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Thank you Blow, I agree on Takatana, it is a very advanced puppet. Will use that later on in the story, as for Akiwari, I will change the chuunin plating tommorow, to look at it a bit more relaxed. But thank you for the approval :3.

Gonna go ahead and just place this bump right here. It's been two days so I think it's about time.

-Not Approved-

The puppet is too advance for a Genin to be using, take away some of the compartments, or senbon launches/ bladed legs, there's too much for a Genin to have to control. But I do like the idea of this puppet.

Maybe some of the stuff can be added as your character advances in the rp.

Fix that please.

-approved-

Username: iMama Harkles
Link to Character Profile: Shunsui, Sena
Puppet Name: Scolopendra
Puppet Appearance Description: Scolopendra appears as a large centipede. This puppet has a head and a body made up of fifteen joints, stretching out to be a total of sixteen feet long and two feet wide. Each leg is bladed and this puppet is only effective if it can grab hold of a trapped victim by wrapping around them. Each joint also contains two legs. This is it's only true killing potential. Scolopendra is a design made to sacrifice all possible additions to the body (such as launchers, senbon, poisons, etc.) in order to have a single, reliable attack that can be almost assurded to work.
Puppet Skeletal/Skin Material: Centipede skeleton, wooden materials
Puppet Construction (Hidden blades, launchers, special inventions, etc.): Each of the thirty legs on each side are bladed. In the front, two blade are located in the head. These are used for thrusting while the legs are used to slice. The front blades are a foot in length and each of the side legs are eight inches long. The front blades are in the shape of pincers and operate the same way. The legs are perfectly straight, but can be angled outward to slice as the puppet moves by or downward as the puppet clamps down on a target and then tears away at them.

Username: Imm0rtal Ryuu
Link to Character Profile Rowan Futsuki
Puppet Name: Naga
Puppet Appearance Description: Naga is mostly human looking, bearing your typical puppet head with short, dark green hair on it's head. The rest of its body shares typical humanoid puppet build, with one majorly apparent difference from typical humanoids. Naga has four arms, two in the typical shoulder space with the two joints of a normal human arm, the other two made with many joints, that can be wrapped around Naga's body. Along with that, besides its face, Naga's body is painted with artful white snakes wrapping around its limbs and body. The snakes on the limbs that stop near Naga's hands have their mouths open, as though to leap and strike the enemy.
Puppet Skeletal/Skin Material: Skeleton and Skin are both made of tough, flexible wood.
Puppet Construction (Hidden blades, launchers, special inventions, etc.): Naga has only a few weapons designed for it. The first is it's pair of katanas, which it holds in its upper arms, which are used in the pretty typical katana way of slicing things up. Second up are a pair of Ko-wakazashi, sitting at 14 inches long, held tight to the second pair of highly flexible arms, usually concealed along with the arms by them wrapping tightly around Naga's torso, and hidden underneath a cloak. Then come the more 'typical' weapons, a pair of senbon launchers with only seven shots, one behind each eye, which can dialate the false iris to fire a senbon through it, usually into the opponents eyes. And, last but not least, Naga packs a Kunai launcher in its mouth, and two hollow compartments in its primary arms just behind the wrist, which hold short Tanto knives as backup weapons. Not currently present in Naga, however space has been put in for these additions to be added in after Rowan gains further skill.

Username: Imm0rtal Ryuu
Link to Character Profile Rowan Futsuki
Puppet Name: Helscorch
Puppet Appearance Description: Helscorch is a humanoid puppet with a thicker then average torso, and it's entire skin is a dark, almost black color, thanks to the fireproof resin coating it's body. It's hair is a short pure black, also coated in the same resin as the body.
Puppet Skeletal/Skin Material: Skeleton and Skin are both made of a flexible, tough wood. The puppet is coated in a special resin that makes it almost completly fireproof, thanks to it's armaments.
Puppet Construction (Hidden blades, launchers, special inventions, etc.): Helscorch is presently a rather lightly equipped puppet, carrying twin Tanto knives as it's only melee weapon. It's real power comes from it's twin Kunai launchers, one concealed in each arm. Helscorch can open up holes in both of its palms, exposing the Kunai launchers, and fire them both. Each launcher holds a considerable reserve of Kunai knives, each with an Explosive Tag tied to them, creating a nasty explosive launching puppet designed for damage on a mass scale. Still under work is a third weapon, the reason for the thicker torso and resin coating. Meant to later be placed inside Helscorch is a large tank of gelatinous flammables, with a tube leading up to its mouth with an ignition system, effectively giving Helscorch a flamethrower. However, this is still under work, so none of these components are present, giving Helscorch a hollow body, making him quite a bit faster then his large body implies. Helscorch stores two tight packs of 40 of the tagged Kunai, one in each forearm.

Well, for Naga, if your issue is with over-complexity of weapons and launchers and such, I'll just remove all the launchers for now, leaving Naga with just its six various melee weapons XD

For Helscorch, taking into account the fact that this is based on an anime, specifically one in which something like fifty hand-length knives were crammed into one human sized and shaped skull cavity (Referring to Crow and it's head-mounted kunai launcher which sprayed out something like thirty to fifty knives while detatched from the entire rest of the body), I decided to aim for the low end of the spectrum, and give Helscorch a storage of 40 Kunai knives in the forearms of each arm, totaling up to 80 Kunai, 40 per arm. This of course means that once an arm is empty, it's done, no matter how many knives are left in the other.

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