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Lenachan358

PostPosted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:09 am


You may of course post and tell me what you think ~ heart
PostPosted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:19 am


The peacock in particular makes me happy. ^^ Idris is interesting. I think you meant self-confident, rather than self-conscious, in his traits section. He doesn't seem like the sort to be self-conscious. xD

Shiori Tonbo


Lenachan358

PostPosted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:34 am


Oh thank you, indeed xd
PostPosted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:39 am


There are also a few typos/grammar errors I noticed, if you want to look those over again.

Otherwise, I am teh less than useful. XD

Shiori Tonbo


Lenachan358

PostPosted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:53 am


Nah, you're very helpful. I'll definately look it over again

Tehee, sometimes writing in your second language isn't that easy sweatdrop
PostPosted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:54 am


I was actually going to ask about that. A lot of the errors I saw were things that people who don't speak English as a first language have.

If you want, I can go over it and fix it for ya. XD I'm a human spell/grammar check.

Shiori Tonbo


Lenachan358

PostPosted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:55 am


I don't know if that's allowed sweatdrop
PostPosted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:58 am


I don't think this is graded on spelling/grammar ability so much as concept and creativity. ^^ I'm pretty sure regulations on that sort of thing apply more to prompt responses and such, where they're getting an idea of how well you write.

Still, I respect your thoughts. ^^

Shiori Tonbo


Lenachan358

PostPosted: Thu May 18, 2006 1:06 am


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