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PostPosted: Tue Sep 11, 2018 8:38 pm


Updated to here. Fantastic entries!
PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2018 3:35 am


JoyRose
Emalthya
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I am working on my entry~ It's haaaard >.<

Don't make it too hard - it's for fun!! emotion_hug


It is fun! It's something interesting, like I have been writing notes on one character for a while now (turned into a lot of notes and I write it in a scene because no matter how I say 'just notes' it always turns into a scene) and this that I'm writing now is what's happening to a character off stage left. I thought 'what can I write that has something to do with my world building but also matches water?' which is hard because where I'm focusing on is landlocked, but there's one scene set in an underground river...

So now I've figured out, because of thinking of this scene which I basically stopped thinking about halfway because it's 'character off side left' and not central, how this character survives his 'I shouldn't be alive' disaster.

But it's a scary thing to write, that's why all those people telling their near-death experiences cry, and, if possible, it's even sadder for him. But it all comes good in the end. I need him for the story, I never imaged he died at this point.

I'm glad it will have a happier ending. Good luck with the writing!


Thank you! Sometimes you really need to have a moment where you recognise your priorities. My character had his moment in an underground river in an abandoned cavern because he's not the easiest person to deprogram.


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PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2018 11:34 am


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Beccn34 first entry


A pirate was at his insurance company answering questions about his claims. Here's how it went:

Claims Adjuster: Well I see here that you have a wooden leg. How did you lose it?

Pirate: So me crew and I were chasing the Great Beast and just as we harpooned him I was caught up in the ropes and dragged to the water. The Beast bit me leg right off!

Claims Adjuster: Oh my. What about the hook on your hand?

Pirate: Me and me mates were swashbuckling on the deck and when I wasn't looking, me mate chopped me hand off with his sword.

Claims Adjuster: Well that's just horrible! One last thing, I see you are wearing a patch over your eye. How did you lose it?

Pirate: I was out on the deck watching the sunset set when a blasted gull pooped in me eye.

Claims Adjuster: How could bird poop make you lose the eye?

Pirate: First day with me hook.
PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2018 12:59 pm


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Beccan34

Entry # 2 and # 3

Mermaid

Bubbles from below
A colorful tail appears
Who is hiding there

The Siren

Hush now and listen
Her song beckons sailors near
Don't trust a siren




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PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2018 6:44 pm


Aquarian!
I'm not good at poetry, so have a short story!
Also yes this is Homestuck-inspired in writing style. 1/3 connected mini-stories.

Mysterious Mermaid: Enter
A young mermaid floats about in her bedroom.

It just so happens that today holds significance to her, as did the day before it. But despite the silly party hats lying on the table, it is not her birthday. No, that was yesterday; you've just barely missed out on your chance to name her! Regardless of that though, she presents the option anyways, unaware of the results it will likely cause.

> Enter Name: Touchy Seawench

...Okay. Clearly this was a mistake, made evident by the expression change into something more shaky. You were right, she's touchy. Are you happy now?

Try again.

> Enter Name: Aurala Maris

Your name is Aurala Maris, and today holds significance indeed.

As previously stated, your birthday was yesterday, June 17th. This is made clear by the multiple hats lying around on tables-oh, apparently one of them fell to the floor. You figure you'll have to pick that up at some point.

No, today is the birthday of a dear friend. A friend that you're technically not supposed to have, according to your caretakers. But what young mercreature doesn't find humans alluring, or at the very least interesting? What they don't know can't hurt them, right?

You fiddle with your newly received emerald pendant necklace, a gift from this friend. It's so nice, how are you possibly meant to live up to it?!

> Aurala: Retrieve Gift

Well, you'll just have to hope that your little homemade seashell charms will do. But then again, she was always more than happy to receive things from the ocean, so maybe you'd be alright? Cod, this is hard. Did humans even like the same types of presents merfolk did?

In your downward spiral of anxiety, you fail to notice the suspicious scraping sounds. At least, you fail to notice them until a rather loud thud startles you out of your apparent mild mental breakdown. On the floor you see one of your larger fairytale books, and in it's place on the shelf is your Hermit Cat. Well, you suppose you know how the hat got down there now.

"Damn it, Pylo."

