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Character Name: Rin Nicknames: N/A Age: 15 Birth Date: 12/21 Gender: Female Hair Color: Blonde Eye Color: Blue Height: 4' 8” Body Type: Average
Background Work in Progress
Family Information Name: Gender: Relation: {Parent, Sibling, Spouse, Pet, Friend} Species: {Pets only} Description: {Please describe your family member, or include a picture. If your picture is large, please use a spoiler.} {Add any extra slots you need or desire.}:
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Village Organization: Council Rank: Special Jounin- B Titles: N/A Insignia Style: Hidden on a pocket mirror, behind the mirror itself which is detachable.
Chakra Color: Blue Chakra Level: Low Chakra Points: 72 Chakra Elements: Fuuton Extra Chakra Elements: N/A Chakra Control: N/A
Speed: Speed type ninja train themselves to move faster in every way, easily outpacing their peers. [+1 Rank Speed]
Tactical: These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. [+1 Reaction Speed]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
Weaker Ninjutsu: This shinobi has spent significantly less time than average on their ninjutsu skills, and as a result has become much weaker in their usage than the average shinobi. [-1 rank Ninjutsu strength]
Clan: Yamanaka
Clan: Active
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Shinobi Profession: Genjutsu Specialist Profession Base Benefits Elusive Reality: Because of their specialization, the genjutsu specialists genjutsu are treated as one rank higher in regards to potency and the ability to break them. They also have the ability to learn more complicated genjutsu than the average shinobi. (+1 Rank to Genjutsu power, can learn from Genjutsu Specialist restricted list.)
Genjutsu Mastery: Genjutsu specialists have a higher understanding of how genjutsu work allowing them to learn higher level Genjutsu than other shinobi. (Can learn one additional Genjutsu up to three ranks above the user.)
Rank Benefits
Genin Mind Mastery: Due to their specialty the genjutsu specialist has an easier time recognizing genjutsu, and due to their detailed understanding they have an easier time breaking enemy genjutsu. (Can recognize genjutsu easier, +.5 rank Genjutsu Resistance (Can break stronger genjutsu with Kai))
Chuunin Mass Genjutsu: The genjutsu specialist has discovered how enhance the effects of their genjutsu, particularly against multiple targets. They can now use Genjutsu on multiple opponents at once. Does not apply to S rank or Mirage type Genjutsu. (At regular chakra cost the genjutsu can affect up to two people, at 1.5x regular chakra cost for the genjutsu this can be increased to a maximum of 4 people.)
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank Anrokku no Jutsu [Unlocking Technique] Rokkingu no Jutsu [Locking Technique] Chakura Ezu [Chakra Drawing] Zankyou [Echo]
D Rank Kabenobori [Wall Walking] Nin Shiki Kaado [Secret Information Cards] Chakura no Ito [Thread of Chakra]
Fuuton: E Rank Kaze Fuuchuufuyuu (Wind Levitation) Yadama Furooseigyo (Projectile Control Skill) Hanpatsu Kaze no Jutsu (Retrieving Wind Technique)
D Rank Yadama Henshin Bakuha (Projectile Deflection Blast) Bouseki Tate no Kaze (Spinning Shield of Winds) Okuridashi Kaze (Propelling Winds)
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank Bunshin Henge Raimei Wana Fuu (Thunder Trap Seal) Hibanahouden no Jutsu (Discharge Technique) Ikamono Chishio (Fake blood) [Genjutsu Specialist]
D Rank Kai (Release) Kaze no Tsuyoi hi (Windy Day) Magen: Kokuni Arazu (Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings) Atsubottai Mizu no Jutsu (Heavy Water Technique)
C Rank Meisai no Jutsu (Camouflage Technique) Ikamono Chikara no Chakra (Fake Chakra Power) Nemuri (Sleep) Reinforcing wind Chikan no Jutsu (Displacement Technique) Mougo Shibaku no Jutsu (False Strike Technique) Mougo Hagurakasu no Jutsu (False Dodge Technique)
Yamanaka Ninjutsu E Rank
D Rank Reserved Jutsu
Genjutsu E Rank
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Leather Backpack and quiverback - 2 cubic feet, compartment that acts as quiver Arrows: 12
Hip Pouch [Leather] – Waist, right side, towards the back - 6 cubic inches. Small compartments for other tools. Shuriken: 4 Makibishi: 10 Smoke Bombs 2 Push Dagger (Kunai) Kept in belt/shirt Knife 5” long dagger
Wooden Chest 5 cubic feet – Hikaro's office
Not sure how you always manage to break the formatting code... I went ahead and made up a fixed version though, if you'd like to use it.
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[color=black][size=10][b]Village[/b] [b]Organization: [/b]Council [b]Rank: [/b]Special Jounin- B [b]Titles: [/b]N/A [b]Insignia Style: [/b] Hidden on a pocket mirror, behind the mirror itself which is detachable.
[b]Speed: [/b]Speed type ninja train themselves to move faster in every way, easily outpacing their peers. [+1 Rank Speed]
[b]Tactical: [/b]These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. [+1 Reaction Speed]
[b]Less Elements: [/b]This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
[b]Weaker Ninjutsu: [/b]This shinobi has spent significantly less time than average on their ninjutsu skills, and as a result has become much weaker in their usage than the average shinobi. [-1 rank Ninjutsu strength]
[b]Clan: [/b] Yamanaka
[b]Clan Stage:[/b] Active [/size][/color] [color=black]---------------------------------------------------------------- [size=18][u]Profession Info[/u][/size] ----------------------------------------------------------------[/color]
[color=black][size=10][b]Shinobi Profession: [/b]Genjutsu Specialist [u][b]Profession Base Benefits[/b][/u] [b]Elusive Reality:[/b] Because of their specialization, the genjutsu specialists genjutsu are treated as one rank higher in regards to potency and the ability to break them. They also have the ability to learn more complicated genjutsu than the average shinobi. (+1 Rank to Genjutsu power, can learn from Genjutsu Specialist restricted list.)
[b]Genjutsu Mastery:[/b] Genjutsu specialists have a higher understanding of how genjutsu work allowing them to learn higher level Genjutsu than other shinobi. (Can learn one additional Genjutsu up to three ranks above the user.)
[u][b]Rank Benefits[/u][/b]
[b]G[u]enin[/u][/b] [b]Mind Mastery:[/b] Due to their specialty the genjutsu specialist has an easier time recognizing genjutsu, and due to their detailed understanding they have an easier time breaking enemy genjutsu. (Can recognize genjutsu easier, +.5 rank Genjutsu Resistance (Can break stronger genjutsu with Kai))
[b]C[u]huunin[/b][/u] [b]Mass Genjutsu:[/b] The genjutsu specialist has discovered how enhance the effects of their genjutsu, particularly against multiple targets. They can now use Genjutsu on multiple opponents at once. Does not apply to S rank or Mirage type Genjutsu. (At regular chakra cost the genjutsu can affect up to two people, at 1.5x regular chakra cost for the genjutsu this can be increased to a maximum of 4 people.)
[b]D Rank[/b] [*] Kai (Release) [*]Kaze no Tsuyoi hi (Windy Day) [*]Magen: Kokuni Arazu (Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings) [*]Atsubottai Mizu no Jutsu (Heavy Water Technique)
[b]C Rank[/b] [*] Meisai no Jutsu (Camouflage Technique) [*] Ikamono Chikara no Chakra (Fake Chakra Power) [*] Nemuri (Sleep) [*] Reinforcing wind [*] Chikan no Jutsu (Displacement Technique) [*] Mougo Shibaku no Jutsu (False Strike Technique) [*] Mougo Hagurakasu no Jutsu (False Dodge Technique)
[b]Leather Backpack and quiver[/b]back - 2 cubic feet, compartment that acts as quiver [*][b]Arrows:[/b] 12
[b][u]Hip Pouch [Leather][/u][/b] – Waist, right side, towards the back - 6 cubic inches. Small compartments for other tools. [*][b]Shuriken:[/b] 4 [*][b]Makibishi:[/b] 10 [*][b]Smoke Bombs[/b] 2 [*][b]Push Dagger (Kunai)[/b] Kept in belt/shirt [*][b]Knife[/b] 5” long dagger
Your chakra level should be Medium - [+2/10], not low. Please add the tag to all of your jutsu. Your number of missions completed doesn't match your mission list. Your autorank missions should also be tagged , for convenience. Not required, but it'd be awesome if you gave your autorank missions names.
Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2013 7:24 am
TheAppleStar
AshllynAkarima
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Character Name: Ashllyn Akarima Nicknames: Ash, Lynn (sisters) Age: 21 Birth Date: January 13 Gender: Male Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Magenta Height: 6'2'' Body Type: Tall, long limbs and toned muscles. Distinguishing Features: Ashllyn has an assortment of ear piercings, a lip ring and an eyebrow piercing. Personality: Ash is known for his short temper and cold anger. He rarely becomes unmanageable when his irritation soars, and there is only a single way to get him to that state; putting his sisters in danger. Ash always appears to be lazy and unconcerned about the events going on around him. Though as soon as there is an issue that requires his medical expertize, he is on the ball and focused, never missing a single thing in case it was of some importance.
Background Born in a small village in the surrounding country of Fire, Ashllyn was raised in a decent home with his mother, father and two sisters. His older sister bested him by seven years and had pierced his ears when he reached the age of three. He cried when he saw the blood but wouldn't let his mother remove the earrings. He said if his big sister liked them, then he did too, and if she removed them he would hate her forever. Indulging in her son's strange request, she left them. From then on, whenever his sister found a new set of earrings, she'd buy them for her little brother. When he turned five, his younger sister was born. Aiko was treated as her named entailed. Loved by her older siblings, she was babied until the day the Akarima family moved to Raimaku. There was a higher number of attacks on their small village and with three young children to care for, their father thought it best to relocate to somewhere he knew would be safe. The family found a three bedroom home and enrolled their son in the Academy when he reached the age of nine. He studied hard and graduated early at the age of twelve.
As a Genin, Ashllyn had it a little rough. His team was almost never together, and he was forced to take on low ranking missions by himself in order to get any real experience. His teacher was never around and his fellow team members wanted nothing to do with someone who would rather read a book than spar. It didn't matter to him much though. He did what he had to in order to keep his body in shape and learned a few things from the Shinobi in the surrounding villages. Being drawn towards the Hospital the village had, he learned quite a lot about the body and a few basic things from the Doctors there. He found it fun to learn things about medicine and how to use his Chakra in order to manipulate another's body into healing. It wasn't until well into his Geninship that he found himself capable of knowing who was coming around the corner before seeing or hearing the person. One of the ladies there informed him that it was something called 'Chakra Sensing' that he was feeling and that he should do what he could in order to hone the skill. It was rare and quite handy. Doing as he was told, he read up on the ability and trained daily alongside his fellow Medical trainees to train the use of his Chakra to the point where he used just enough to get what he needed done without waste. It was the women at the Hospital that actually put his name in to be tested as a Chuunin. They believed he had learned everything he could from them and needed to go on with his training instead of being stuck with them in the little rooms the Hospital had to offer.
His test was a harsh on-field experience. There was no room for error or his Chuunin teammate's would parish. When the raid was over, and his nerves shot to hell, he collapsed and was taken into the main tent on the battle field. After an hour, he woke and apologized profusely about his incapability of handling the stress to the nearest person. That nearest person just happened to be a superior shinobi who had been watching him during his little debut on the field. As soon as the boy was finished crying out everything, he placed a hand on his shoulder and smiled. Informing the boy that he had passed and that not a single person had been seriously injured on his watch, the man helped him up, and soon returned him to his own home and family.
It was many years later, after being given an office of his own in the hospital he worked at since he first possibly could, he received an offer to join a new forming village as a Head Medic. His abilities were known in the area as being the best since there were very few capable of concentrating and controlling their chakra to the point that he could. The offer stewed in his mind for a long while before he asked his sisters what they wished to do. He would never leave them unprotected and would need their acceptance of the move before he'd agree. They readily did, saying a new home sounded interesting and fun. So, by the end of the week, they had their basic necessities packed and they set off on foot for the secretive location he had been informed of upon his agreement. Family Information Name: Terra Gender: Female Relation: Oldest Sister Description: Long blonde hair thats often braided and a preference for long skirts and dresses. She has light brown eyes and a soft demeanor; often acting as the mother of the parent-less group of siblings.
Name: Mia Gender: Female Relation: Older Sister Description: Long blonde hair, bright emerald green eyes and a personality to match their shine, Titannia is a force to be reckoned with when she has her sights set on something. Bubbly and full of happiness, she turns bad into good and helps her family liven things up when things look bleak.
Name: Aiko Gender: Female Relation: Youngest Sister Description: With short blonde hair, baby blue eyes and a small petite frame, she looks a lot more fragile than she truly is. The quiet girl spends her days reading when she is unable to cling to her brother's side.
Name: Keirran Gender: Male Relation: Pet Species: Cat Description: The kitten has silvery hair and icy blue eyes. He's often seen hanging around Terra since he enjoys the motherly feel she gives off. He is the protector of the clan while Ashllyn is away on business.
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Village: - - - - - Organization: - - - - - Rank: Chuunin Titles: Head Medic Insignia Style: Engraving Insignia Location: Metal plaque on his belt.
Chakra Color: Deep Blue Chakra Level: High +4/10 Chakra Points: 56 Chakra Elements: Fuuton Extra Elements: Medical Chakra Control: -1 chakra point cost for E Rank techniques, -2 for D, -3 for C, -4 for B and A, and -5 for S Rank.
Reaction Speed: These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. [+1 Reaction Speed]
Speed: Speed type ninja train themselves to move faster in every way, easily outpacing their peers. [+1 Rank Speed]
Taijutsu Incompetent : This shinobi has spent significantly less time on their physical skill than average. Because of this they are a full rank weaker than any average shinobi of their rank and are only able to learn one taijutsu/kenjutsu style, and only up to one rank below their own. [-1 rank strength, Can only learn one Tai/Kenjutsu style up to one rank below your RPC's Rank.]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: Mind's Eye of Kagura
Bloodline: Clan Head
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Shinobi Profession: Medical Shinobi Profession Base Benefits Natural Healer: Gains medical as a bonus starting "element"; this does not count against total allowed number of elements, the Medical Shinobi still receives any elements they would normally get to begin with, and they would still get to pick another element at Chuunin, and a final element at Jounin.
Brewer: Medics are trained not only in medical ninjutsu and healing, but in the creation and use of both medicines, and poisons. (Able to create medicines and poisons in game. Medics are the only profession with this ability.)
Improved Chakra Control: It takes a high understanding of chakra control to utilize medical ninjutsu to their greatest effect. Only shinobi with excellent control are capable of becoming true medics. (-1 chakra point cost for E Rank techniques, -2 for D, -3 for C, -4 for B and A, and -5 for S Rank. (Does not stack with Chakra Control Type.))
Rank Benefits
Genin Herbalist: Some medics learn to be incredibly efficient in their creation of medicines and poisons, using just the right amount to get the desired effect, and no more, such that they are able to make far more with the same amount of supplies. (Able to create two doses of medicine or poison with the ingredients for one.)
Chuunin Alchemist: This medic is highly studied in the lore of rare special ingredients, and knows exactly how to use them all to maximum effect. (Created medicines and poisons utilizing Special Ingredients are ½ more effective. (If the poison causes -1 rank, it will now cause -1½.)
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Ninjutsu
Null Element (Universal)
E Rank
D Rank
C Rank
Special Element: Medical E Rank Shindan (Diagnosis) The first step in treatment is understanding the problem. With this skill a shinobi uses their hands to carefully probe a patient for problems. This technique is preformed by kneeling over a patient and slowly running both hands over their body, looking for signs of injury that may not be visible to the naked eye. It can detect things such as internal injury, improper heart rate, non-apparent bone fractures, poisoning, and disease. A ninja of higher rank has learned to use this technique to perform a rudimentary examination of a body to determine cause and time of death. A Genin using this skill takes several minutes of work to determine the nature of a problem, a Chuunin takes less than a minute and a Jounin requires only a few seconds.
Life Preservation Technique [Ichimei Hoyou no Jutsu] This jutsu is causes a small amount of chakra to cycle through the patient. The chakra spreads to all the bodily systems and smoothes everything out. Bodily temperature is regulated, blood flows better and the patient can breath better. This is only a temporary cure, however, as after the jutsu ends the patient will quickly relapse.
