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EDIT 08/07/2012 I made my English less derp.

I'm a Beach Babe ;D
Thanks for the TH DD.

Soquili Name: Addica ADDICTION!! 
Temper: Vibrant
Your Beauty Wins Story:
((Keep in mind pretty much any time i hear the word beach i can’t help but think of the movie lost boys. Crazy I know but . . meh))

NOTE WRITTEN ON MY IPHONE. 

Addica sighed as she looked at her mother and father walking in front of her while her sister walked broodingly beside her. They were on their annual family vacation or . . .at least on their way to being on their annual family vacation. Luckily it was a new place this year, not like the lake that they had been going to since she was a foal. Honestly it was getting really old at this point. This new place was some place called “the beach" not just a beach mind you but rather "the beach". Of course it was near the ocean and apparently a lot of young mares and stallions her age went there for the summers. This admittedly sounded fairly fun because perhaps there would be some cute stallions there as well.  lord knows there wasn’t any where she was from.  Only thing is she wished it wasn’t so far away, it seemed like they had been walking forever which normally wouldn’t have been so bad but her ultra long pink, blue, and lavender stick straight mane was dragging on the ground and collecting twigs and brambles. 
“Are we there yet.” Addica grumbled interrupting her parents as she pulled to get her mane lut of a bush.  Her parents were reminiscing  about their days of visiting the beach when they were teens.
“Almost.” Her father said then went back to telling some story or another  that addica decided wasn’t worth listening to.*
An hour or two later after nearly five days of travel time from the plains they came to it. "The beach", as they stood on a ridge overlooking it all. It was really pretty and there was an awful lot of soquili her age to play-ummm hangout with she corrected herself. 
“Well what are you waiting for? Go ahead!” her mother said giving her and her sister a nudge with her pink muzzle. 
With a little leap addica galloped down the slope to the soft sand. He sister went her own direction. 

