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 Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:09 am
You may of course post and tell me what you think ~ heart
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:19 am
The peacock in particular makes me happy. ^^ Idris is interesting. I think you meant self-confident, rather than self-conscious, in his traits section. He doesn't seem like the sort to be self-conscious. xD
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:34 am
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:39 am
There are also a few typos/grammar errors I noticed, if you want to look those over again.
Otherwise, I am teh less than useful. XD
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:53 am
Nah, you're very helpful. I'll definately look it over again
Tehee, sometimes writing in your second language isn't that easy sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:54 am
I was actually going to ask about that. A lot of the errors I saw were things that people who don't speak English as a first language have.
If you want, I can go over it and fix it for ya. XD I'm a human spell/grammar check.
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:55 am
I don't know if that's allowed sweatdrop
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Posted: Mon May 15, 2006 9:58 am
I don't think this is graded on spelling/grammar ability so much as concept and creativity. ^^ I'm pretty sure regulations on that sort of thing apply more to prompt responses and such, where they're getting an idea of how well you write.
Still, I respect your thoughts. ^^
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Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 1:06 am
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