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Metal Trsu
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PostPosted: Thu Jul 25, 2013 10:13 am


Imm0rtal Ryuu


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Gouken - Strong Fist Style

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Jutsu Name: Hirudora
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Rank: S
Description: After opening the seventh of the Eight Gates, the user places a palm facing forward in front of their face with one hand and then taps it with his other hand, formed into a fist, which creates a massive amount of air pressure. Next, the user forms a unique hand seal resembling a tiger, which launches the air pressure at the opponent in the shape of a tiger, by leaving a gigantic tiger-shaped impression into the initially built-up air pressure with the hand seal. The air pressure will condense as it's moving and be focused into a single point. The technique then explodes on command, releasing the built up air pressure in an instant. A massive concussive explosion is created which can be felt a significant distance away.



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Link to Character Profile http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?page=1&t=23934931#356151389
Jutsu Name: Leaf Dragon God
Jutsu Type: Taijutsu
Rank: SS
Description: This is the ultimate Taijutsu technique created by the legendary Taijutsu master Chen. It appears to be initiated by an upward spin kick at which point it quickly becomes a tornado. Forming into a dragon with long whiskers, it attacks the target aiming to swallow them, at which point they are cut by the razor sharp winds inside the attack. After initiating the attack, the user appears to remain shielded within the base of the tornado as the outward surface of the dragon seems to be solid enough for a person to impact and rebound off of, making the only way to enter the technique once it has been initiated is by being swallowed. Since the wind from the dragon is created from the users rotation and not from a wind nature, fire base jutsu do not get and advantage against it.


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Metal Trsu

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 30, 2013 9:54 am


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PostPosted: Tue Jul 30, 2013 9:55 am


Metal Trsu
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Ok can I get the go ahead to add these to my character?

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 31, 2013 3:54 pm


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Kami Shinken - Divine Fist Style.

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Description

The art's power lies in channeling one's energy into a single blow and striking one of the 708 Keiraku Hikō ("Hidden Channeling Points") in the human body (also known as acupressure points, power points, vital points, tsubo, etc.). This causes the victim to explode, be controlled involuntarily or otherwise incapacitated. It can also be used to heal certain physical and psychological wounds, such as restoring a person's voice, eyesight or memories, though the main purpose of Kami Shinken is assassination (advanced). The average person uses only 30% of their body's potential strength, but those who had mastered KamiShinken can tap into the remaining 70% as well.

There is a soft style (Ujo ken), which depends on accuracy and agility, and a hard style (go no ken), which relies on brute power to annihilate targets.

While Kami Shinken can only be passed down from one master to another, the style is usually taught to more than one student before a successor is named.


Background

Due to its deadliness, Kami Shinken can only have one successor per generation according to the art's law. Students who are not chosen to inherit the succession must renounce the style voluntarily or risk having their memories erased or their fists crushed. This is due to the extreme consequences of the style being held by one who is evil at heart.

Requirements & Rules
● Must Have atleast ten SP in ninjustsu
● Must Have at least ten Sp in Taijustsu
● If there two or more candidates they must fight to inherit the sucession once they're trainning is complete.
● 1000 word trainning to acconditionate the body and gain control
● Must have ten SP in chakra
● Cannot Auto learn this tecniques
● Until jounin rank the rank B

Techniques

[E-rank] Tenha no Kamae (Heaven Breaking Stance): A stance that resembles the North Dipper constellation.

[Rank D] Tokei Kouhou (Struggling Neck Exhaling Method) -The user sucks in his breath before performing a mighty stomp, glowing a reddish aura. Temporarily increases his attack power.

[Rank-C] Hyakuretsu Ken (Hundred Crack Fist) - Kami shinken most basic offense trademark technique, in which the user pummels his foe with a flurry of punches, often resulting in paralysis and chakra drainage moments later. The user can perform 50 punches in 3 seconds.

[Rank B] Kanzan Ryōzan Ha (Rocky Mountain Dual Cutting Wave/Boulder Splitting Wave) - The user performs a mighty karate chop to embed his hand into his opponent's body, hitting the chakra points as if his hand were a blade. The blow also creates a burst of chakra behind the opponent, damaging other enemies.


