Talent Name: Force of Will - Kiai Rank: D Association: Soldier Duration // Upkeep: -- Element: Null Requirement(s): Soldier Description: Soldiers and other warriors who practice the art of war often grunt, shout or scream in the midst of combat, even some of the most calm or seasoned veterans do so. In some martial arts it is known as a warcry or kiai, a short shout often of a single syllable beginning with a vowel. The soldier uses pure spiritual power with these shouts often to empower themselves briefly or to prepare themselves for something with a force of willpower. Activated with only a shout before an offensive or defensive technique is used, energy is expelled from the soldier's body in a visible aura that even physically kicks up dust at their feet and sends a shimmer through the air. For the next activation, any offensive or defensive action is enhanced in its effectiveness by [.5 Step] when used with the Kiai shout. This only affects [Simple] techniques and allows them to clash with [Spiritual] techniques or hit things that mundane attack would normally be ineffective on such as a ethereal spirit. A Kiai does not take an activation to use, can be applied to each Activation used in a post.
Posted: Tue Feb 06, 2018 1:29 pm
For Guild Use: N
Character: Chigiri Sonozaki [Uchiha] Technique Name: Chakka Ken [Ignition Fist] Rank: D Type: Spiritual Methodology: Offensive Frame Required: Any Element: Fire Description: By charging chakra up to their fist, and manifesting their katon chakra, the user of this technique can create sparks, igniting the air around their hand, that cause their fist to be wreathed in fire before impact. It adds minor burns on-top of a normal punch for the user's rank; Though it's main purpose is to catch any accelerants that might be poured on the target to ignite, setting them ablaze. [EX: Oil, Gunpowder, Alcohol]
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Posted: Sat Feb 24, 2018 9:26 pm
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Electrical Induction Rank: X- Passive (learned as A) Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:This technique is passive once learned. Upon learning the user gains the ability to cast their raiton ninjutsu consecutively. This results in an automatic korabo increasing the strength of the resulting jutsu by one half step per jutsu chained in this manner. Each time a jutsu is changed the cost of said jutsu increases by 15. Jutsu may continuously be chained for as many activation as the user has.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Forking Lightning Rank: X-Passive (learned as B) Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:This jutsu is a variation of most ranton lightning with the difference being that the lightning is able to strike one person and then move to another or several others. As it is more powerful than the standard lightning, as such it requires a greater amount of discipline and concentration to project and sustain the stream of lightning. In addition the cost of the forked jutsu increases by one half rank per person or being struck. Furthermore by paying a cost equal to one rank lower the original jutsu, the user can split any line or beam type lightning or ranton jutsu into two separate lines or beams.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Lightning Barrier Rank: D-Rank Element: Ranton (storm release) Description: This jutsu is purely defensive in nature and is performed as a last ditch protection more often then not. While this jutsu does not actually require any seals to perform other then a held ram seal its rather taxing for the user. By quite literally venting raiton chakra from the body the user creates an area around them which while no more then four inches in size is filled with black lightning. This forms an emergency shield of sorts to protect the user. Given its nature its ill advised to strike the user with hand to hand combat.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Electric Blast Rank: D Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:This jutsu functions much in the same way that the lightning barrier does. However it has one noticeable difference. Instead of the lightning remaining around the user in a tight field it is instead released in a spherical path ten feet wide radiating away from the user in a pulse of black lightning. Due to its relatively low rank, this jutsu is only capable of first degree electrical burns and numbness to the parts hit by it.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Electric Explosion Rank: C Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:This jutsu functions mechanically the exact same as the lightning blast jutsu. However it has one noticeable difference. By holding a two handed ram seal the user will channel even more ranton chakra to release from their body. This expulsion results in a spherical path fifteen feet wide radiating away from the user in a pulse of black lightning. Due to its relatively lesser rank, this jutsu is only capable of first and second degree electrical burns and numbness to the parts hit by it.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Electric Domination Rank: B Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:This jutsu functions mechanically the exact same as the lightning blast jutsu. However it has one noticeable difference. By holding a two handed ram seal the user will channel even more ranton chakra to release from their body. This expulsion results in a spherical path twenty feet wide radiating away from the user in a pulse of black lightning. Due to its relatively moderate rank, this jutsu is capable of first, second and third degree electrical burns and crippling numbness to the parts hit by it.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Electric Domination: Stream Rank: B Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:This jutsu functions mechanically the exact same as the Electric Domination jutsu. However it has one noticeable difference instead of a pulse the result is a constant stream of black lightning. By holding a two handed ram seal then splitting the seal to form two one handed ram seals the user will push their hands out to each side of the body and by doing so emit a constant stream from their body. This expulsion results in a dome radiating away from the user in a field of black lightning. This field is extremely dangerous as the stream of lightning is entirely capable of causing third degree burns and paralysis if caught undefended. This jutsu lasts for as long as the user continues to pour chakra into it and remains still.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Black Lightning grenade Rank: C Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:The user will create a ram seal and hold it. Between their palms a ball of black lightning will start to form. After a moment the ball will envelop their throwing hand. With a simple throwing motion the lightning is launched from their hand towards their target. The exact result of this jutsu is as follows. Once thrown the ball will detonate upon contact and result in a one foot wide diameter explosion of lightning. This is capable of causing first and second degree burns if struck indirectly, and directly respectively. (second degree if directly hit first if within six inches of the center.)