Kiyomaru (Cleanse) Description: It is not always possible for a medical nin to practice basic hand washing and other procedures. This technique has the effect of instantly removing bacteria, dirt, blood, and other contaminants from the user’s hands, lower arms, and face. It also insures that any breath that comes from the user’s body will be free of any bacteria or infectious disease. This technique can also be used to clean the wounds of others in order to prevent infection from bacteria. It the event that the medical nin is using this technique to prevent infection of an injury that has been inflicted upon them, it is used as if the shinobi were using it on somebody else.
Shiatsu (Massage) Descriptio: For a variety of reasons, muscles, tendons, and ligaments can become overworked and painful. This may be because of some type of injury or it may simply be the result of too much work without enough rest. By applying the proper amount of pressure at the right points and using small amounts of chakra a medical nin is able to relieve pain and help the patients body recover more quickly. A strain or sprain can seriously hinder the effectiveness of a shinobi and as such this technique really can make a difference.
Teikouryoku (Power of Resistance) Description: A medical nin must always be aware of becoming a victim of whatever their patient is suffering from. With this technique a medical nin temporarily increases their resistance to diseases and poisons. It has no effect on diseases or poisons already affecting the medical nin. This technique improves as the medical nin grows in power and affords greater resistance to a wider range of diseases and poisons.
Tekishutsu (Extraction) Description: When a patient’s body has a foreign object in it, such as the point of a shuriken, a senbon needle, or an arrow, it is important to remove the object without further harming the patient. Using this technique the medical nin places their hands on either side of the injured area and uses chakra to very carefully manipulate the surrounding tissues in order to remove the object without causing any further damage. Depending on the severity of the wound and nature of the object, it can take anywhere from a few seconds to a few minutes to remove it.
Quarantine Technique [Shadan no Jutsu] This jutsu utilized a large circular seal. The seal prevents things like diseases, bacteria, chakra, and other form of sicknesses from entering or exiting the quarantined area. This jutsu does not prevent things like people or animals from entering or leaving the area, however, and it is not 100% foolproof
D Rank
Fleshbinding Technique [Ikimi Baindingu no Jutsu ] This jutsu causes the skin of the victim to stretch, grow, and fuse together over cuts and bruises. The chakra is also very hot, and is commonly used to cauterize a wound as well. Unfortunately, this jutsu is, at best, a temporary fix and is only suitable to take care of bruises or cuts. Large gashes are outside of this jutsu's ability, and the use of this jutsu doesn't mean you shouldn't go to the hospital
Fleshrending Technique [Ikimi Tekiyaku no Jutsu] A medical ninja's number one priority is the safety of his or her team. While this is normally accomplished through healing, some ninja learn that the best way to make sure that his or her allies aren't harmed is to take out the opponents. Those ninja learn how to reverse jutsu such as the Fleshbinding Technique to cause harm. This jutsu in particular sends out a wave of chakra over the opponent's skin with a touch, causing minor cuts and bruises in a large area. The learning of such techniques is forbidden in most professional academies and frowned upon by most medical nin.
Jokyo Dokubutsu (Poison Removal) This technique does not cure a poisoning; it simply extracts a portion of the poison and prevents immediate death. This technique allows a medical nin enough time to prepare an antidote for the poison. This technique can also be used to slow down the effects of a poison used against the medical nin so as to give them time to escape or prepare an antidote for themselves. A patient will still die from a lethal poison even if this technique is used if the poison is not treated. This technique is less effective against highly advanced poisons.
Chiyute No Jutsu: Karui (Healing Hands Technique: Minor) The user concentrates chakra into their hands creating a ball of healing chakra. This chakra when concentrated will repair physical damage to another person. This is the first stage of Chiyute taught to all Medical Nin, it is not possible to advance past stage three without this technique. The effects of this technique are limited to superficial cuts and injuries though it can reduce the severity of more serious injuries.
Keksuki Gyouko (Blood Coagulation) Description: A simple healing technique. The user uses his chakra on a wound to make the blood there coagulate and stop bleeding. This is primarily used as a preliminary treatment option as it does not close wounds. The bleeding from superficial wounds can easily be stopped but deep wounds can require several minutes to stop.
C Rank
Circle of Regeneration [Taisha no En] The user places the patient within a large circle and places his hands in two smaller circles located close by. A biological medium (such as hair) is taken from the user and strung from the user to the patient. Chakra is moved through the seal and medium to the wounds of the victim, restoring them with great efficiency, even to the point of reattaching limbs. More elaborate versions of this jutsu utilizing multiple medical ninja at once have been known to exist
Chiyute no Jutsu (Healing Hands Technique) A Ninjutsu technique where the ninja focuses chakra into the palms of their hands, creating a small ball of healing chakra. This chakra, when concentrated, can repair physical damage to another person. This is the more advanced level of Chiyute no Jutsu, used by Chuunin and is required to advance to level five. A Chuunin has learned to use Chiyute no Jutsu with greater control and efficiency and it is now possible to treat deep serious injuries that might otherwise result in death from bleeding.
Chakra Senshin (Chakra Concentration) A medical Taijutsu used by only ninja's trained in the medical arts. Using their chakra they can concentrate it on particular limbs in their body and condense the chakra to increase their strength by a tenfold. When attacking with this devastating power they can easily shatter boulders, wall's and even gates. Single punch taken from this particular fighting style will leave the area which was struck shattered breaking the bones.
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I can't seem to find anything more worth holding this one for, so...
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Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2013 7:28 am
I have decided that scrolling up and down past profiles is annoying. Therefore, spoilers are now a default part of profiles. If you have not yet posted your profile for approval, please add the spoilers as shown in the first post before doing so, and help me retain my loose grip on sanity.
Edit: Also, any profiles that need to be edited before approval should also add them.
Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2013 7:40 am
iMama Harkles
名前は SHINSUI, SENA です ! I Fx M A Nx H A Sx N Ox T E Ax I Nx H I M x- xH Ex I Sx I N C A P A B L Ex O Fx U N D E R S T A N D I N Gx T R U T Hx A N Dx B E A U T Y 茶 ・真 ・美
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Character Name: Shinsui, Sena Nicknames: Sena Age: Fifteen Birth Date: December Seventeenth Gender: Female Hair Color: Blonde Eye Color: Golden/Hazel Height: 5' 4" Weight: 101 lbs. Body Type: Youthful, Lean Muscles, Sexy Curves Distinguishing Features: N/A
Background -
Family Information Name:Shinsui, Suou Gender: Male Relation: Parent Description: Suou was a well-respected man in the village for his power and his loyalty to the people. He had many times saved the village from destruction and had led them to many victories in war. Not long after Sena was born, he did meet his fate. He was up for nomination to become the successor to village leader, but that ended when he fought a powerful rogue shinobi in the village. He ended up taking the fight away from the village and sacrificing his own body and life to save the whole village. Sena has no memories of her father, but carries the pride of being his daughter with her.
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Village: (In whatever village we're in) Organization: N/A Rank: Academy Student Titles: N/A Insignia Style: Traditional Forehead Protector w/Long Straps Insignia Location: Forehead
Chakra Color: Golden Chakra Level: Low Chakra Points: 15 Chakra Elements: Raiton - Lightning Extra Chakra Elements: N/A Chakra Control: N/A
Jutsu Crafter [Technology]: Some ninja, rather than learning jutsu to fight, learn to create. These rare individuals go on to create new jutsu, expanding the arsenal of their clan, their village, or just their friends.
Ability Control [Technology]: Some shinobi choose to specialize in a specific branch of jutsu, and are much better in that area than any other. This area can range greatly, from a single taijutsu style, to a branch of universal jutsu, or a unique bloodline's abilities. (Does not cover elements, or elemental bloodlines.) [+1 Rank to chosen ability, -1 Rank to all other techniques]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element
Genjutsu Intollerant: This shinobi's mind is more easily effected by genjutsu, which makes it much harder for them to recognize genjutsu or neutralize them with Kai. [-1 rank to Genjutsu Resistance]
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: N/A Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: N/A
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Shinobi Profession: Weapon Specialist Profession Base Benefits Increased Number of Weapon Styles: Because of their focus and training in the use of weapons, Weapon Specialists are able to practice more weapon styles than others. (Can learn one extra Weapon style per rank. Students can only learn 1 style, Genin can learn two, Chuunin 3 and finally being able to learn 4 styles as a Jounin. Extra styles cannot be used to learn Taijutsu Styles)
Sharp Mind: Can learn one stage beyond RPC's rank in one Weapon style.