[Rank-A]*Tensho Juha Zan (Divine Softness Ripping Slash) - The user leaps into the air and performs a series of hovering kicks before landing and performing a mighty thrust with his palms held together causes pysical damage.

[Rank- A]*Seieiko (Awakening of the Senses) - The performer uses a fierce uppercut to strike the opponent's Ryugan vital point (located on the thoracic vertebrae, striking this point causes the opponent's nervous system to become extremely hypersensitive, to the point where a mere touch causes immense pain). The user then jumps back and follows up with a charging punch that sends the enemy flying.

[Rank A]Goretsu Ha( Steel Shredding Grip) - The user produces a sphere of energy with his right hand, before using the might of his very fingers to crush and unleash a mighty blast around him.

[Rank-S]*Tenha Kassatsu (Heavenly Destruction) - The user hops into the air and concentrates his power to erupt seven pillars of energy on the field below him, forming the shape of the big dipper. It finishes the move by causing the pillars to detonate, inflicting heavy damage across a wide area.

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Musō Tensei (Thoughtless Turning Life/Unconscious Transmigration of Souls) - The ultimate technique of Kami Shinken, attained by knowing and experiencing true sorrow, allowing the user to become one with the concept of nothingness. The user powers up and is temporary invulnerable to any attack. Depending on when it is used, The user may not perfectly perform the move and will only gain a limited moment of invincibility.

Zankai Ken (Remorse Fist/ Fist of Pentinence) - A Legendary Move famously used against many minor enemies, simply punctures the thumbs into the sides of his opponent's head. After three seconds to repent for their sins, the victim of this technique explodes violently. This move instantly kills common foes, but only damages tougher opponents and stuns them.

Ujō Mōshōha (Sentimental Violent Gliding Ruin/Compassionate Flying Slash) - A Legendary Move used as the finishing blow to ,The user performs four roundhouse kicks before thrusting his fist forward. As his fist rises to the sky, pillars of energy project skywards from the ground, causing any weaker enemies in a wide vicinity around him to experience euphoria before exploding violently.

*Kami Tenkai Senretsu Sho (Dubhe Shattering Palm) - Legendary Move, The user throws a barrage of punches with all his might, with each punch releasing large chakra projectiles. For the final blow, it charges back with right hand and throws a palm strike that sends a mighty finishing blast, devastating a wide area in front of the user.

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Satsui no Hado

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Description/History
Satsui no Hado is a form of ki that is rooted in the darker aspects of natural human instinct (including the desire to survive, trample, and impose over opposition), and, on a metaphysical level, the natural occurrence and manifestation of loss, decline, and destruction.

To tap into the Satsui no Hado, a person must be so consumed with the desire to win, or else possess such intense rage, that they are willing to kill. As such, only those who push themselves to be the best at all costs can take full advantage of it. Learning Satsui no Hado is the first step in learning the most fatal technique known to all of their martial arts - the Shun Goku Satsu, known also as the Raging Demon.


___Physical and Mental Changes:
• For the people who do succeed in controlling it, they become unbelievably strong, but at the cost of losing their humanity and compassion; they develop a cold, cynical detachment from themselves, as well as others, and develop a murderous (and almost suicidal) desire to fight.
• Once a person has tapped into the Satsui no Hado within them, it can be very hard to resist.
• When under the Satsui no Hado's influence, a person's eyes will turn a reddish color. If one embraces it to a lesser degree, their eyes will just turn white.
• When the Satsui no Hado is completely mastered, their sclera turn black and their eyes completely turn reddish and their chakra would turn Purple.

___Power Boosts:
• The user's strength and Taijutsu are increased by [5]
• Opponents can only block attacks with their bare hands if they have equal or greater Taijutsu points.
• Users are skilled in chaining their Taijutsu Techniques into other Taijutsu Technqiues
• The user's Taijutsu Techniques are raised [1] Rank.

Requirements & Rules
● Must have the intent to win so much that you would be willing to kill for it.
● Can only be taught by Professor Swagger's RPCs.
● Must have mastered Ansatsuken Fist.

