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Puppet on a String Theory Crew
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 Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 2:24 pm
Sure thing. StudioOverall, this looks pretty nice. The colours are pretty well balanced, and it has an easily identifiable theme for sure. Out of everything I see on there, I can only notice two things that bother me.
The first thing that bothers me is the colour of the Chairo Cache Shades. They stray from the basic black/white colour scheme that you have going, although they look good on the avatar themselves, I find that they are doing more harm than good. Secondly, is the [I'm not sure what item it is] thing that trails behind your avatar's back. It sort of is unnecessary and makes the avatar a little more random than it needs to be. It just looks like something that was placed there because it could be.
All in all, the avatar looks nearly complete. Like I said, the colour scheme is great and the theme is great. If you fix the trailing thing, then the flow of the avatar will be just fine, and if you change the shades, the colour scheme will be improved, as well.
Overall, I rate it a 9/1O
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 2:49 pm
may i have classical and grunge, if you would?
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 2:50 pm
iiTetshinji-Kun Sure thing.StudioOverall, this looks pretty nice. The colours are pretty well balanced, and it has an easily identifiable theme for sure. Out of everything I see on there, I can only notice two things that bother me.
The first thing that bothers me is the colour of the Chairo Cache Shades. They stray from the basic black/white colour scheme that you have going, although they look good on the avatar themselves, I find that they are doing more harm than good. Secondly, is the [I'm not sure what item it is] thing that trails behind your avatar's back. It sort of is unnecessary and makes the avatar a little more random than it needs to be. It just looks like something that was placed there because it could be.
All in all, the avatar looks nearly complete. Like I said, the colour scheme is great and the theme is great. If you fix the trailing thing, then the flow of the avatar will be just fine, and if you change the shades, the colour scheme will be improved, as well.
Overall, I rate it a 9/1O Like this dude?
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 2:59 pm
Yeah, I think that looks better. Do you agree??? The flow isn't really as wacky, now. And now the colour scheme has got full focus on the black and white without the distraction of the olive green that was in the Cache Shades.
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Puppet on a String Theory Crew
Philosophizing Bibliophile
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 3:04 pm
iiTetshinji-Kun Yeah, I think that looks better. Do you agree??? The flow isn't really as wacky, now. And now the colour scheme has got full focus on the black and white without the distraction of the olive green that was in the Cache Shades. Yeah i have to agree with that, and the item that you didn't know was called Noire Chevalier i got as a b-day present from my friend.
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 3:21 pm
Hey! I’m talking! cat_scream
for the questions...hmm...let's see...
1. Who is winning the game? (it's not Othello, kefkadragon said it was something else, but i can't remember off the top of my head)
2. If her opponent a regular one of hers?
3. How old is she?
4. How old is her opponent?
5-7. What are 3 possible nicknames for her, based on the previous questions?
Ok, I’m done. Go back to your babble
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Puppet on a String Theory Crew
Philosophizing Bibliophile
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 3:42 pm
And to think after all my time on TekTek, I've never seen it.
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 3:50 pm
Yeah, I know that problem with the hair and tried to look for a proper color when I first got it, but unfortunately the shades are very limited in the salon. By the by, what do you mean by the inverted color scheme? I've never heard that phrase before.
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Puppet on a String Theory Crew
Philosophizing Bibliophile
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 3:54 pm
Alright, sure. Here it goes again.
1.] "Who is winning the game?"
1.] -The female character is winning the game. She uses wits and brains while her opponent is constantly getting crushed in the battle of willpower. On the contrary, though, her opponent beats her in whatever task requires the sheer force opposed to the sheer brainpower.
2.] "Is her opponent a regular one of hers?"
2.] -You could say that he is. He constantly challenges her, frustrated by his lack of ability to best her in the game. Yet he tries again and again, he has yet to learn that it is not force that wins the game, but brains.
3.] "How old is she?"
3.] -Despite her seemingly skilled abilities, the female character is but the age of seventeen. Growing up, she was always more brain than brawn, and her prowess in games of brainpower proves it.
4.] "How old is her opponent?"
4.] -Her opponent is but an old age. He prefers to think of himself as young at heart, and old in age. Although he appears as the old bugger, he is always up for challenges and anything involving strength. Yet, when he loses, he tries and tries until he wins.
5-7.] "What are three possible nicknames for her, based on the previous questions?"
5-7.] -One could be "Chi" in origin from "Chieko" which translates to "wise child". A second could possibly be "Tomi" in origin from "Hitomi" which translates to "pupil [by sight]". And lastly, a third could be "Nami" in origin from "Izanami" translating to "female who invites"
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 3:56 pm
Throughout the avatar you have the white/brown/yellow majority and green lesser [and the stripes on the pants are of that essence], while on the hat it uses a green majority and brown lesser. Ergo the "inverse" colour scheme.
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Puppet on a String Theory Crew
Philosophizing Bibliophile
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 3:58 pm
Btw, I changed the hair color in an attempt to match the cream color on the pants and gloves. I hope it doesn't class too much. razz
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 4:02 pm
iiTetshinji-Kun And to think after all my time on TekTek, I've never seen it. Cause it was from the Recent RIG
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Puppet on a String Theory Crew
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 4:06 pm
It works with the scheme better, but it sort of blends in with the face, to be honest. XD
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 4:07 pm
Oh. That would make sense, wouldn't it???
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Puppet on a String Theory Crew
Philosophizing Bibliophile
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Posted: Fri Jun 22, 2012 4:09 pm
iiTetshinji-Kun It works with the scheme better, but it sort of blends in with the face, to be honest. XD Ach, well you can't win all of em I guess. I noticed that as well, but then again maybe she's just a toe-head xD
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