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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 3:56 am
Deil Grist The Criticizer General Abilities: I'm not sure as there is no such sector in Hachibi's part. Should I pull them out myself? [...] Why do you want to have a bijuu? For my whole character is focused on it. If I didn't have it, I would have a ninjutsu class shinobi and therefore whole different person. Why do you want THIS bijuu? See above There's no part of the bijuu that says "general abilities." You're supposed to read the bijuu and tell me what kind of perks and bonuses it gives.
Also, I asked why you want the bijuu because I want to know your original motives were for getting it. Telling me that not having it will cause your character will change is obvious and not appropriate as a response. Are you completely sure? For the first five Bijuu have them in a bullet form [ - - - -] Anyways, will fix it sometime later today.
Well, you basically know his motives: Besides Protecting his village [I won't insert this, as it's monotone by now], destroying opposing forces [Mainly Akatsuki]
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 6:47 am
iShay-chan Bijuu's Name: Six Tails (Rokubi), Raijuu the Weasel
General Abilities: Specializing in Raiton, which are known as the fastest elemental ninjutsu around, the Rokubi is known for being the fastest Bijuu out of the nine. The Bijuu focuses on using its agility for quick hand-to-hand combat and performing a rapid series of attacks. The Rokubi Jinchuuriki gains benefits such as: -The ability to learn more than the maximum amount of Raiton jutsu -Increased Speed -Up to +30 chakra points at Sannin/Kage level -Increased number of jutsu used per post (depending on stage) -Raiton immunity -Increased strength of Raiton jutsu depending on the weather -Growth of fur that can cause minor electric shocks
I put that one line in bold because, while it's true you get 30 chakra when that stage is active, all bijuu bonuses stack except for the kyuubi's chakra/stamina bonuses. So you actually get 150 total bonus chakra points if you go through all the stages of release. Now, since you have that number, you'll be approved if you can tell me how many total bonus stamina points you get. Btw, I love the RP samples. They're very descriptive, and I don't feel bad giving this to someone who will take the time to be detailed. I don't think I'll have to worry about one-liner "I nuke your face" posts from you. ^v^
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 6:52 am
The Criticizer Deil Grist The Criticizer General Abilities: I'm not sure as there is no such sector in Hachibi's part. Should I pull them out myself? [...] Why do you want to have a bijuu? For my whole character is focused on it. If I didn't have it, I would have a ninjutsu class shinobi and therefore whole different person. Why do you want THIS bijuu? See above There's no part of the bijuu that says "general abilities." You're supposed to read the bijuu and tell me what kind of perks and bonuses it gives.
Also, I asked why you want the bijuu because I want to know your original motives were for getting it. Telling me that not having it will cause your character will change is obvious and not appropriate as a response. Are you completely sure? For the first five Bijuu have them in a bullet form [ - - - -] Anyways, will fix it sometime later today.
Well, you basically know his motives: Besides Protecting his village [I won't insert this, as it's monotone by now], destroying opposing forces [Mainly Akatsuki]1. Just because I don't have a section giving the general abilities doesn't mean you can't tell me them. I explained that the reason I am requiring the old hosts to do this application process as well is because I want to make sure they understand the new system and new bonuses for their bijuu.e Frankly, if you had read your bijuu top to bottom, this section should have been easy. 2. Okay, but what made you choose this particular bijuu out of all nine?
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 7:31 am
1. Okay, here they are: - The genjutsu of this host are generally harder to break from. - Drastic Strength - Can learn an extra weapon style or taijutsu style [As long as taijutsu or weapon usage is not a condition] - Total 210 Chakra Points Bonus - Cephalopod 'arms' for each stage
2.Aha, let's say, for my third favorite character of the anime has this Demon [And my character is loosely based on all those three].
And for I like Strength Combat [And Hachibi mainly grants strength]
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 7:33 am
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 8:35 am
Denied.  Use the request form.
