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 Posted: Sat Oct 26, 2013 5:24 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 27, 2013 1:20 pm
Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Flaming Spiritual Pressure (Passive)
Class: Spiritual Pressure
Description: Having such an intimate focus on his fire element, Kuchiro's resurrecíon's flame element becomes apparent in his spiritual pressure, meaning his golden spiritual pressure color, appears to also be engulfed in flames giving it a white tinge. When using a very basic ability such as sonído or cero, the flames appear around the area where spiritual pressure is being focused. These flames however, do not make the spiritual pressure any more powerful than it is, besides giving it the ability to burn things if fully active. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Cero Estrella (Star Cero)
Class: Spiritual Pressure
Description: Kuchiro's ultimate cero coined, "Star Cero", built upon his own cero's power, combined with spiritual energy which is offered by others to Kuchiro to merge with his cero. This energy can be foreign or domestic, meaning Quincy, Shinigami, Fullbring, or any race can over spiritual energy to Kuchiro's cero. The limit of this Star Cero, is only the amount of power offered to Kuchiro's original cero. Due to the massive amount of power and manipulation to harmonize Kuchiro's Star Cero, it may only be cast (1) time per battle.
Note: If spiritual power is offered by (3) individual sources, including Kuchiro's, then this is considered at least a Great-leveled Reiryoku Gathering.
If Spiritual power is offered by (5) individual sources, this cero is considered at least an Immense-leveled Reiryoku Gathering.
If Spiritual power is offered by (10) individual sources, including Kuchiro's, then this is considered at least a Vast-leveled Reiryoku Gathering. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Cero Maestro (Master Cero)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: As titled, "Master Cero", Kuchiro has spent a large amount of time honing his natural cero. Through controlling his own spiritual power at a master level, he has discovered a way to make cero bend trajectory at his will. For example, if he fired a straight cero he could make it bend left to chase after a target that moved. However, this is limited in that it may only be bent (3) times before it dissipates from being too far from its original extension. This technique can be taught to other Arrancar, but takes the place of one of their custom technique slots. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Cero Revés (Reverse Cero)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: This cero is extremely unique. Kuchiro spent time devising an ability which could negate opposing ceros. Instead of releasing the condensed spiritual energy in a beam formation, it is instead reversed. The energy is shot inwards and combines with the user's spiritual pressure, creating a cero-like shield. A cero of equal power would be neutralized by the cero shield. This technique can be taught to other Arrancar, but would take the place of one of their custom technique slots. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Presa Bala (Bullet Barrage)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: In the motion to unleash a single golden bala, Kuchiro will then send it with extreme speed towards a target, and approximately [2] feet from impact, the bullet with burst into approximately 100 bala golden in color. These will be difficult to avoid due to the unexpected appearance, but also do to the number and small size. This technique can be taught to other Arrancar, but would take the place of one of their custom technique slots. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Gran Rey Bala (Grand Royal Bullet)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: A technique that Kuchiro developed, having realized the potential power that the Gran Rey Cero could deliver. Knowing that bala are weaker, but faster in power, Kuchiro began to create large bala. Bala that were on equal level with regular cero. Due to the sheer power of this technique, only a total of (20) Gran Rey Bala could be launched at once at any given time. This technique can be taught to other Arrancar of Espada in power level, but would take the place of one of their custom technique slots. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Regeneración Menor (Minor Regeneration)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: One of the abilities unique to Kuchiro is his ability to regenerate a lost limb or close a wound on his body. This is done back focusing massive spiritual power to the area. Due to the large amount of spiritual pressure used with this, it has a long cool-down time of (15) posts. Additionally, the same area cannot be regenerated more than (2) times per battle. Furthermore, Kuchiro may use this on a comrade, if they lose a limb or suffer a powerful wound. This technique can be taught to other Arrancar, but takes the place of one of their custom technique slots. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Regeneración Major (Major Regeneration)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: This is the advanced version of Regeneración Menor. After having suffered what other-wise would have been fatal wounds, Kuchiro can utilize an entire 1/4 of his spiritual pressure to heal the wound as if it did not exist. This is extremely difficult to do and takes a total of (2) posts of preparation time to do so. Additionally, it disables the usage of Segunda Etapa for (10) posts. Can only be executed (1) time per battle. Furthermore, Kuchiro may use this on a comrade, with only the repercussions of the technique affecting him with no repercussion on the person fully healed. This technique can be taught to other Arrancar of Espada-level power or greater, but takes the place of one of their custom technique slots.
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Posted: Sun Oct 27, 2013 2:08 pm
Okay here are my rulings on your techniques... They are in order so do not worry...