Rank Benefits
Genin Battle Instinct: Weapon Specialists are trained to attack in a relentless manner in order to overwhelm an opponent's defense, and when they take the stance of a trained style, they are easily able to do so. (+1 Rank Attack Speed while utilizing a weapon style stance.)
Chuunin : (Do not add chuunin benefits before reaching chuunin rank.)
Jounin : (Do not add jounin benefits before reaching jounin rank.)
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
First Element: Raiton - Lightning E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
Taijutsu
E Rank
D Rank
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Custom Fabric - 1 Cubic Foot / 6in. Each Arm - [Bicep Cuffs] Ninja Wire: [9ft. - Left Arm] Ninja Wire: [9ft. - Right Arm] -: [-] -: [-] -: [-] -: [-]
We're the first village, and also literally just starting the village. Can you alter Suou's description to imply a civilian village or an organization or something? Not the most important detail, but worth noting, especially if you want to play on it in the RP.
I can allow Jutsu Crafter being used for tech for now, but you'll have to change it if/when we add an engineer type.
I can't however allow Ability for tech. Technology has set power levels, and no amount of talent on the part of the user can increase that basic level. From what you told me you wanted, I'd recommend using Kenjutsu as your ability type.
Edits made. Though, if puppetry isn't considered Kenjutsu, I'd like my ability to use the puppets to be my ability control.
名前は SHINSUI, SENA です ! I Fx M A Nx H A Sx N Ox T E Ax I Nx H I M x- xH Ex I Sx I N C A P A B L Ex O Fx U N D E R S T A N D I N Gx T R U T Hx A N Dx B E A U T Y 茶 ・真 ・美
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Character Name: Shinsui, Sena Nicknames: Sena Age: Fifteen Birth Date: December Seventeenth Gender: Female Hair Color: Blonde Eye Color: Golden/Hazel Height: 5' 4" Weight: 101 lbs. Body Type: Youthful, Lean Muscles, Sexy Curves Distinguishing Features: N/A
Background -
Family Information Name:Shinsui, Suou Gender: Male Relation: Parent
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Village: (In whatever village we're in) Organization: N/A Rank: Academy Student Titles: N/A Insignia Style: Traditional Forehead Protector w/Long Straps Insignia Location: Forehead
Chakra Color: Golden Chakra Level: Low Chakra Points: 15 Chakra Elements: Raiton - Lightning Extra Chakra Elements: N/A Chakra Control: N/A
Jutsu Crafter [Technology]: Some ninja, rather than learning jutsu to fight, learn to create. These rare individuals go on to create new jutsu, expanding the arsenal of their clan, their village, or just their friends.
Ability Control [Kenjutsu]: Some shinobi choose to specialize in a specific branch of jutsu, and are much better in that area than any other. This area can range greatly, from a single taijutsu style, to a branch of universal jutsu, or a unique bloodline's abilities. (Does not cover elements, or elemental bloodlines.) [+1 Rank to chosen ability, -1 Rank to all other techniques]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element
Genjutsu Intollerant: This shinobi's mind is more easily effected by genjutsu, which makes it much harder for them to recognize genjutsu or neutralize them with Kai. [-1 rank to Genjutsu Resistance]
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: N/A Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: N/A
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Shinobi Profession: Weapon Specialist Profession Base Benefits Increased Number of Weapon Styles: Because of their focus and training in the use of weapons, Weapon Specialists are able to practice more weapon styles than others. (Can learn one extra Weapon style per rank. Students can only learn 1 style, Genin can learn two, Chuunin 3 and finally being able to learn 4 styles as a Jounin. Extra styles cannot be used to learn Taijutsu Styles)
Sharp Mind: Can learn one stage beyond RPC's rank in one Weapon style.
Rank Benefits
Genin Battle Instinct: Weapon Specialists are trained to attack in a relentless manner in order to overwhelm an opponent's defense, and when they take the stance of a trained style, they are easily able to do so. (+1 Rank Attack Speed while utilizing a weapon style stance.)
Chuunin : (Do not add chuunin benefits before reaching chuunin rank.)
Jounin : (Do not add jounin benefits before reaching jounin rank.)
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
First Element: Raiton - Lightning E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
Taijutsu
E Rank
D Rank
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Custom Fabric - 1 Cubic Foot / 6in. Each Arm - [Bicep Cuffs] Ninja Wire: [9ft. - Left Arm] Ninja Wire: [9ft. - Right Arm] -: [-] -: [-] -: [-] -: [-]
Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2013 10:58 am
iMama Harkles
Hinote Tosatsu
Edits made. Though, if puppetry isn't considered Kenjutsu, I'd like my ability to use the puppets to be my ability control.
名前は SHINSUI, SENA です ! I Fx M A Nx H A Sx N Ox T E Ax I Nx H I M x- xH Ex I Sx I N C A P A B L Ex O Fx U N D E R S T A N D I N Gx T R U T Hx A N Dx B E A U T Y 茶 ・真 ・美
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Character Name: Shinsui, Sena Nicknames: Sena Age: Fifteen Birth Date: December Seventeenth Gender: Female Hair Color: Blonde Eye Color: Golden/Hazel Height: 5' 4" Weight: 101 lbs. Body Type: Youthful, Lean Muscles, Sexy Curves Distinguishing Features: N/A
Background -
Family Information Name:Shinsui, Suou Gender: Male Relation: Parent
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Village: (In whatever village we're in) Organization: N/A Rank: Academy Student Titles: N/A Insignia Style: Traditional Forehead Protector w/Long Straps Insignia Location: Forehead
Chakra Color: Golden Chakra Level: Low Chakra Points: 15 Chakra Elements: Raiton - Lightning Extra Chakra Elements: N/A Chakra Control: N/A
Jutsu Crafter [Technology]: Some ninja, rather than learning jutsu to fight, learn to create. These rare individuals go on to create new jutsu, expanding the arsenal of their clan, their village, or just their friends.
Ability Control [Kenjutsu]: Some shinobi choose to specialize in a specific branch of jutsu, and are much better in that area than any other. This area can range greatly, from a single taijutsu style, to a branch of universal jutsu, or a unique bloodline's abilities. (Does not cover elements, or elemental bloodlines.) [+1 Rank to chosen ability, -1 Rank to all other techniques]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element
Genjutsu Intollerant: This shinobi's mind is more easily effected by genjutsu, which makes it much harder for them to recognize genjutsu or neutralize them with Kai. [-1 rank to Genjutsu Resistance]
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: N/A Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: N/A
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Shinobi Profession: Weapon Specialist Profession Base Benefits Increased Number of Weapon Styles: Because of their focus and training in the use of weapons, Weapon Specialists are able to practice more weapon styles than others. (Can learn one extra Weapon style per rank. Students can only learn 1 style, Genin can learn two, Chuunin 3 and finally being able to learn 4 styles as a Jounin. Extra styles cannot be used to learn Taijutsu Styles)
Sharp Mind: Can learn one stage beyond RPC's rank in one Weapon style.
Rank Benefits
Genin Battle Instinct: Weapon Specialists are trained to attack in a relentless manner in order to overwhelm an opponent's defense, and when they take the stance of a trained style, they are easily able to do so. (+1 Rank Attack Speed while utilizing a weapon style stance.)
Chuunin : (Do not add chuunin benefits before reaching chuunin rank.)
Jounin : (Do not add jounin benefits before reaching jounin rank.)
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
First Element: Raiton - Lightning E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
Taijutsu
E Rank
D Rank
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Custom Fabric - 1 Cubic Foot / 6in. Each Arm - [Bicep Cuffs] Ninja Wire: [9ft. - Left Arm] Ninja Wire: [9ft. - Right Arm] -: [-] -: [-] -: [-] -: [-]
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Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2013 11:09 am
Hikaro_rin
Timmy theQuirk
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Character Name: Timmy Nicknames: Timmy the quirk Age: 17 Birth Date: 04/01 Gender: Male Hair Color: Brown Eye Color: Brown Height: 6'2” Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: N/A Personality: Timmy the Quirk isn't just weird, he doesn't just have a strange tick, or have trouble controlling his voice, he is all one big oddity that few understand. Some believe him merely insane, others suggest he only pretends to be.