Techniques
[Simple] = Requires no chakra
[Complex] = Requires chakra

[D Rank] :: [Simple] Ashura Senku [Asura Flashing Sky]
The user widens his stance, glows red, then lifts one knee and "glides" along the ground to another location with his eyes aglow, making afterimages appear in his tracks. The user cannot be hit while gliding, but can not use any other move while gliding.
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[D Rank] :: [Simple] Gohadoken [Great Surge Fist]
The Gohadoken is a more powerful version of the Hadoken used by Satsui no Hado users. Executed in the same way as the original Hadoken, the user fires a surge shock that travels in a straight line toward the opponent. This Hadoken is a powerful technique, but the lethality of the Gohadoken is literally increased whenever the Satsui no Hado is being embraced. The power of the Gohadoken depends on how attuned the user is to the Satsui no Hado.
• Up to [2] Gohadoken waves could be used at a time with both fists
• Travels 15ft before disappearing
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[D Rank] :: [Simple] Goshoryuken [Great Rising Dragon Fist]
Executed by performing a Shoryuken motion, the attack is a Shoryuken that strikes hard and slices the target. Instead of crouching before jumping, the user strikes the foe straight in the chest and jumps from a standing position. It can land for multiple hits, and has good range. The user's fist are filled with the Satsui no Hado's Ki during the execution. The Goshoryuken is only used by those who have mastered the assassination art that it originated from, being the "great" incarnation of the Shoryuken as its name implies.
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[C Rank] :: [Simple] Messatsu-Goshoryu [Annihilating Great Rising Dragon]
The Messatsu-Goshoryu is functionally a stronger version of the Shoryureppa, with a similar series of Goshoryuken. The user's arm is cloaked with the Satsui no Hado while doing the technique. While this move does not scorch the opponent, Messatsu-Goshoryu does a massive amount of damage to the target's chest.
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[D Rank] :: [Simple] Hyakkishu [Demon Flip]
The user swiftly leaps forward, high into the air and then the user does a sliding kick that trips an opponent. his can be used to counter predictable projectiles patterns
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[D Rank] :: [Simple] Tatsumaki [Tornado]
Similar to the original Tatsumaki Senpuukyaku, but the user uses both legs as they spin around, making the kicking power more destructive. The user could hit his opponent a maximum of [3] times before stopping. If the user's target gets caught up in at least one of the kicks, the user must finish the combo until the [3] kicks were delivered. It also allows the user to fly over or even completely dodge projectiles that aren't that high up in the air.
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[C Rank] :: [Simple] Shunpuu Kyaku [Twirling Gale Kick]
Another variation of Tatsumaki Senpuukyaku, but the user stays in one place as they spin with one leg and draws the target closer to them. The maximum strikes are [5] hits, but this time the move is completed even quicker than the original Tatsumaki Senpuukyaku.
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___Advanced:

[C Rank] :: [Complex] Shakunetsu Hadoken [ Scorching Surge Fist ]
An advanced version of Hadoken utilizing the user's heated will power. The user uses pure willpower to this technique, but adds some of his Katon chakra into it to make it an actual fireball. The user uses both his fists and thrusts them outwards towards the target. Then a surging fire ball is expelled that results in a blazing punching force, traveling through the air in the opponent's direction. The user will usually does this move very quickly, making this move even more dangerous. The impact of the Shakunetsu Hadoken wave has twice the power as a regular C-Ranked fireball, usually passing through any non-solid C-Ranked wall very easily. Once it passes through the opposing wall, that object disappears. The impact of this Hadoken would make your opponent fly back 10ft from where they're currently standing.
• Travels 20ft before disappearing
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[B Rank] :: [Complex] Messatsu Gou Hadou [Annihilating Great Surge] *Can only be used if Jounin or Higher
The Messatsu Gou Hadou is a much stronger purple version of the regular Gohadoken that inflicts a great deal of damage, and can be used in the air as well as on the ground. It has the additional ability to seriously burn the opponent.
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[A Rank] :: [Simple] Misogi [Purifier] *Can only be used if Jounin or Higher
The user swiftly leaps above their target with blinding speed and charges down at them with a devastating strike to finish them off. The user will brutally pin the target down with his leg and then strike the target's face with the user's elbow. The aftermath of this move will result in the Satsui no Hado's symbol in flames.
• This technique will shatter the target's ribs and possibly their skull if landed
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» [B Rank] :: [Complex] Kongou Kokuretsuzan [ Land Rending Vajra Slash ]
The user puts his hand up and charges it with ki. Then, he violently slams his fist on the ground which results in an explosion of pure energy shaped like the Satsui no Hado symbol, which first takes the form of a lightning bolt and then emanates outwards in a shock wave of energy that has a 30ft radius. Anybody caught in this shock wave will be violently pushed back 25ft, while paralyzed upon impact until they fall to the ground.
• Can be used after leaping in the air instead of the Misogi finish. If used this way, the shock wave doubles in radius.
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[S Rank] :: [Simple] Shun Goku Satsu [ Instant Hell Murder/Raging Demon ] *Can only be used if Jounin or Higher
The Raging Demon is a very powerful, but fatally dangerous technique ever used with the Satsui no Hado. The move kills the opponent while destroying their soul. However, this attack cannot work on people who have no souls or artificial life forms. When performed, the user glides towards the opponent and grabs them. Before anything else can be seen, the Satsui no Hado's Ki turns the whole area into a black darkness as the target is relentlessly beaten, as showcased by a series of flashes of Purple Ki. If used by a wall, the target's blood will form the symbol for Satsui no Hado.
• Leaves the target to near-death and is capable of completely destroying their soul if they're not strong willed
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Ansatsuken
The Mighty Assassination Fist


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Description/History
This martial art was developed with the intention of murdering an opponent and does not refer to a particular fighting style. A form of this fighting style can be energized by the Satsui no Hadou, an evil Ki that awakens within a warrior who has embraced the dark and violent aspect of their Ansatsuken art or has an intense rage. The user can embrace the peaceful and spiritual aspect of the art, and develop a sublimated variation of the same martial art style by removing the Satsui no Hadou from the techniques, or resisting its Rage.


___Power Boost(s):
• The user's strength and Taijutsu are increased by [5]
• Opponents can only block attacks with their bare hands if they have equal or greater Taijutsu points.
• Users are skilled in chaining their Taijutsu Techniques into other Taijutsu Technqiues
• The user's Taijutsu Techniques are raised [1] Rank.

Requirements & Rules
● Can only be taught by Professor Swagger's RPCs.

Techniques
[Simple] = Requires no chakra
[Complex] = Requires chakra

[D Rank] :: [Simple] Hadoken [Wave Motion Fist]
The basic type of Punch a someone learning the Ansatsuken could do. Hadoken is a surging punch in which a fighter's willpower is utilized to focus energy into and through their fists. As the user's fist are thrust outwards towards the target, a surging energy wave is expelled that results in a punching force traveling through the air in the opponent's direction. The user will usually be immobilized for a short time after performing this move, leaving them vulnerable to counterattack. The impact of the Hadoken wave has twice the power as the user's strongest punch, which would make your opponent fall down 6ft from where they're currently standing.
• Only [1] Hadoken can be used at a time with both fists
• Travels 10ft before disappearing
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[D Rank] :: [Simple] Shoryuken [Rising Dragon Fist]
The Shoryuken is a jumping uppercut in which the user spins and rockets upwards with some horizontal movement as well, knocking the opponent to the ground with much damage. The user would gain an incredible amount of speed while doing the Shoryuken, making blocking it before it hits practically impossible. When the user hits his/her target, the target flies 5ft backwards, while doing a back flip upon impact. The trade-off for this is that after the uses Shoryuken, they're completely vulnerable to attack when falling back to the ground for a second after landing.
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[D Rank] :: [Simple] Tatsumaki Senpuukyaku [Tornado Whirlwind Leg]
The user jumps and, while in the air, rotates their leg, kicking the opponent 1-3 times in a row. If the target is hit with a clear Tatsumaki Senpuukyaku at least one time, the user would combo it into another kick, and into another. The user only has [3] kicks to perform before stopping the technique. Tatsumaki Senpuukyaku also allows the user to fly over or even completely dodge projectiles that aren't that high up in the air.
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___Advanced:

[C Rank] :: [Complex] Denjin Hadouken [ Lightning Blade Surge Fist]
The Denjin Hadoken focuses on strength, and timing to be successful. This Hadoken is particularly unique in the fact that it can be charged to determine the deadliness of the impact. Once this attack hit, it'll inflict serious burns and stun your opponent for [1] turn. At max Rank, it'll stun your opponent for [2] turns. Releasing it prematurely will allow the opponent to dodge it because the attack is slow if used right off the bat. As you're charging, you can still move as if you were never charging at all, but you can't use the arm you were charging. The impact of this Hadoken would make your opponent fly back 6ft from where they're currently standing.
• Travels 15ft before disappearing
• Once activated, your arm becomes infused with Raiton chakra
• 1 Post Charge = 1 Post Stun, but Slow moving
• 2 Posts Charge = 2 Post Stun and Fast moving
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[C Rank] :: [Complex] Shinryuken [ Divine Dragon Fist]
A powerful version of Shoryuken that the user combines his heated will power into his Shoryuken and then creates a spiraling vacuum of flames shaped like a dragon which would then boost the user's Shoryuken and strike multiple times, giving the target a large burn mark on their chest up to their chin. When the user hits his/her target, the target flies 10ft backwards, while doing 3 back flips upon impact. The user does this very quickly, and doesn't take that long to recover from a failed Shinryuken attempt like he did with Shoryuken.
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[A Rank] :: [Complex] Shoryu Reppa [ Rising Dragon Destroyer]
The Shoryu Reppa is an advanced Shoryuken where the user performs a combo of [3] Shoryuken. The first uppercut, the user would be on the ground and would just swiftly uppercut his target. The second, the user would leap only 2ft in the air, add his heated will power into the Shoryuken and hit a quick flaming Shoryuken onto his target. After the second one, the user would swiftly turn around and leap up high into the air and deliver the final Shoryuken, which would also be infused with his heated will power, and have a large impact. This final uppercut would probably leave a large burn mark under the target's chin. When the user hits his/her target with the final Shoryken, the target flies 10ft backwards, while doing a single back flip upon impact. The target would be lit on fire while flying backwards. Once the target stops flying backwards, he won't be lit on fire anymore.
• Once the first uppercut has landed, the user transitions to the second and then third
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• Users are skilled in chaining their Taijutsu Techniques into other Taijutsu Technqiues.
--- Explain that to me?

• Opponents can only block the Ansatsuken's Taijutsu with their bare hands if their Taijutsu and Strength are greater than the user's by [5].
--- I'm on the fence about this, it really seems to strong. So..I'll let you know in the next post ^_^

• They can also block it if they're at the same Rank, but also know the Ansatsuken Fist.
--- I agree with the same rank, but not having to know the technique style.

• The user's Taijutsu Techniques are raised [1] Rank.
--- This cancels out the Blocking proportion by making your techniques higher, which means that at Chunin, only a Kage could block you.
So This one is a No.


● Can only be taught by Professor Swagger's RPCs.
--- Are you the grandmaster of this? I need a good reason as to why you're the only one that knows this style, even out of all the Kage and such.



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Techniques
[Simple] = Requires no chakra
[Complex] = Requires chakra

--- No, they will cost chakra.


[D Rank] :: [Simple] Tatsumaki Senpuukyaku [Tornado Whirlwind Leg]
" that aren't that high up in the air. "
--- Explain what you mean by high up in the air?

[C Rank] :: [Complex] Denjin Hadouken [ Lightning Blade Surge Fist]
--- Explain the dodging and the arm charging to me, I'm a little confused?
--- Also at C Rank you can't stun people for two post.

[C Rank] :: [Complex] Shinryuken [ Divine Dragon Fist]
--- B Ranked technique.

[C Rank] :: [Complex] Shoryu Reppa [ Rising Dragon Destroyer]
--- A Ranked Technique

[C Rank] :: [Simple] Shippu Jinraikyaku [ Hurricane Thunderclap Leg ]
--- SS Rank if the whole combo gets completed.
--- A or S, if the Combo can be stopped/dodged.


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Janet23
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Please go back and read what I've written/asked of you. Also we will currently be going over your Akuma/Street Fighter style as well.

