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 Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 4:48 pm
I like your voice, but you could be a little louder, and maybe a bit stronger. It's cute, though. Adorable.
Who're you serenading? Cause that's what it seems like to me, especially with the song itself.
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 5:09 pm
These are a few poems I have written. Um...I have a few posted on my profile too. smile
Circus Love
My heart breaks when I look at you,
but to my heart I must remain true.
Our love was fun until it was gone,
and it was just a game that nobody won.
There is no moral in this story to convey,
but my feelings that day were swept away.
On that ferris wheel that spun slowly around,
you were my clown who turned my frown upside down
You were the swan boat floating on water so blue.
That was the day I fell in love with you.
Loving you Forever
Every night before I sleep,
I pray forever our love to keep...
Forever in my heart he will stay,
loving him more each and every day.
Left, but found
Running, I run, to an ocean so blue.
Everyday, I've been searching for you.
Hoping, and praying you will be by my side.
and never, ever again leave me behind.
But now I realize what you said was not true.
for you loved me less, then I loved you.
So I moved on, and found the one.
Who waits for me at the ocean to which I run.
He loves me, as much as him I love.
And this is where my heart forever flies on the wings of a dove.
My live, for your to take...
Looking at this bloody rose
I dunno what to say.
For a year ago we met,
on this very day.
But now, I am here...
while you are over there.
And after we left this place,
you never did care.
So shoot me down...down..
Beware the crowd of ghosts.
And listen to my spirit,
while the devilish hosts.
They sing to bring my soul so free.
From the suffering that you made me gain
and listen to my screams of sorrow,
For now you shall share my pain.
Comment, Rate..and check out my profile to hear my singing, or see my art. smile
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Posted: Tue Feb 22, 2011 8:01 pm
Winters IceBlue I like your voice, but you could be a little louder, and maybe a bit stronger. It's cute, though. Adorable.
Who're you serenading? Cause that's what it seems like to me, especially with the song itself.
Hah, I learned it for my ex-girlfriend. And thank you.
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Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 10:28 am
Things aren't what they seem...One day i saw my dream on the other side of the road
A place where i belonged, a place i was loved, a place i could love
As i walked over cars rushed by.
I stopped, shocked.
Looking both ways it was as empty as a ghost town.
As i was about to step foot on the street another car rushed by.
Almost taking me with it.
It was an unexplained phenomenon!
I tried for years to come to cross the road.
I drove away everyone who tried to get me away from the side of the road.
I told them what i saw on the other side and they shook their heads in disagreement.
I began to hate them, they just didn't understand!
My place was there, i knew it in my heart! I just had to get there....
Finally in the last years of my life i finally ran acoss the street.
Getting hit by a car in the process.
As i crawled over to the other side i saw it was all just a mirror.
I turned around to see my place...
My dream
My loved ones
The ones i loved
Were where i had been from the start.
As i took my last breath i thought
"Silly me...It was all a dream..." Comments will be appreciated.=]
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Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 11:12 am
I found the poem I was talking about
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Rage to Riot
The crowd grows
Everyone knows
Something’s building
Buzzing like a fly.