Background Timmy's history is largely left a mystery, an issue which he himself does not help. However it is known that he came from a family of ninja but left for unknown reasons. At the age of 8, he and his pet sloth were found in a small village scavenging food at which time he was placed in the Orphanage for Misplaced Children. About a year later, a new boy was added to the orphanage, one who had difficulty adjusting. Timmy took him under his wing, and declared him his brother.
Family Information Name: Leon Gender: Female Relation: Pet Species: Sloth Size: 2 feet tall Description: Named without knowledge of her gender, Leon is a small two toed sloth whom Timmy found before entering the orphanage. It is not known how he found her nor why she took to him so well. He has managed to train her very well surprisingly despite her being very young.
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Village Organization: Rank: Academy Student Titles: Insignia Style: One of his T-shirts bears a large version on the front, he also carries a paper fan bearing the insignia Insignia Location: Left pocket
Chakra Color: Red Chakra Level: Low Chakra Points: 15 Chakra Elements: ??? Extra Chakra Elements: ??? Chakra Control: ???
Offensive: These ninja train almost exclusively with offensive ninjutsu, and utilize them with much greater power than other ninja. [+1 Rank to Offensive Ninjutsu]
Combo User: The combo type is for ninja who use there jutsu in a chain to help deliver a devastating overall effect. Stringing multiple jutsu together, these ninja are dangerous, allowing them to overwhelm their opponents with the sheer number of jutsus they can perform. [Can use 2 jutsu per post, at Jounin can use 3 jutsu per post ]
Heavy Tread: This shinobi's stealth abilities leave something to be desired. Stepping on twigs just comes naturally to them. [-1½ rank stealth]
Genjutsu Intollerant:This shinobi's mind is more easily effected by genjutsu, which makes it much harder for them to recognize genjutsu or neutralize them with Kai. [-1 rank to Genjutsu Resistance]
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage:
Bloodline/Clan Transplant: Transplant Stage:
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Shinobi Profession: Sealing Specialist Profession Base Benefits :
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
First Element: (Name of Element.) E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
Taijutsu
E Rank
D Rank
Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu
(Bloodline/Clan/Demon name.) Ninjutsu E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu E Rank
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Staff: 6 foot wooden staff used as a walking stick
Knife 5 inch hunting knife
Item Name: [<# of item>]
Is this a WIP? You know better than to post a WIP... =.=
Are you planning a talent or something to where he can't have elements? If not, you can start with one element.
If you've decided not to have a bloodline, just chop that bit right out.
You need to include your base benefits for the profession.
You broke the format on Talent again... =.=
And according to your purchases you should have 31 Silver, not 36. Side note: You should totally break it up into partially copper like I did with Shikaku's, cause it makes more sense with his background.
Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2013 3:00 pm
Timmy theQuirk
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Character Name: Timmy Nicknames: Timmy the quirk Age: 17 Birth Date: 04/01 Gender: Male Hair Color: Brown Eye Color: Brown Height: 6'2” Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: N/A Personality: Timmy the Quirk isn't just weird, he doesn't just have a strange tick, or have trouble controlling his voice, he is all one big oddity that few understand. Some believe him merely insane, others suggest he only pretends to be.
Background Timmy's history is largely left a mystery, an issue which he himself does not help. However it is known that he came from a family of ninja but left for unknown reasons. At the age of 8, he and his pet sloth were found in a small village scavenging food at which time he was placed in the Orphanage for Misplaced Children. About a year later, a new boy was added to the orphanage, one who had difficulty adjusting. Timmy took him under his wing, and declared him his brother.
Family Information
Name: Gender: Relation: Species: Description:
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Village Organization: Rank: Academy Student Titles: Insignia Style: One of his T-shirts bears a large version on the front, he also carries a paper fan bearing the insignia Insignia Location: Left pocket
Chakra Color: Red Chakra Level: Low Chakra Points: 15 Chakra Elements: Gained at Genin Extra Chakra Elements: N/A Chakra Control: N/A
Offensive: These ninja train almost exclusively with offensive ninjutsu, and utilize them with much greater power than other ninja. [+1 Rank to Offensive Ninjutsu]
Combo User: The combo type is for ninja who use there jutsu in a chain to help deliver a devastating overall effect. Stringing multiple jutsu together, these ninja are dangerous, allowing them to overwhelm their opponents with the sheer number of jutsus they can perform. [Can use 2 jutsu per post, at Jounin can use 3 jutsu per post ]
Heavy Tread: This shinobi's stealth abilities leave something to be desired. Stepping on twigs just comes naturally to them. [-1½ rank stealth]
Genjutsu Intollerant:This shinobi's mind is more easily effected by genjutsu, which makes it much harder for them to recognize genjutsu or neutralize them with Kai. [-1 rank to Genjutsu Resistance]
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage:
Bloodline/Clan Transplant: Transplant Stage:
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Shinobi Profession: Sealing Specialist Profession Base Benefits Professional Sealer: Those of the Sealing Master profession are the only ninja capable of fully mastering the art of seals, able to learn and use any type of seal available, and even design their own. (Able to learn all seals in the list, and learn custom seals.)
Rank Benefits
Genin No Benefit: NYA ---------------------------------------------------------------- Talent ----------------------------------------------------------------
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
First Element: E Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu
(Bloodline/Clan/Demon name.)
---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ----------------------------------------------------------------
Staff: 6 foot wooden staff used as a walking stick
Knife 5 inch hunting knife
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Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2013 3:13 pm
Hikaro_rin
Timmy theQuirk
---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ----------------------------------------------------------------
Character Name: Timmy Nicknames: Timmy the quirk Age: 17 Birth Date: 04/01 Gender: Male Hair Color: Brown Eye Color: Brown Height: 6'2” Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: N/A Personality: Timmy the Quirk isn't just weird, he doesn't just have a strange tick, or have trouble controlling his voice, he is all one big oddity that few understand. Some believe him merely insane, others suggest he only pretends to be.
Background Timmy's history is largely left a mystery, an issue which he himself does not help. However it is known that he came from a family of ninja but left for unknown reasons. At the age of 8, he and his pet sloth were found in a small village scavenging food at which time he was placed in the Orphanage for Misplaced Children. About a year later, a new boy was added to the orphanage, one who had difficulty adjusting. Timmy took him under his wing, and declared him his brother.
Family Information
Name: Gender: Relation: Species: Description:
---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Info ----------------------------------------------------------------
Village Organization: Rank: Academy Student Titles: Insignia Style: One of his T-shirts bears a large version on the front, he also carries a paper fan bearing the insignia Insignia Location: Left pocket
Chakra Color: Red Chakra Level: Low Chakra Points: 15 Chakra Elements: Gained at Genin Extra Chakra Elements: N/A Chakra Control: N/A
Offensive: These ninja train almost exclusively with offensive ninjutsu, and utilize them with much greater power than other ninja. [+1 Rank to Offensive Ninjutsu]
Combo User: The combo type is for ninja who use there jutsu in a chain to help deliver a devastating overall effect. Stringing multiple jutsu together, these ninja are dangerous, allowing them to overwhelm their opponents with the sheer number of jutsus they can perform. [Can use 2 jutsu per post, at Jounin can use 3 jutsu per post ]
Heavy Tread: This shinobi's stealth abilities leave something to be desired. Stepping on twigs just comes naturally to them. [-1½ rank stealth]
Genjutsu Intollerant:This shinobi's mind is more easily effected by genjutsu, which makes it much harder for them to recognize genjutsu or neutralize them with Kai. [-1 rank to Genjutsu Resistance]
Bloodline, Clan, or Demon: Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage:
Bloodline/Clan Transplant: Transplant Stage:
---------------------------------------------------------------- Profession Info ----------------------------------------------------------------
Shinobi Profession: Sealing Specialist Profession Base Benefits Professional Sealer: Those of the Sealing Master profession are the only ninja capable of fully mastering the art of seals, able to learn and use any type of seal available, and even design their own. (Able to learn all seals in the list, and learn custom seals.)
Rank Benefits
Genin No Benefit: NYA ---------------------------------------------------------------- Talent ----------------------------------------------------------------
---------------------------------------------------------------- Skill Information ----------------------------------------------------------------
Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
First Element: E Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu
(Bloodline/Clan/Demon name.)