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Black Lightning Mortar Rank: B Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:The user will create a ram seal and hold it. Between their palms a ball of black lightning will start to form. After a moment the ball will envelop their throwing hand. With a simple throwing motion the lightning is launched from their hand towards their target. The exact result of this jutsu is as follows. Once thrown the ball will detonate upon contact and result in a five foot wide diameter explosion of lightning. If the target is struck directly by this ball causing it to detonate the target will suffer extensive first and second degree burns. They will also suffer localized third degree burns upon contact. The strength of the black lightning at this point is more then capable of blowing trees apart if struck for reference.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Black Lightning Bomb Rank: A Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:The user will create a ram seal and hold it. Between their palms a ball of black lightning will start to form. After a moment the ball will envelop their throwing hand. With a simple throwing motion the lightning is launched from their hand towards their target. The exact result of this jutsu is as follows. Once thrown the ball will detonate upon contact and result in a ten foot wide diameter explosion of lightning. If the target is struck directly by this ball causing it to detonate the target will suffer extensive first and second degree burns. They will also suffer severe third degree burns upon contact. If hit directly and undefended with this jutsu it is entirely capable of killing the target. The strength of the black lightning at this point is more then capable of blowing trees apart and rending portions of the ground if struck for reference.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Black Lightning Maelstrom Rank: S Element: Ranton (storm release) Description: This jutsu is well deserving of its rank designation as S. Mechanically and in terms of functionality it is the same as the electric domination on an entirely different scale. While the destruction is creates is fantastic it is just as taxing on the user. Building up a massive amount of chakra and rapidly converting it to black lightning the user will unleash a maelstrom of black lightning around their body. This results in a stream around the user of large bolts of lightning entirely capable of killing a person outright if hit by one of them. This field is a full forty radial feet in size and generates such a large number of lightning bolts that the entire twenty radial feet are filled to its entirety. Making it suicidal to approach the user. This field can be sustained for multiple posts however the sheer cost of chakra makes this unadvised requiring the activation cost each be paid at the beginning of each post.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Shocking Blast Rank: A Element: Ranton (storm release) Description: By creating a string of seals the user will create a flat vertical disk in front of their body. Upon completion of the jutsu's seals the sphere will be fired in the direction the user is facing. This sphere, once fired, leaves a trail of destruction in a line up to twenty feet from the user. Trees, walls, barriers are blown through. The strength of this jutsu while respectable on its own, is in its penetrating power. Against defensive ninjutsu, structures, or obstructions it is treated as half rank higher. However as it is not designed inherently for use on people, its actual damage on such is treated as one half rank lesser.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Kuroi inazuma no kami (God of black lightning) Rank: X-Passive (Learned as S) Element: Ranton Description:As the pinnacle of black lightning manipulation this jutsu requires knowledge of the black lightning manipulation jutsu, as well as the electrical resistance jutsu before it can even be attempted. Upon learning the user becomes a truly fearsome person. This jutsu will allow the user to pay an equal cost to the base of a lightning jutsu targeted at them to quite literally catch it, channel it through their body harmlessly, and expel it back at the original caster as deadly black lightning. The resulting tech is equal to one rank higher then the original jutsu. IE if a B rank jutsu is caught and channeled it becomes an A rank jutsu instead. Due to the absorption of the original jutsu's chakra and the equal addition of the users chakra.