Pending, If you've stated in your Release that flames come out upon releasing your spiritual energy an it was approved there is no need to waste a technique slot on this. If I remember correctly you did state this several times in both your releases.
Pending, I love the concept, but I'm no longer captain of the guild. So I highly recommend asking the current captain his opinion on this. If he gives the green light I will change my Pending -to- Approved.
Pending, Again I like the idea! However exactly however I;m a bit concerned about misuse as it could be used to suddenly bypass things that are well...very hard to bypass. So if you could please give me a refined limitations I will decided whether to Deny or Approve.
Approved, I see no current issues, however if the Guild Captain or another Admin overrules me well, I guess you will have to fix it.
Denied, I apologize but as a bala is much smaller than a cero and faster there are already limitations set upon its functions. Not only that if a bala were to break apart into smaller fragments they would reduce in power drastically. Also overall I think that this technique will only cause issues for other individuals int he guild.
Pending, Please change the number from 20 to 10 please. I just feel that number is a bit more reasonable....
Pending, Please add a post amount that it takes for you and all individuals that learn this technique to hell. Also please remove the part that states using on an ally. Unless your release has healing properties I will not allow this in or out of release.
Approved, I see no issues with this so far. The limitations seem reasonable and just. However please do not let it get out of hand. Had issues with someone that had similar techniques before.
Overall please fix or do anything that I have stated needs to be change. If you have anything to state or protest please again do the same and quote me when you are done.
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Posted: Sun Oct 27, 2013 3:28 pm
Edit: Captain Shinji Inawa, VC Diablo en Musica asked for you to look over my Cero Estrella technique. Also, Diablo, after making your requested editations, I changed Presa Bala and added Ardor Gemelos Sonído. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Ardor Gemelos Sonído (Burning Sound Ceremony)
Class: Spiritual Pressure
Description: Having such a masterful skill in sonído, Kuchiro is able to create powerful replications of himself that when struck, burst into small pillars of flame. He is able to successfully make a total of (10) replications, each only capable of copying a single move made by Kuchiro such as a slash of a blade or a hakuda strike. They dissipate (1) post after creation, unless they are hit, which results in a burst of a fire towards the attacker.
Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Cero Estrella (Star Cero)
Class: Spiritual Pressure
Description: Kuchiro's ultimate cero coined, "Star Cero", built upon his own cero's power, combined with spiritual energy which is offered by others to Kuchiro to merge with his cero. This energy can be foreign or domestic, meaning Quincy, Shinigami, Fullbring, or any race can provide spiritual energy to supplement Kuchiro's cero. The limit of this Star Cero, is only the amount of power offered to Kuchiro's original cero. Due to the massive amount of power and manipulation to harmonize Kuchiro's Star Cero, it may only be cast (1) time per battle.
Note: If spiritual power is offered by (3) individual sources, including Kuchiro's, then this is considered at least a Great-leveled Reiryoku Gathering.
If Spiritual power is offered by (5) individual sources, this cero is considered at least an Immense-leveled Reiryoku Gathering.
If Spiritual power is offered by (10) individual sources, including Kuchiro's, then this is considered at least a Vast-leveled Reiryoku Gathering. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Cero Maestro (Master Cero)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: As titled, "Master Cero", Kuchiro has spent a large amount of time honing his natural cero. Through controlling his own spiritual power at a master level, he has discovered a way to make cero bend trajectory at his will. For example, if he fired a straight cero he could make it bend left to chase after a target that moved. However, this is limited in that it may only be bent (3) times before it dissipates from being too far from its original extension. The bending is only in 45 degree turns. So, it could not bend around say a flat surface such as a barrier.This technique can be taught to other Arrancar, but takes the place of one of their custom technique slots. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Cero Revés (Reverse Cero)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: This cero is extremely unique. Kuchiro spent time devising an ability which could negate opposing ceros. Instead of releasing the condensed spiritual energy in a beam formation, it is instead reversed. The energy is shot inwards and combines with the user's spiritual pressure, creating a cero-like shield. A cero of equal power would be neutralized by the cero shield. This technique can be taught to other Arrancar, but would take the place of one of their custom technique slots. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Presa Bala (Bullet Barrage)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: Taking into account that bala are very small, this technique plays off of one's understand of kinetic force, friction, and velocity. Forming two typical bala, Kuchiro then holds the two bala in place for a moment, powering up their potential energy, the bala will then spin rapidly in place. A second set of bala are then fired behind the first two, propelling the two rapidly spinning bala forward in a powerful drilling motion with double the speed of normal bala fired. This takes (2) posts of preparation.Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Gran Rey Bala (Grand Royal Bullet)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: A technique that Kuchiro developed, having realized the potential power that the Gran Rey Cero could deliver. Knowing that bala are weaker, but faster in power, Kuchiro began to create large bala. Bala that were on equal level with regular cero. Due to the sheer power of this technique, only a total of (10) Gran Rey Bala could be launched at once at any given time. This technique can be taught to other Arrancar of Espada in power level, but would take the place of one of their custom technique slots. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Regeneración Menor (Minor Regeneration)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: One of the abilities unique to Kuchiro is his ability to regenerate a lost limb or close a wound on his body. This is done back focusing massive spiritual power to the area. Due to the large amount of spiritual pressure used with this, it has a long cool-down time of (15) posts. It takes (3) posts to fully heal a lost limb or wound, this does not heal over newly-acquired wounds in the same area. Additionally, the same area cannot be regenerated more than (2) times per battle. This technique can be taught to other Arrancar, but takes the place of one of their custom technique slots. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Regeneración Major (Major Regeneration)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: This is the advanced version of Regeneración Menor. After having suffered what other-wise would have been fatal wounds, Kuchiro can utilize an entire 1/4 of his spiritual pressure to heal the wound as if it did not exist. This is extremely difficult to do and takes a total of (2) posts of preparation time to do so. Additionally, it disables the usage of Segunda Etapa for (10) posts. Can only be executed (1) time per battle. Furthermore, Kuchiro may use this on a comrade, with only the repercussions of the technique affecting him with no repercussion on the person fully healed. This technique can be taught to other Arrancar of Espada-level power or greater, but takes the place of one of their custom technique slots.
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Posted: Sun Oct 27, 2013 4:55 pm
Okay I'll look at your technique.
ApprovedI see no issues with your Cero Estrella however do not let it our hand because someone had that before.
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Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2013 3:13 pm
Also, Diablo, after making your requested editations, I changed Presa Bala and added Ardor Gemelos Sonído. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune (Shinji accepted it)
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Ardor Gemelos Sonído (Burning Sound Ceremony)
Class: Spiritual Pressure
Description: Having such a masterful skill in sonído, Kuchiro is able to create powerful replications of himself that when struck, burst into small pillars of flame. He is able to successfully make a total of (10) replications, each only capable of copying a single move made by Kuchiro such as a slash of a blade or a hakuda strike. They dissipate (1) post after creation, unless they are hit, which results in a burst of a fire towards the attacker.
Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Cero Estrella (Star Cero)
Class: Spiritual Pressure
Description: Kuchiro's ultimate cero coined, "Star Cero", built upon his own cero's power, combined with spiritual energy which is offered by others to Kuchiro to merge with his cero. This energy can be foreign or domestic, meaning Quincy, Shinigami, Fullbring, or any race can provide spiritual energy to supplement Kuchiro's cero. The limit of this Star Cero, is only the amount of power offered to Kuchiro's original cero. Due to the massive amount of power and manipulation to harmonize Kuchiro's Star Cero, it may only be cast (1) time per battle.
Note: If spiritual power is offered by (3) individual sources, including Kuchiro's, then this is considered at least a Great-leveled Reiryoku Gathering.
If Spiritual power is offered by (5) individual sources, this cero is considered at least an Immense-leveled Reiryoku Gathering.