These are the opinions and feelings of Both Janet23 and Myself.
Also, if you wish to have custom's and anything else you create to be looked at in a timely manner. Please quote someone.

Metal Trsu
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 8:51 pm


Metal Trsu
• Users are skilled in chaining their Taijutsu Techniques into other Taijutsu Technqiues.
--- Explain that to me?

• Opponents can only block the Ansatsuken's Taijutsu with their bare hands if their Taijutsu and Strength are greater than the user's by [5].
--- I'm on the fence about this, it really seems to strong. So..I'll let you know in the next post ^_^

• They can also block it if they're at the same Rank, but also know the Ansatsuken Fist.
--- I agree with the same rank, but not having to know the technique style.

• The user's Taijutsu Techniques are raised [1] Rank.
--- This cancels out the Blocking proportion by making your techniques higher, which means that at Chunin, only a Kage could block you.
So This one is a No.


● Can only be taught by Professor Swagger's RPCs.
--- Are you the grandmaster of this? I need a good reason as to why you're the only one that knows this style, even out of all the Kage and such.



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Techniques
[Simple] = Requires no chakra
[Complex] = Requires chakra

--- No, they will cost chakra.


[D Rank] :: [Simple] Tatsumaki Senpuukyaku [Tornado Whirlwind Leg]
" that aren't that high up in the air. "
--- Explain what you mean by high up in the air?

[C Rank] :: [Complex] Denjin Hadouken [ Lightning Blade Surge Fist]
--- Explain the dodging and the arm charging to me, I'm a little confused?
--- Also at C Rank you can't stun people for two post.

[C Rank] :: [Complex] Shinryuken [ Divine Dragon Fist]
--- B Ranked technique.

[C Rank] :: [Complex] Shoryu Reppa [ Rising Dragon Destroyer]
--- A Ranked Technique

[C Rank] :: [Simple] Shippu Jinraikyaku [ Hurricane Thunderclap Leg ]
--- SS Rank if the whole combo gets completed.
--- A or S, if the Combo can be stopped/dodged.


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Janet23
Crew Member Assisting Vice Captain


Concerns:

So I need to use up chakra to do an Uppercut?
Narutopedia: It typically does not require chakra, though chakra may be used to enhance its techniques.
You guys are implying that we need to use chakra for basic movements.
I need to use B and A Ranked chakra for an Advanced Uppercut?
Taijustu specialists have too little chakra to be wasting chakra on moves that get boosted to S-Rank. I thought Taijutsu required no chakra unless it was enhanced by chakra.


• While their opponent is stunned, they can quickly chain into another Taijutsu Technique. Sorta like combos.
Ex. Elbow to the nose // while opponent is stunned // Left Punch>Shoryuken


• They can also block it if they have equal or greater Taijutsu points. < I'll change it.

• The user's Taijutsu Techniques are raised [1] Rank.< See above

● Because I made it. How does that girl get Swift Release all to herself? I don't want people using my Jutsu just because it sounds cool. The only person that knew these styles was my RPC's father and he taught them to me before he died. Therefore, I'm the only one in existence [in this RP] that knows these styles.

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- 3ft High

- You basically charge a move that can stun someone. I'll fix it to one post.

- B-Ranked chakra for an Uppercut?

- A-Ranked chakra for an Uppercut?

- SS Rank? For a series of basic hits finished by a Tatsumaki?
PostPosted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 9:10 pm


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Janet23
Crew Member Assisting Vice Captain.


So I need to use up chakra to do an Uppercut?
--- Not at all, but if you're adding effects, such as...
"The target would be lit on fire while flying backwards."
How are you lighting them on Fire without the use of Charka?
---Also we've not made/created a Stamina system for taijutsu, so at the current moment it cost Chakra.


• While their opponent is stunned, they can quickly chain into another Taijutsu Technique. Sorta like combos.
Ex. Elbow to the nose // while opponent is stunned // Left Punch>Shoryuken
---Ok, so you can chain from basic punching and kicking into techniques. I was just making sure that you weren't combo-ing from a A rank to another A rank technique. That's just an example.