---------------------------------------------------------------- Summoning Information ----------------------------------------------------------------
Staff: 6 foot wooden staff used as a walking stick
Knife 5 inch hunting knife
Item Name: [<# of item>]
Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2013 4:29 pm
Hikaro_rin
Rin
---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Name: Rin Nicknames: N/A Age: 15 Birth Date: 12/21 Gender: Female Hair Color: Blonde Eye Color: Blue Height: 4' 8” Body Type: Average
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Village Organization: Council Rank: Special Jounin- B Titles: N/A Insignia Style: Hidden on a pocket mirror, behind the mirror itself which is detachable.
Chakra Color: Blue Chakra Level: Medium +2/10 Chakra Points: 72 Chakra Elements: Fuuton Extra Chakra Elements: N/A Chakra Control: N/A
Speed: Speed type ninja train themselves to move faster in every way, easily outpacing their peers. [+1 Rank Speed]
Tactical: These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. [+1 Reaction Speed]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
Weaker Ninjutsu: This shinobi has spent significantly less time than average on their ninjutsu skills, and as a result has become much weaker in their usage than the average shinobi. [-1 rank Ninjutsu strength]
Clan: Yamanaka
Clan: Active ---------------------------------------------------------------- Profession Info ----------------------------------------------------------------
Shinobi Profession: Genjutsu Specialist Profession Base Benefits Elusive Reality: Because of their specialization, the genjutsu specialists genjutsu are treated as one rank higher in regards to potency and the ability to break them. They also have the ability to learn more complicated genjutsu than the average shinobi. (+1 Rank to Genjutsu power, can learn from Genjutsu Specialist restricted list.)
Genjutsu Mastery: Genjutsu specialists have a higher understanding of how genjutsu work allowing them to learn higher level Genjutsu than other shinobi. (Can learn one additional Genjutsu up to three ranks above the user.)
Rank Benefits
Genin Mind Mastery: Due to their specialty the genjutsu specialist has an easier time recognizing genjutsu, and due to their detailed understanding they have an easier time breaking enemy genjutsu. (Can recognize genjutsu easier, +.5 rank Genjutsu Resistance (Can break stronger genjutsu with Kai))
Chuunin Mass Genjutsu: The genjutsu specialist has discovered how enhance the effects of their genjutsu, particularly against multiple targets. They can now use Genjutsu on multiple opponents at once. Does not apply to S rank or Mirage type Genjutsu. (At regular chakra cost the genjutsu can affect up to two people, at 1.5x regular chakra cost for the genjutsu this can be increased to a maximum of 4 people.)
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank Anrokku no Jutsu [Unlocking Technique] Rokkingu no Jutsu [Locking Technique] Chakura Ezu [Chakra Drawing] Zankyou [Echo]
D Rank Kabenobori [Wall Walking] Nin Shiki Kaado [Secret Information Cards] Chakura no Ito [Thread of Chakra]
Fuuton: E Rank Kaze Fuuchuufuyuu (Wind Levitation) Yadama Furooseigyo (Projectile Control Skill) Hanpatsu Kaze no Jutsu (Retrieving Wind Technique)
D Rank Yadama Henshin Bakuha (Projectile Deflection Blast) Bouseki Tate no Kaze (Spinning Shield of Winds) Okuridashi Kaze (Propelling Winds)
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank Bunshin Henge Raimei Wana Fuu (Thunder Trap Seal) Hibanahouden no Jutsu (Discharge Technique) Ikamono Chishio (Fake blood) [Genjutsu Specialist]
D Rank Kai (Release) Kaze no Tsuyoi hi (Windy Day) Magen: Kokuni Arazu (Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings) Atsubottai Mizu no Jutsu (Heavy Water Technique)
C Rank Meisai no Jutsu (Camouflage Technique) Ikamono Chikara no Chakra (Fake Chakra Power) Nemuri (Sleep) Reinforcing wind Chikan no Jutsu (Displacement Technique) Mougo Shibaku no Jutsu (False Strike Technique) Mougo Hagurakasu no Jutsu (False Dodge Technique)
Leather Backpack and quiver - 2 cubic feet, compartment that acts as quiver Arrows: 12
Hip Pouch [Leather] – Waist, right side, towards the back - 6 cubic inches. Small compartments for other tools. Shuriken: 4 Makibishi: 10 Smoke Bombs 2 Knife 5” long dagger
Wooden Chest 5 cubic feet – Hikaro's office
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Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2013 4:51 pm
Hikaro_rin
Hikaro_rin
Rin
---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Info ---------------------------------------------------------------- Character Name: Rin Nicknames: N/A Age: 15 Birth Date: 12/21 Gender: Female Hair Color: Blonde Eye Color: Blue Height: 4' 8” Body Type: Average
---------------------------------------------------------------- Shinobi Info ----------------------------------------------------------------
Village Organization: Council Rank: Special Jounin- B Titles: N/A Insignia Style: Hidden on a pocket mirror, behind the mirror itself which is detachable.
Chakra Color: Blue Chakra Level: Medium +2/10 Chakra Points: 72 Chakra Elements: Fuuton Extra Chakra Elements: N/A Chakra Control: N/A
Speed: Speed type ninja train themselves to move faster in every way, easily outpacing their peers. [+1 Rank Speed]
Tactical: These are the Shinobi most often to be picked as leaders of shinobi teams, able to come up with strategies and adapt to battlefield conditions quickly and efficiently. [+1 Reaction Speed]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
Weaker Ninjutsu: This shinobi has spent significantly less time than average on their ninjutsu skills, and as a result has become much weaker in their usage than the average shinobi. [-1 rank Ninjutsu strength]
Clan: Yamanaka
Clan: Active ---------------------------------------------------------------- Profession Info ----------------------------------------------------------------
Shinobi Profession: Genjutsu Specialist Profession Base Benefits Elusive Reality: Because of their specialization, the genjutsu specialists genjutsu are treated as one rank higher in regards to potency and the ability to break them. They also have the ability to learn more complicated genjutsu than the average shinobi. (+1 Rank to Genjutsu power, can learn from Genjutsu Specialist restricted list.)
Genjutsu Mastery: Genjutsu specialists have a higher understanding of how genjutsu work allowing them to learn higher level Genjutsu than other shinobi. (Can learn one additional Genjutsu up to three ranks above the user.)
Rank Benefits
Genin Mind Mastery: Due to their specialty the genjutsu specialist has an easier time recognizing genjutsu, and due to their detailed understanding they have an easier time breaking enemy genjutsu. (Can recognize genjutsu easier, +.5 rank Genjutsu Resistance (Can break stronger genjutsu with Kai))
Chuunin Mass Genjutsu: The genjutsu specialist has discovered how enhance the effects of their genjutsu, particularly against multiple targets. They can now use Genjutsu on multiple opponents at once. Does not apply to S rank or Mirage type Genjutsu. (At regular chakra cost the genjutsu can affect up to two people, at 1.5x regular chakra cost for the genjutsu this can be increased to a maximum of 4 people.)
---------------------------------------------------------------- Skill Information ----------------------------------------------------------------
Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank Anrokku no Jutsu [Unlocking Technique] Rokkingu no Jutsu [Locking Technique] Chakura Ezu [Chakra Drawing] Zankyou [Echo]
D Rank Kabenobori [Wall Walking] Nin Shiki Kaado [Secret Information Cards] Chakura no Ito [Thread of Chakra]
Fuuton: E Rank Kaze Fuuchuufuyuu (Wind Levitation) Yadama Furooseigyo (Projectile Control Skill) Hanpatsu Kaze no Jutsu (Retrieving Wind Technique)
D Rank Yadama Henshin Bakuha (Projectile Deflection Blast) Bouseki Tate no Kaze (Spinning Shield of Winds) Okuridashi Kaze (Propelling Winds)
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank Bunshin Henge Raimei Wana Fuu (Thunder Trap Seal) Hibanahouden no Jutsu (Discharge Technique) Ikamono Chishio (Fake blood) [Genjutsu Specialist]
D Rank Kai (Release) Kaze no Tsuyoi hi (Windy Day) Magen: Kokuni Arazu (Demonic Illusion: False Surroundings) Atsubottai Mizu no Jutsu (Heavy Water Technique)
C Rank Meisai no Jutsu (Camouflage Technique) Ikamono Chikara no Chakra (Fake Chakra Power) Nemuri (Sleep) Reinforcing wind Chikan no Jutsu (Displacement Technique) Mougo Shibaku no Jutsu (False Strike Technique) Mougo Hagurakasu no Jutsu (False Dodge Technique)
Leather Backpack and quiver - 2 cubic feet, compartment that acts as quiver Arrows: 12
Hip Pouch [Leather] – Waist, right side, towards the back - 6 cubic inches. Small compartments for other tools. Shuriken: 4 Makibishi: 10 Smoke Bombs 2 Knife 5” long dagger
Wooden Chest 5 cubic feet – Hikaro's office
Posted: Mon Nov 04, 2013 10:58 am
KazokuSegare
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Character Name: Kazoku Segare Nicknames: Age: 21 Birth Date: [8/31] Gender: Male Hair Color: Black Eye Color: Silver Height: 5'8” Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: Segare always wears a thick bracelet on his left wrist, made of solid gold and with a large ruby embedded in it. Not simply a fashion accessory, the bracelet marks him as the eldest son and heir of his family. The bracelet was made specifically for him, and fused in place such that it cannot be removed by normal means. Personality: Extravagant. Segare was born to a rich family, knows it, and acts it. He could be considered a typical rich brat at times if he weren't generally friendly and occasionally respectful to everybody. Raised in riches and politics, he finds anything overly serious to be boring and considers it his sworn duty to keep life interesting for himself and all those around him. Whether or not they appreciate it isn't really his concern.