With any luck, neither of your caretakers will decide to investigate. Or better yet, neither of them will even notice, Any unnecessary delays to your current mission are highly unwanted, thank you. Which brings you to wonder why you're standing here thinking about the antics of your beloved companion in the first place.

> Aurala: Move the story forward already!

You've spent far too long distracted by hats, books, and seadwelling felines! You came back in here for a reason, and that was just to get the box and go.

Being sure to send a warning stare over to your animal roommate, you proceed to close the box over the collected shells and swim out from your room's open window. Your friend would only wait so long for you, she did have a curfew after all!

Speaking of which, who is this friend, anyways?

> Aurala: Become friend
PostPosted: Wed Sep 12, 2018 8:10 pm


Young Vaylin the Chrysanthemum Empress
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If six word stories are accepted, I'm submitting twenty word stories.
Presenting the DeepWater Lake 20 Word Story Trilogy!:

DeepWater Lake: Part 1
Many people drowned in DeepWater Lake including skilled swimmers. John's a toddler. Fell into lake. Drowned. Parents sad. Funeral.

DeepWater Lake: Part 2
John's sister Mary. Born after John drowned. Raised differently. Trained to swim. Saw John's and other people's ghosts in lake.


DeepWater Lake: Part 3
Father Aetna. Vicar. Mary told vicar lake haunted. Father Aetna performed mass exorcism at lake. All ghosts rests in peace.

The End


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PostPosted: Thu Sep 13, 2018 2:00 am


        hello! ishnia with team aquarian here.
        everything is lowkey the little mermaid themed bc im uncreative and it's like 4am ! !
        like the hans christian andersen version but idk really
        procrastinating on a paper is a really good way to brainstorm story ideas, huh?

        uhhhh i should get back to that paper now. hope you enjoy!

        1. fairy tale wishes
        With a shuddering sigh, her eyes slid shut and just for a moment, all was still.

        She imagined that she was in the water, calm and cool and content.
        The current brushing up against her tail, the coral whisperings the
        secrets of the deep into her ears. The fractured light dancing along
        the waves in the sunset, the murky depths filled with promises of
        dark desires. She tried to remember it all.

        Then, she opened her eyes and the world came bursting back to
        life with a blaze of hungry fire and thick smoke. She couldn't breath.
        Her tears turned to salt-stained steam and carved painful brands
        against her cracked skin. The ocean had never felt so far away.

        And oh, the screams.

        How she wished to have given up her hearing instead of her voice.

        She tried to pretend that it was seaweed curling around her arms
        instead of charred wood pinning her to the ground, that the flames
        creeping up her legs were just bubbles trying to breach the water.

        For a mermaid to die in a fire...
        ...such was her hubris, her folly.

        She would have rather turned into seafoam.


        2. a mermaid no longer
        the tide in her voice
        and the stars in her eyes
        choked up her words
        and dimmed her vision

        until all she could see
        was a perfect
        mistake


        3. depths of adoration
        i had fallen in love at the waterfront
        your smile reflected in the waves
        your laughter echoing through the coves
        and i finally felt at home

        enchanted by your form
        and tangled in your promises
        i failed to notice
        that i was drowning
PostPosted: Sat Sep 15, 2018 12:02 am


Miau Yi, Cascadian Team

Ah Pek and the Arowana


(I didn't think I could write such a long story. It started out as a simple story but got complicated when more ideas flowed into my head)

Ah Pek sat down on the beautiful sofa and looked at the aquarium in the corner of his living room. A large arowana fish was swimming around in it. Ah Pek stood up and walked towards a smaller aquarium next to it. He scooped up some anchovies and shrimps from that aquarium and closed it. He opened the top of the bigger aquarium and deposited those live anchovies and shrimps into the tank. Even before he closed the tank, the arowana fish was busy chasing after and eating the live anchovies and shrimps.

Ah Pek sighed as he watched the arowana eat its food. The fish belonged to his son Hoong Fa. Ah Pek looked at all the swimming competition medals Hoong Fa had won during his primary, secondary and university schooldays that were hanging on one wall of the living room. Hoong Fa joined the navy after graduating from university. One day the ship he was on was badly battered by the tsunami and sank. Hoong Fa drowned anyways despite being a very good swimmer.

