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Posted: Mon Jul 04, 2011 2:10 am
Just a couple fleshing out type questions. :3
How do you see his FEAR ability evolving as he progresses? Will the ink/tattoos manifest in some new way?
I am interested in knowing more about his motivation for choosing this particular school. Why does he want to be in those specific classes? (Does he really want to learn about Human Studies? Or does he already know a lot and want to show off?) Are there any clubs he would want to participate in?
Since he likes to show off, how would he handle some ghoul who was really impressed and set her cap at him? You said he's a southern gent type, so what would happen if he was the one being pursued instead?
Somewhat related to his FEAR, but are his tattoos stationary on his body, aside from the special family one? Like do they change color or move about or anything like that? I had this weird image of them sort of crawling around slowly on his skin.
Anyway, I think you've got a lot of good stuff going on here, definitely hit on a lot of major points with his personality description, so I feel like you get a good idea of who he is with this.
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Posted: Sat Jul 16, 2011 11:42 am
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Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2011 6:42 am
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Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 3:44 pm
HALLOOO CARHOP I like the new natural ability, it sounds like it could be adorable!... Actually, maybe it isn't supposed to work the way I envisioned just now... xD (The tattoo behaving like a little critter) But um... so, how exactly does a tattoo behave/work once it's been "pulled"? o-o Is it, like the fear, pretty much floating ink that'll splatter on things- so he'd basically just be animating a 2D image midair or something?
It'd be funny if he took someone's tattoo off, changed the pose/warped it, and put it back on... rofl Or simply put it back on wrong. Or in the wrong place.
People might get angry. >D
Hey YOU! Have a nice day! I'm rooting for you! :D
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Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2011 3:52 pm
I envisioned it like he could talk/give simple commands to the tattoos the he pulls. Maybe contort them and such.
Here's an example: Someone has a tattoo of a bird. Artemis "pulls" the bird, tells it to fly around the tattooed person's body, and it follows instructions, generally being a nuisance to the person with the now active tattoo bird.
That may be Godmodding though. xD;
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Posted: Tue Jul 26, 2011 11:33 am
Natural Ability changed...again!
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Posted: Wed Aug 10, 2011 5:42 pm
I just realized I'd never come in here and left a note about Art. XD;
So, his personality is pretty stable (and by that I mean he doesn't have any huge contradictions or anything) and I've seen it in action, and thus I can vouch that it fits him and it's RPable. ^^
I have a couple of questions about Tattoo Demon stuff, mostly out of curiousity.
-- Why don't Tattoo Demons have wings? I'm asking since whenever I picture tattoo wings, they always look pretty epic. As such, I'm puzzled as to why you chose to make their species a wingless one, when there's so many tattoo wing styles out in the world today. (For example, if I was going to imagine a Tattoo Demon without reading any of their lore, I'd probably give them wings like this or something to that extent. I just really think that tattoo wings would looke awesome on a tattoo demon. XD;; ) So, is there a specific reason as to why they don't have wings (is there specific plotting or something behind it, etc?) ? And the same thing for their lack of a tail. XD; Any particular reasoning behind it?
-- So, if a Tattoo Demon got a pair of wings tattoo'd on them, because of their natural ability, would they be able to fly? Or glide, or something?
Art himself is a really solid character, I think, and I've appreciated being able to see him out and about in the festival. ^^ Good luck! (And yes, random ink RPs can happen if Kallos and Art happen to be enrolled. XD; )
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 9:03 am
Y'know, I've actually been thinking about that recently. I think I was just having a case of "super special snowflake" syndrome. There really was no reasoning to it, other than wanting to hang on to his original Reaper appearance. But, I'll probably just take that part away. Plus, tattoo wings do look pretty freakin' epic.
Alos, probably going to change his natural ability. It was just a filler.
Thanks for the crit, and the encouragement! And I'm totally looking forward to RP's if they both get enrolled.
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Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2011 11:16 am
Needle and her sister Lattice will argue tooth and nail (and arm spikes and ink blots) that Tattoos are not dodgy or shady in any way! D: It is a beautiful art medium that lasts longer than stupid old paper, unless you're an undead! But that's because they come from a clan that really does nothing but tattoo for clans and people who want meaningful ink. Personally, I think that the natural ability of entering and manipulating someone's tattoos is a little OP. I suggest toning it down to say he has a radar in his head for people with tattoos, or something like that? Or maybe if you do want to stick with manipulation, make sure it's really weak since he's still very young, like...if he manipulates a tattoo, it only moved to the left a couple centimetres or something. Err, I hope this helps?
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Posted: Sat Aug 13, 2011 4:51 am
Every crit helps~
Toned down the natural ability to where he can only enter a tattoo.
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