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Thank you for making the small adjustments in the hobbies! I know it seems trivial, but you never know what some people might read into things, so I do find it best to be specific and straight forward in what she’s doing and why.

Brevity and being concise are definitely good, but it is helpful for other players when reading over a journal to have good sense of what interacting with Sircse will be like. That’s why I recommended, and still do, applying her understanding trait to more than cheating on her. What you have is good, but when the majority of the trait talks about cheating, I end up still wondering about how Sircse handles other situations (someone cheats on a test, someone she’s meeting for the first time picks on her, an old friend is ignoring her or even hanging around too much). You don’t need to use specific examples, but an additional sentence or two about how she’ll make the effort to be understanding with everyone would be helpful. Using specific examples is just a tool I find useful, but you can also make general broad statements if that’s what works best for you.

I.E. you could say something like “Rather than hating someone for cheating on her, she tries to figure out why it happened in the first place before she makes any judgements about it. The same goes for just about everyone, whether an old friend or someone she’s meeting for the first time, Sirsce will attempt to understand their actions before forming any solid opinions about them or judging harshly. Good or bad, because of her understanding nature, Sirsce can be very empathetic.”

On attacks:

You are absolutely correct that a super power is an upgraded/enhanced version of the first. My issue is that, to me, the regular attack acts as a defensive ability by obscuring the vision of the target (this is also why I want to know if the target is trapped in the steam, or able to move out of it). Where as the super seems to be more of an offensive ability because of the slow burning. The issue is purely in how the powers are used, which is why I think they need some adjusting so that they are all in line with what type of senshi she is, either by being all defensive moves or all offensive moves or 'other' (like buffs or ally-aiding). I feel they just need more explanation so it's clear what the purpose of the magic is. If your first power is defensive, it should continue to be defensive and simply become stronger/larger/more effective. Does that make sense?

You’re free to get a second opinion though. I just wanted to see if I could explain my thoughts better. We can continue to discuss and work on this if you like! You’re more than welcome to wait to hear the opinions of another stamper when they get back down the list to you.

Have fun, and thank you for waiting!