Background
Born the eldest son son of the Kazoku family, a rich family who had for several generations held the position as financial adviser to the local Daimyo, Segare was raised in the lap of luxury. Anything he wanted, it was soon delivered to him, in the most expensive and luxurious form available. As he grew older, he was tutored in many subjects. Politics, finance, economics, everything his father felt necessary for him to one day succeed him in his position he hired the best tutors he could find for. At the age of seven, he was made to begin attending the Daimyo's councils, to watch his father at work and better learn the trade. Life went on this way for several years, but Segare quickly found himself bored of it. Bored of the politics, the posturing, and utterly fed up with having to stand silently at his father's side, smiling and nodding to all of the Daimyo's many advisers. In his free time when he got away from his duties and lessons, Segare instead took to watching the Daimyo's guards in their training yard, fighting with sword and shield, as well as the occasional more unique weapons such as staves and axes. It seemed a substantially more exciting and worthwhile life to the lad, so at the age of fifteen, he asked his father to hire him a tutor in swordsmanship.
The man agreed, deeming the ability to defend himself a worthy endeavor, and hired him a fencing instructor, and commissioned him a fanciful sword of silver and gold. A conversation piece more than a weapon. With some quick maneuvering Segare managed to get to the smith before the sword was begun, and requested that the sword instead be made of chakra conductive steel, having heard tales of how powerful such swords often were, having strange and unique abilities. He took to his fighting classes with gusto, enjoying every minute, though his teacher often lamented his tendency to abandon the style he was attempting to teach entirely to instead perform dirty tricks he'd seen the guards use in sparring. After a few years, though he had failed to learn the style to the trainer's satisfaction, he was declared competent, and the teacher turned in his resignation, stating that he could do no more good if Segare did not wish to properly learn the style. So, at the age of seventeen, and with a fine sword and the skill to use it, Segare went to the captain of the Daimyo's guard to apply to join his forces, only to find himself denied. On pushing for a reason, it was revealed that his father had, knowing of Segare's plans, paid the man to deny him in an attempt to keep him safe.
Angry, Segare fought his father's will, ceasing to attend any of his lessons or the council meetings any longer, instead repeatedly demanding that his father allow him to join the guard, and trying to convince the captain to change his decision. Several months passed in this way, with no change from any party, and frustration growing on all sides. Eventually, the tension reached it's peak, and Segare left his home, taking all of his possessions and joining himself to a group of ninja operating nearby.
Segare excelled in his new training as a ninja, quickly rising in the ranks as he discovered his sword's unique attributes, leant by it's chakra conductive blade, and assisted by his many lessons. He soon found himself in a position of leadership in the group, ironically, tending to the group's finances. After a few years of this, he grew to miss having a consistent home, as the group spent a lot of time travelling. Deciding to make an attempt at forming a village for ninja who did not wish to spend all of their lives wandering or in hiding from the emperor's forces, he split from the group, taking along as many like minded individuals as were willing, to begin the hunt for a new home. Along the way, they met several other ninja groups and organizations, some of whom joined their number, and word spread of the idea. Eventually, enough people came together, some bringing along wealth and respectability, others unique skills and talents, and they found a suitable place to settle. Along with a couple others who had the most impact on the effort, a council was formed, with Segare a member of it, again tasked with the care of the village's treasury, proving his father's training to have been valuable, though it's recipients were not those originally intended. All that was left, was to see if they could pull it off, and make a village out of a bunch of ninja.
Family Information Name: Kazoku Komon Age: 58 Gender: Male Relation: Father Description: Kazoku Komon, Segare's father, is even more extravagent than his son. Always dressed in the finest clothes available, he wears gold and precious gems in nearly every way imaginable, from woven into his clothes, to his multiple rings, to the chains around his neck. As the Daimyo's treasurer and advisor, a position passed down in the family from father to son, he has accumulated more than his fair share of wealth, and is not afraid to dabble in it. His relationship with Segare is strained, if it can be considered to exist, after the events which led Segare to leave home and become a ninja. They have not had contact since that time.
Name: Kazoku Sueo Age: 8 Gender: Male Relation: Brother Description: Segare's younger brother and only sibling, Sueo was born when Segare was in his teen years. As his father was always busy with his work, and his mother died only a couple years later, Segare did much of the raising of his brother. Sueo is a quiet child, both from missing his brother since he left, and the need to remain quiet in the Daimyo's presence as he was made to take Segare's place at his father's side during council meetings. Unlike his father and brother, Sueo is not garbed richly. The gold Segare wears is only intended for the eldest son, and Sueo has little taste for fine garments, prefering more simplistic garb. When he can, he enjoys playing outside, and sneaking into the city proper, or even out of the city entirely rather than remaining in the family compound. He has sparse communication with his brother via letters, and often seeks ways to locate him, knowing only that he has become a ninja.
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Village: Organization: Village Council Rank: Special Jounin Titles: Councilor, Treasurer Insignia Style: Golden Lapel Pin Insignia Location: Lapel
Chakra Color: Deep Forest Green Chakra Level: Medium [+2/10] Chakra Points: 72 Chakra Elements: Fuuton, Doton Extra Chakra Elements: Sunaton Chakra Control:
Support: These shinobi generally back up their allies from behind the lines, and learn to fire jutsu faster than other shinobi by virtue of reducing the number of seals needed to fire a jutsu. [Jutsu below the user's rank do not require hand seals, Jutsu of equal rank require half the normal seal, Jutsu of higher rank are unaffected]
Combo User: The combo type is for ninja who use there jutsu in a chain to help deliver a devastating overall effect. Stringing multiple jutsu together, these ninja are dangerous, allowing them to overwhelm their opponents with the sheer number of jutsus they can perform. [Can use 2 jutsu per post, at Jounin can use 3 jutsu per post ]
Heavy Tread: This shinobi's stealth abilities leave something to be desired. Stepping on twigs just comes naturally to them. [-1½ rank stealth]
Genjutsu Intollerant: This shinobi's mind is more easily effected by genjutsu, which makes it much harder for them to recognize genjutsu or neutralize them with Kai. [-1 rank to Genjutsu Resistance]
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Shinobi Profession: Ninjutsu Specialist Profession Base Benefits Increased Chakra Pool: Due to Ninjutsu Specialist's heavy dependence on the ability to use jutsu, they train themselves to increase their chakra reserves beyond that of the average nin. (Increases base chakra modifier by +2/10.)
Ninjutsu Training: Ninjutsu specialists have a higher understanding of how jutsu work allowing them to learn higher level Ninjutsu than other shinobi. (Can learn one additional ninjutsu up to three ranks above the user.)
Rank Benefits
Genin Signature Jutsu: Many Shinobi are known for picking one jutsu and focusing on its use above all others. Because of this focus they learn to use their signature jutsu more effectively. The Ninjutsu Specialist chooses one jutsu that they know when they pick this benefit, performing extra training in it. That jutsu becomes their signature jutsu and receives certain benefits. (As the user gains rank, they are able to either choose another signature jutsu, or upgrade a previous one. This equates to three upgrades in total, one at genin, chuunin, and jounin rank.
