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Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2014 2:41 pm
The Only Black Uke Haha, okey - well, as is she's fine with me at the moment, so as long as you don't change anything major, you have my approval. 3nodding No, just bit of spitshine! I hope the wording "unique in her immediate family" is ok. I don't know how to put it otherwise ^^" (Not even her grandparents on ether side would have this dual coloring in their wings, though perhaps an ancestor? *shrug*)
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Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2014 3:09 pm
Looks good now Apple!
If you do edit it than just pull ina staff member and see if the change is fine :3 Otherwise, that's 2 approval stamps which equals official approval!
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Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2014 3:29 pm
robot kitten Looks good now Apple! If you do edit it than just pull ina staff member and see if the change is fine :3 Otherwise, that's 2 approval stamps which equals official approval! OH
IT'S ROBO.
I THOUGHT YOU WERE UKE.
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I guess I should put the bit about her grandparents in there.... And the bit about her cooking ^^""
*scurries away to do that*
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Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2014 3:49 pm
Just to let you know I added the bit about her grandparents not having the dual colored wings, and I reworked the cooking section, and both now read as follows:Wings Rework Her wings are very unique in her immediate family because of her mother and father's wing colors. Her mother has pastel, very light yellow wings with patterns of ribbons of white or a paler white than the yellow, while her father has very light blue wings. She was born with the yellow wings and patterns, but the bottom part is the same light blue of her father's. The white patterns she shares with her mother go through both colorings. She is the only one of her parent's 5 children that has this coloring, and not even her grandparents on either side of her parentage have this dual color in their wings. Cooking Rework Cooking: While she inherited her mother's love and gift of tinkering, she also found her knack of liking to cook. Though not as good as her father, or her skills as a tinker, she loves to make things for her parents and siblings to eat. She doesn't tell her other friends she cooks, mostly because she is shy about it. This shyness is mostly because she feels a bit intimidated with her cooking at that stage, and thus why she won't tell anyone outside her family about it. She's not as sure of herself in that area as she is in her tinkering. Not a major edit, just some of what I think is clarification ^^""" I swear this will be the last time I bug you both about it ^^""""
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Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2014 3:53 pm
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Posted: Fri Mar 28, 2014 7:20 pm
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