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 8:49 am
The Criticizer 1. Okay, here they are: - The genjutsu of this host are generally harder to break from. - Drastic Strength - Can learn an extra weapon style or taijutsu style [As long as taijutsu or weapon usage is not a condition] - Total 75 Chakra Points Bonus - Cephalopod 'arms' for each stage
2.Aha, let's say, for my third favorite character of the anime has this Demon [And my character is loosely based on all those three].
And for I like Strength Combat [And Hachibi mainly grants strength] *Edit: this was an approved post, but your chakra total is wrong. Add it up again.
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 9:23 am
Deil Grist The Criticizer 1. Okay, here they are: - The genjutsu of this host are generally harder to break from. - Drastic Strength - Can learn an extra weapon style or taijutsu style [As long as taijutsu or weapon usage is not a condition] - Total 75 Chakra Points Bonus - Cephalopod 'arms' for each stage
2.Aha, let's say, for my third favorite character of the anime has this Demon [And my character is loosely based on all those three].
And for I like Strength Combat [And Hachibi mainly grants strength] *Edit: this was an approved post, but your chakra total is wrong. Add it up again. Edited
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 9:36 am
The Criticizer Deil Grist The Criticizer 1. Okay, here they are: - The genjutsu of this host are generally harder to break from. - Drastic Strength - Can learn an extra weapon style or taijutsu style [As long as taijutsu or weapon usage is not a condition] - Total 75 Chakra Points Bonus - Cephalopod 'arms' for each stage
2.Aha, let's say, for my third favorite character of the anime has this Demon [And my character is loosely based on all those three].
And for I like Strength Combat [And Hachibi mainly grants strength] *Edit: this was an approved post, but your chakra total is wrong. Add it up again. Edited I'll look at your profile when I get the chance. Shouldn't take me long.
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 10:59 am
Deil Grist Denied.  Use the request form. was reserving the spot not applying XD
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HeadlessKoko Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 11:03 am
Bijuu's Name: Kyuubi General Abilities: The Kyuubi is, to put it shortly, a chakra power-house. Unlike the other bijuus that give a set chakra amount, Kyuubi offers a continuous stream of chakra over a certain amount of time. Likewise, the stamina of the host is constantly regenerated at a set pace rather than being given in a large chunk. If Kyuubi were to be given an element, it would be chakra, which has the bonus of not being weak to anything at the cost of not being strong to anything. Being identified with the element of chakra, Kyuubi allows his host to be able to use chakra-based attacks that have a higher-than-normal chakra cost when they are unable to use ninja techniques in their demon forms. Kyuubi, being the ninth bijuu, has the most tails of any demon and so the jinchuuriki will eventually have access to more tails as they progress through each stage of the demon cloak. These extra tails result in an increased versatility in the way that the tails can be used. Likewise, the number of tails is not the only thing that increases as the host goes through each stage. The physical boosts in speed, endurance, toughness, and strength also increase with each stage. Did you have this bijuu in VR? Yes, but since I plan on making a new rpc with it if I'm allowed, I'm not sure if I can still say "Yes" sweatdrop . Briefly explain how unlocking tails works and what the risks are for using more tails than your character can handle: Upon reaching the required rank for a tail, five techniques must be learned. From the sixth technique onward, a 100-sided dice will be rolled after each technique. If the dice lands on a 20 or lower, then the host is taken into his mind and forced to fight with a future version of themselves that has the next stage activated (ex: host knows up to stage 5, then future version is in stage 6). If the host manages to survive for at least 6 posts, they are certified for the next stage. If they cannot, then they black-out and the demon controls the host's body for however many posts that the host had yet to go through. In the chance that the host has learned every technique available to them at the time, then they must fight their other self once every day until the next stage is unlocked. In