● Because I made it. How does that girl get Swift Release all to herself? I don't want people using my Jutsu just because it sounds cool. The only person that knew these styles was my RPC's father and he taught them to me before he died. Therefore, I'm the only one in existence [in this RP] that knows these styles.
--- No one has swift release I'm away of? An if someone does then they need to take it off cause no one has been approved for it.
------- This has been handled, and apparently the person who had it, no longer does.

Just because you create something in ES, doesn't entitle you to already learning/knowing it.

If it's in your profile that's fine with me, I just needed a good reason.


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- 3ft High
---Awesome.

- You basically charge a move that can stun someone. I'll fix it to one post.
--- OK kool.

- B-Ranked chakra for an Uppercut?
--- You're striking more than once according to your description, so multiple hits means it takes more out of the user.

- A-Ranked chakra for an Uppercut?
--- Same thing, you're hitting multiple times, and you are also lighting the opponent on fire somehow...Chakra??

- SS Rank? For a series of basic hits finished by a Tatsumaki?
• Once first hit is delivered, the whole combo must be completed without interruption
---That's why, you're basically saying that after the first hit, no matter what it can't be stopped. That's really overpowered dude. I understand it's basic striking but still, no one has a technique that can't be stopped somehow.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 9:20 pm


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Well you guys need to make a Stamina system for Taijutsu users. :l

I still think B and A Rank is too much.
C Rank for Divine Uppercut 'cause it's just an extended Shoryuken cloaked with Katon I guess.
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It can't be stopped 'cause it ties into the combo thing.
The people of this Art strike fast and at the right time so their opponent can only get hit and not do anything about it when the barrage is started. It does a bunch of basic hits and chains it into a regular Tatsumaki.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 9:36 pm


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Well you guys need to make a Stamina system for Taijutsu users. :l

I still think B and A Rank is too much.
C Rank for Divine Uppercut 'cause it's just an extended Shoryuken cloaked with Katon I guess.
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It can't be stopped 'cause it ties into the combo thing.
The people of this Art strike fast and at the right time so their opponent can only get hit and not do anything about it when the barrage is started. It does a bunch of basic hits and chains it into a regular Tatsumaki.


Honestly, A and B rank are not too much. With the upgrades that the attack is giving a B-ranking makes more sense. Adding both powerful katon and a quicker recovery adds onto that. And the way the flames are used in the attack also adds onto to it being a higher up attack. If the flames were present during one of the punches then C-rank would make sense. However, it is multiple punches engulfed in flames making it harder to sustain.

And having an attack which no one could dodge or affect (even at a Kage level) is way too much. If the character had the ability to dodge the combo, but you were stuck in it that would be more acceptable. An unbreakable combo that once they are in it there is nothing that they can do is too much. Combos have ways to be broken.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 9:50 pm


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Well you guys need to make a Stamina system for Taijutsu users. :l

I still think B and A Rank is too much.
C Rank for Divine Uppercut 'cause it's just an extended Shoryuken cloaked with Katon I guess.
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It can't be stopped 'cause it ties into the combo thing.
The people of this Art strike fast and at the right time so their opponent can only get hit and not do anything about it when the barrage is started. It does a bunch of basic hits and chains it into a regular Tatsumaki.


Honestly, A and B rank are not too much. With the upgrades that the attack is giving a B-ranking makes more sense. Adding both powerful katon and a quicker recovery adds onto that. And the way the flames are used in the attack also adds onto to it being a higher up attack. If the flames were present during one of the punches then C-rank would make sense. However, it is multiple punches engulfed in flames making it harder to sustain.

And having an attack which no one could dodge or affect (even at a Kage level) is way too much. If the character had the ability to dodge the combo, but you were stuck in it that would be more acceptable. An unbreakable combo that once they are in it there is nothing that they can do is too much. Combos have ways to be broken.


With a 175 chakra pool it is.
You're missing the point that's what the Art specializes in: Combos.
Once the user hits you, they then chain it into more attacks.

I could basically say my character does all of this in a few different posts after the first hit was a success without giving this technique a name and it'll be okay.

