Orangeish Sherbert
Hey again Parue! Her civilian side looks solid, I think innocent works a lot better as a title for the virtue, and you fleshed it out nicely!
I think that her eternal attack looks much better now with the duration and radius so that’s not longer an issue, but I think for the basic and super attacks there’s just a tiny bit more tweaking to do before I can give the stamp!
The way the attacks are worded is making them sound a lot like knight magic, which stems from a pool that the knights have, whereas the senshi magic is pretty much turn based so it should be a set number of times per battle, no mixing and matching and doubling up the effects!
Also, for her super attack, the total duration is still a little too long for me, if you could cut just a little bit more time off of it, I think that the eternal attack should have the longest duration, since that is when she is at her most powerful, so it doesn’t seem right for her super attack to have thirty more seconds of effectiveness over the eternal attack!
Again, please quote me with your changes!
I think that her eternal attack looks much better now with the duration and radius so that’s not longer an issue, but I think for the basic and super attacks there’s just a tiny bit more tweaking to do before I can give the stamp!
The way the attacks are worded is making them sound a lot like knight magic, which stems from a pool that the knights have, whereas the senshi magic is pretty much turn based so it should be a set number of times per battle, no mixing and matching and doubling up the effects!
Also, for her super attack, the total duration is still a little too long for me, if you could cut just a little bit more time off of it, I think that the eternal attack should have the longest duration, since that is when she is at her most powerful, so it doesn’t seem right for her super attack to have thirty more seconds of effectiveness over the eternal attack!
Again, please quote me with your changes!
Parue
I removed the ability to cast both handfuls at the same time ( If she wants them stuck there longer shell just have to be there to cast when the first one wears off, lol ) And I shortened the length to 25seconds per attack, twice per battle. smile