the case that a forced activation of a tail is used--in other words, if the host uses more tails than they can handle--they have a high chance of losing complete control of themselves. In the case that they lost control and cannot be subdued, the bijuu will continue going through each stage until the final stage is reached. Once the last stage is reached, the seal holding the demon is undone and the bijuu is released. Why do you want to have a bijuu? I want a bijuu because it offers a great way to customize my character's story. There are a lot of things that are similar to the effect a bijuu has on a character's life, but none of them are the same. A demon is a formidable force, one that is always trying to break free. Sure, a split personality and a whole load of other things could probably imitate the "trying to break free" part, but nothing can imitate the raw power of a demon (except for maybe a Konaga) nor the taboo of having a demon within you and the way that it literally shoves you to the front of certain issues (ex: Akatsuki). A bijuu is a completely different person living within you and experiencing the same things you are, that itself makes up most of my reason for wanting one. Why do you want THIS bijuu? Because it's cool and a fox (I like foxes whee ). Furthermore, Kyuubi is related to malice, a characteristic that goes against the way most of my rpcs turn out to be regardless of whether I purposely did so or not. Such polar opposites, voiced in one body, would definitely make for some interesting rping 4laugh . Give me an RP sample of your character fighting in stage one and another RP sample of you fighting in any stage other than the first or last one. Name: Kageko (but there's a good chance it'll change to… something else….) Rank: Genin Class: Ninjutsu Element(s): Katon Stage: 2Kageko's eyes glowed red in anger and her hair bristled, her thicker whiskers and sharp nails perfecting her feral appearance. The demon inside of her was feeding off of her anger, slyly using it to his advantage. Kageko knew that, but she didn't care, not right now. Normally, she would have stopped it, tried to keep THAT from showing himself, but not now. Now, she was facing off against this… this THING. This thing that killed her friend and teammate. This thing that now threatened to kill someone else close to her, almost did. A part of her knew that if she just surrendered herself, her friend will be safe, but right now all she wanted was revenge against this thing. This thing that called itself Shirogane. This thing with the ghostly-pale skin and blood-red eyes and bone-white hair.
"It's futile," the thing said, it's voice emotionless. Kageko simply growled, she didn't care whether or not it was futile, all she cared about was killing this thing. The demon within her had totally enraged her, her whiskers darkened and grew, her body started to become tinged with red. "Graaaah!" she charged at the pale killer, head on.
Shirogane easily deflected the attack with her sword, her goal was to bring the bijuu and jinchurikii to headquarters, not kill them. She started to use a wind jutsu, when Kageko substituted with a log and then reappeared behind Shirogane, ready to hit her at a Kyuubi-reinforced speed. Shirogane deflected that attack as well, but her sword received a crack, the sword that she had assassinated so many thousands with.
For a split-second, she stared at it in shock, but moved in time to block another punch from Kageko and easily give her a near-fatal wound while she was at it. Kageko smashed into a tree from the blow, and poofed up in smoke. It was a clone. In the split-second while Shirogane remained open after using her jutsu, the real Kageko launched her attack, a kunai in each hand. She might have been enraged and have lost all sense of moral reasoning, but that didn't mean she was unable to plan. Just as Kyuubi affected her thought now, so did he affect her strategies. Kageko started to slice at Shirogane's jugular veins, only to find herself blown back by the now apparent wind-explosion clone of Shirogane. The few cuts that managed to slice through the demonic chakra were soon healed in a matter of seconds.
"It looks as if I underestimated you because you were a Genin," Shirogane commented coldly from the branch of a tree, as if she was stating a well-known fact. Kageko merely growled, planning her next move, or at least Kyuubi was. "It's time for me to get serious," Shirogane sheathed her sword at her waist and pulled out two medium-sized fans, each the length of her forearm.
