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PostPosted: Sat Apr 02, 2011 9:22 pm


(( : O Maleducato))
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"I am looking forward to being the fastest Arrancar ever..." _____________________________________ "Shinigami....Come see what fate and destiny has for you...Me..."

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Theme 3: Wanderer of the Desert Sand
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Garuda by the slightly bit of sound in his ear heard those exact words she said. Soon he face became an expression of silence and in shock. But all that came out was a, "WHAT?!!!!!!" He said in shock so loudly as it echos through some of the halls of Las Noches. He soon became dizzy of being in shock so bad and disappointed in himself by the sign of total rejection printed on his forehead. ~Me...?! Rejected?! By a girl?! Not her type?! Then WHAT IS IT?!~ He thought as he started to tilted his head and body backward as he was about to fall to the ground.

As he was about to fall, a black shadowy sludge of some sort appeared out of his body in a small form as it quickly slithered away into somewhere else. As it forms into a more humanoid figure, it tries to take on the appearance of something stronger than it as it soon made an appearance of it's host Garuda. This part was Madness which was the parasite inside of Garuda hiding inside him as it was only in a clone of the actual host. "This shell would make and excellent cover for me..." It said in a dark voice covering of Garuda's regular voice in appearance. It slowly walked out of the shadows showing it's face as it was similar to Garuda's but except some black marks cover half of it's face and there is less of a mask on it. He walked over Garuda's body as he soon placed a sharp point of his hand near Garuda's chest as he instantly impaled through it as it could see the dark ooze of the parasites coming from it pouring inside of Garuda's body constantly. Soon the part of Madness was sucked into Garuda covering the hole up in his chest as his eyes opened up but the eyes color was lime green with black-like roots on the edge of his eyes. He slowly got up as Garuda was now currentsly and temporarily possessed by Madness by his choice. ~Go play with her..~ Garuda's voice said in his mind ordering Madness to fight.


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PostPosted: Sun Apr 03, 2011 3:46 pm


((Not Rude. Just evil.))

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Dona simply stood back and watched as Garuda seemed to be throwing a temper tantrum.

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 4:13 pm


((No reason to hurt the little guy like that.. XD))
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"I am looking forward to being the fastest Arrancar ever..." _____________________________________ "Shinigami....Come see what fate and destiny has for you...Me..."

The Black Soul, Garu

Theme 3: Wanderer of the Desert Sand
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Madness was starting to laugh evilly as he took several slow small steps towards Dona as he was making a low growl. He was new to using his host's body but is trying to master it's controlling. "Hehehe....At last...you're mine.." He said with a dark evil laugh and a grin at her. But as he was about to take another steps at her face. His eyes came across her...chest by accident as Garuda in his mind took a look as he made his own body take a nose bleed when Madness uncontrollably touched Dona. His body soon immediately fell with some blood dripping from his nostril as Madness fled away back into his body and mind while Garuda was himself again. But he was still sadly dizzy and angry. He soon woke up suddenly as he jumped back on his feet and twirled away till the blood on his nose wasn't seen anymore. "WHAT DO YOU MEAN I'M NOT YOU'RE TYPE?! I'M THE SECOND MOST CHARMING ARRANCAR HERE!" He barked at her as his reiatsu was slowly glowing around his body calmly as his glove gave off a spark.
PostPosted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 4:20 pm


((If you want to keep your Espada spot, then I suggest typing more than one liners. Yes, I see a few that were longer, but most of them are painfully short.))

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 5:04 pm


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((If you want to keep your Espada spot, then I suggest typing more than one liners. Yes, I see a few that were longer, but most of them are painfully short.))


((eh, it's hard to make decent sized posts when you're given nothing to work with))
PostPosted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 5:25 pm


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((If you want to keep your Espada spot, then I suggest typing more than one liners. Yes, I see a few that were longer, but most of them are painfully short.))


((eh, it's hard to make decent sized posts when you're given nothing to work with))


((Then do a descriptive line about something else. Hair, eyes, hands, pose, gaze, ect.))

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 5:54 pm


((Wow.. literally critique aren't we..? >.>))
PostPosted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 6:55 pm


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((Wow.. literally critique aren't we..? >.>))


((If you want me to critique everything in your posts, then I can. (;

If you are going to hold a high rank, then you should be able to back it up with your role playing skills. End of story.