→ All Techniques ⇨ Denied tab ► Are you intending them to have no duration? That you pay the same cost every post? → Electrical Induction ⇨ Denied tab ► There needs to be a hard cap on this. Because you're talking that in one post the third technique will deal 1.5 ranks more damage, and if that stacks over and over it's only a matter of two posts before you're doing 3 ranks higher for only 15 more chakra a technique. 3 would be the hard cap I'd suggest for this rank, without a reset. → Forked Lightning ⇨ Denied tab ► I'm honestly uncertain what you're playing. You're saying that if you use an A - ranked lightning technique, you could pay B - ranked cost to split it in two? And that the cost also increases by 1/2 rank per time it's split? I'm confused on the numbers you're going for here. → Electric Blast ⇨ Approved → Electric Explosion ⇨ Approved tab ► I'd suggest giving this a Base Duration of 2 Posts, with 10 chakra per each additional post. → Electric Domination ⇨ Approved tab ► Mightsuggest 1 post duration, and 20 chakra per additional post. → Electric Domination: Stream ⇨ Denied tab ► I need to know the length of the lines of electricity. Also suggesting durations. → Black Lightning grenade Approved → Black Lightning Bomb ⇨ Denied tab ► Every technique has 3 ranks. The Learning and Cost rank, which, in this case, is A - rank. Then there is Speed and Strength. Speed is how fast the technique is, and Strength is how much damage there is. If ever you don't list the other two, just the first, all three ranks are the same. In the case of this technique, I'd suggest lowering the speed by one or two, and increase the strength by one. It does more damage than an A - rank, but you are relying on your throwing it to do anything speed wise. → Black Lightning Maelstrom ⇨ Denied tab ► No technique can outright kill a character, even if all it takes is dodging them. Severe damage can be done, and I'd suggest saying the damage type is concussive, but outright killing is a no. S - rank damage to an entire field? I'm okay with that if its realistic damage. My suggestion is to have no base duration, but upkeep of 90 chakra a post. → Shocking Blast ⇨ Denied tab ► I'd put the speed as one rank lower automatically, but leave the damage bonus you currently have, just increase it to 1 instead of 1/2. I'd also include that defenses take 3 Duration damage additional if used against this. That means your attack does 4x more damage than the average technique against a defense. → Kuroi inazuma no kami (God of black lightning) ⇨ Denied tab ► This one...this one is difficult to balance. I get what you're trying to do, which is like Uncle Iroh. Or from Avatar in general. That said, you're making yourself effectively immune permanently to Raiton, because you can redirect it, and make it stronger. I'll have to think hard on this one, as the first reaction is a hard no. I might suggest trying to do something that shunts part of the damage, making you take some but not all, and in return blasting back with your own chakra and theirs combined in retaliation? That's a suggestion. → tab ►
Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2018 8:39 am
For Guild Use: Y
Character: - Technique Name: Katon : Otoko Hanma no Jutsu [Fire Style : Ember Hammer Technique] Rank: B Element: Fire Description:The user of the technique expells a cloud of embers from their mouth and with a handseal following, forms them into a solid sphere-shape, which impacts with the force of a cannon ball. It can demolish buildings and crush bones. Trying to stop this with one's hands would find that it was extremely hot, burning anything organic that touches it within a minute of it's creation.
For Guild Use: Y
Character: - Technique Name: Katon : Yoyu Moeru no Jutsu [Fire Style : Melting Blaze Technique] Rank: B Element: Fire Description:The user throws six shuriken in an arc, infusing them with fire chakra just before release. By forming six handsigns, ending in tiger, the shuriken then super-heat and melt, splattering molten metal against anything they would impact. This melted steel burns and sticks to surfaces, and removing it requires cutting it off the skin. This creates lingering burns, up to third degree if allowed to burn until it cools. Cloth, Silk and other flammable materials are ignited by the molten steel.
For Guild Use: Y
Character: - Technique Name: Katon : Kasen no Jutsu [Fire Style : Fire Line Technique] Rank: X [Trained as C] Element: Fire Description:With a single hand-sign, tiger, the user can breathe out a blast of fire in a straight line. While not entirely complex, if used to counter a Lightning Style technique, it treats the electricity like a conductor, and travels back up the bolt to the user of the lightning style technique, burning the ions in the air created by the static of the blast to lock on to it's source. It cannot lock onto ions of a technique greater than the strength of this technique. [EX: An A-Rank Lightning Jutsu must be met with an A-Rank level of this technique].
For Guild Use: Y
Character: - Technique Name: Raiton : Raimei Shugeki no Jutsu [Lightning Style : Thundering Raid Technique] Rank: B Element: Lightning Description:Upon the completion of handseals and manifestation of lightning chakra. The jutsu takes shape as three grey clouds of static and ions that fly at the intended target. Upon reaching the target, they detonate in a shower of sparks and electricity, burning slightly and numbing the afflicted body parts that the cloud's electric shrapnel touches. The detonations of the clouds are only able to afflict a ten-foot radial.
For Guild Use: Y
Character: - Technique Name: Raiton : Shindo Shokku no Jutsu [Lightning Style : Vibrating Shock Technique] Rank: C Element: Lightning Description:A lightning style technique that fires a bolt of electricity in a straight line. If the person or target is metal, using a shield, or holding a bladed weapon upon contact, the metal becomes electrified for two posts, making it difficult to move any part of the body touching the electrified objects [Reducing the afflicted target's Speed by 1]. This jutsu inflicts burns and numbs the body of those it hits.
For Guild Use: Y
Character: - Technique Name: Raiton : Den'atsu Kyu no Jutsu [Lightning Style : Voltage Sphere Technique] Rank: D Element: Lightning Description:Upon the completion of three handseals, and the molding of chakra, the user of the technique creates a softball size sphere of lightning chakra which is hurled at their intended target. Upon contact with a solid surface, the ball of lightning lets out a loud thunder-crack which causes intense ringing of the ears of anyone within twenty feet of the burst and numbs any part of the body that it touches.
