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 Posted: Sat Apr 20, 2013 2:57 pm
Okay you wanted criticism, so allow me since no one else will..
Firstly I liked the promo, really stellar work and I see why everyone is 'high' on you.
Just some notes if you will
Firstly, this vaguely reminds me of the whole AJ Styles BS they're spewing on TNA, right now granted it 'vaguely' reminds me of it,
and granted we've all been guilty of doing 'current' angles on feds that were on tv, etc etc.
Just keep up with the good job, and try not to slip into the crap that they spew.
Now then now that 'that' is out of the way, just some things that are in the more 'technical' aspect
AJ Warner will be on FWD (EWA's developmental), strictly to get ring rust or whatever you may have, plus to strengthen the roster to give new people a chance to work with a vet.
It's a win win situation for you, for newbies/rookies, etc
As of now it's unclear if he's in the competition or the show with the FWD Championship, but since AJ is on that show he wouldn't be gunning for the EWA Championship anytime soon.
Now, you probably didn't know that, and that's fine. So that's not a big deal
But you never quite explained what you're going to do 'if' you got the EWA championship, you just hit guy with a move.
Maybe a follow up in the next coming shows?
But besides all that, good job.. I'm adding it to a nomination for promo of the year
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Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2013 2:29 pm
Well thank you for the honesty. I don't watch TNA so I don't know the current angles going on, but still I don't want to mimicking any angle in wrestling. I really try to give promos that fit the style of Raven, Jon Moxley and Foley because AJ's gimmick is supposed to be that of someone angry at the world. But thank you again, and as for the EWA technical information, at least it's a promo to set me up for FWD, haha.
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Posted: Sun Apr 21, 2013 4:08 pm
You'll be more entertained by watching paint dry than watching TNA. So good on you
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 11:49 am
TNA needs more Curry Man!
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 12:38 pm
Cartwright TNA needs more Curry Man! Cartwright needs some more cups of shut the ******** up about TNA!
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 1:07 pm
Insane Irish Pride Cartwright TNA needs more Curry Man! Cartwright needs some more cups of shut the ******** up about TNA! It'll take more than cups of tea to keep me quiet! razz
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 1:22 pm
Cartwright Insane Irish Pride Cartwright TNA needs more Curry Man! Cartwright needs some more cups of shut the ******** up about TNA! It'll take more than cups of tea to keep me quiet! razz You Son of a b***h!
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 1:44 pm
Insane Irish Pride Cartwright Insane Irish Pride Cartwright TNA needs more Curry Man! Cartwright needs some more cups of shut the ******** up about TNA! It'll take more than cups of tea to keep me quiet! razz You Son of a b***h! Come at me bro! blaugh
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Posted: Mon Apr 22, 2013 10:52 pm
Insane Irish Pride Cartwright TNA needs more Curry Man! Cartwright needs some more cups of shut the ******** up about TNA! This is why we can't have nice things
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Posted: Tue Apr 23, 2013 3:06 am
Yukari Clepsydra Insane Irish Pride Cartwright TNA needs more Curry Man! Cartwright needs some more cups of shut the ******** up about TNA! This is why we can't have nice things Nice things like Draze?! surprised
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Posted: Tue Apr 23, 2013 3:21 am
Cartwright Yukari Clepsydra Insane Irish Pride Cartwright TNA needs more Curry Man! Cartwright needs some more cups of shut the ******** up about TNA! This is why we can't have nice things Nice things like Draze?! surprised Now that's a crazy imagination you got going there.
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Posted: Tue Apr 23, 2013 4:27 am
Yukari Clepsydra Insane Irish Pride Cartwright TNA needs more Curry Man! Cartwright needs some more cups of shut the ******** up about TNA! This is why we can't have nice things Sorry Chrono, it's not my fault TNA sucks!
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Posted: Tue Apr 23, 2013 5:32 am
Harli_Nightmare Cartwright Yukari Clepsydra Insane Irish Pride Cartwright TNA needs more Curry Man! Cartwright needs some more cups of shut the ******** up about TNA! This is why we can't have nice things Nice things like Draze?! surprised Now that's a crazy imagination you got going there. You don't think Draze is the nicest person we've ever met on here?! surprised
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Posted: Tue Apr 23, 2013 5:43 am
Cartwright Harli_Nightmare Cartwright Yukari Clepsydra Insane Irish Pride Cartwright TNA needs more Curry Man! Cartwright needs some more cups of shut the ******** up about TNA! This is why we can't have nice things Nice things like Draze?! surprised Now that's a crazy imagination you got going there. You don't think Draze is the nicest person we've ever met on here?! surprised I'm a good example of kindness and compassion
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Posted: Tue Apr 23, 2013 6:36 am
Harli_Nightmare Cartwright Harli_Nightmare Cartwright Yukari Clepsydra This is why we can't have nice things Nice things like Draze?! surprised Now that's a crazy imagination you got going there. You don't think Draze is the nicest person we've ever met on here?! surprised I'm a good example of kindness and compassion Then Draze is a good example of... surprised
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