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 Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2011 5:02 pm
next time save ya best lines for the less refined
the way this ***** play it whack got Shaq feelin like he left in time
im guessin im not the first ***** this wigga rehearsed a verse for
im goin off the top, so the shock of you gettin rocked has gotta hurt more
im not a jerk or one of them new boys playin wit this s**t like new toys
but a tank to this mack truck; turn a bull dog to my chew toy
rudeboy type shotta flow; im the dopest in the streets of ya city
you make ya city look shitty. mark the missing member of pretty ricky
hows that for laughs, gags and jokes? get choked from the joker smoke
why all yo quotes go for broke and end on a lower note?
end on a C average. pragmatic flow divide you like mathematics
meet me after class. ******** the hall pass, come get ya a** kicked
you aint ******** wit me like sexual harassment in the work place
stomp ya birdbrains for tellin word on the street; how the curb taste?
i eat ya beef, it got an herb taste. prolly why ya flow is so dirt.
leave marks in ya dirt flow(floor) so i know ya soul hurt
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 2:22 am
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Posted: Tue Feb 01, 2011 9:51 pm
I don't even know which verses it's supposed to be judged on. Only the 8 bar ones? I can't ask because then people will think I'm stupi- aww s**t.
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 12:15 am
Yeah honestly, this is ******** up.
Delete your first post.
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 7:15 am
jceaz Yeah honestly, this is ******** up. Delete your first post. ahh s**t how did i miss 4 bars??? h/o
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 7:11 pm
this thread is kinda unorganized....well thats opinion
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 7:50 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 8:39 am
mack_mark305_ applesauce600 The last post doesn't make sense, the post before that seems incomplete, and his post from before is gone. Either you guys are ******** with me or the forums are messing up. Forums don't mess up like that; You guys are ******** with me. idk where that rap came from anybody that has seen me rap in forums know that my style isnt like that I can vouch for Mack
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Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 3:38 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 7:19 pm
oy....o yea i have to write another one since r0me answered back
back to attack in the name of the mack
such a b***h, "hold my earrings, gonna attack the ball sack"
quoting your words, your off saying those were "low" jabs
when you know its just a excuse cause its balls constantly grab
niggas be in denial when i say that im senile
but I've shed more blood than grains on a nail file
heard about my status so you go do that speed dial
but end up crying more tears than at a R Kelly trial
dropping four bars but it seems so endless
wanting this to stop but i can really care less
unless that there's something you wanna confess
that your scared to face the challenge, what a hot mess
such a low threat, nobody takes you seriously
apparently its your role, and you made it as your legacy
spread the word that the newbie just went H.A.M
my words should be illegal like internet spam
H.A.M means Hard As a ********.....
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 10:28 am
and now we wait for votes.....*sigh*
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Posted: Sun Feb 06, 2011 7:59 am
I'ma have to give my vote to SL for the fact that he dissed the opponent more....Mack my dude in a battle you cant brag about yourself:
theres no contest ive been known to be one of the best
lines like that have nothing to do with your opponent, find better ways to connect the insult/verbal attack..focus on your enemy and take him down with words. but you're growing lyrically, so keep at it homie
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Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 9:53 am
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Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 3:41 pm
hahaha i dnt see myself winning this...well there goes 5k hahahaha
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Posted: Mon Feb 07, 2011 8:35 pm
line one is supposed to be your bread and line two is supposed to be your butter.
Line one sets up line two for a bang.
That being said, line one has to correspond with line two.
You both need to work on that, but I think So long got the idea, he just needs to work on wording and stronger references.
Mack, only mention yourself if it will help the punchline. you shouldn't be explaining as if your character is in jeopardy, you should be attacking the opponent.
vote= long
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