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 Posted: Sat Aug 12, 2006 9:31 pm
(Wow crying ....that poem was so beautiful.....I know how you're feeling. I've been put through the same situation. If you ever need someone to talk to, I'll be there)
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Posted: Fri Aug 18, 2006 3:06 am
Such a great poem, I suck, but your's rocked out loud I hear ya. I'm there for you.
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 4:02 pm
wow.....i mean really wow....
im going to be serious now, i think you are hurting a lot....only someone who hurts that much could write something like that....it shows that maybe you are hurting and are looking for a way to express your pain and you thought this is a way....i think maybe you should show an adult your poem....see if they agree with my thinking.........
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Posted: Fri Sep 22, 2006 7:58 pm
That was . . . wow. It was good, but I thought it was depressing. Please forgive me, I just had an assembly for suicide prevention and I heard all these stories about how the spokes-people's lives were touched by suicide. So I was pretty much down the entire day. I'm not saying that yours is about suicide, it just reminded me of the assembly we had today. But, ingoring that little happy fact, I give your poem a perfect 10. ^_^
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Posted: Tue Nov 28, 2006 3:03 pm
whos poem did we just read oh well i want to rp with a guy any guys want to rp
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Posted: Sun Mar 25, 2007 7:20 pm
i luv the poem............ heart
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Posted: Fri Jun 01, 2007 10:00 pm
I really like it.....Its soo sad,,, but very good.
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Posted: Thu Nov 29, 2007 3:22 am
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Posted: Fri Dec 14, 2007 10:28 pm
guyzmyantidrug wow.....i mean really wow....
im going to be serious now, i think you are hurting a lot....only someone who hurts that much could write something like that....it shows that maybe you are hurting and are looking for a way to express your pain and you thought this is a way....i think maybe you should show an adult your poem....see if they agree with my thinking......... He may be an adult that is coping with a divorce or break up through a common hobby in many adults reading and writing.
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 10:52 am
Just because He wrote a deressing poem doesn't necessarily mean that he's depressed or that anything at all, is in fact, wrong with him. I myself have written my share of depressing poems such as his and I'm not sad in the least and nothing is wrong with me. That's just how my inspiration hits. Now I'm not saying that i's not possible that he IS feeling depressed, I'm merely stating that he may not be sad at all.
Good poem, I like the way it was written, but there could be a few touch ups here and there. I give it a 8.5 heart
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