For Guild Use: Y
Character: - Technique Name: Suiton : Mizu Funshutsu no Jutsu [Water Style : Water Spout Technique] Rank: X [Trained as C-Rank] Element: Water Description:Using their control over water, the Suiton user makes a single hand-seal in response to a close range attack, causing water to surround them in a violent spiral surge, knocking away those who cannot overpower the aquatic cyclone shield that protects the user. The shield can be maintained, but it is the only jutsu the user can utilize each post, with few exceptions.
For Guild Use: Y Character: - Technique Name: Suiton : Funshutsu Shotto no Jutsu [Water Style : Spout Shot Technique] Rank: C-Rank Element: Water Description:While using the Mizu Funshutsu no Jutsu, the user of the technique can lower the shield's effective rank by 1 to fire off a blast of water that flies off the shield with the momentum from the aquatic twister to deliver a dripping kinetic force to the intended target, like a punch with a fist made of water. The range is short, traveling no more than fifty feet. Special: Must know and be under the effect of Mizu Funshutsu no Jutsu [Water Spout Technique]
For Guild Use: Y Character: - Technique Name: Suiton : Mizu-Ryuu Dansu no Jutsu [Water Style : Water Dragon Dance Technique] Rank: A-Rank Element: Water Description:A variation on the Water Dragon Jutsu, this technique fires one Water Dragon Jutsu that then splits into three smaller water-dragons, each able to target individual targets of their own, or continue an assault on a single target, barraging them with draconic projectiles of water. The force of the aquatic dragons made of water chakra individually feel like small wrecking balls blowing into whatever they happen to strike. Special: Must know Water Dragon Jutsu
For Guild Use: Y Character: - Technique Name: Suiton : Doro no Mizutamari no Jutsu [Water Style : Muddy Puddle Technique] Rank: X-Rank [Learned as D-Rank] Element: Water Description:By using their control over water chakra, the user is able to condense water molecules in the air to condense on a spot under their target's feet, causing the ground to slicken, or even become muddy and treacherous to stand on. Quick movements while standing on the area afflicted by this jutsu can cause the person to slip and fall prone. This is more comical than anything, but in combat, might provide an opening for stronger techniques. This jutsu affects ten-feet of surface per rank of chakra used.
→ All Techniques ⇨ Denied tab ► Are you intending them to have no duration? That you pay the same cost every post? I was going to have all but the passives have a single post. The ones that specify the ability to continue its effects cost the same price as the previous post but do not consume an activation. → Electrical Induction ⇨ Denied tab ► There needs to be a hard cap on this. Because you're talking that in one post the third technique will deal 1.5 ranks more damage, and if that stacks over and over it's only a matter of two posts before you're doing 3 ranks higher for only 15 more chakra a technique. 3 would be the hard cap I'd suggest for this rank, without a reset. Ill modify it so that its only stacking for the original post. So the max you can get is 1.5. → Forked Lightning ⇨ Denied tab ► I'm honestly uncertain what you're playing. You're saying that if you use an A - ranked lightning technique, you could pay B - ranked cost to split it in two? And that the cost also increases by 1/2 rank per time it's split? I'm confused on the numbers you're going for here. Thats exactly correct. If I use an A rank lightning bolt, and want to split it, then I would pay a B rank cost and that single bolt would become two bolts. → Electric Blast ⇨ Approved → Electric Explosion ⇨ Approved tab ► I'd suggest giving this a Base Duration of 2 Posts, with 10 chakra per each additional post. Noted → Electric Domination ⇨ Approved tab ► Mightsuggest 1 post duration, and 20 chakra per additional post.Noted → Electric Domination: Stream ⇨ Denied tab ► I need to know the length of the lines of electricity. Also suggesting duration's. Lets go with, ten foot radial, and a max of two posts? → Black Lightning grenade Approved → Black Lightning Bomb ⇨ Denied tab ► Every technique has 3 ranks. The Learning and Cost rank, which, in this case, is A - rank. Then there is Speed and Strength. Speed is how fast the technique is, and Strength is how much damage there is. If ever you don't list the other two, just the first, all three ranks are the same. In the case of this technique, I'd suggest lowering the speed by one or two, and increase the strength by one. It does more damage than an A - rank, but you are relying on your throwing it to do anything speed wise. So make it B rank speed and S rank power? → Black Lightning Maelstrom ⇨ Denied tab ► No technique can outright kill a character, even if all it takes is dodging them. Severe damage can be done, and I'd suggest saying the damage type is concussive, but outright killing is a no. S - rank damage to an entire field? I'm okay with that if its realistic damage. My suggestion is to have no base duration, but upkeep of 90 chakra a post. Noted → Shocking Blast ⇨ Denied tab ► I'd put the speed as one rank lower automatically, but leave the damage bonus you currently have, just increase it to 1 instead of 1/2. I'd also include that defenses take 3 Duration damage additional if used against this. That means your attack does 4x more damage than the average technique against a defense. Ohhh me likey, noted. → Kuroi inazuma no kami (God of black lightning) ⇨ Denied tab ► This one...this one is difficult to balance. I get what you're trying to do, which is like Uncle Iroh. Or from Avatar in general. That said, you're making yourself effectively immune permanently to Raiton, because you can redirect it, and make it stronger. I'll have to think hard on this one, as the first reaction is a hard no. I might suggest trying to do something that shunts part of the damage, making you take some but not all, and in return blasting back with your own chakra and theirs combined in retaliation? That's a suggestion. → For now, I can drop this one till we figure out how to word it better lol. I had a feeling it was going to be dicey. tab ►
