mori-zae
I WAS about to approve you until I noticed a couple of things:
1. Black armor that is impervious to many things: I know you said its still spreading/growing and stuff, but to what extent? How far has it spread at the point he's entering the academy? What kind of things is it impervious to? Water? Bullets? Sharp pointy things?
2. The stats: in truth I'm not very comfortable with the part about him being able to ALWAYS tell liars apart. How does he do this exactly? I know an increased heart rate is probably one of them, but then running increases your heart rate as well, also hot weather, and excitement, etc. But anyway bottomline is, how? And also, the ALWAYS part kinda gets to me... - v-
I like how you made his personality so detailed though! Fun read yes * u*b
@1
I probably should have specified that it's mostly just impervious to sharp things. And when I do the concept art, it'll make more sense. It's only growing in patches on his right arm/chest area while he's a rookie. In the end it's only going to cover about half his chest/part of his arm, so it's not as if it'll cover him entirely. And maybe part of his jaw. This has more to do with what I want him to look like. Haha.
@2
I guess I didn't really think very deeply into that part. xD;
I'm going to say increased heart rate/escalation of nerves? If that makes sense. So he can't 'always' tell, it just sounds cool when you write it like that.
emotion_awesome I should probably fix that.
Edit:
Okay. It's fixed. Haha.
