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Posted: Tue Jul 23, 2013 2:43 pm

Can I ask why you are a 2-time 'X2W World's Deathmatch Champion', and you're also the owner?

I highly dislike when guild owners award themselves Championships, it's such a cheap way to do things. I wouldn't even put my own characters in contendership matches unless it was to put someone over, let alone a legitimate match for a title.

Posted: Tue Jul 23, 2013 5:10 pm

Okay KM I have one major problem with your character. I get you're making him based off you, but dude being a guy who is 5 foot 6 inches tall and weighing 242 pounds he seems drastically out of shape. Your guy would be winded and dying mid match after 10 minutes.

My recommendation is either make him a few inches taller or a few pounds leaner. You know maybe make him like 5'9" maybe even 6 foot even. Otherwise your guy seems like a pudgy fat guy who was put into the match to job out to everyone.

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Posted: Tue Jul 23, 2013 5:34 pm

Kid_Omega91

Okay KM I have one major problem with your character. I get you're making him based off you, but dude being a guy who is 5 foot 6 inches tall and weighing 242 pounds he seems drastically out of shape. Your guy would be winded and dying mid match after 10 minutes.

My recommendation is either make him a few inches taller or a few pounds leaner. You know maybe make him like 5'9" maybe even 6 foot even. Otherwise your guy seems like a pudgy fat guy who was put into the match to job out to everyone.

You indeed have a point. I shall work on that right now.

Posted: Tue Aug 20, 2013 3:37 pm

I made a few changes. I'm now 6 feet tall. That should make the character a lil more believable.

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