Hoong Fa left behind his parents, his Canadian wife Liana and their Eurasian sons Thomas and Timothy. Hoong Fa had met Liana when he was studying in university in Canada. They married after they graduated and before he joined the navy. China has a one child policy so Hoong Fa was Ah Pek and Ah Maa's only child. Being cancer striken and unable to bear the loss of her son, Hoong Fa’s mother Ah Maa lost her fight with cancer and died shortly afterwards. Liana had taken his grandsons back to Canada but he frequently communicated with them. Tears leaked out of the corners of Ah Pek’s eyes as he remembered his wife and their only son.

A large Asus tablet sat in the centre of the antique table in front of the sofa he was sitting on. The tablet was a present from his daughter-in-law Liana so that he could stay in touch with Liana and his grandsons through Whatsapp video call. He took the tablet from the table and switched it on. He went to the photos folder and flipped through the album of pictures that were taken when he went to Canada to visit Liana, Thomas and Timothy during the spring season last year. He stayed in Canada for two months with Liana, her parents and his grandsons and the six of them had made many trips to the seaside. Thomas loved to swim in the sea and Timothy loved to build sandcastles. Along with group photos of the six of them in various locations and settings, there were many photos of Thomas swimming and surfing near the beach and every sandcastle that Timothy built.

Suddenly the tablet vibrated and made a noise. Ah Pek checked for the cause of the vibrations and noise and was pleased to find an incoming whatsapp video call from Liana. When he accepted the call, he could see Liana, Thomas and Timothy in the screen.

“Grandpa! We’re coming to China…”, Thomas started.

“…to visit you soon!”, Timothy finished. They were identical twins and always completed each other’s sentences. Ah Pek found that behavior amusing and cute.

Liana laughed. “Hi daddy, nice to see you again”, she said to Ah Pek. Liana had always called him daddy after she married Hoong Fa because she said Ah Pek was like a second father to her. “I’m sorry but the cat is out of the bag. Yes, we’re coming to visit you next week.”

“That’s excellent! I’ll prepare the guest rooms for the three of you”, Ah Pek grinned from ear to ear.

Despite the fact that they were coming to visit him soon, they talked until Liana’s tablet started to run out of battery and she had to terminate the call. His daughter-in-law and grandsons were coming to visit him! Ah Pek’s smiled.

Ah Pek looked at the aquarium again. The arowana had finished eating and was now swimming around happily. He was glad he was not a fish. Their lives seemed pointless to him. It seemed to him that the water looked dirty and needed a change. He carefully changed the murky water in the arowana’s aquarium. If a fish could look happier he swore that arowana just did that.

That arowana fish has lived a long time. Hoong Fa bought the arowana when he was a teenager. He said he bought the Arowana fish because it was supposed to bring good luck. Maybe he was right. His daughter-in-law and grandsons were coming to visit him! Ah Pek’s smile became wider and he was no longer sad.


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PostPosted: Sat Sep 15, 2018 2:27 am


Miau Yi, Cascadian Team

A Navy Seal cadet’s Story


(This story is totally fictional and I was inspired when I read about Ironman Triathlons. I imagined that Navy Seal cadets would only have the swimming part but they must swim much further than Ironman Triathlon competitors)

The training to become a Navy Seal was intense but the worse was yet to come. The final test of whether we were fit to become a Navy Seal was a ten mile swim to shore! Yes, you read that right. Ten miles! Ten miles with nothing but our own waterproof compass and some of the coastguard’s floating marker buoys to guide us in our swim towards the shore.

There was a large group of Navy Seal cadets. Becoming a Navy Seal was considered to be very prestigious and a large group of candidates had signed up. Unfortunately, none of us knew that the training would be this intense or that it would end with a very long swimming marathon.

We went out in several small ships and were told to jump into the sea and start swimming back to shore when we reached the 10 mile marking point. We were not timed because this was not an Ironman Triathlon and timing was not essential. What was important was that we made our way safely back to shore.

Those ships that dropped us off followed the cadets that they dropped off as they swam towards the shore. The ships picked up the candidates who encountered problems while swimming and gave up. These cadets were considered to have "washed out" of the training. The washed out candidates will be ferried back to dry land when the ships return to port. Unfortunately for them, they've failed the final and most important part of the training and they're no longer navy seal cadets.

