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 Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 12:52 am
I tried reading it... gonk TOO LONG.
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Posted: Sat Jun 03, 2006 12:58 am
i didn't read it at all... sorry... not to be rude, i mean it. sad
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Posted: Sun Jun 04, 2006 6:31 pm
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Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 8:49 am
i read it all. it was GREAT! i saw a few errors, but everyone messes up and yu said yu hadn't really proof-read it yet. but i thought it was awesome. better than I've ever done. but then...im a romantic so my stories tend to lean towards romance and dont really have much of a plot. this reminded me of something my friend Cal would write. very cool cool
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Posted: Wed Jun 07, 2006 3:04 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 8:05 am
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 10:04 am
i see u found ur favorite smiley.
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 11:34 am
lol yep. it changes every once in a while tho. this one's cool too razz
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 2:50 pm
I have like four new chapters I can post and I've completely changed Chapter Four but I'm not on the right computer so I can't post the new chapters. I could always go and type them up but I'm too lazy for a thing like that.
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 2:57 pm
Okay, I lied, I remembered I posted a few chapters onto my storywrite account. So I will send those over here in a moment!
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 3:02 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 3:03 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 3:04 pm
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Posted: Thu Jun 08, 2006 4:28 pm
"It looked almost like a big except for it had an extra pair of legs and only one eye."
a big what? (i would put 'large' or 'a larger version of a ___', but thats just me...)
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Posted: Fri Jun 09, 2006 12:25 pm
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