Slicing her arms with the sharpened edges of the fan to draw blood, Shirogane performed Kuchiyose: Kirikiri no Mai and Kaze no Yaiba, aiming directly for Kageko. After the dust settled, the girl wasn't there. the rogue thought to herself as she looked around. She couldn't sense Kageko anywhere. If she was still alive, then she was very good at hiding. Shirogane heard a rustle and, a moment later, was attacked by three clones. The clones held her down, but she whipped them off easily with Mugensajin Daitopa, easily dodging the predictable attack that came after. Where Shirogane had been mere moments ago, was now a huge hole, formed by Kageko's Katon: Nenshou Tosshin (Fire Release: Burning Rush). Kageko tried to take her hand out of the hole, but took too long to wrest it free. By the time her hand was free from the trunk, she was trapped by Shirogane's Tatsumaki Wana. While the older woman had been surprised at the sudden use of a C-rank ninjutsu by a genin that was not reported to be a ninjutsu specialist she kept her calm. There had been reports that Kageko had quite the strong will, and it was probably this will that let her use such a powerful move.
At that moment, ninja from the nearby village, Kageko's village, arrived. Shirogane couldn't take Kageko and leave right then, and if she stayed any longer she'd be caught. she thought as she left, releasing her jutsu. Kageko immediately got up and started chasing after her, but was subdued by a mokuton user who proceeded to reseal Kyuubi. As Kyuubi retreated, Kageko's chakra fell drastically as she lost conscious. Her arm and body still contained the scars from the final attacks that Shirogane had used, the wounds being so deep that not even the fox demon's chakra could heal them instantaneously. A number of them were still deep despite Kageko's rapid healing. However, her body wasn't the only thing that had received wounds from the battle, so had her seal.______________________________________________________________________________________ Name: Loki (a potential name, but not completely sure) Rank: Chunin Class: Genjutsu Element(s): Katon Stage: 1Loki faced down her opponent, the determination in her eyes saying what she didn't put in words. She couldn't give in now, no, she just couldn't. If she did, she would be letting her team down. Even worse, she would be putting her friend and the entire mission in danger. an image of her friend running at their fastest to deliver the message entered her mind as she silently cheered, As usual, Loki had been left as the very last resort. Even though she was a chunin and fully capable of taking care of herself, her role as a jinchuuriki kept her heavily guarded. If her friend hadn't been so much faster than most anyone else, it would be Loki who would have been ordered to finish the delivery. Now, though, for once, she was left in charge of protecting someone rather than being protected. She would not fail.
As Loki began weaving hand signs, the opponent made the first move, a large ninja who seemed to specialize in taijutsu from what the girl could tell. Loki was hit, managing to shift her body just enough to lessen the impact so that she wasn't knocked unconscious. Luckily for her, the attack her opponent had made was rushed and not fully planned out. As she was knocked down, the girl had uttered, "Ikamono Chikara no Chakra (Fake Chakra Power)," but so quietly that they could have just been taken as gasps of pain. When she stood back up, Loki seemed to be surrounded by a demonic red chakra as she wore a manic expression on her face. "That all you got?" the girl sneered as her hands immediately moved once more.
The taijutsu user instinctively took a step back, his eyes wide with fear. The reaction was more dramatic than if any other genjutsu user had used the technique, but that was to be expected. The black, whisker-like marks on Loki's face marked her clearly as the host of Kyuubi and when the host of Kyuubi suddenly began emitting red chakra, things weren't looking too good for the opponent. To make the illusion even more real, the small and extremely minor scrapes and bruises Loki had received from smashing into the ground were already starting to show signs of healing due to the Kyuubi's chakra, an effect that was active even in the first stage. In the precious moments that the opponent wasted on debating whether or not to make a run for it, Loki finished her hand signs and muttered another phrase, "Suguni Ouda (Instant Strike)." A loud bang sounded out and Kageko seemed to suddenly be in front of her target, plunging a weapon straight into his chest. If the enemy shinobi hadn't been frightened before, he sure was now.