Posted: Sat Mar 03, 2018 10:22 am
Lanfaer
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Electrical Induction Rank: X- Passive (learned as A) Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:This technique is passive once learned. Upon learning the user gains the ability to cast their raiton ninjutsu consecutively. This results in an automatic korabo increasing the strength of the resulting jutsu by one half step per jutsu chained in this manner. Each time a jutsu is changed the cost of said jutsu increases by 15. Jutsu may continuously be chained for as many activation as the user has. However this justsu can only be used to chain jutsu within the original post as it resets at the end of each post.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Forking Lightning Rank: X-Passive (learned as B) Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:This jutsu is a variation of most ranton lightning with the difference being that the lightning is able to strike one person and then move to another or several others. As it is more powerful than the standard lightning, as such it requires a greater amount of discipline and concentration to project and sustain the stream of lightning. In addition the cost of the forked jutsu increases by fifteen chakra per person or being struck. Furthermore by paying a cost equal to one rank lower the original jutsu, the user can split any line or beam type lightning or ranton jutsu into two separate lines or beams. IE, If the user uses an A rank lightning bolt, and wanta to split it, then they would pay a B rank cost and that single bolt would become two bolts. If they split it again, then it costs an additional fifteen chakra.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Lightning Barrier Rank: D-Rank Element: Ranton (storm release) Description: This jutsu is purely defensive in nature and is performed as a last ditch protection more often then not. While this jutsu does not actually require any seals to perform other then a held ram seal its rather taxing for the user. By quite literally venting raiton chakra from the body the user creates an area around them which while no more then four inches in size is filled with black lightning. This forms an emergency shield of sorts to protect the user. Given its nature its ill advised to strike the user with hand to hand combat.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Electric Blast Rank: D Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:This jutsu functions much in the same way that the lightning barrier does. However it has one noticeable difference. Instead of the lightning remaining around the user in a tight field it is instead released in a spherical path ten feet wide radiating away from the user in a pulse of black lightning. Due to its relatively low rank, this jutsu is only capable of first degree electrical burns and numbness to the parts hit by it.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Electric Explosion Rank: C Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:This jutsu functions mechanically the exact same as the lightning blast jutsu. However it has one noticeable difference. By holding a two handed ram seal the user will channel even more ranton chakra to release from their body. This expulsion results in a spherical path fifteen feet wide radiating away from the user in a pulse of black lightning. Due to its relatively lesser rank, this jutsu is only capable of first and second degree electrical burns and numbness to the parts hit by it. This jutsu has a Base Duration of 2 Posts, with 10 chakra per each additional post.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Electric Domination Rank: B Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:This jutsu functions mechanically the exact same as the lightning blast jutsu. However it has one noticeable difference. By holding a two handed ram seal the user will channel even more ranton chakra to release from their body. This expulsion results in a spherical path twenty feet wide radiating away from the user in a pulse of black lightning. Due to its relatively moderate rank, this jutsu is capable of first, second and third degree electrical burns and crippling numbness to the parts hit by it. This jutsu has a 1 post duration, and 20 chakra per additional post.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Electric Domination: Stream Rank: B Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:This jutsu functions mechanically the exact same as the Electric Domination jutsu. However it has one noticeable difference instead of a pulse the result is a constant stream of black lightning. By holding a two handed ram seal then splitting the seal to form two one handed ram seals the user will push their hands out to each side of the body and by doing so emit a constant stream from their body. This expulsion results in a dome radiating away from the user in a field of black lightning. This field is extremely dangerous as the stream of lightning is entirely capable of causing third degree burns and paralysis if caught undefended. The field is ten radial feet wide and can be maintained for a maximum of two posts.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Black Lightning grenade Rank: C Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:The user will create a ram seal and hold it. Between their palms a ball of black lightning will start to form. After a moment the ball will envelop their throwing hand. With a simple throwing motion the lightning is launched from their hand towards their target. The exact result of this jutsu is as follows. Once thrown the ball will detonate upon contact and result in a one foot wide diameter explosion of lightning. This is capable of causing first and second degree burns if struck indirectly, and directly respectively. (second degree if directly hit first if within six inches of the center.)