I understand that sometimes a post may be short, but not so many that you seem like you are just starting out role playing. And if you are just starting out role playing with posts like those you do not need to be a high rank. I'm not speaking to you anyway.))

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PostPosted: Mon Apr 04, 2011 8:10 pm


((Fair enough, for an Espada rank I suppose anyways))
PostPosted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 6:44 am


((Sorry. Having a hard time focusing. Found out my dad isn't really my dad and I have no job. I apologize if my posts are inadequate. ))

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Dona was intrigued by Garuda's strange performance. The sight of the blood though made her smile, he definitely had a humorous reaction. There was a pause as he claimed to be the second most charming Espada. Dona let the silence sink in for a minute, then sighed, "Charm aint got nothing to do with it bud. That's a HUGE turnoff for me." The sexta espada sighed and looked Garuda in the eye, "Charm is a weakness. It will trick you into revealing your weakest trait to an enemy."

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 1:21 pm


-[Lucas Ortega]-
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Lucas continued walking with his nose buried in a book, he did this alot, just wandered the vast halls of Las Noches with a good book, noone bothered him and he didn't bother anyone. All of a sudden the relativly quiet atmosphere was shattered by a raised male voice. Lucas sighed, he hated people raising thier voices... Lucas wandered closer to the source of the desterbance and felt a spike in spiritual pressure. Masking his own spirtual pressure, he knocked gently on the door and entered. The spike in spiritual pressure seemed to have come from the male in the room, who appeared to be a fraccion. Speaking in his usual quiet, measured tones Lucas addressed him as if speaking to a superior, "Excuse me, could you maybe keep the noise down, half of Hueco Mundo can hear you." Lucas lent on the doorway waiting for a responce....
PostPosted: Tue Apr 05, 2011 3:56 pm



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There was another pressure entering the room and Dona leaned sideways to see around Garuda, "Maybe he'll listen to you. Wanna give it a shot?" She was rather tired of the fracciones yelling, it was rather vulgar. It wasn't hard to tell that Garuda was basically throwing a temper tantrum. Dona then ignored Garuda and walked over to the man in the doorway, "Nicew to meet you by the way. I'm Dona Yizel."

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 9:15 am


-[Lucas Ortega]-
Nueve (9th) Espada


Lucas gave one of his rare smiles, "Lucas Ortega" he then pulled down his shirt a little revealing the black number 9 tatooed on his chest,"Ninth Espada, a pleasure to meet you.",he then looked with disintrest at the angered Fraccion, "Is he giving you trouble Miss Yizel?",as Lucas spoke he reached up and brushed his longish black hair from his bright blue eyes, his facial expression not giving away anything...
PostPosted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 3:55 pm


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"I am looking forward to being the fastest Arrancar ever..." _____________________________________ "Shinigami....Come see what fate and destiny has for you...Me..."

The Black Soul, Garu

Theme 3: Wanderer of the Desert Sand
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Garuda was about to calm down, even for himself having the temper of an Siberian tiger. He still is a good boy of emotion, so he has lots of ways to calming down. But as soon as he just lowered his temper he easily sensed somebody else was behind him at the door. He heard the voice which appeared to be Lucas as he turned instantly as he gave a slight pout as he raised his fist up slightly with lightning sparking in his eyes a little as he made a slight sound of air like a bull would do when about to charge. "Of course I'm not giving her trouble...why would I act like my older brother jumping out like a jack in a box.." He said imaging that would never happen if Kotaru can do that. He soon had a slight grin on his face as he was leaning his head a little on different sides. "But..if I was giving trouble...wouldn't 1/5 of this castle be illuminated by lightning and blue fire now? If I want to.." He said as he turned away from him being in his sight of his eyes. "By the way...Espadas after 5 I'm after...so you're mostly lucky you're 9th.." He said under his breath.

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PostPosted: Wed Apr 06, 2011 7:40 pm



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"Other than the temper tantrum, no. But that yelling gave me one helluva headache," Dona muttered rubbing her temples. As she stood next to Lucas, she looked at Garuda, "Do that...and you'll WISH I had him kill you." Once more she looked at Lucas, "Sorry we had to meet under these circumstances. Nice to meet you though." It was obvious that Garuda was climbing on Dona's nerves. Partially though, due to his treatment of her guest, in her quarters none the less.
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