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Ill help...I wrote two full books but I couldnt get them published because they said that "It was too much like a cartoon"! WHAT THE HELL!!!!

(( hey! i got one. its about (( goku, vegeta, gohen, goten, and trunks )) in the woods and goku was reading the map upside down. WHAT WELL HAPPEN NEXT? what do you think guys? )) gohan makes up a sorty and tells to goku and vegeta, and they get eek like little kids. they get hit one by one from the killer that lives in the woods " i made the story up ok? " i'll tell you the rest later bye?

I have a story based on Orphen and SNK characters. It's quite interesting, however, I haven't finished it yet. I could post what I have so far, if that'd be ok...?

I know, but she wanted fanfiction stories and I just so happen to have one...well...1/4 of one... sweatdrop

I noticed. 3nodding smile

RUNAWAY! #1

This is bad she thought. Why here of all places, & why now of all times?! Without realizing it a tear rolled down her cheek. Smack! I thought I told you to quit crying! You're not a baby! Once again her father was beating her & all because of a stupid tear. She stumbled back praying to God that someone, anyone would help her. Then from somewhere deep inside it struck her, she wasn't alone in this battle, she just couldn't see her allies. They weren't there in body, true, but they were always there supporting her. Supplied with this information she ran, ran for all she was worth. Her dad stopped chasing her halfway down the block figuring she didn't have anywhere to go anyway. But with her newfound hope & strenght she didn't turn back. She collapsed right outside the gate of a house & she didn't have the will to keep going, so she left the rest up to God.

There's my first chapter. tell me what you think guys.

sounds good. ^_^ I'll post my story next...it's a long one though, but still not finished... sweatdrop

However, I did find another story to put on here! biggrin


Chapter I: An Unexpected Event

Amidst the Ever-Green forest. Two young men around the ages of 18 and 20, continue their training within an opening of the forest. The 18 year old young man goes by the name of Orphen. He is a dark sorcerer from the Tower of Fang. Already mastering the art of magic at the age of 16, Orphen set out to search for better things in life. Eventually he had stumbled upon a 20 year old Muai Thai boxing champ named Joe. They met in a street fight in a town called Timber. Orphen won the battle and as he began to walk away, Joe asked him where he was going. Orphen shook his head and said, “Nowhere.” Joe thought about that for a moment and invited Orphen to stay with him and his grandmother until he figures out where he would be going. Joe was very interested in Orphen’s magic. He had never fought anyone with such a power before. Anyway, Orphen agreed to Joe’s offer and remained living with Joe and his grandmother for about two years already. But to return to the story: Orphen and Joe cautiously look at each other, circling the wide area of the forest. Waiting for his opponent to move, Joe doesn’t take his eyes off of his companion. Suddenly, Joe steps onto a twig, making a loud “snap” sound. Joe glances down towards his feet, “Got you!” yells Orphen as he blasts Joe with one of his stronger spells. “Ugh!” grunts Joe as he tumbles head-over-heels onto the mud. Orphen stood straight up and gives a ragged sigh. They’ve been training all morning and the score is now twenty to one. “Had enough there, champ?” Asked Orphen in a mocking tone. Joe stumbles to his feet and leans his back up against a nearby tree. “Not bad, sorcerer, but I’ll win this round!” He gets into his famous Muai Thai boxing stance. Orphen looks down and shakes his head, “Alright then, pal…but remember, you asked for it.” They look into each other’s eyes, completely forgetting fear and overwhelming themselves with agression and a tinge of patience. Waiting…waiting…and waiting…until a pretty young girl wearing a green bandana, short baige shorts, a green tank top, and an over-sized shuriken strapped on her back came running into the opening of the forest, disrupting their battle, “Hey, Yuffie.” Says Joe as he leaves his fighting stance. The young ninja nodded in acknowledgement at Joe then took a step closer to Orphen, who sunk his head low, trying not to make eye-contact. “Hi Orphen.” She said in a cheerful tone. Orphen didn’t answer. “I said, hi Orphen!” She said once more, causing Orphen to wince at the alarming pitch of her voice. “Uh…hi.” Reluctantly, he waved at her with a wry smile. “Hey, did you guys hear?” Said Yuffie, ignoring Orphen’s demeanor. “Hear what?” Asked Orphen with a hint of sudden interest in his tone. “The town south of here was raided by a group of thugs.” Said Yuffie. Joe glanced up at her quickly, a surprised expression pervaded his face. “You mean Timber?” He asked. Yuffie nodded, “Yup, there were a lot of casualties I hear, and…” Joe hopped to his feet from the stump he was sitting on, worry covering his façade. “Grandma!” He took off running through the dense forest, swatting aside the branches that got in his way. Orphen stuck his palm out to try and stop him, but Joe just shrugged off his hand and continued running. “C’mon.” said Orphen, “I got a bad feeling about this.” Him and Yuffie ran after Joe, following his footsteps as they ran, until they finally arrived at the town. All the small houses that occupied this village were either burned to the ground or nearly on the verge of collapsing. Some residents of the town were gathering their belongings and stuffing them in, what’s left, of their wagons. “This is horrible.” Said Orphen, who was looking around the town, scanning for his friend. Soon enough, he sees Joe talking to some of the pedestrians. “Joe!” Orphen calls out to his friend as he jogs over to where he’s standing. Ignoring Orphen, Joe continues his interrogation, “…you sure you don’t know where she is?” He asked. The citizen nodded, “Yup, I told you, no one knows of Salia’s whereabouts. Not me, not anybody. But rumors has it, that she was killed.” Joe kicks the dirt aside mumbling a curse to himself, “Damnit.” He says. Orphen takes a step forward and puts his hand on Joe’s shoulder, “Don’t worry, pal. We’ll get them back for what they did to Salia.” He said with a sympathetic yet, determined tone in his voice. “Yeah, we’ll make ‘em pay!” Said Yuffie as she jumps up with excitement. Joe looks over at his friends with teary eyes, “R…really?” He asked. Orphen smiles and nods, “I swear by the Tower of Fang. We will get our revenge.” He turns to look away, “But first, we’re going to need some help.”

That's the end of the first chapter. 3nodding Whad'ya think? smile