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Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2014 9:26 am
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I added another virtue and flaw~ Could you perhaps look it over to see if it fits with my character?
Also, do I repost the quest in the Stamping thread again?
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Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2014 10:08 am
Nope, you don't have to repost! Both the new traits look fine to me, so I'm going to restamp you! 
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Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2014 6:55 pm
Do I need approval from a GM before I can rp this character?
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Posted: Sat Oct 04, 2014 7:14 pm
Yes, and you also need to acquire the character's official shop art before you can play.
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Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2014 10:35 pm
Cute outfit! Her civilian side definitely looks good to me, but I have a question about her powered side! Her first and third attack sound fine, however her second attack says that she can paralyze weaker enemies for up to twenty seconds—is this total paralyzation, where they are unable to fight back or defend themselves at all? In which case, I'm sorry but the cap will need to be fifteen seconds! Attacks cannot totally immobilize a character for any longer than fifteen seconds! If the attack instead makes their movements sluggish or makes it harder to move/makes them feel as though they have some degree of paralysis, (though gives them freedom to still defend themselves in life or death situations!) it could last for twenty seconds, though!
If I am misunderstanding or if you make any changes, please give me a quote and I will be back as soon as possible!
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Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2014 7:45 am
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Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2014 10:39 am
Fabulous, thank you so much! I'm going to drop a stamp; good luck winning her!
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