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 Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 7:44 am
tinymini7 Isis Delacroix Rules for Talents: - I will allow one overall combat talent (Fill out the form and any skills that will go along with it), and one non-combat talent (Things like getting two elements instead of one will be considered non combat as well as any strength/speed boosts and any sort of learning advantages.) ??? One combat one non-combat.
Yea, I saw that after I said it, that's why i edited my post.
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 7:46 am
DGwar tinymini7 DGwar
That's two talents rolled into one, try combining them if you want both aspects, and remember, if you don't have any weakness for a good combative bonus it's likely to be denied.
Are you saying I can combine the two to make one? Do you think the non-combatant is acceptable?
I'm saying you can't have 2 talents.So make it work as one or pick and choose, and no I think both of them as they are would get denied. This isn't my area though, that's just my suggestion and opinion.
Never mind I guess I missed the part where you can have one of each, still, I stand by when I say they need work.
OK, I'll make it more ... descriptive. What about the non-combat one? What do I need to add or take out?
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 7:49 am
tinymini7 OK, I'll make it more ... descriptive. What about the non-combat one? What do I need to add or take out? '
It seems fine, useless, but fine.
The combative one seems ridiculous.
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 7:52 am
DGwar tinymini7 OK, I'll make it more ... descriptive. What about the non-combat one? What do I need to add or take out? '
It seems fine, useless, but fine.
The combative one seems ridiculous. Yeah, it was late, I was half asleep, and I'm not sure if I was high or not.
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 9:14 pm
Mini: denied, not gonna let you have half energy cost cut for elements when ur an elementalist
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Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 6:49 am
Rpc Name:Kira Yami
Rpc Rank:Student
Combative Talent or Non Combative:Combative
Tsukuyomi: The 360 degree Vision
Description:The talent is a rather odd but also a rather handy one when in battle, the user can see 360 degrees around themselves when enemies or weapons that are thrown come in to strike, the vision's range is at 7 ft. in diameter and can spot anything coming from in front, behind, diagonal, left and/or right, above, and even under. With the 360 vision, the user can also react faster than most others of their rank, allowing them to use this in a more strategic manner in order to take down many enemies at once. Even if someone tries to cloak themselves, when they enter the 360 vision's range, they are seen.
Skills:None
Rp Sample:
Kira was walking through the simplistic and calm forest, the critters were about, running and playing while Kira enjoyed a nice moment alone, though, this moment of peace and tranquility would soon end. After awhile of sitting in the quiet and peaceful forest, Kira stood and turned to leave yet stopped as his golden eyes glowed for just a moment, he kept his sight straight forward yet caught two incoming kunai that were thrown at him from his left and right side, he threw them to the ground and kept walking forward. As he kept moving forward in order to head back home, he could hear almost silent footsteps yet didn't know where they were coming from, he stopped his movements and kept his gaze forward, a anthro[just go with it, I don't really know what to call it] chameleon who had cloaked himself crept up behind Kira with a poisoned dagger, he grinned in a sly manner. The chameleon rose the dagger up over Kira's head yet failed to notice one little tidbit of his plan, there was sword sticking through his stomach, the chameleon gasped in pain, clutched the wound with the sword still inside and fell over, Kira grabbed the blade and pulled it out of him with a slight smirk, "foolish chameleon, nothing can escape my sight," he then turned and left, leaving the chameleon to deal with his damaging stomach wound.
Combative Talent or Non Combative: Non-Combative
True Martial Artist
Description:When learning ANY hand to hand or weapon skills of his rank, Kira can learn this in -2 less post than required
Rp Sample:
I....don't really know how to do this scenario, sorry
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Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 4:29 pm
RPC NAME: Raphael Giletti
RPC NAME: Expert
COMBATIVE TALENT OR NON-COMBATIVE TALENT: Combative
TALENT NAME: Evening Terror -- half-transformation of "Night Terror"
DESCRIPTION: Evening Terror is the half-transformation of Night Terror, due to the fact that Night Terror cannot fully be used until Master rank. As such, Evening Terror costs half as much energy per post as Night Terror, and still grants a +3 stat boost that can be divided. However, the Evening Terror form is not as durable, and the special custom ability cannot be used in the Evening Terror form. All attacks, however, in this form, are converged in darkness, and cost ten more energy to use, thus making the energy consumption only a slight bit smaller. Evening Terror, like Night Terror has extra appendages, namely a arrow-shaped tail, two black wings, and a single black horn sticking from the center of Raphael's head. His eyes are silver-white in this form, his skin is blue-ish grey, and all armor and weapons are outlined with a silverite aura. The Evening Terror's stat boosts can be shifted as the user sees fit.