I took my time to swim carefully back to shore and prayed that I don't accidentally inhale water or encounter jellyfishes or sharks or experience any other unexpected problems.

Incredible as it might seem, I made it and completed my training. I’m now a Navy Seal!
PostPosted: Sat Sep 15, 2018 3:57 am


Yuwen Xun
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1. Olympic Diving Competition


*This feels like a dream*, I thought to myself but no, my name can be clearly seen on the scoreboard beside my country's flag. Eventually, it was my turn to dive into the Olympic sized swimming pool. Pardon the pun! I climbed up towards the diving board and stood nervously at the top. But I cannot stand there forever. With so many spectators watching here and worldwide, I dare not disappoint. I took a deep breath and dived off the board, hugging my straightened legs close to my body to make myself as compact as possible. I managed to somersault three times in mid air. And then I hit the water and dived without a splash into it. I climbed out of the pool. It looked easy but I had to train for a long time and dived many times into swimming pools in order to do it. My coach who had followed me to the Olympics draped a towel around my shoulders. I thanked him and wiped myself dry with the towel as I await the scoring. The judges took up their cards and pronounced their verdict. To my amazement, every judge gave me 10 out of 10! I have just successfully represented my country, Singapore in the men’s 10m platform diving Olympic competition.


2. My Plane Crashes into the Ocean

“Blip, blip, blip! Stall! Stall! Blip, blip, blip! Stall! Stall!”

The stall warning repeated itself. I have accidentally raised the nose of the Airbus A320 above its angle of attack. Now the wings cannot generate any lift and the airplane is stalled. Considering I’m piloting it right now, let’s call it my plane. My stalled plane is currently falling out of the skies and losing altitude fast. I pushed the control joystick forward and lowered my plane’s nose. My plane stopped stalling and started to regain altitude. Too bad two other warnings sounded almost immediately.

“Too low, terrain! Too low, terrain!” and "Pull up! Pull up!"

It was too late to save my plane. I was too close to the ocean for it to regain enough altitude. The ocean rushed towards my plane or my plane plummeted towards it. Either way, plane and ocean met in a spectacular explosion of water and aircraft.

BOOM!!!

Everything went black.

Thank God the plane crash occurred in the flight simulator!!!

3. THE Water Fountain

There was a water fountain. It was THE water fountain. It was the only water fountain in the entire school. Every school day, many students stood in front of the water fountain during recess. They waited for their turn to fill their depleted water bottles. I was one of the students. The line in front of me was long but I dare not cut the queue. Many fights occured as a result of queue cutting and fighting in this particular school does not bode well. The school principal has a very impressive collection of rotan sticks. Every misbehaving student sent to the principal will be given a chance to choose the rotan stick that he will use to whip them. They all hurt no matter which one you choose. I was a very naughty student and knew this from past experience. But enough about the principal's rotan sticks. The student in front of me finished filling his water bottle and walked away. It was my turn since I'm standing in front of the water fountain. I quickly filled my water bottle and ran back to my classroom.

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PostPosted: Sat Sep 15, 2018 6:52 am


Tyrus Cassius McQueen for the Cascadian Team

1. I wrote a CSI: Vegas crossover with Alien Vs Predator: Requiem Fanfiction:


CSI: Vegas crossover with Alien Vs Predator: Requiem Fanfiction:

A homeless man floated facedown in the water near the entrance to the sewers. The CSIs photographed the victim before moving him to the crime lab's morgue for Doc Robbins to conduct a post mortem analysis on the dead body. When the CSIs removed the hobo from the drain and turned him over, they discovered something shocking. The hobo had died a grisly death and his face was frozen in terror.

The CSIs combed the area looking for clues and evidence. They found nothing except unusual tracks leading back into the sewers and some strange substance on the ground near the water. It was the Predalien Xenomorph’s saliva but they had no idea about that yet.

*** Cue CSI: Vegas opening credits and theme song followed by Alien Vs Predator theme song***


“Post Mortem analysis indicated that the man was brutally attacked and killed with unusual weapons. He had some unusual wounds”, Doc Robbins said. "I have never seen anything like them." The CSI team pored through the photographs Doc took of the victim during the post mortem. They had never seen anyone who died with these wounds either.