However, despite the layers of fear Kageko was laying on her opponent, in the long run, her technique would be for nothing. None of them caused any actual damage, they simply distracted and stalled her target. However, stalling was enough for her. Each precious second she could keep this shinobi in front of her occupied increased the chances of a successful mission by that much. Besides, the girl didn't feel bothered that her chakra usage did nothing, she had small amounts of it continuously feeding into her body, even when she was only in her first stage.______________________________________________________________________________________ And then one last sample. If you don't want to read it, then don't. I just figured I should put this extra one here since I had it sweatdrop . Seeing how it doesn't show fighting, it didn't really fit the requirements for any of the others, but, meh, I figured why not sweatdrop ? The name is Kageko, which most likely will change as I already mentioned before, and the rank is special jounin I guess, doesn't really matter neutral . As for class and element, I didn't think those would matter either, since this is more about how I deal with the Kyuubi than how I fight with it so… yeah sweatdrop ….Kageko sat down, wiped out from practicing her use of Kyuubi's energy. She would have rather just not use the demon's energy, but she had no choice. Not if she wanted to protect her friends. Not if she wanted to run the risk of having that happen again.
{Heh, what a pitiful host, you have so little energy of you own,} Kyuubi jeered, {Why not just use only my power? It's not like yours will make a difference.} {Be quiet,} Kageko thought to the annoying fox, {I don't even want your power.} {Then why do you use it? Face it, without me you can't do anything. Just let me take control.} Kageko stayed quiet for a while, Kyuubi's words had hit a soft spot. She thought back to what had happened. To that.
She couldn't remember any specific detail about what happened, but it didn't take a genius to figure out. A rogue shinobi had attacked, and she had become enraged. So enraged that she even entered the sixth stage: a stage that while she had trained, she refrained from using at all costs because she could find no way to control it. The wounds received from the violent chakra were proof of it, so were the wounds her friends had received from her. She, in her blind rage, had struck down her teammates as they tried to stop her. The worst part was, she would probably have even gone so far as to kill them if the team leader, who was the highest ranked, hadn't managed to beat her unconscious, thus subduing her. She remembered the huge crater she had seen when she went back to the site of the battle. The hole that was created in the wall from her attacks. She couldn't believe how much power the demon had… how dangerous she was.
Everyone had said that she had no choice, that it was the only way the powerful enemy could have been defeated, but Kageko knew that they were only trying to cheer her up. Even if it was true, that didn't change the fact that she had injured others for no reason. That she had caused harm to them.
Kyuubi yawned in boredom, {Really. That's really the only reason why you want to control my power? To control me better?,} he sneered, {Are you sure that you're not kidding yourself?}. {Of course,} Kageko thought as she stood back up. Kyuubi was still sneering, {Heh, stop lying to yourself. You know that you want my power to be stronger. Actually, I wouldn't be surprised if you wanted my power not to protect but to destroy your enemies. You can't deny it, you felt a sense of accomplishment when you were told of how badly you beat up that weakling.} Kageko tried to ignore him, {Be quiet, and no I don't.} However, she couldn't ignore him completely. Kyuubi had perfectly hit a worry that Kageko had been having ever since she made the decision: What if she was simply deluding herself?
she thought to herself as she shook her head and prepared another jutsu, closing her eyes to focus on imbuing both Kyuubi's energy and her energy into it, but even then, she wasn't sure. Her whisker marks grew thicker and darker, her already messy hair became even messier and even gained a slight tinge of red whenever it caught the sun. When she opened her eyes to lock onto the target, they had turned red with slits for pupils.
Kyuubi stayed quiet, not because he was told to but because he felt that he couldn't say anything more. He willingly gave his host access to his power, already happy at the entertainment she was giving him. Indeed, he found Kageko very interesting… and possibly very easy to control.
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 11:09 am
Azeiel The Fallen Deil Grist Denied.  Use the request form. was reserving the spot not applying XD That wouldn't accomplish anything. It's just going to get thrown back behind a lot of posts. If you need a place to make stuff before you post it, then go make a sandbox in the sandbox sub-forum.