There are two benefits that can be gained by choosing a signature jutsu, which can be chosen individually by the user. ● For one, the user trains with their chosen jutsu for five posts, learning how to use it more efficiently, wasting less chakra. The end result being that that jutsu costs the same as a jutsu of one less rank in power from that point on. ● For the second, the user spends five posts training with their jutsu, to increase it's power by applying extra chakra to it. The end result of this is a jutsu of one full rank higher power, but also a rank higher in cost.
A single jutsu can be upgraded with this benefit only twice, and can not receive the same upgrade twice. A rank jutsu cannot receive the power boost, and S ranks cannot be taken as signature jutsu. The user may change to a new signature jutsu at any time, but in doing so they must perform the training again, and will lose the bonus on their previously chosen jutsu.)
Chuunin Extra Element: Rarely, a shinobi can learn to tap into an extra element beyond their normal ability. By studying a foreign element, the shinobi can learn to manipulate and use it as if they had a natural affinity for it. (The Ninjutsu specialist gains access to another element, but they can only learn Ninjutsu for this element, and can only learn up to B rank jutsu.)
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank Rokkingu no Jutsu [Locking Technique] Chakura Ezu [Chakra Drawing]
D Rank Kabenobori [Wall Walking] Nin Shiki Kaado [Secret Information Cards] Kadodekki Shaffuru [Card Deck Shuffle] Koutetsu Kami [Steel Paper] Chakura no Ito [Thread of Chakra] C Rank Suimen Hokou no Gyou [The Art of Water Walking] Shunshin [Body Flicker] Togeyomi [Underworld Spines]
Universal Subtype: Fuuinjutsu [Sealing] E Rank Fuuin Nyuumon [Seal Primer] Hokan Fuuin [Storage Seal - Basic] D Rank Kyouka Fuuin [Reinforcement Seal]
First Element: Fuuton [Wind] E Rank Kaze Fuuchuufuyuu [Wind Levitation] Yadama Furooseigyo [Projectile Control Skill] D Rank Kaze Bakuhatsu [Wind Explosion]
C Rank Soyokaze Bunshin [Zephyr Clone] Kaze Gyorai no Jutsu [Wind Torpedo]
Second Element: Doton [Earth] E Rank Koujin Bunshin no Jutsu (Dust Clone Technique) Tsuchi Tou Tou [Swift Earth] D Rank
Universal E Rank Henge No Jutsu [Transformation Technique] Bunshin [Clone]
D Rank
Taijutsu
E Rank
D Rank
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Character Name: Shinji hozuki Nicknames: Shin Age: 16 Birth Date: 01/15 Gender: Male Hair Color: white Eye Color: light brown/ yellow Height: 6'4 Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: shark like teeth Personality: cocky, sarcastic, and insane would be the three words that come to mind when the name shinji hozuki comes to mind.
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Village: Organization: Rank: Genin Titles: Insignia Style: buckled Insignia Location: on belt buckle
Chakra Color: light blue Chakra Level: Low Chakra Points: 26 [+1/10: 27] Chakra Elements: water Extra Chakra Elements: Chakra Control:
Elemental Control : These ninja choose to specialize in a specific element, making that element much more powerful than normal. In addition they are able to draw on nature to fuel their element, making it even more powerful in an environment reflecting that element. However, due to this focus, jutsu not of the chosen element suffer. [+1 Rank to chosen element, +2 Ranks near elemental advantage, -1 Rank to all other techniques]
Chakra Battery: These shinobi have much larger chakra stores than their peers, making them able to use more chakra techniques at a time without running dry. [+1/10 Base Chakra Modifier]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
Genjutsu Intollerant: This shinobi's mind is more easily effected by genjutsu, which makes it much harder for them to recognize genjutsu or neutralize them with Kai. [-1 rank to Genjutsu Resistance]
Clan: Hozuki Clan X Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: Stage 1
Bloodline/Clan Transplant: Transplant Stage:
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Shinobi Profession: Weapon Specialists Profession Base Benefits Sharp Mind: Can learn one stage beyond RPC's rank in one Weapon style.
Rank Benefits
Genin Battle Instinc]: Weapon Specialists are trained to attack in a relentless manner in order to overwhelm an opponent's defense, and when they take the stance of a trained style, they are easily able to do so. (+1 Rank Attack Speed while utilizing a weapon style stance.)
Chuunin : (Do not add chuunin benefits before reaching chuunin rank.)
Jounin : (Do not add jounin benefits before reaching jounin rank.)
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
First Element: suiton-water E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
sword style
E Rank
D Rank
Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu
Hozuki Clan Ninjutsu E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu E Rank
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Posted: Mon Nov 11, 2013 6:03 am
_Taru_Kimisho_
ShinjiHozuki
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Character Name: Shinji hozuki Nicknames: Shin Age: 16 Birth Date: 01/15 Gender: Male Hair Color: white Eye Color: light brown/ yellow Height: 6'4 Body Type: Athletic Distinguishing Features: shark like teeth Personality: cocky, sarcastic, and insane would be the three words that come to mind when the name shinji hozuki comes to mind.
Background work in progress
Family Information Name: Gender: Relation: Species: Description: {Add any extra slots you need or desire.}:
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Village: Organization: Rank: Genin Titles: Insignia Style: buckled Insignia Location: on belt buckle
Chakra Color: light blue Chakra Level: Low Chakra Points: 26 [+1/10: 27] Chakra Elements: water Extra Chakra Elements: Chakra Control:
Elemental Control : These ninja choose to specialize in a specific element, making that element much more powerful than normal. In addition they are able to draw on nature to fuel their element, making it even more powerful in an environment reflecting that element. However, due to this focus, jutsu not of the chosen element suffer. [+1 Rank to chosen element, +2 Ranks near elemental advantage, -1 Rank to all other techniques]
Chakra Battery: These shinobi have much larger chakra stores than their peers, making them able to use more chakra techniques at a time without running dry. [+1/10 Base Chakra Modifier]
Less Elements: This shinobi can only have two elements. They gain their first at genin rank, and their second at jounin. In addition the shinobi cannot have a combination bloodline such as Mokuton or Hyoton, because they cannot attain a third element.
Genjutsu Intollerant: This shinobi's mind is more easily effected by genjutsu, which makes it much harder for them to recognize genjutsu or neutralize them with Kai. [-1 rank to Genjutsu Resistance]
Clan: Hozuki Clan X Bloodline, Clan, or Demon Stage: Stage 1
Bloodline/Clan Transplant: Transplant Stage:
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Shinobi Profession: Weapon Specialists Profession Base Benefits Sharp Mind: Can learn one stage beyond RPC's rank in one Weapon style.
Rank Benefits
Genin Battle Instinc]: Weapon Specialists are trained to attack in a relentless manner in order to overwhelm an opponent's defense, and when they take the stance of a trained style, they are easily able to do so. (+1 Rank Attack Speed while utilizing a weapon style stance.)
Chuunin : (Do not add chuunin benefits before reaching chuunin rank.)
Jounin : (Do not add jounin benefits before reaching jounin rank.)
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Ninjutsu
Universal
E Rank
D Rank
First Element: suiton-water E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu
Universal E Rank
D Rank
sword style
E Rank
D Rank
Bloodline/Clan/Demon Jutsu
Hozuki Clan Ninjutsu E Rank
D Rank
Genjutsu E Rank
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Summoning Type: (What type of animals do you summon? Dog, snake, toad, etc.)
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My apologies for the wait. Been really busy around here for a while now, and when it hasn't I wasn't in the mood to check stuff.
We're currently asking all new players to start as academy students. There's going to be a lot of them, both new and transfers, and we've been putting a lot of thought into what we want to do for the academy, so I can promise it will be interesting, and profitable too as it's one of the few times you'll be able to learn jutsu completely free.
As a clan/bloodline member your chakra level should be medium, with a +2 modifier. Stacked with your Chakra Battery, that's a +3/10.
Houzuki doesn't have stages. You can cut that slot, or change it to active, or dormant. Probably dormant.
There's a couple typos in your profession section. Not too important, but worth noting.
The Taijutsu section of your main skills is for techniques from the universal (Or Custom) taijutsu and kenjutsu lists. Please return it to normal. Styles have their own section further down in the profile.
You can use your starter cash to buy some starter equipment. As an academy student (Yes, I still want that change.) however you can only buy equipment, no jutsu. It is recommended to buy your starter equipment now, because once you're in game it won't be as readily available, or easy to come by.