SKILLS:
RP SAMPLE:
''It's not enough." The man said, as he breathed heavily, cursing himself for not having the wings he once did. Life as a Nightmare... he began to dread it. It wasn't what he wanted... but it seemed to force its way into his flesh. ''No tail, no horns, no wings. I feel like I'm only a damn fraction of what I once was. What is the use of this stupid new power if it can't even get me out of some well?" He himself didn't even want to explain how he got dumped in here, it was simply retribution for him acting hostile to the inn-keepers, the foolish cretins that they were. He would soon after give them their just desserts, but that was only if he could even get out of here alive.
''Wings. Tail. Horns. He told me... he told me that the Night Terror, the fabled creature of my "race" had these. But why am I not good enough for them? Why...?"
''And maybe I never will be. But I've come out of worse s**t than this, and I've passed greater obstacles. If I can't be some demon of the night, than I can at least meet what's in-between. That's Evening... isn't it? Or at least, the dawn of night. Yes... I think I'll call you that. Can you help me, here...? Can you?"
The well beginning to crumble as Raphael's form began to shift, he immediately used his new-found flight to escape from the hellish pit. ''Wonderful. Now... where were those inn-keepers?"
^Ignore this talent I decided I don't want it
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Posted: Sun Aug 14, 2011 8:58 pm
Rpc Name: Siegfried Von Groben
Rpc Rank: Journeymen
Combative Talent or Non Combative: Combative
Description: Siegfried was once into the studies of dark magic as a shadowknight, even if he has now turn aside, his dark aura still surrounds to this day. He can even still shoot small green lightning balls out of his hands. He also gains +1 in strength in night time but in sunlight looses -1 in strength
Skills:
Aura of Darkness
Rank: E, Passive
Description: Siegfried can surround himself with a power dark aura, nothing really happens but if people that are light and good will feel sick when seeing the aura. The aura can grow quite huge if Siegfried's anger has been tested.
Lightning Ball
Rank D
Description: Siegfried can shoot small green lightning out of his hands, if his can either shock the person greatly or create shallow wounds within the skin and flesh. This move can also heal Siegfried if need be.
Rp Sample: if need be, I'll do it.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 12:35 am
Rpc Name: Cain von Kairn
Rpc Rank: Master/ Lord of Ernya
Combative Talent or Non Combative: non-combat
Description: Natural Born Leader
Being a seer and the Lord of Ernya, many soldiers would not expect a man of such stature and birth to walk out onto the front lines. However, Cain thinks otherwise. He would much rather be knee deep in mud, blood, and bodies with his fellow soldiers, making him a morale boost among his allies.
+2 speed and +2 strength to all allies around Cain
+1 speed and +1 strength to Cain when he's with allies
All skills cost 1.5x more energy for Cain.
This is a passive talent
Skills: (If any)
Rp Sample: I own this thread, so meh!
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 12:39 am
But I have power, so meh! Cain, you're approved AFTER you go over the waiting talents above yours.
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 12:47 am
Ok:
Demon: accepted
Shane: under review
Hadou: does like, accepted
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 8:48 am
Rpc Name:
Noctis Azio
Rpc Rank:
Master
Combative Talent or Non Combative:
Non-Combative
Talent Name:
You can't hide you demons....
Description:
Noctis,was once a dreadnought or a half demon, he was known as one of the strongest and 2nd hardest shell known. Sin and that demon nature has forever left their mark on his mind and body. Due to Sin's aura he is left with increased strength and speed(+2/2),his dreadnought side gave him abilites he slowly awakens.... But all at a price... Noctis' mind can only take so much, Sin's words and thoughts always creep and force him into insanity attacking anything. Trees,people,animals.... The dreadnought side side effects are that his scent smells of a demon and his anger could set him off at anything.
Skills: (If any)
Rp Sample:
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 10:53 am
Not that I have any jurisdiction in this thread really, but that talent seems way overpowered. You already get a +2/+2 from your faction, and you want another passive +2/+2? And Dreadnaught skills from the way it reads?
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Posted: Mon Aug 15, 2011 11:05 am
DGwar
Not that I have any jurisdiction in this thread really, but that talent seems way overpowered. You already get a +2/+2 from your faction, and you want another passive +2/+2? And Dreadnaught skills from the way it reads?
Well Snapped was his old talent that gave him 2/2 when he activated it but he went insane only bringing it here
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