If Spiritual power is offered by (10) individual sources, including Kuchiro's, then this is considered at least a Vast-leveled Reiryoku Gathering. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Cero Maestro (Master Cero)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: As titled, "Master Cero", Kuchiro has spent a large amount of time honing his natural cero. Through controlling his own spiritual power at a master level, he has discovered a way to make cero bend trajectory at his will. For example, if he fired a straight cero he could make it bend left to chase after a target that moved. However, this is limited in that it may only be bent (3) times before it dissipates from being too far from its original extension. The bending is only in 45 degree turns. So, it could not bend around say a flat surface such as a barrier.This technique can be taught to other Arrancar, but takes the place of one of their custom technique slots. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Cero Revés (Reverse Cero)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: This cero is extremely unique. Kuchiro spent time devising an ability which could negate opposing ceros. Instead of releasing the condensed spiritual energy in a beam formation, it is instead reversed. The energy is shot inwards and combines with the user's spiritual pressure, creating a cero-like shield. A cero of equal power would be neutralized by the cero shield. This technique can be taught to other Arrancar, but would take the place of one of their custom technique slots. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Presa Bala (Bullet Barrage)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: Taking into account that bala are very small, this technique plays off of one's understand of kinetic force, friction, and velocity. Forming two typical bala, Kuchiro then holds the two bala in place for a moment, powering up their potential energy, the bala will then spin rapidly in place. A second set of bala are then fired behind the first two, propelling the two rapidly spinning bala forward in a powerful drilling motion with double the speed of normal bala fired. This takes (2) posts of preparation.Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Gran Rey Bala (Grand Royal Bullet)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: A technique that Kuchiro developed, having realized the potential power that the Gran Rey Cero could deliver. Knowing that bala are weaker, but faster in power, Kuchiro began to create large bala. Bala that were on equal level with regular cero. Due to the sheer power of this technique, only a total of (10) Gran Rey Bala could be launched at once at any given time. This technique can be taught to other Arrancar of Espada in power level, but would take the place of one of their custom technique slots. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Regeneración Menor (Minor Regeneration)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: One of the abilities unique to Kuchiro is his ability to regenerate a lost limb or close a wound on his body. This is done back focusing massive spiritual power to the area. Due to the large amount of spiritual pressure used with this, it has a long cool-down time of (15) posts. It takes (3) posts to fully heal a lost limb or wound, this does not heal over newly-acquired wounds in the same area. Additionally, the same area cannot be regenerated more than (2) times per battle. This technique can be taught to other Arrancar, but takes the place of one of their custom technique slots. Character: Kuchiro Resuvius Mistalune
Race: Arrancar
Rank: Tercera
Technique Name: Regeneración Major (Major Regeneration)
Class: Spiritual Energy
Description: This is the advanced version of Regeneración Menor. After having suffered what other-wise would have been fatal wounds, Kuchiro can utilize an entire 1/4 of his spiritual pressure to heal the wound as if it did not exist. This is extremely difficult to do and takes a total of (2) posts of preparation time to do so. Additionally, it disables the usage of Segunda Etapa for (10) posts. Can only be executed (1) time per battle. Furthermore, Kuchiro may use this on a comrade, with only the repercussions of the technique affecting him with no repercussion on the person fully healed. This technique can be taught to other Arrancar of Espada-level power or greater, but takes the place of one of their custom technique slots.
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Posted: Sat Nov 02, 2013 4:20 pm
*high fives*
All Approved ( O w O)
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Posted: Wed Nov 27, 2013 8:07 pm
Character: Serah Marentette
Race:Quincy
Rank: Successor
Technique Name: beast's Strenght
Class: Reishi
Description: Much like the Ransōtengai (Heavenly Wild Puppet Suit)
Serah uses strings of reishi, but not to control her body. She pumps more Reishi into the strings, granting her increase strength. Capable of crushing stones and when pissed even cracking diamonds.
Character: Serah Marentette
Race:Quincy
Rank: Successor
Technique Name: beast's skin
Class: Reishi
Description: Using Reishi strings through out her skin, Serah is able to reduce damage from close combat attacks. Instead of cutting her in half the attack would cut half an inch. With her Immense spiritual pressure she can even reduce wounds to a centimeter of depth.
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2013 1:50 am
1. The rock part I'm fine with, the crack diamond is a bit much. Strength increasing is something that has been an issue, please describe in more detail just how much, post limit, cool down, and etc. Also you have the Blue Art. variation that increase your offensive capabilities Denied
2. Denied - you have Blut Vein for that reason which increases defensive capabilities as Quincy had to create a way to counter act shinigami naturally high durability.
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2013 2:09 am
Diablo en Musica 92
1. The rock part I'm fine with, the crack diamond is a bit much. Strength increasing is something that has been an issue, please describe in more detail just how much, post limit, cool down, and etc. Also you have the Blue Art. variation that increase your offensive capabilities Denied
2. Denied - you have Blut Vein for that reason which increases defensive capabilities as Quincy had to create a way to counter act shinigami naturally high durability.Oh, I had no idea either of them even existed for they are not posted, last time I had checked. I will have to look them up on the bleach Wiki. My mistake.
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2013 2:11 am
No need to be sorry...I should have mentioned something about that sooner ( ; v ; ) so partly (mostly) my fault.
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2013 2:14 am
Diablo en Musica 92 No need to be sorry...I should have mentioned something about that sooner ( ; v ; ) so partly (mostly) my fault. LOL, no it's fine. I will just crush you with Blut Arterie and call it good. If need be I got Blut Vene to protect me.
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Posted: Fri Nov 29, 2013 2:21 am
You can try, but just remember dat we go by RP skills and etc. ( O w o) *begins to twerk* anyway need so sleep, it is 4:30am here lol XD
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