It begins
Pulsing, Throbbing
One mass together
Yelling, Shouting
It goes on forever,
Never ending
Always spinning
Weaving a net of thought
A notion races through the crowd
And sets it off like explosives
Racing, pounding
Always sounding
Punching, Thrashing,
Never stopping
And as senses disappear
No can one hear
As the Rage turns to Riot
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Posted: Wed Feb 23, 2011 10:17 pm
k i got two ones short:
sweet sparrow
as the sweet sparrow flies
so does everything die
as time quick passes
so do green grasses
as a place to see
a space to be
time flies as
feathered wings rise
the world skips a beat
as the ground we now meet
forced focus lapsed
as we drift into the past
and a longer one lol:
dreamscape
This is not a place
but a state
of mind
not body
and a flow
a rush
with a hush calm
that storms through the skin
the field is still
as the wind howls
and blows
as the moon lit trees
shine in day
the silver clouds fall to
the grace of a changing
still life of the landscape
the gound grows
as your heavy steps fall
the shodowie day breaks
out from the illuminating moon
to grace the eyes of those
who will it to end
what you take is yours to breathe
and what you see is yours to hear
silence falls into glass
and sheaths it's dreams
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Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 8:26 am
My song:
Vi hĂĄlla var annan glupsk pĂĄ se us
We Börja till vissna bort glupsk
på förbrukar usI er den glupsk på och min sorg vilja aldrig endfor
Jag har förtära min älskat oneWill den här plåga och ironien någonsin slut
Den er sluten om värld och den wolves de/vi/du/ni är comingwolves
jaga glupsk på till göra honom paywolves älskat älvan så brunn
upphöjat dem och coddled dem så pups och nu den glupsk på måste betala
(if you are wondering, it's swedish and broken down in an odd way because it's split in the manner that the song is supposed to be phrased... )
a rough english translation: We hold each other
the raven sees us
We Begin to fade away
The raven consumes us
I am the raven and
my sorrow will never end
for I have consumed my loved ones
Will this torment and irony ever end
It's the end of the world and the wolves are coming
wolves chase raven to make him pay
wolves loved the fairy as well
she raised them and coddled them as pups and now the raven must pay
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Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 4:17 pm
llDevilish-Kittyll BreakingCharity "I Have Seen It" The soft beating of a little heart I have touched The soft skin as tiny fingers try to grasp my face Those tiny hands exploring Curious about the world and who they may become in it I have heard it The cries of a child being abandoned For that child's screams speak from my own lips Not just high pitched yells, but another language all its own Saying "Please don't leave me" I was that child, I am that child I hear those screams again, but this time not from my own mouth As I shut the door on another innocent child lost to this world I'm just like her who left me Another one not yet ready for motherhood We're all still crying "Save me" And the cycle starts again (Comments? This is new so I'd like some opinions on it ^.^) I like this one.. It kind of caught my eye. o: Awww ^.^ Thank you. I like it but I don't know if I should edit some parts of it or not razz
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Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 4:21 pm
"Divine Intervention" I slowly open my eyes
Is it over?
Is it done?
Am I dead yet?
Am I gone?
I hear the distant sound of screaming
But my mind is in a haze
Then I snap
The haze breaks
My daughter
In the back
Is she hurt?
Everything goes black
Every day I look back
I wish
If only
If only
The Divine
Had Intervened
Maybe
I'd still have her
My little angel
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Posted: Thu Feb 24, 2011 6:10 pm
BreakingCharity llDevilish-Kittyll BreakingCharity "I Have Seen It" The soft beating of a little heart I have touched The soft skin as tiny fingers try to grasp my face Those tiny hands exploring Curious about the world and who they may become in it I have heard it The cries of a child being abandoned For that child's screams speak from my own lips Not just high pitched yells, but another language all its own Saying "Please don't leave me" I was that child, I am that child I hear those screams again, but this time not from my own mouth As I shut the door on another innocent child lost to this world I'm just like her who left me Another one not yet ready for motherhood We're all still crying "Save me" And the cycle starts again (Comments? This is new so I'd like some opinions on it ^.^) I like this one.. It kind of caught my eye. o: Awww ^.^ Thank you. I like it but I don't know if I should edit some parts of it or not razz Nah. P: I think it's fine just the way it is. =] (Well errmm.. That's my opinion anyways c: ) Better than most poems to be honest o.o
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Posted: Fri Feb 25, 2011 8:34 am
"What does it mean to be a good man?" - Descartes
This is a folk song I wrote
What does it mean to be a good man?
Does it mean you always stay at God's right hand?
Does it mean in the face of adversity you take a stand?
What does it mean to be a good man?
How does a good man know which path is right,
When to turn his cheek in forgiveness and when to put up his fists and fight?