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Black Lightning Mortar Rank: B Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:The user will create a ram seal and hold it. Between their palms a ball of black lightning will start to form. After a moment the ball will envelop their throwing hand. With a simple throwing motion the lightning is launched from their hand towards their target. The exact result of this jutsu is as follows. Once thrown the ball will detonate upon contact and result in a five foot wide diameter explosion of lightning. If the target is struck directly by this ball causing it to detonate the target will suffer extensive first and second degree burns. They will also suffer localized third degree burns upon contact. The strength of the black lightning at this point is more then capable of blowing trees apart if struck for reference.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Black Lightning Bomb Rank: A Speed Rank: B Power Rank: S Element: Ranton (storm release) Description:The user will create a ram seal and hold it. Between their palms a ball of black lightning will start to form. After a moment the ball will envelop their throwing hand. With a simple throwing motion the lightning is launched from their hand towards their target. The exact result of this jutsu is as follows. Once thrown the ball will detonate upon contact and result in a ten foot wide diameter explosion of lightning. If the target is struck directly by this ball causing it to detonate the target will suffer extensive first and second degree burns. They will also suffer severe third degree burns upon contact. If hit directly and undefended with this jutsu it is entirely capable of killing the target. The strength of the black lightning at this point is more then capable of blowing trees apart and rending portions of the ground if struck for reference.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Black Lightning Maelstrom Rank: S Element: Ranton (storm release) Description: This jutsu is well deserving of its rank designation as S. Mechanically and in terms of functionality it is the same as the electric domination on an entirely different scale. While the destruction is creates is fantastic it is just as taxing on the user. Building up a massive amount of chakra and rapidly converting it to black lightning the user will unleash a maelstrom of black lightning around their body. This results in a stream around the user of large bolts of lightning entirely capable causing severe damage to a person if hit outright if hit by one of them. This field is a full forty radial feet in size and generates such a large number of lightning bolts that the entire twenty radial feet are filled to its entirety. Making it suicidal to approach the user. This field can be sustained for multiple posts however the sheer cost of chakra makes this unadvised requiring an upkeep of 90 chakra be paid at the beginning of each post.
For Guild Use: Y Character: Guild Technique Name: Shocking Blast Rank: A Speed Rank: B Power Rank: S Element: Ranton (storm release) Description: By creating a string of seals the user will create a flat vertical disk in front of their body. Upon completion of the jutsu's seals the sphere will be fired in the direction the user is facing. This sphere, once fired, leaves a trail of destruction in a line up to twenty feet from the user. Trees, walls, barriers are blown through. The strength of this jutsu while respectable on its own, is in its penetrating power. Against defensive ninjutsu, structures, or obstructions it is treated as a full rank higher. Additionally defenses take 3 duration damage if struck by this in addition to normal damage. However as it is not designed inherently for use on people, its actual damage on such is treated as one full rank lesser.
Conqueror's Presence:: Throughout the years of lording over the country side has gained her the knowledge and skills of turning her own reputation into a supernatural weapon. Allowing for her to trigger certain techniques through use of reputation and knowledge of her alone. Thought she seems to have forgotten how to make them in general, she could remember how if given just a little more time. She is able to make one custom, and only one custom, earlier than most at D-Rank. This custom must be an effect triggered by knowledge of Reputation. This Reputation must be of something fearsome, cause no one ever really gets effected by stories of someone who likes to beat on teddy bears... No Takira is meant to be feared.
For Guild Use: No
Character: Takira Hekireki Technique Name: Conqueror's Presence Rank: Passive - E Rank base Senses P // S: Sound // Sight (???) Type: Enchantment Duration // Upkeep: Passive at its base stage. 3⁄4 upkeep cost for any rank above E. Description: Takira has never been a saint, her life been long since blackened with cruel deeds. In her time these sinful actions had garnered the woman a touch of notoriety, a curious thing that seemed to grow the more she greedily took from the Land of Lightning. Before long she found her mere name being announced on a battle field would affect her opponents in strange ways, like her very being existing weighed down on their souls. It struck fear into their bones making them easy pray for the bandit lord to snuff out of existence. But that was a long long time ago. In this day in age you'd be hard pressed to find someone who even knows Takira's name. It no longer carries the weight it used to, for now at least.
The Conqueror's Presence is a passive technique that Takira developed without realizing she had. The chakra constantly leaking off of her body infusing into the air around her carrying a peculiar effect. This chakra activates when someone knows of Takira's infamy and amplifies the small kernels of fear and anxiety that come with knowing someones foul deeds. When this infamy condition is activated the genjutsu will invade the persons mind, sapping them of parts of their abilities. This aura she radiates can be resisted, as at its base it is only an E Rank Genjutsu. She can infuse more chakra into the technique to increase its rank thus breaking said resistances but gives Takira an upkeep cost of 3/4ths the new rank cost per post. The effects of her Presence are rather simple: as fear starts growing in the afflicted brain it begins limiting their bodies full potential weakening their stats. From base to B rank it will lower their stats by one stage, from A rank to S rank chakra it will lower their strongest stats an additional one stage.
Posted: Wed Mar 21, 2018 7:15 pm
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tabYour techniques are approved, and will be added to the guild roster with a few changes. You will be credited for 10 techniques, as a few will be combined into one X - ranked technique given that they are the same except for tiered effects.
