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*changes her concept completely* Well, these things happen.

I love Drayem. ^_^ He seems very well fleshed out and original. He and Mana together would be a confusing situation. XD. She's a wellspring of magic and he cancels it, she's a hopeless dreamer and he's rooted in reality. They'd confuse the bejeezus out of each other. ^^

becuase it's been making me curious for a while what's tred?
Your concept looks great Fiddle intrests me a lot and Drayem in general is great, his powers are so unique.

yeah becuase I see it all the time with your characters and I have no clue what it means.

I like how 'realistic' he is. It plays into his powers.. but in terms of his appearance and personality it's refreshing to see a character who could essentially BE one of my friends. Lol

It sort of echoes (minus powers) the attitude and view on todays youth. He could seriously be one of my friends. Sort of average, a follower, no goals, and despite promise they don't feel like they have much of a future. Very cool.

I am also a fan of a bardlike talent and I could see it being helpful to OTHER kids in their various travels.. to know someone like him and that he is so easily influenced. In the playing of him, I would just be careful that his 'trying' so hard to fit in with people (being hyper or depressed depending on the others mood) doesn't make him annoying or alienate him too much. While realistic, its hard to effectively have a lot of RP options when characters think your character is irritating or something. XD

I think he is cool though!

Let's see... It's an interesting concept, he's very realistic, yes, but I'm kind of questioning your wording. You describe him as being "Passive" and "Practical" but at the same time say he gets panicky at the thought of being alone and can be clingy. And it's not very practical to be driven by the moods of others. Also his dependence on others for everything and the fact that he can't be pinned down on his own might make him hard to write in story form.

Also, unfortunately, the bardic talent is already taken. You might look at Raya's boy, Fray. He's the little boy with the flute? This doesn't mean that Drayem cannot have a fiddle, it just means you might change his powers somewhat.

But I'm not saying this isn't a great start! I just think you might try writing up one of those practice prompts that Phoo provided, it should help you fill his personality out nicely.

As for the grammer, spelling and such, I've only seen a few small problems^^ In you description of Fiddle you say "As far as Daemon's go" The "Daemon's" is possessive, when you mean it to be plural. You need to write it "Daemons." And "Tred" is actually spelled "Tread." But since it's a group I don't think that matters so much. You might also think of inserting that explanation in before you describe the family members.

I suggest you run your posts through spell check, just in case. But I would suggest that to everyone, even myself.

I really hope this helps! And good luck heart

That you for pointing out Fray's powers.. I'm not super familiar with a lot of the new children cause I've not been on much.. but yeah.. I missed that connection!