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First, I'd like to point out you choose an excerpt from my favortie book, like ever! So W00t for you! 4laugh

I think you have well perasonafied the excerpt in Risiska (I've always loved that name! ^^) as well as incoroparated the tiger theam well. But do be carfel to avoid overusing the them, I love that you baised her so strongly off the book, but to be afraid to include more of your own ideas.

Anyway... that's my advice/comments! I truly hope that Risiska becomes a real FeeDee, as I'm sure she would be beautiful. heart

Thank you for all the comments.

@ Elda-Chan: The main points of the concept will be based on what is from the book, but soon after Risika hits her child stage or maybe as late as her teenage stage, her more daring personality will take on. I want to show the change that occurs because of the excerpt, to make known what a scary realization that the only person to keep the Forgotten in line is her Daemon, Change.

And while Risika may be from the original books, Change isn't and his interaction with Risika will stir up the originality that I'm going for. And I'm also thinking about having her as annoying show-off in her childhood with her strength and abilities and such, it'll be fun!

You delete the posts you don't need. So basically, I claimed the first 15 posts for the first page and then planned out which one's I needed and deleted the ones I didn't need XD

Love that book! I was thinking about doing an excerpt from Hawksong but I don't own the book so couldn't grab it and try and find one.

Anyway, good job! It could differ a little bit from the book some more, though, like say she likes new things other than old things (which she likes in the book). Otherwise, it is good.

a gift http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v290/ladyumbra/change.jpg

Thank you!!

@ Jack: Hmm... interesting. Change would probably swipe at Risika for thinking about it and so Risika would be goaded on into stealing, but would return it later. She's a good girl at heart though she likes to keep it a deep DEEP secret from everyone including her Daemon!