Azeiel The Risen
tabThe following techniques are denied: Ember Hammer → This technique, while B - rank, is defined with wording that implies absolution. Meaning, B - rank melting flesh within a minute, demolishing buildings, etc should be left to just the rank's destruction. Honestly, how I'd word it is quite simply "forms into a solid, sphere shaped object that is nothing short of a fire based cannonball, dealing massive amounts of damage through physical force alone. Objects struck take twice the amount of duration damage appropriate for the rank." and leave it at that. Melting Blaze → The technique mentions that it needs to be removed before a certain time, but no mention on just when that will occur. If the idea is one post, molten metal shouldn't cool that fast, and leaving lasting 3rd degree burns in one post with B - rank seems much. Please detail how long it takes to cool, and, if physicians are required to remove it, what Skill level is needed to treat it. Fire Line → This just needs clarification. Given how it functions, are you intending for it to negate the lightning technique too? Thundering Raid → Would you mind if we made this Ranton? If so, I'd suggest turning this into C - rank, since it only deals slight burns. Voltage Sphere → Please include that the technique inflicts the Deafen hazard for 2 posts. Waterspout → I see where you're going with this. Add a Duration, and an Upkeep. Base Duration is how many posts the technique lasts. Upkeep is the cost to keep it going, per post, past the original. So if A - rank, the duration could be 3 posts. After 3 posts they pay half of an A - rank, 40 chakra, to maintain the technique per single post after that. Water Dragon Dance → Same as above. I need a duration and upkeep.
The following techniques are Approved: Vibrating Shock Spout Shot Muddy Puddle
jake23482
tabYour techniques are approved, and may be added to your character per your event reward.
Character: - Technique Name: Katon : Otoko Hanma no Jutsu [Fire Style : Ember Hammer Technique] Rank: B Element: Fire Description:The user of the technique expells a cloud of embers from their mouth and with a handseal following, forms them into a solid sphere-shape, which impacts with the force of a cannon ball. The solid, sphere shaped object that is nothing short of a fire based cannonball, dealing massive amounts of damage through physical force alone. Objects struck take twice the amount of duration damage appropriate for the rank.
For Guild Use: Y
Character: - Technique Name: Katon : Yoyu Moeru no Jutsu [Fire Style : Melting Blaze Technique] Rank: A Element: Fire Description:The user throws six shuriken in an arc, infusing them with fire chakra just before release. By forming six handsigns, ending in tiger, the shuriken then super-heat and melt, splattering molten metal against anything they would impact. This melted steel burns and sticks to surfaces, and removing it requires taking two activations to remove it from the skin [1 Activation if a Medical/Physicians]. This creates lingering burns, up to third degree if allowed to burn until it cools [1st Degree at 1 Post, 2nd Degree at 2 Posts, 3rd Degree at 4 Posts]. Cloth, Silk and other flammable materials are ignited by the molten steel.
For Guild Use: Y
Character: - Technique Name: Katon : Kasen no Jutsu [Fire Style : Fire Line Technique] Rank: X [Trained as C] Element: Fire Description:With a single hand-sign, tiger, the user can breathe out a blast of fire in a straight line. While not entirely complex, if used to counter a Lightning Style technique, it treats the electricity like a conductor, and travels back up the bolt to the user of the lightning style technique, burning the ions in the air created by the static of the blast to lock on to it's source. [It does not negate the jutsu in question, simply uses it as a homing beacon back to the source.] It cannot lock onto ions of a technique greater than the strength of this technique. [EX: An A-Rank Lightning Jutsu must be met with an A-Rank level of this technique].
For Guild Use: Y
Character: - Technique Name: Raiton : Raimei Shugeki no Jutsu [Lightning Style : Thundering Raid Technique] Rank: C Element: Ranton Description:Upon the completion of handseals and manifestation of lightning chakra. The jutsu takes shape as three grey clouds of static and ions that fly at the intended target. Upon reaching the target, they detonate in a shower of sparks and electricity, burning slightly and numbing the afflicted body parts that the cloud's electric shrapnel touches. The detonations of the clouds are only able to afflict a ten-foot radial.
For Guild Use: Y
Character: - Technique Name: Raiton : Den'atsu Kyu no Jutsu [Lightning Style : Voltage Sphere Technique] Rank: D Element: Lightning Description:Upon the completion of three handseals, and the molding of chakra, the user of the technique creates a softball size sphere of lightning chakra which is hurled at their intended target. Upon contact with a solid surface, the ball of lightning lets out a loud thunder-crack which causes intense ringing of the ears of anyone within twenty feet of the burst and numbs any part of the body that it touches. - Inflicts Deafen Hazard for 2 Posts.