At the end of the day as he stands in the fading twilight
How does a good man know which path is right?
What does it mean to be a good man?
Does it mean that you're there even when things don't go according to plan?
Does it mean that you'll have no regrets when all things turn to sand?
What does it mean to be a good man?
How does a good man show his love?
Does he hold her in the highest and no others above?
Does he tell her everyday she's the only one he's dreaming of?
How does a good man show his love?
What does it mean to be a good man?
Does it mean you help another in any way that you can?
Does it mean that you respect and revere the sacred land?
What does it mean to be a good man?
How does a good man live his life?
Does he always wear a smile even during times of strife?
Does he live for his family, friends, his children, and his wife?
How does a good man live his life?
What does it mean to be a good man?
Does it mean that when he stands before God once his race is ran
That he can look him in the face and say, "My life might not have been grand,"
"But I always tried my best to be a good man."
"Yes I always tried my best to be a good man."
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Posted: Sat Feb 26, 2011 10:14 pm
Just a few poems I've written. Or the two most recent I suppose....-shrug-
Questions?
What thought
Creates a breath
Gives life
Designs souls
What desire
Brings disastor
Denies love
Plays a game
With what do we sing
A sorrowful song
A distant tune
A fallen time
Where do we stand
When all is lost
All is forgotten
or all Is broken
In what world is this
That we can not create
Not give birth
Nor speak our mind
What does life give us
When bad choices are made
People hate
or when distance becomes closeness
Where do we go in the future
When all there is, is battle
Distrust, fatal mistakes and disease
With a small decision
Why do we become lost
Because we are designed
Because we create
Because we become something
With in the dark times
We cry in horror
We make a decision
We create a new harbor
What is it that people see
They see what is
They see what isn't
All see different things, as all are different
What are humans
A being
A thing of selfish desire
Sometime to curb curiosity
In what is it that you are
A game, moving in order sequence
A thought process of never ending inequality
A message in a bottle, always holding secrets
Where is it that you stand
In a lake full of fish, good and bad
Upon a mountain, laking air, but stealing beauty
With in a closet, closed to everything but what is known
Why is it that you feel
To create a path to obtain a finer story
To allow new knowledge, more beauty, a deeper meaning to emerge
To become more then a boxed in safety kit, to wander and find it
Within it all, what do you fear
A game over, failing, creating nothing
To be nothing, to find nothing, to know nothing, everythings an empty shell
To be dragged from you place of safety, your desire
What is it that is stated, but not seen
That differences can be far more difficult to see
That there is more to this then meets the eye
That you are distinct, and fear nothing.
Can you find the desires
With in the darkness that weeps
The desire that naws
and the creation that destroys?
Painted Words
The worlds song
It plays
Dances in hearts
Becomes a life story
The grass's dance
It sways
Wears the wind
Eyes the sky
The waters anger
It swallows
Takes all
Desires nothing
The fires hunger
It destroys
Light within Shadows
Is life's terror yet warmth
The winds sorrow
It cries
Blows away the past
Brings light to the future.
The earths love
It lives
Holds all life
Defines revenge.
The Lights hope
It travels
Is the good in all
Bores love into the heart of many
The Darkness' desire
It takes
Creates the chaos with in
Eats the warmth to fill its emptiness
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Posted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 4:42 pm
I think your poems are good. They are very deep in emotions and thoughts.
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Posted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 4:46 pm
TheLastPhantomhive_Ciel_ I think your poems are good. They are very deep in emotions and thoughts. -grins- thanks. Though there are things I need to or can improve on lol XP.
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Posted: Sun Feb 27, 2011 4:54 pm
The Jawbreaker "What does it mean to be a good man?" - Descartes I like this song, although i think its more of a country song.. i think folk and country are two different things right? If not i apologize for my error ^^' i learn everyday. And this the type of song (mostly elder adults/)people would listen to. Good job, very nice song and even greater message it carries im my opinion.
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