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Wealthy Conversationalist
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 12:42 pm
Deil Grist iShay-chan Bijuu's Name: Six Tails (Rokubi), Raijuu the Weasel
General Abilities: Specializing in Raiton, which are known as the fastest elemental ninjutsu around, the Rokubi is known for being the fastest Bijuu out of the nine. The Bijuu focuses on using its agility for quick hand-to-hand combat and performing a rapid series of attacks. The Rokubi Jinchuuriki gains benefits such as: -The ability to learn more than the maximum amount of Raiton jutsu -Increased Speed -Up to +30 chakra points at Sannin/Kage level -Increased number of jutsu used per post (depending on stage) -Raiton immunity -Increased strength of Raiton jutsu depending on the weather -Growth of fur that can cause minor electric shocks
I put that one line in bold because, while it's true you get 30 chakra when that stage is active, all bijuu bonuses stack except for the kyuubi's chakra/stamina bonuses. So you actually get 150 total bonus chakra points if you go through all the stages of release. Now, since you have that number, you'll be approved if you can tell me how many total bonus stamina points you get. Btw, I love the RP samples. They're very descriptive, and I don't feel bad giving this to someone who will take the time to be detailed. I don't think I'll have to worry about one-liner "I nuke your face" posts from you. ^v^ Okay so 150 chakra points bonus, with an additional 3 stamina for every ten chakra, would be 45, right? 150 / 10 = 15 15 x 3 = 45
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Posted: Wed Jun 29, 2011 1:12 pm
Bijuu's Name:Seven tail, Kaku
General Abilities:Bonus to Cunning, doton jutsu, +15 inherit chakra points, +135 total. Other things like projectile speed, and a 50% thinking speed which effectively slows things down around me... which is epic.
Did you have this bijuu in VR?Yes, yes I did.
Briefly explain how unlocking tails works and what the risks are for using more tails than your character can handle: The risk of useing tails I have not fully masters is the DICE ROLL! The DICE ROLL!! is the system set in place that adds a sense of uncertainty to me using more of the demon than I have access to. Starting at a 50/50 chance to keep myself under control after forcing a stage, this chance drops by half every time I try to unlock another stage forcefully.
Unlocking tails start to work once you have unlocked 5 techniques, then you will fight a "future" self, then if you win you get the next stage, if you lose then you go crazy and try to destroy everything for the same amount of posts that you had left in your fight.
Why do you want to have a bijuu? It is epic... more than that though it tie's into Havik's back story and it will be the reason I one day become a Kage.
Why do you want THIS bijuu?It fits Havik like a glove, he is normally a "tank" Rpc but he will have many tricks, and disguises that help him fool his enemy. The Kaku will help him be able to dodge attack, and read enemy's better. It will also give him rank up in cunning, which is perfect. Give me an RP sample of your character fighting in stage one and another RP sample of you fighting in any stage other than the first or last one.
{Sample 1 Taijutsu, Sp. Jounin, Doton}
Stage one
Walking into the camp with his six foot sword on his hip Havik looked into each hut. Even though there were no visual signs he knew the bandits were there, he could smell the musk of several people, and feel weak chakra levels. Taking slow steps to the middle of the small settlement a couple people appeared, licking there kunai and trying to act tough.
"Well" Havik said tapping the sand head band sewn into his jacked. "You can guess why I am here, lets get this started." and on Que five bandits rushed him from the front. Grasping the hilt of his sword he slowly drew it from it's sheath, then suddenly sprung forth with a quick draw and launched the six foot blade outward after the enemy's. The strike was a bit slow, and the bandit's reaction time was good enough to bring there weapons up to block the blade, but there was a reason Havik's strike was slow. His sword smashed into the bandits with great force, breaking there weapons and slinging there body's for several yards.
The weight of Havik's sword left very large openings in his attacks so when the other bandits tried flanking him and attacking from the rear they thought they were being slick. Swinging his swords weight, and bringing it to downward striking stance the bandits yelped " Now what are you going to do swordsman? Can't turn that sword of yours around very fast can you!". A smirk was Havik only response as he dropped his sword and it landed with a ground shaking thud just before the bandits attacks, this caught them ofg guard and gave Havik enough time to spin quickly and back hand the first bandit that was talking s**t, and then delivered a heavy front kick to a second. Both the enemy's were sent through a tree in the distance, as a third rushed Havik jumping and punching him in the face, and continuing to punch and kick him.