Back at the family pond Addica had just known all the soquili in her area her whole life, Same with the soquili at the lake. Her parents knew there parents and so on so there was no making friends it was just being friends. 
Now however she would actually have to try and make her own friends.  Not knowing thing one about this she trotted right on up to a large group of rather pretty stallions and mares that she thought looked like they were having fun. 
“HI” she said rather cheerfully. 
The group turned and looked at her standing just outside of their circle in unison almost. Suddenly Addica didn’t at all feel like being looked at, well at least not in the way they were all looking at her. 
“All I said was hi.” She said quietly thinking maybe they had misheard her and thought she had insulted them. 
Then a mare with rather pretty short bright yellow hair chuckled and replied rather haughtily “And all I’m saying is who groomed you? ” The mare then laughed some more. She was soon joined by most of the group laughing at her.  “is your two legger blind?”
Addica looked down at herself. She was a mess. Her ultra long mane which in the clear waters of her pond back home was not a problem was now a tangle of sticks leaves and mud, and the rest of her wasn’t in much better condition.  Truth be told she had never been actually groomed because her family had never been around two legers well at least not any who would groom her.  She suddenly wished she could shrink so she settled for backing away instead as they just kept right on laughing. She was so distracted her didn’t see the hooks that the humans nearby used for fishing and backed right into them. They pierced her delicate fins and flesh. 
The group laughed harder and trotted away from her.  She tried to untangle herself but alas it was no use the hooks themselves didn’t hurt much but when she tried to pull against them they certainly did. 
“You know there is an easier way to do that?” said a male voice carefully she glanced up to see a stallion a bit older than she was looking down at her. 
“Do what?” she asked afraid he was there to laugh at her too. 
“ Piercings. “He said then began to bite the fishing lines with his teeth so she could get out.  It was then she noticed that he had little bits of metal stuck in him as well. 
“Soquili do this on purpose?” she said a little shocked as she began to walk very carefully away from the hooks. 
“Well not all Soquili just the cool ones like me, and definitely not like those jerks you tried to talk to. That was rough I kinda saw the whole thing. ” He replied rather confidently. “Come on fallow me. You can call me royal” He said then started to walk away.
Addica fallowed him as she really didn’t have any other choice “ Royal? That’s an unusual name”
“Yea my name is Roy but ive been known to be called a Royal pain soo royal just kind of stuck as a pretty good nickname.” He replied 
“Well its nice to meet you royal im Addica but what about these hooks?” she said a little worried as she continued to get her hair caught in things.
“ I could pull them out myself if you want but my two legger is much better at it.” He replied as he looked back at her “and im guessing she will be able to do something about your hair as well it seems to be causing you a lot of problems with its length.”
“My hair?” she replied a little worried. “I can’t cut it my mother would never forgive me.”
“Well that puts a damper on things but my human is smart Im sure she will think of something.” He said with a smile. 
Eventually they came to a waterfall and beneath it was a human wading about in the water collecting rocks. Royal whinnied and nodded toward Addica. The human came up and very slowly approached her with her hand out. 
“it’s all good. Just let her pet you.” Royal said 
Addica looked at the human cautiously but had no reason not to trust royals advice so she pressed her nose into the humans hand gently. The petting actually felt rather good.
Eventually after they were comfortable with one another  the human coaxed addica into the water and began to wash her with scented soap and slowly remove the hooks. Eventually all the tangles were out and they reached an understanding despite the language barrier that Addica’s hair was not to be cut. 
“Your hair is so bright.” Royal notted with a large smile. “your actually really pretty when your clean.-I mean not to say you aren’t pretty when you aren’t but-i-i'll just stop now . .heh“
Addica just smiled a looked down at her hooves  
For a long while royal and the human just stood looking at addicas lengthily stick straight hair.  First the human attempted braids but royal stopped her, then they tried a bun but that looked ridiculous as well.  Suddenly  a cockatoo squawked in a tree  and the human took off into her hut. Soon she came out with a comb a torch and a large chunk of beeswax.  Then indicated to Addica to lay down. Royal was tad puzzled but understood what was happening in a way. 
Carefully the human melted the wax and combed Addica’s hair upward like the feathers on the cockatoos head. This also revealed her intricate neck markings. 
“its gonna be awesome! Trust me.” He replied. 
About two hours of styling later Addica finally went to see her refection. Her hair was amazing! She turned this was and that. 
“I do love it!” she exclaimed and hugged the human. 
after a momet or two more of inspection she decided she already had the holes .  .why not at  least ask about it.
“ you said only cool soquili have priceings right?” she asked royal 
“yea?” he replied 
“Well am I cool enough now  to have any?” she asked shyly. 
Royal just smiled and grabbed the case of metal pieces to give them to the human.  Before long addica couldn’t help but stare at herself and marvel at how much she had changed in a few hours.
“you look Amazeing! Come on lets go back to the beach.” He said.
Addica looked nervous. 
“Don’t worry about them Addica. I don’t want you to miss the dancing because of a bunch of jerks.” He added.
“are you saying you would like to dance with me?” she asked with coy smile
Royal smiled roguishly “maybe I am you’ll have to come to the beach to find out.” Then bolted off down the trail. 
She raced after him for once her hair not tripping her up it felt really great. Eventually she caught up and they got to the beach and saw that the dancing hadn’t started yet everyone was just swimming including the group that had hurt addics feelings earlier. The males were splashing about and the female were trying not to get their elegantly styled manes wet. Almost instantly a plan was formed in her mind. She shared this plan with royal who happily agreed to help. 
Royal went out into the water toward the group and began to tell them that they shouldn’t stray past the reef because of a certain huge fish that could eat them. The group laughed at his story.
“NO its true!” he said “You can tell its coming because of its huge brightly colored dorsal fin.”
The mare with the short yellow hair laughed and looked to her mate. Who was a rather  large stallion.
“You aren’t afraid of this reef monster are you?” she asked cuddling up next to him.
“Pish hell no, and even it were real I bet I could kick its butt!” he replied confidently. 
“Then prove it.” Royal said
“I will!” the stallion retorted and began to swim rather far out past the reef. 
Meanwhile addica who had snuck off out of sight and slipped into the water some distance away then swam back completely submerged, popped the top of her mowhawk above the water and began to circle the stallion in the dark water. Her hair thanks to the loads of wax looking very much like a very large fin of a very large fish. The stallion began to panic soon the whole group was panicking for him, all except for royal who heroically charged out to save the stallion. It wasn’t long before addica pulled royal under the water as he dramatically flailed about. The stallions used this as a distraction and fled toward the group. Adica chased him with her mowhak above the water toward the group.
“TAKE HER! IM TOO PRETTY TO DIE!!” the stallion shouted pushing his mate into the water as he charged past her toward the shore.  
Addica finally ran out of breath and surfaced along with royal and the two began to laugh hysterically. slowly the group began to figure out they had been pranked and in the mean time drenched. Defeated the group left the water and went back to their humans to be re groomed.  needless to say they were a lot nicer after that incident.
Addica and royal however After sharing a surprise kiss went to the beach themselves and danced the night away. this is also where royal gave her the nickname addiction after he decided he couldn't stop kissing her.




*she’s a teenager cant you tell?

Physical Description in writing:
Any/All Reference Pictures/Sketches:
Mowhawk general reference for style and yes i like the front to come out rather far. 
Mohawk bangs reference yep just the bangs from this one
Note on mohawk: The pink and blue i used are the shade i want the purple however should be more lavender. it should also be rather huge not so much fluffy but definitely tall.
see the way her hair is syled under the mowhawk? the little swirls and jazz? yea i would like those as markings down the side of her neck. matching colors though please
The stuff on her legs is supposed to be pink and blue tyedye. Not like spray paint . . . I always said im not an artist.
all the little black dots are piercings (they can be silver or pink or blue or even lavender they can all match or be diffirent) I would like her to bee smiling and if at all possible I would like the speckles on her back to become little pink and blue scales.

Anything else: CC any items you think would look good. ummm shes supposed to look friendly but . . .ummm  . ..yea. i want the snake eyes and the large grin but just friendlier.