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 Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 10:11 pm
Sketch received! Most of Marie Glapion's personality is sketched out, though it hasn't been cut up into defined virtues/flaws yet.
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Posted: Thu Jul 28, 2011 10:28 pm
Hahah, I said I'd see what I could do but it actually looks like you've got it all sorted out. With the key-words in mind I definitely got the feeling that what you're going for is that she just wants people to be happy, is very friendly, and incredibly confident. As far as virtues go at least...
Same with the flaws. I know it may feel like you're stuck, but maybe if you do what Mouse and Mel suggested about taking those keywords and just expanding on them(which shouldn't be much work because it seems like you've really got it all pretty much written up already) you should be on the right path.
I wish I could help, but I really don't because as far as what you asked for I don't think you need it. <3 Once you've gotten it all divvied up maybe I can come back and tell you what I think of those, but so far she's looking pretty great and I can't wait to steal RP with her.
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 3:45 pm
The only thing I see in need of tweaking is her Unintentionally Patronizing trait -- it's a bit flimsy if it's not being expressed in ways other than the pet names. I think given everything else she has going for her, it's possible she tends to be overly maternal when she talks to people... e.g. no matter what your age is she kind of treats you like a kid?
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Posted: Fri Jul 29, 2011 8:57 pm
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