For Guild Use: Y
Character: - Technique Name: Suiton : Mizu Funshutsu no Jutsu [Water Style : Water Spout Technique] Rank: X [Trained as C-Rank] Element: Water Description:Using their control over water, the Suiton user makes a single hand-seal in response to a close range attack, causing water to surround them in a violent spiral surge, knocking away those who cannot overpower the aquatic cyclone shield that protects the user. The shield can be maintained, but it is the only jutsu the user can utilize each post, with few exceptions. - Maximum Duration of 2 Posts +1 Post per Rank; Upkeep equal to half the cost after use.
For Guild Use: Y Character: - Technique Name: Suiton : Mizu-Ryuu Dansu no Jutsu [Water Style : Water Dragon Dance Technique] Rank: A-Rank Element: Water Description:A variation on the Water Dragon Jutsu, this technique fires one Water Dragon Jutsu that then splits into three smaller water-dragons, each able to target individual targets of their own, or continue an assault on a single target, barraging them with draconic projectiles of water. The force of the aquatic dragons made of water chakra individually feel like small wrecking balls blowing into whatever they happen to strike. [This Jutsu is instantaneous, and simply a variation style on Water Dragon Jutsu] Special: Must know Water Dragon Jutsu
Made edits. Hope these work now.
Posted: Mon Apr 16, 2018 10:00 pm
For Guild Use: N
Character: Xiaowan Technique Name: Unstable Affliction Rank: D Type: Simple Methodology: Offensive Frame Required: Any Element: N/A Description: This technique is passive once acquired. Due to Xiaowan's corruption, her slime skin can excrete bubbles that are made of her type of physical corruption in order to direct them at enemies. Bubbles are X - ranked and take [1] Corruption per rank of the technique. The bubbles have a property similar to alkaline, spreading a corrosive liquid on the skin, burning upon contact and can pass on the corruption to others.
Character: Baranara Nanabara Talent Name: Force of Nature Rank: C Association: Soldier Duration // Upkeep: [3] Element: Spiritual Requirement(s): Polearm, Six foot gap minimum. Description:By firmly planting their pole arm weapon in the ground and then taking an authoritative stance a sudden flare of the users chakra materialization occurs sending a momentary harmless but startling shock wave. The user enters a heightened sense of awareness that makes oncoming attacks seem slower and easier to anticipate, as such the user can then use their weapons length from then on to defend optimally against a target with inferior reach and push the attacker back. { [Simple] Physical attacks of C or below are anticipated and deflected. Complex techniques are treated as Simple for this interaction }
For Guild Use: Y
Character: Baranara Nanabara Talent Name: Bounding Blow Rank: [X/B] Association: Soldier Duration // Upkeep: N/a Element: Complex Requirement(s): Polearm/Staff Description: An attack is made bearing insurmountable force of will. This attack is performed much like a pool cue and its strength is reflexive of the blow that's made. The attack inflicts an amount of 'recoil' on the attacker equal to the attack made causing blow back. i.e An opponent attacks with a C-ranked technique this technique is countered with Bounding Blow. The Opponent then receives damage equivalent of their C-ranked technique in impact damage and Bounding Blow if its rank was higher that the technique. As an example C technique is reflected with a B-Bounding Blow. The Target receives a C-amount of recoil and and E-amount of damage via the difference. If bounding blow fails instead the vise-versa occurs.
Character: Baranara Nanabara Talent Name: Spiral Field / Spiral Shot Rank: [X/D] Association: Soldier Duration // Upkeep: Base Per Turn of Sustain, May gradually increase and decrease as needed Element: Complex Requirement(s): Polearm Description: With deft hands and skill a pole arm is spun in one hand as one would a baton. This mimics the effects of a circular saw and produces a pseudo-shield all whilst building momentum similarly one can see it as a fan drawing in air around it. The second part of the technique allows for the user to then switch from spinning using the built momentum to throw it with increased penetrative force, room for a backstep is required to do so. Whilst spinning deflects oncoming projectiles of equivalent rank, causes a [lock] to happen when clashing with a weapon preventing further spinning regardless of the attacking techniques rank being inferior. A throw requires one post of uninterrupted wind up in which when thrown is treated as a rank-higher in strength and speed.
Character: Baranara Nanabara Talent Name: Tunnel Snake Rank: [X/C] Association: Soldier Duration // Upkeep: N/a Element: [Complex] Requirement(s): Penetrative Weapon, Doton Nature Description: An attack that hides within the ground. First the user locks eyes with the intended target. After a fierce throwing of a pointed weapon into the ground the weapons trajectory burrows through the earth below and in a subtle manipulation of chakra the weapon shoots out from beneath the ground at its intended target. This effect can be stacked by 'planting' multiple weapons beneath the ground for later use in which the weapons can be set to launch with a hand sign or act as a proximity trap within five feet.
Posted: Fri May 04, 2018 8:20 pm
_______________Formal Moderator Judgment... ||
tabYour techniques are approved, and will be added to the guild roster with a few changes. You will be credited for 10 techniques, as a few will be combined into one X - ranked technique given that they are the same except for tiered effects.
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