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 Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 3:01 pm
Alright. Then please just direct me where to post it.
All the links get confusing.
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Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 6:40 pm
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Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 7:21 pm
Intibulous I just need pictures for it, emotion_donotwant Here are two pictures that i found while looking for mine, do you like anyone of these? One Two
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Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2011 9:34 pm
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Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 6:47 pm
Spreader of Despair Intibulous I just need pictures for it, emotion_donotwant Here are two pictures that i found while looking for mine, do you like anyone of these? One Two
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Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 9:02 pm
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@Instibulous: While the power of adapting and copying may have it's perks, it's something that holds no true originality to it and it goes against the hard work people put into their profiles only for it to simply be copied or adapted to instead of being countered in a skillful or a strategic manner. I think you should touch up on your arrancar in the ability and attack department. Overall, this is all.
@Reaper Elyse:
- Cambiar Equivilencia (Equivalent Exchange)- While the idea may seem interesting in some ways, we're playing with life force here. Stealing one's life force or cutting a portions of a person's lifespan without plausible means would be overdoing it a bit.
- Physiological Expert- I wouldn't say by a mere touch or simply sight that she can take in all this information. I would say that upon battle experience with the said person that she would be able to possess such knowledge of the said opponent, but not on mere touch or sight.
- Submergence- I would say she can pass through objects that have no reshi, but not objects with reshi. Passing through those would simply mean she cannot be harmed in any physical manner.
- Empath- This ability would not pass. Reading falsehoods and truths about a person through sensing their emotions to this extent breeds room for metaplaying.
My last thing is something that may have use to you when creating your arrancar. Try not to stray to far away from the theme of your zanpakuto when creating abilities and attacks, since your arrancar does literally become the zanpakuto once they release their sword. It seems like you're straying a few miles away with some abilities. Overall, you do have an interesting character by the way and I am interested in seeing you with this position.
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Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2011 11:18 pm
- Cambiar Equivilencia (Equivalent Exchange)- Hmm I can understand why she should be barred from direct influence into life forces and i guess I'll withdraw from that aspect of the ability and run along a reishi centered version. Though if possible to retain the life force focus because I do wish this ability to not only work on sentient life per say but the environment as well. Meaning when fighting in a more healthy environment she can benefit. though i may need to think of the wording on how to confine it in the way you state it needs to be.
- Physiological Expert- I can live with it being a more progressive knowledge. rather than automatic or anything like that. such as to say the longer she fights you the clear it becomes what afflictions one might have and so on and so forth. Though I do wish for some base assessment skills with this such as at least on visual being able to guess plausible heights and weight, not absolutely clear since some people have differing weights fro the obvious and this would remain hidden from her due to that irregularity (until interacting with said irregularity to notice).Though as thing are in this guild that sort of thing wouldn't happen too much.
- Submergence- Well I'd had the same idea, but the note of her submerging slightly into things with reishi is on the principle idea that she's a counter defensive fighter along with her assassination edge. This ability allows her to only reach three inches (which I'm cool with lowering) length into solid reiatsu holding objects, meaning even high powered shields can be at least chipped by this ability but not over come. Also the definition is to say that no defined object of a reishi signature she can pass trough because technically all of Hueco mundo and Soul Society is made of reiatsu. It doesn't exactly belong to any one entity it's just the compositions of their world so reiatsu just floating about or with no definite base of sentient life behind it would be free game for her phasing in my definition.
Other wise yeah just about anyone who attacks her can touch her normally and all their attacks since it's spawning from them a living breathing and thinking being.
- Empath- The empath thing...Well it can just be based on raw emotions and grant them some insights into probable action so it's just another form of sensory perception that may allow her to navigate and react better under something of that definition when excluding the possibility of being able to tell lies from truths.
so I don't mind at all nix the sides of it that boarder or just out right tip over metaplay. It's just another sensory perception so I'll cut it back to basics.
Thanks I was really trying to get a feel for something specifically centered around stealth/assassination and health. Since Euphoria being her theme here it kinda plays into a few aspects of all of those. I thought she could create something of a diverse marriage between the them and her being one of the few Arrancar that actually had an ability to heal in some way of coarse baring some negative effect to procure the positive, but none the less healing. So I'd had a bit of a checkered field to play with in bringing these together and what elemental resemblance she'd have since B-lining for water was too obvious i'd just wanted something that gave the presence of an ocean (which in her case would be the area her power fills) or aquatic theme to her but it's mostly just masses of energy moving in waves or clouds that seem like mist or create illusions of waves and create hysterical side effects that draw attention from her actions.
In that I thought my aim was pretty close to hitting well enough on all of these and not having it seem totally random though I do feel that in her second form it does seem to stray a bit as it becomes more offensive than aligned with her more stealthy/ medical hallucinogenic motif that's pretty much my take on the leviathans power as a creature of the "void" or "primordial beginnings" in the sea. Which I might add is my choice as something of a joke towards the belief of something baser than what she is or already worships in the King of Hueco Mundo. This is just so you know the process i'm working on here. ( yeah some of her is meant to be something of an obscure satire) As for how her form complies to the former state as a lower hallow it's only has one accessory that's not exactly matching with the original in the second form but it's more like a device I'm using to carry over the whole idea that she can spread her power like an ocean.
Any ways I'll be just working those out so you can browse over it again.
Minerva Antolk [completed revisions]
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Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 8:12 am
Approved
Once you've made the necessary changes, you're cool.
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Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 9:04 am
Minerva AntolkI made the changes and added in a point to mention that in her Resurrecion her spiritual pressure though not growing as vastly as other in over all power it spreads and grants the effect I'd mentioned earlier. It's called "Spiritually Massive".
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Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 3:10 pm
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Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 3:59 pm
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Luther Massacre- Though I would not say he could manipulate water to the fullest extent. I would say he is an expert or master at the water element or using water techniques, however I would not say he could fully manipulate it.
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Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 4:09 pm
Orichisama ApprovedLuther Massacre- Though I would not say he could manipulate water to the fullest extent. I would say he is an expert or master at the water element or using water techniques, however I would not say he could fully manipulate it. He can only do this for the water he create not water found in nature. So he is only able to control the black water he makes for and from his attacks.
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Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 4:22 pm
Sounds good. You're good to go
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Posted: Thu Sep 22, 2011 4:49 pm
His ability to copy/imitate his opponent is really just used to copy the appearance and historic background of his victim/opponent. Like his own gimmick, something that a mime would do. As for adapting, I can see why it can be a problem.. So what I changed was the ability to adapt his opponents zanpakuto's ability in the first resurrection, and edited the segunda resurrection ability. I also added another attack. Is this fine now? Fixed~
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Posted: Fri Sep 23, 2011 12:28 am
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@Intibulous: Almost done. All you have to do is correct these two things.
Espejo doble[Double Mirror]- Reflects any attack and sends it back stronger is a bit cheap.
Lluvia negra[Black Rain]- Cannot restore reiatsu. Only way to regain it is rest after battle. Healing
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