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Bishoujo-senshi Mahou-shoujo
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 Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2016 9:39 am
Erytheia, the Wonder. The whole concept is around rebirth to connect with Cosmos.
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Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2016 11:52 am
I'm actually going to recommend a couple more upgrades to Erytheia's powers; I would say you can actually give him an area of effect instead of single targets! Perhaps 8 feet around Erytheia at Squire and 8 feet around the target of the arrow at Knight? And I think the Squire stage can heal minor injuries and partially heal moderate wounds, with Knight being capable of healing moderate injuries and partially healing major ones? I don't want you to be playing a character that's comparatively weak!
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Bishoujo-senshi Mahou-shoujo
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Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2016 11:59 am
Noir Songbird I'm actually going to recommend a couple more upgrades to Erytheia's powers; I would say you can actually give him an area of effect instead of single targets! Perhaps 8 feet around Erytheia at Squire and 8 feet around the target of the arrow at Knight? And I think the Squire stage can heal minor injuries and partially heal moderate wounds, with Knight being capable of healing moderate injuries and partially healing major ones? I don't want you to be playing a character that's comparatively weak! Upgraded.
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Posted: Wed Mar 02, 2016 12:11 pm
Awesome!  A GM will be by soon for further review; congrats on winnign his civ side and good luck getting his upgrade!<3
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Bishoujo-senshi Mahou-shoujo
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Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2016 11:59 am
I now have the knight art as well. heart
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Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2016 6:48 pm
Hey, Mei!
Congrats on your character (he is a cutie!) so I'll work as quickly as I can to get you a stamp!
The civilian part looks good, but I have only one thing to note! In the 'Shot through the heart' hobby it says that he is the captain of the archery club, but we would prefer if there wasn’t any character in the set role of 'leader' of any school clubs (just because there are other players that may have similar hobbies so it isn't fair to let one person be captain and another not). However! If he was part of the Meadowview Archery club as well as Captain of a non-affiliated Archery team, that would work! You can make your own club outside of Meadowview and do whatever you like with it, but if it is associated with the school we have to ask that no one is the best/in a specific position!
Otherwise, the rest of the profile is great! If you can make that tweak then I can drop a stamp and you can go play him!
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Bishoujo-senshi Mahou-shoujo
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Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2016 7:20 pm
Kyuseisha no Hikari Hey, Mei!
Congrats on your character (he is a cutie!) so I'll work as quickly as I can to get you a stamp!
The civilian part looks good, but I have only one thing to note! In the 'Shot through the heart' hobby it says that he is the captain of the archery club, but we would prefer if there wasn’t any character in the set role of 'leader' of any school clubs (just because there are other players that may have similar hobbies so it isn't fair to let one person be captain and another not). However! If he was part of the Meadowview Archery club as well as Captain of a non-affiliated Archery team, that would work! You can make your own club outside of Meadowview and do whatever you like with it, but if it is associated with the school we have to ask that no one is the best/in a specific position!
Otherwise, the rest of the profile is great! If you can make that tweak then I can drop a stamp and you can go play him! Changed.
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Posted: Wed Apr 06, 2016 8:24 pm
Awesome, thank you! Have fun playing!
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