After about twenty or so punches the bandit grew winded and tired as Havik stood in the same spot unmoved and laughing as he caught the bandits wrist and punched him in the face. The force from the punch caused the bandits shoulder to dislocate since Havik didn't let go of his wrist. Dropping the bandit Havik patted his hands together and went to walk away as he heard several tree's being crushed and saw a canon ball of mud traveling toward him. Flexing his body and digging in his feet Havik took the force of the attack with out budging from his spot.
Two thin, short girls and a man suddenly appeared as Havik clay armor started to fall off. Once all the armor was gone and Havik was fully visible they three new enemy's would see a short, highly muscled man standing in from of then with deep blue hair that sparkled every time light hit it, and eyes that were a fierce blue and seemed almost happy he got hit with the attack. "You guys" Havik laughed a bit before continuing "Are so screwed."
{Sample 2 continuation of last sample}
Just as the man started to speak the ground shook and Havik's skin turned a dark black as he said in a deep, evil voice "Shut up! You three have layed wast to the trade route in this area, killed people for no reason! Now you will pay!" As the earthen tail began to form behind Havik the three ninja saw what they were really up against and fear filled there eyes.
With a quick set of hand seals three spears sprung forth from in front of Havik moving fast toward the three matching Havik speed the man summoned a wall of earth to protect himself as the two girls jumped backward into the tree's. Normally this would of been enough for the three to escape unharmed by this jutsu, but Havik earth jutsu were unlike any other thanks to the Kaku. The mans earth wall was smashed threw and he received a deep gash to his right side, and the trees the two girls just onto were splinted and the two fell down ward.
Landing lightly on there feet the two girls rushed Havik, moving faster than Havik could react so he used his Chakra reinforcement and tensed his torso. The two girls delivered several kicks to his stomach and face. Cover up his head with his arms Havik was able to keep his wits about him and find a pattern in there assault, so when one of the kicks was coming toward Haviks head he ducked it, grabbed the girls collar and spun, spinning the girl he grasped and smacking the second girl with his tail. As he finished his spin he slammed the girl he grabbed into the ground causing her to spit up some blood. Sadly he wasn't able to finisher her there, she wrapped her legs around his arm and arched her back bending Havik's arm backward giving her the second she needed to twist free and run back to her comrades.
A low growl and tremor left Havik as two more tails sprung from his lower back as the man stood up again grasping his side. All three of them took out a katana and charged them with chakra. As they charged Havik's mind began to race, they were moving in slow motion to him, several plans to counter raced through his mind, then suddenly he knew exactly what to do, and how he would do it.
Starting a set of hand seals Havik watched each advancing enemy closely waiting for the precise moment when to strike. The two girls crossed paths several times, and attacked from the left and right shooting for Havik's torso, as the man leaped through the air screaming and trying to slash downward. Just before each blade connected, Havik's earthen tails would block there path, then his jutsu would start to take effect at the exact moment when there guards were down, and the clay that was once his armor would swirl and combined with the earth around to trap each of the enemy's in there own personal prison. (Earth Release: Clay Barrier Prison)
Each enemy would squirm and try to break free but the constant chakra drain they received they would unable to gather enough strength to break free. Making another set of hand seals the prisons started to be lowered into the ground slowly as Havik reverted back to his normal self and said " This is the punishment for your crime, I hope you suffer." He then picked up his sword and walked from the middle of the camp on his way back to Suna with a completed mission and a stomach that was in need of food.
" Every time I ask for your help in a fight you make me hungery."
A laugh echoed through Havik head as the silky smooth voice of his demon stepped in and said
" A small price to pay for that much fun, I still don't see how you cause so much damage with out taking any steps. It truly is a sight to see.
"I wouldn't be able to with out your help, but the true sight will be when we get back and order food... What do you think you will want when we get there?"
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