******


The Predalien Xenomorph moved through the water filled sewers with surprising ease. It was a cross between an Alien Xenomorph and a Yautja Predator warrior. It found another homeless person wandering around in the sewers and it attacked him. The second hobo was no match for the Xenomorph and died swiftly too.

******


The second hobo’s body was found near the entrance to the sewers, quite close to where the first body was found. He was floating face up in the water. This hobo had died a grisly death and his face was frozen in terror too. Once again, the CSIs found nothing except unusual tracks leading back into the sewers and some strange substance on the ground near the water.

******


“Post Mortem analysis indicated that the second man was brutally attacked and killed with unusual weapons just like the first man. He had the same unusual wounds as the first victim”, Doc Robbins said. The CSI team pored through the photographs Doc took of the second victim during the post mortem.

“Both of them died in or near the sewers”, Sara Sidle said.

“Looks like something deadly could be hiding in the sewers", Warrick Brown said.

"Whatever it is we better find it fast”, Dr. Gilbert “Gil” Grissom said to the team of CSIs around the evidence table.

"I do not think it is human and we might have to kill it", Greg Sanders, the CSI's lab rat said.

"Do you have proof, Greg?", Dr. Grissom asked.

Greg showed the team the result of his analysis of the strange liquid substance they found at both crime scenes. "I believe this is the creature's saliva and there are alien micro organisms that are out of this world within it."

******


The team of CSIs armed themselves with guns and headed back to the area where the two bodies were found. They wore miner’s helmets with headlights to free their hands to hold the guns. They also wore bulletproof vests but that would not protect them from the Predalien Xenomorph that they would find. They drew their guns, flicked the safety off and switched their headlights on. Each CSI carried a spare gun and plenty of ammo for both guns. They went into the sewers to investigate and find the culprit that had killed their two victims. They had no idea what they would find would change their lives forever.

******


“We have been in the sewers for five hours and found nothing. Whatever it is must have gone elsewhere”, Warrick Brown said in frustration. An ominous shadow crept up along the wall as he was speaking.

Nick Stokes was the first person to notice the Predalien Xenomorph sneaking up behind Warrick Brown. He yelled, "Warrick! Look out!"

Despite being knee deep in sewer water, Warrick pirouetted around and plugged a few slugs into the creature behind him. The Predalien Xenomorph reared backwards in pain and howled. Saliva dripped from its maws and blood spurted out of its wounds. Warrick swiftly moved away from the Predalien Xenomorph and allowed the other CSIs to shoot at it.

The Predalien Xenomorph was no match for the team of CSIs. The CSIs emptied their guns into it, reloaded and fired again and again until the Predalien Xenomorph sank down into the sewer water and died.

"Thank you for that warning Nick", Warrick said.

"No problem, Warrick", Nick said.

The CSIs investigated the creature they had killed.

"Holy s**t! This thing belongs in area 51!", Greg Sanders said.

******


"Post mortem analysis of the strange creature you guys encountered and killed in the sewers indicated that it was the culprit that murdered the two victims. They were not killed with strange weapons but were bitten to death by the creature", Doc Robbins said. "The tracks found on the ground near both crime scenes were its footsteps and the substance Greg claimed to be the creature's saliva was indeed its saliva."

"I believe we solved this crime. Case closed", Dr. Grissom said and the CSIs and Doc agreed. They went to a good restaurant in downtown Vegas to celebrate being able to close an unusual case.


2. I wrote a Halo Fanfiction: The life of Serin-019 before she became a Spartan-II candidate:

Halo Fanfiction: The life of Serin-019 before she became a Spartan-II candidate

Serin Çelik found a burst water pipe in an alley behind a very busy restaurant and drank until she was not thirsty. She found it ironic that she could go for a few days without food but must drink water every day. She overturned one of the restaurant's garbage cans and scrounged for food. The food in this restaurant was unrivaled and therefore business was booming and there was a shortage of kitchen staff. As a result, the kitchen staff was too busy and nobody from the restaurant heard the garbage can being overturned and came out to investigate. Counting her blessings, Serin hastily went through the rubbish from the garbage can. She found a half eaten burger and a half eaten chicken drumstick, counted her blessings again and swiftly consumed them.