Middle Kick //
Opponent Gets Stunned //
2 High Kicks in a Row //
Opponent Gets Stunned //
Middle Kick -> Knee //
Opponent Gets Stunned //
Tatsumaki

...and it won't sound as bad to ya'll 'cause it's not a full Technique, but it's the same thing.
You guys are making a big deal out of this.
PostPosted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 9:58 pm


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Well you guys need to make a Stamina system for Taijutsu users. :l

I still think B and A Rank is too much.
C Rank for Divine Uppercut 'cause it's just an extended Shoryuken cloaked with Katon I guess.
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It can't be stopped 'cause it ties into the combo thing.
The people of this Art strike fast and at the right time so their opponent can only get hit and not do anything about it when the barrage is started. It does a bunch of basic hits and chains it into a regular Tatsumaki.


Honestly, A and B rank are not too much. With the upgrades that the attack is giving a B-ranking makes more sense. Adding both powerful katon and a quicker recovery adds onto that. And the way the flames are used in the attack also adds onto to it being a higher up attack. If the flames were present during one of the punches then C-rank would make sense. However, it is multiple punches engulfed in flames making it harder to sustain.

And having an attack which no one could dodge or affect (even at a Kage level) is way too much. If the character had the ability to dodge the combo, but you were stuck in it that would be more acceptable. An unbreakable combo that once they are in it there is nothing that they can do is too much. Combos have ways to be broken.


With a 175 chakra pool it is.
You're missing the point that's what the Art specializes in: Combos.
Once the user hits you, they then chain it into more attacks.

I could basically say my character does all of this in a few different posts after the first hit was a success without giving this technique a name and it'll be okay.

Middle Kick //
Opponent Gets Stunned //
2 High Kicks in a Row //
Opponent Gets Stunned //
Middle Kick -> Knee //
Opponent Gets Stunned //
Tatsumaki

...and it won't sound as bad to ya'll 'cause it's not a full Technique, but it's the same thing.
You guys are making a big deal out of this.


I get what you're saying about the chakra pool, however B or A techniques are hard on anyone. And what you have stated would not be allowed either. Stuns are not allowed in this guild and even if they were the way that attack is presented is hitting a God Modding level because you are taking away the person's chances to get away from you fairly.

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 25, 2013 10:01 pm


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Well you guys need to make a Stamina system for Taijutsu users. :l

I still think B and A Rank is too much.
C Rank for Divine Uppercut 'cause it's just an extended Shoryuken cloaked with Katon I guess.
---------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

It can't be stopped 'cause it ties into the combo thing.
The people of this Art strike fast and at the right time so their opponent can only get hit and not do anything about it when the barrage is started. It does a bunch of basic hits and chains it into a regular Tatsumaki.


Honestly, A and B rank are not too much. With the upgrades that the attack is giving a B-ranking makes more sense. Adding both powerful katon and a quicker recovery adds onto that. And the way the flames are used in the attack also adds onto to it being a higher up attack. If the flames were present during one of the punches then C-rank would make sense. However, it is multiple punches engulfed in flames making it harder to sustain.

And having an attack which no one could dodge or affect (even at a Kage level) is way too much. If the character had the ability to dodge the combo, but you were stuck in it that would be more acceptable. An unbreakable combo that once they are in it there is nothing that they can do is too much. Combos have ways to be broken.


With a 175 chakra pool it is.
You're missing the point that's what the Art specializes in: Combos.
Once the user hits you, they then chain it into more attacks.

I could basically say my character does all of this in a few different posts after the first hit was a success without giving this technique a name and it'll be okay.

Middle Kick //
Opponent Gets Stunned //
2 High Kicks in a Row //
Opponent Gets Stunned //
Middle Kick -> Knee //
Opponent Gets Stunned //
Tatsumaki

...and it won't sound as bad to ya'll 'cause it's not a full Technique, but it's the same thing.
You guys are making a big deal out of this.


I get what you're saying about the chakra pool, however B or A techniques are hard on anyone. And what you have stated would not be allowed either. Stuns are not allowed in this guild and even if they were the way that attack is presented is hitting a God Modding level because you are taking away the person's chances to get away from you fairly.


When I say "Stun" I mean them posting that they got hit or whatever.
Then the user posts that as soon as his last move connected, he does another one.
...but I'll delete that move since you guys are making such a big deal about it.
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