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PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 2:04 am


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I'll toss in some quick notes regarding world stuffs for you:

- You seemed to note she had wings at birth? Mononoke aren't born, I mean...fetuses can't do magic. xD It would be much more appropriate if she started dabbling with that and getting those traits as a toddler or so, when she began to develop more cognitive skills and such.

- With the children shunning her because of her wings, it wouldn't really make sense in this world. :3 Kids would be more so impressed with a mononoke witch, but if you still want to lean with that, you could have her growing up in a more non-magic area or something, or change that they were shunning her for other things.

- With the royalty thing, duchess would be more appropriate, since it's just sub-royal or something and not too influential, but true royalty are reserved for metaplot character giveaways. xD Sowwies~!

- FYI for the ages (Since oyu mentioned you didn't know them) Entering the makai royal academy comes at age 17, and graduation can taken place anytime within 1-3 years. Usually just one year, but some students may either be prodigies, and some may choose to stay longer for extra learning.

Also @ what ewa said, I actually used to fall asleep in the forest behind my house and often explored it on my own from age 5+ xD I was never afraid, though I am NOW that I know what LURKS in there. D: I guess it's circumstantial!
Hope this helps!


 
PostPosted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 8:18 am


Thanks Omie <3 I'll do some editing after my doctor stuffs O3o

I'm a chicken so I'd always be afraid of wandering woodsy areas u x u;

ATh e a r t

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ATh e a r t

Romantic Lunatic

PostPosted: Sun Sep 18, 2011 2:53 pm


posting here before i forget:

- still need to do Omie's suggestions
- changing her abilities to less healing/fire based to dance based enchantments
- clothing not necessarily exactly like the references given, more freedom
- still like the colors
- I like bells and ribbons x;
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