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Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 11:36 am
fredwise Yay! It's another great chapter, and I think the pace might be creeping up. It's nice seeing the Gelth again, but I'm still wondering who's masterminding this whole operation... Don't stop writing this! I hope you're not like me, who gets really great ideas, then starts to write, and then wonders how to sort everything out, and stops writing the story... I've already done that once... and I'm not going to do it again! Kind of because I already have most of the plot planned out in my head, and it's sequel. Plus all the great reviews keep me going! ^^ The sequel wont be a direct sequel, but it will have to do with The Hub and the stuff we learn about Jack's past in this fanfiction. The sequel will be about Jack's two missing years. biggrin
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Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 1:44 pm
Sepik fredwise Yay! It's another great chapter, and I think the pace might be creeping up. It's nice seeing the Gelth again, but I'm still wondering who's masterminding this whole operation... Don't stop writing this! I hope you're not like me, who gets really great ideas, then starts to write, and then wonders how to sort everything out, and stops writing the story... I've already done that once... and I'm not going to do it again! Kind of because I already have most of the plot planned out in my head, and it's sequel. Plus all the great reviews keep me going! ^^ The sequel wont be a direct sequel, but it will have to do with The Hub and the stuff we learn about Jack's past in this fanfiction. The sequel will be about Jack's two missing years. biggrin Sequel sounds interesting, glad you've got the whole story mapped out! I just start writing absolute nonsense, and then try to wrap it up!
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Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 7:00 pm
fredwise Sepik fredwise Yay! It's another great chapter, and I think the pace might be creeping up. It's nice seeing the Gelth again, but I'm still wondering who's masterminding this whole operation... Don't stop writing this! I hope you're not like me, who gets really great ideas, then starts to write, and then wonders how to sort everything out, and stops writing the story... I've already done that once... and I'm not going to do it again! Kind of because I already have most of the plot planned out in my head, and it's sequel. Plus all the great reviews keep me going! ^^ The sequel wont be a direct sequel, but it will have to do with The Hub and the stuff we learn about Jack's past in this fanfiction. The sequel will be about Jack's two missing years. biggrin Sequel sounds interesting, glad you've got the whole story mapped out! I just start writing absolute nonsense, and then try to wrap it up! Heh. For me, usually I think of this single great idea. Or I think of an ending. And then I work from there. biggrin
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Posted: Tue Jun 27, 2006 8:43 pm
Nice to hear you've got the entire plot worked out already. I think it really shows, because everything seems to be building up nicely so far. I like how you're periodically highlighting the time travel aspect, where events that happened in the past for one person have yet to occur for another. It's something that's oddly absent from the TV show itself...
You're a big Jack fan, aren't you? xd
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Hairy Priest Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 11:58 am
Hairy Priest Nice to hear you've got the entire plot worked out already. I think it really shows, because everything seems to be building up nicely so far. I like how you're periodically highlighting the time travel aspect, where events that happened in the past for one person have yet to occur for another. It's something that's oddly absent from the TV show itself... You're a big Jack fan, aren't you? xd :points to The Official Jack Harkness Thread: Mebe... I'm glad you like it! Yeah, I noticed that too. In the show nothing paradox-ish every actually happens. :cries: But eh. biggrin Yeah, writing in so much foreshadowing is so much fun! ^^
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 12:13 pm
its realy good compaired to my first... lol.... superman made an apperance in it and spidermen did to if only batman did to.............
realy good never the less
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Posted: Wed Jun 28, 2006 12:40 pm
TheFourthDoctor its realy good compaired to my first... lol.... superman made an apperance in it and spidermen did to if only batman did to............. realy good never the less Thanks! I'm glad you like it! biggrin
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Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 4:30 pm
Ack! It's really time for me to stop procrastinating...
:writes next chapter while listening to The Mummer's Dance:
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Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 7:19 pm
Ack! I'm currently writing my first fight scene. It's kind of hard... sweatdrop
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Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 7:23 pm
Go Jack! Get Trall! :Jack knees Trall: This is fun! biggrin
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Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 7:27 pm
Sorry... but I just feel like posting as I write. It's fun! biggrin
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Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 7:37 pm
Weehee! Jack's getting violent!
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Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 8:47 pm
Dang it! I just finished it and got it betaed by two people and now I can't upload anything onto the document manager! :cries:
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Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 10:40 pm
Dammit! I guess I'll have to post it when I wake up. And I worked for over two hours to try and get it out tonight! :cries:
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Posted: Thu Jun 29, 2006 11:14 pm
I wonder who Jack's fighting with... question
More importantly... Gelth!
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