Feeling thirsty once more, she went back to the burst water pipe to drink again. As Serin was drinking water from the leaking pipe again, a noise at one end of the alley caused her to look around. A man stood at that end of the alley and watched her. He held a package in one of his hands. The man slowly approached Serin and equally slowly unwrapped the package he held in his hands. Serin had never seen a wrapped burger before this. All the burgers she had ever eaten were half eaten leftovers from the restaurant's garbage cans. She wondered what was in the package. When the man stood in front of her, he showed her the item he was holding. Sitting in the center of the piece of wrapping paper was a freshly cooked burger from the restaurant whose garbage can she had rummaged in. It was a whole burger and it was the most beautiful burger she had ever seen. The delicious aroma of the freshly cooked burger overwhelmed Serin's sense of smell. She salivated in hunger despite the fact that she had already eaten. Serin approached the man cautiously with her hands outstretched and wondered whether he would give her the burger.

The man waved the burger at Serin. "Come on, come on...", he said and slowly backed out of the alley. All caution thrown to the wind, Serin quickened her pace and followed him. She wanted that burger! He continued to back away slowly but made sure Serin continued to follow him. He looked harmless and friendly and Serin wondered what was happening. A nagging sense of danger warned her that something was wrong. Very wrong. This sixth sense had saved her from getting into trouble many times but this time she ignored it.

The man led her towards a waiting transport that blocked the end of the alley. The transport more closely resembled an armored truck than a car. He opened the back door of the vehicle to reveal a small pile of wrapped burgers similar to the one he had opened which contained the delicious burger. The delicious smell intensified, emanating from the wrapped burgers that were sitting on the car seat. But more importantly, there were several bottles of mineral water next to the pile of burgers. Food and drink! Serin ignored her sense of danger and ran towards the transport.

Serin was too close to the man now. He gave Serin the burger he held in his hands. Serin gratefully mumbled "Thank you" and started to eat the burger. Serin was a swift eater and quickly finished eating the burger she was given by the man. It was the most delicious burger she had ever eaten. It tasted much better than the half eaten leftover burger she found in the restaurant's garbage can earlier.

He saw that she had finished eating the burger he had given her and waved at the inside of the waiting transport. "There are more burgers for you inside", he said.

Serin's eyes widened. "All these are for me? The bottles of water too?"

"Yes", the man nodded and smiled. *How generous of him!*, Serin thought. The naive six years old Serin thought that she had found a new friend.

She was thirsty again and needed to drink water. Fortunately there were many bottles of water inside the vehicle. Serin clambered into the vehicle and grabbed a bottle of water. She twisted the cap to open the bottle and then guzzled the water from the bottle. This water tasted even better than the water she had drunk earlier from the leaking pipe! As soon as Serin entered the vehicle, the man swiftly got into the vehicle after her and closed the door. "You can drive away now. Target acquired", he told the driver who nodded. The vehicle sped away from the alley.

Serin was baffled by her new friend's words. She was a target? For what purpose? But the food and drink called to her and she forgot what she heard. She finished the bottle of water, unwrapped another burger and started to eat it. As she ate, she looked outside the window at the scenery. The building where she lived with her mom loomed for a moment as the vehicle neared it and then they passed it. Serin thought of Pinar Çelik, her mom who often neglected her and was the reason why she had to scrounge for food wherever she could. Serin had no idea she would never see her mother or that she would never need to scrounge for food or go hungry again.

Serin's new friend, the man who had lured her with the food and drink was an Office of Naval Intelligence (ONI) agent named Mr. Teddy. Serin was kidnapped to become a Spartan-II candidate and she would be listed as Serin-019 on the Spartan-II candidate roster.


3. A swimming pool aboard a starship!

A swimming pool aboard a starship!

