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 Posted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 8:42 pm
~My Mind~
I opened the window
The screen crashed in
This was my fury
accompanied by sins
We've waited for days
and painstaking months
For a thought to be shared
Just once
Sitting on my window,
like a cat
Everything darkened
Almost pitch black
Demons,
you may say stand over me
And where I am?
I do not know.
Their faces,
they will not show.
My thoughts surround me,
taking off with the wind
Everyone listening,
laughing me in.
I'm stuck here,
unwanted with clouds crashing down.
We'd ask heaven to help us,
but we're to proud.
Insects control my now dead mangled corpse.
I guess I must settle for this hell on earth.
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 8:36 pm
~The Different~
A little pink gown
She wears it well
Her make up smeared
Now shes in hell
Everyone laughs,
and she just sighed
Everybody laughed for the last time
Her red and pink gown speaks for itself
Next time you laugh,
run for your health.
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 9:24 pm
~I've waited this long~
If I'm not around,
Choke on your words
'Cause the next time I hear 'Ari'
I'll give more then the bird
I'm sick of being the a** of the joke
I keep myself wrapped tight in my little cloak
Hidden, locked away from the word
Just waiting and waiting, til the joke in unfurled,
figured out, I'm stressing myself out
wondering how this place even exists
Trying to find the exit
Depression,
excuse me sir you have no right towards discretion
You pissing me off,
You think your so smart,
Yet common sense to you,
Its a freaking work of art
Its this new thing, but its been around since you were born
Its a masterpiece you'll never analyze,
you can study but you won't master it
The pits,
A place where you die
as you can see sir,
I wont even cry
s**t happens,
and thats what you are,
and every night I pray you get kissed by a car
See, I can spread the love,
just in a way where it always sheds blood.
Seriously, to see you in misery
Pull you away from your ignornant bliss
Kick you so hard that its blood that you piss
I hate you and I hope you know
You'll always be lame,
not the star of the show
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 9:39 pm
Hello I just wanted to say you have written fine pieces of work here and to keep it up. I look forward to reading all your fine pieces of art.
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 9:42 pm
X_Dylan_Kun_X Hello I just wanted to say you have written fine pieces of work here and to keep it up. I look forward to reading all your fine pieces of art.
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 9:45 pm
Not many people know a fine piece of work when they see it. Society has made many ignorant. Here however, we are admirers of a lost art that many have forgotten. I really look forward to more works from you.
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 9:50 pm
X_Dylan_Kun_X Not many people know a fine piece of work when they see it. Society has made many ignorant. Here however, we are admirers of a lost art that many have forgotten. I really look forward to more works from you. I write almost every second of the day..you wont have to wait to long XD I find inspiration everywhere
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 9:54 pm
The same with me. I'm so busy with the novel I'm writing I hardly pay attention in class nowadays. My English teacher yells at me and says I never write anything. When I finish my novel I plan on shoving it in his face x3
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 10:01 pm
X_Dylan_Kun_X The same with me. I'm so busy with the novel I'm writing I hardly pay attention in class nowadays. My English teacher yells at me and says I never write anything. When I finish my novel I plan on shoving it in his face x3 When you finish it I'd like to read it biggrin But I have the same school problems..to me my art/site modeling(its one of those 'getting a portfolio together' things)/ and writing are more important..i homeschool so its usually my mom yelling at me XD
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 10:03 pm
Well I actually have the intro to the novel up in the Other Writings subforum if you'd like to check it out. The rest of the book is in a journal. None of it is typed yet besides the introduction.
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Posted: Wed Apr 11, 2012 10:04 pm
X_Dylan_Kun_X Well I actually have the intro to the novel up in the Other Writings subforum if you'd like to check it out. The rest of the book is in a journal. None of it is typed yet besides the introduction. I will be sure to check it out sometime smile
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2012 4:42 am
I heart this thread! I am fond of poems too.
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2012 5:59 am
~Evil Girl~
Flipping them over
The sound on the table
You're trying, you're trying your best
Not press your luck, put your skills to the test
You're wanting to screw someone over
Read out their name, dig their grave in the clovers
s**t happens, and it happened with you
You could have died last,
but I started with you.
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2012 6:02 am
Nui Kyrisa I heart this thread! I am fond of poems too. Thank you emotion_kirakira
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Posted: Thu Apr 12, 2012 6:20 am
~30 day challenge, day 12 (in advance)~
Dear brother,
You're still here, alive?
Run for the covers!
You've taken attention,
You've stolen my life,
and even weekend I see you,
I hope you choke on your pride.
You're an ignorant twit that no one can stand.
You a priss that tried to
'take problems in your own hands'
I can't stand you,
I hate you,
Fear for your nuts,
you might wake up and wonder
'where are my guys'
They're out on the floor
Its where they belong,
You didn't have any anyway,
so how am I wrong?
Why don't you blow up your girlfriend,
until you find a real friend.
Oh did I spit some poison?
Be real then.
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