Rejected_Tyrant
Tha Kid Ace
Yo Man wasup junior looks like your first battle was went well......here is your results from me so listen close *****.....
Reject....you seriously got some good punchlines going on ....yet you did seem as you said....sadistic...about what you spit.....I actually thought you were going to start putting some punk rock music in the background.....lol...but yeah your flow left something to be desired.....you may need to work on your attacks though....some of the attacks didn't impress but just made your whole rap worse....but yeah...all in all you did pretty good for your beginnings...
Kwick....nice to see you still comin with them battles man, you ain't lost a stepp....but yeah here is wasup wit chu.....You came with the punchlines of a lyrical murder....you just tore up this guy with left's and right's ....your flow was on track to I could keep up with what you said...heck if I put a beat behind that I probably could keep tempo.....The ending lol I don't know the guilds past and who was bad and who was good so....yeah.....but all in all you did a hell of a good job.....
my vote- Kwick.......yo Rejct dont take it personally ...you got mad potential....just work at those skills man...then I think you will raise up in the ranks and one day be the hardest emcee here!!......
It's all good man. Lol punk isn't gore...I think, but ya thanks for the feed back.
i think he meant metal. Hip-Hop has its share of gore writiers. Look at Necro hes makin it big with his horror theme crew. You got to elevate better on gore or away from gore cuz its kind of a played concept.
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