Unbelievable!
Swimming pool in starship's gym!
I swam in this pool
PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2018 6:50 am


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1. Shortfin Mako Shark


Shortfin Mako Shark
Is the fastest swimming shark
Swims in bursts of speed

2. Sailfish

Sailfish, blue to gray
Erectile dorsal fin sail
Elongated bill fish

3. Black Marlin

Black Marlin, fastest
Largest Marlin, boniest
Short bill, rigid fins

To give credit where it's due:- I was inspired by Darkerdemons' Capture the Flag game in this event. xd

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2018 9:23 am



Falcona Stark - Cascadian Team:

The Adventures of Dr. Cherry Crusher, Ph.D

1. Cherry Crusher - That kid with the weird name:


Her parents had a weird sense of humor or they weren’t thinking when they named her Cherry Crusher. This shy girl became the butt of jokes and bullying in the small town of New Haven where she lived with her parents Jonathan and Annamaria Crusher and her brother Phoenix Crusher. Her brother was the butt of jokes too but not as badly as her.

Right now the town of New Haven is having a townwide water festival. This festival happens annually. Everyone, old and young are now going around town with their water guns shooting water at each other. A temporary waterpark has been set up in the park in the middle of the town. It has all kinds of waterslides and an enormous inflatable swimming pool.

Cherry bought a simple water gun, filled it with water and used it to defend herself against the other townies who shot at her with their water guns. She discovered that the watergun she bought was quite useless. It keeps getting jammed and she was unable to fire back when that happens. So she took a piece of paper and a pencil and designed a better watergun. Then she set about trying to build it with recyclable materials she found in the house. Having build the watergun, she filled it with water and went outside with it.

Vladimir, the boy who was the biggest bully in town lived next door. She nicknamed him “Dracula” not because of his name but because he was cloaked with an aura of negativity and reeks of evil. He was sitting outside his house and when he saw her he came and tried to soak her with his watergun. Cherry fired back with her new invention and was able to soak him thoroughly before he gave her more than wet hair. Defeated and ashamed, Vlad immediately ran back into his house and slammed the front door.

Other townies ended up getting even more surprised when Cherry discovered that her watergun could shoot two targets at once with minor modifications. Soon, word got around the town of New Haven - “Don’t mess with Cherry this water festival. She’s got a powerful watergun.” No one shot at her with their waterguns anymore. Right now, she was only 3 years old. This first success with the improved water gun proved that Cherry Crusher was a genius. Many other creative inventions build with recyclable materials will be invented by her.


2. Dr. Cherry Crusher – Youngest child prodigy to earn a Ph.D:

When Cherry Crusher, the kid with the weird name was 9 years old, she finished high school by skipping many grades during elementary and high school and earned a full scholarship to the Massachusetts Institute of Technology. She was very glad to get away from small town New Haven. It wasn’t because New Haven was boring. It was because the town was full of very mean people who made fun of her because of her name. You can’t choose your parents, much less your name.

Her roommate in the co-ed dorm had a weird name too, but not as bad as hers. Jade Goldstein liked to party, swim and listen to loud music. At first, Jade Goldstein didn’t think much of her new roommate Cherry Crusher who was many years younger than her.

“What’s a baby like you doing in a place like this?”, was her initial reaction when they first met when they moved into their dorm room. But when Cherry was able to tutor Jade in Advanced Calculus, a subject she usually had trouble with, she changed her mind and they developed mutual respect.

Jade frequently invited Cherry to go swimming with her in the M.I.T's swimming pool. They also went with their friends to the seaside so they could swim in the sea. One year, Cherry invited Jade to go back to New Haven with her during the town's annual water festival. Both of them had fun blasting the other townies with their two giant water cannons that they build out of recyclable materials.

Cherry graduated with a double major Bachelor’s degree in Biochemistry and Quantum Physics, followed by a double major Masters degree in Electrical and Mechanical Engineering and a double major Ph.D in Aeronautical and Civil Engineering, all from the Massachusetts Institute of Technology with full scholarships. It took her 1 year to graduate with her bachelor's degree, 1 year to graduate with her masters degree and she completed her doctorate studies and graduated when she was 12 years old. Before and after she graduated, she did a lot of research, wrote many thesis papers, invented many gadgets with recyclable materials and became famous.



3. Dr. Cherry Crusher – Lunar Colonist:

When Dr. Cherry Crusher was still studying at the Massachusetts Institute of Technology, the space colonization race begun. After MARS 1, 2, 3, 4, 5 and 6 were successful and Mars was successfully colonised, many countries wanted to colonise the moon next. Three countries with space programs: The United States, Russia and China decided to collaborate and pool their expertise and resources to colonise the moon together. So the joint U.S. – Russia – China Lunar Program was born. With her unique qualifications, Dr. Cherry Crusher was immediately accepted for the Lunar Colonisation Program when she submitted her application. Coincidentally, the joint U.S. – Russia – China Lunar Program was named the Phoenix Lunar Program. Phoenix, like her brother Phoenix Crusher.

