallen.
That was
oddly entertaining.
xD
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 6:40 am
Yay for goth-o-matic! I want to do it again! I suck at poems so chyeah..
Remembrance of My Death
Around, all around, the shadows gather.
My dread grows as the dagger of your words falls against my heart.
It crushes me, and darkly my
blood drips
to the cold, uncaring tombstones.
In numbness I beg forgiveness
while death looms.
Now alone, my soul falls upon cold eyes.
This is because of you
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Posted: Sun Aug 20, 2006 2:27 pm
Untitled
Around, all around, the shadows gather.
My dread grows as the dagger of your words falls against my heart.
It severs me, and darkly my
blood drips
to the broken ground.
In my madness I call your name
while the Reaper takes my hand.
Now alone, my cascade of tears falls upon darkened eyes.
This is my salvation
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Posted: Mon Aug 21, 2006 3:44 pm
eternal
It is a night of darkness, a song of sorrow,
wolves vent their pain. The eternal one
awakens.
Night shrouds her brooding form,
an everlasting desire.
Her raven hair cascades over
pale and tragic shoulders, and her
full scarlet lips part slightly, to taste the
life streaming from the
pale flesh beneath
her.
Now a night of shared vitality,
I remember her.
That was strangely entertaining.
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Posted: Tue Aug 22, 2006 12:22 pm
" pulled apart"
the night falls with a silent sigh
lost are we the emotion for which you
lust flares once, then dies, swept away
by your obsession all hope must not
endure your love is no more. how could
you cause such hurt? shadows surround
us, crying,we have lost our way
Tormented Gravemarker
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Posted: Thu Aug 24, 2006 7:34 am
Devoid of Love the night falls in a heavy, suffocating cloak, soulless are we. the understanding for which you sacrifice yourself flares once, then dies, swallowed by your obsession. all hope must fail. your heart desires no more. how could you not understand? our dark emotions surround us, crying, sanctuary.
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Posted: Wed Aug 30, 2006 3:19 pm
"Phantom Pain"
Around, all around, the angels gather.
My dread grows as doom's scythe falls against my
neck. It slays me, and darkly my
essence drips to the thirsy earth.
In a haze of shock, I beg forgiveness
while oblivion hovers close.
Now alone, my supplication falls upon cold eyes.
This is because of you.
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Posted: Thu Aug 31, 2006 1:39 pm
Dark Betrayal
Around, all around, the dark memories gather.
My dread grows as the dagger of your words falls against my heart.
It wounds me, and darkly my
essence drips
to the cold, uncaring tombstones.
In a haze of shock I call your name
while oblivion approaches.
Now alone, my fervent plea falls upon cold eyes.
This is your love
<3
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