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 Posted: Wed Mar 01, 2006 10:13 pm
Hey, I'm out of posts on the first page. So post, I guess.
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Posted: Wed Mar 15, 2006 8:36 am
Well, sounds like some girls go through the attic and find projector slides.
That part makes sense.
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Posted: Wed Mar 15, 2006 1:48 pm
It feels repetative. Like, okay, we get it, it'a an attic, it's raining. I don't know, just didn't hold my interest, kept waiting for something to happen. Not bad, just really wordy.
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Posted: Wed Mar 15, 2006 4:27 pm
I gave this story up, anyway.
I fail at putting my dreams to words. cry
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Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 6:56 am
Aw. Want me to move it to completed works as a little blurby deal?
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Posted: Thu Mar 16, 2006 10:29 pm
Sure, I guess.
I changed it and stuff, too.
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