The parts of the Lunar colony space shuttle were build in each of the three countries but the final assembly was at Cape Canaveral where the shuttle would lift off. The shuttle was build in such a way that the Lunar Colonists can cannibalise it for spare parts when they reach the moon. After eight months of construction and testing, the space shuttle was completed. Meanwhile, the people who were chosen to be the space colonists and crew including Dr. Cherry Crusher had been undergoing astronaut training. They were now ready to go Colonise the moon.

Liftoff from Cape Canaveral happened without any issues. Then the shuttle was underway and they reached the moon within a week. The colonists’ shuttle landed safely on the moon. In the first few weeks, the Lunar Colonists build several Biodomes with living quarters, greenhouses and life support for them to live in. Dr Cherry Crusher improved on the designs of the existing Biodomes. The structural integrity increased and the Biodomes became safer and the greenhouses were 20% more efficient at generating oxygen and food. Soon they began to try to terraform the moon like their Martian colonist counterparts have been doing on Mars. Dr Cherry Crusher once again proved to be a quite useful colonist as she led the Lunar terraforming efforts.

Now, many years later, there's a thin but breathable atmosphere, some tough plants are able to survive outside the Biodome greenhouses and there are lakes on the moon. Those lakes contained fishes from Earth in them such as Salmon, Trout, Carp, Pike and Tuna. The Lunar Colonists are now able to enjoy fishing and sailing on boats and ships in their lakes on the moon.



(Disclaimer:
My stories are fictional. Any resemblance to people or places are accidental.
The character Dr. Cherry Crusher, Ph.D was not inspired by Wesley Crusher from Star Trek. I needed a surname that worked for this story and Crusher happened to be it.
Dr. Cherry Crusher had to graduate with her double major doctorate degree by 12 years old because there's a guy named Karl Witte who graduated with a doctorate degree when he was 13. (10 Youngest People Ever to Achieve a Doctorate Degree))
PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2018 6:35 pm


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A pirate was at his insurance company answering questions about his claims. Here's how it went:

Claims Adjuster: Well I see here that you have a wooden leg. How did you lose it?

Pirate: So me crew and I were chasing the Great Beast and just as we harpooned him I was caught up in the ropes and dragged to the water. The Beast bit me leg right off!

Claims Adjuster: Oh my. What about the hook on your hand?

Pirate: Me and me mates were swashbuckling on the deck and when I wasn't looking, me mate chopped me hand off with his sword.

Claims Adjuster: Well that's just horrible! One last thing, I see you are wearing a patch over your eye. How did you lose it?

Pirate: I was out on the deck watching the sunset set when a blasted gull pooped in me eye.

Claims Adjuster: How could bird poop make you lose the eye?

Pirate: First day with me hook.

I'm sorry. I've given this a lot of thought, and this story is just too similar to an old joke I've heard before. It's a good joke, but it's not original with you and I can't accept it. However, I can accept the other two entries, and you're free to write a third one.


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PostPosted: Sun Sep 16, 2018 7:27 pm


Young Vaylin
Young Vaylin the Chrysanthemum Empress
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If six word stories are accepted, I'm submitting twenty word stories.
Presenting the DeepWater Lake 20 Word Story Trilogy!:

DeepWater Lake: Part 1
Many people drowned in DeepWater Lake including skilled swimmers. John's a toddler. Fell into lake. Drowned. Parents sad. Funeral.

DeepWater Lake: Part 2
John's sister Mary. Born after John drowned. Raised differently. Trained to swim. Saw John's and other people's ghosts in lake.


DeepWater Lake: Part 3
Father Aetna. Vicar. Mary told vicar lake haunted. Father Aetna performed mass exorcism at lake. All ghosts rests in peace.

The End

I've given this a lot of thought, and these three stories are too interconnected to be separate entries. I'll call them "DeepWater Lake" and invite you to enter two more entries if you so desire.
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