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PostPosted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 11:07 am


Approved, just remember I can be overruled, as im not sure if summons with those stats are ok. But otherwise its approved
PostPosted: Sun Jan 23, 2011 9:18 am


Shruikan Tenshi
@Ave: If you do show me lol And..fire yes because of the producing light effect. Not to mention, if you look at it, lightning and fire are pretty close in nature.

And if thats a tele then nope that skill goes. Sorry, just rules say no teles XD


@Darion: So it can come out in sunlight? And how strong and how fast is this thing? I need to know so I can tell you how the splitting up thing will work. It would be easier if you made that a skill for it though lol and lastly, does it have its own energy or no?


yeah sorry Ill clear this up right now,

Yes its energy is equal to its users.So when my energy grows it does.
SO we have both the same amount of energy

In sunlight its speed is 8 and its strength is 8
is darkness both are increased by 2

And i make some abilities it has...

Split:
Rank :C
description: The Shadow Guardian breaks it self in 4 or less and sinks into the ground,It can either guard it's host or appear in front of it's enemy and attack.This Skill is useful if the user wants a solid Defense and Offense.

((might as well add one more))
Negative Impulse
Rank A
Description:
One of the Shadow Guardian's signature moves, The Negative Impulse can be used in two ways.In a single big powerful blast or in a scatter shot from above.
In The Scatter shot version, The Shadow Guardian throws a ball of negative energy into the air and it explodes making it rain down slow balls on negative energy for 4 posts.
The single shot version however is more dangerous, Not only does this cause major damage to it enemy if it hit, It follows them as well.Due to the theory of positive and negative energy attracts it will follow the enemy's positive energy.The only reason why it won't follow the users is because it's his negative energy.The single blast is fast and will follow it's targets for 4 posts with the same amount of speed as the Guardians.

There you go!

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 8:34 pm


I wouldn’t really call this a summon, but summons seem to be this guild’s all encompassing name for “Creatures controlled by you that are not your RPC”, so, it works.

Username: Hinote Tosatsu
Rpc Name: “S”
Rpc Rank: Novice
Class: Trickster

Summon's Name: Tina
Summon's Rank: E
Pic: User Image
Description of Summon: Tina is a tiny mouse girl S found. She stands at the rather unimpressive height of six inches, and weighs approximately half a pound. In battle, she is 100% worthless. Outside of battle, only 90%. Her main purpose as a companion is to provide a balancing factor to S’s off the wall personality, as she is able to be a constant voice in his ear, keeping him focused.

Her only real ability, is to, much like the Kiranu, transform into an animal version of herself. In her case, a small brown mouse. While in this form, she sacrifices the ability of speech, while becoming much smaller, and nigh unnoticeable, making it easy to sneak around silently.

Stats
Strength: 0
Speed: 8

Rp Sample: Is it really needed?
PostPosted: Tue Jan 25, 2011 8:38 pm


Hinote: Approve! >:0

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 9:05 pm


Username: Azzurro Inferni
Rpc Name: Alik Patten
Rpc Rank: 89% Done Adept Mission xD
Class: Human, Swordmaster

Summon's Name: Kogu (Brown)
Summon's Rank: B
Pic: [Kogu]
Description of Summon: Kogu was a wolf that lives on the Livurah Mountain, it use to live near a town that Alik lived on... Alik actually fed them sometimes, but Kogu was much more relectant to take the food, unlike Kaga. Kogu is a Russian Wolf, with a more excelled speed level of 9, it's strength is at 6. He is 4 feet tall.

Skills

Name: Claw Frenzy
Rank: D
Description: Kogu will jump at the opponent and began to claw at there chest area.

Name: Vice Grip
Rank: C
Description: Kogu Bites down on a victim and will hold on without letting go until ready, the bite rip and tear Flesh, and if positioned right can cause internal damage.

Name: Zig Zag Deployment Bash
Rank: C
Description: Kogu will do a Zig zag like motion, making him very hard to be hit by projectiles and bullets. He will then preced to rush at the victim and bash into them in a tackle like motion and begin to bite and claw at them.

Name: Thousand Knifes Dash
Rank: B
Description: Kogu will release energy into the atmosphere around him, and Alik will combine an A level amount of energy into Kogu. Kogu's hair will become like porcupine quills and Kogu will then run forwards at the target. If you add the "Zig Zag Deployment Bash" he can move from side to side. He will brush past opponent then turn and do a star formation around his opponent until stopped, command, target escapes, or opponent is dead. The end result of a single brush is like your side or the area he touched being like a bunch of small cuts, can horrible pain and is a pain that is hard to ignore. If placed right can cause severe damage.


Rp Sample: Alik stared down at his opponent, a Three-Headed Hound, He ran up to it and swung his axe. The beast easily dodged it, Alik put his hand to his mouth and whistled, out of the bushes a wolf with brown fur came out and growled at the Hound. Alik yelled at him "Kogu! Zig Zag Deployment!" Kogu began to dash towards the hound, but in a zig zag motion. The hound was confused and by the time the hound was going to strike. Kogu was ontop of the Hound and gripping it with it's Zice Grip like jaw. Alik came to the side of the Three headed hound using Broad Punch the dog flipped onto it's side. Kogu jumped off and then went for the beasts belly Clawing and Biting at it. Alik chopped off a head of the beast as it reached to bit Kogu "Denied!" he said, he looked at Kogu and Kogu dashed back... Kogu released energy and so did Alik, the three hounded beast tried to limp away, a trail of it's entrails dragging behind it... "Thousand Knives dash" Kogu's hair stood straight making him look like a puff ball, he dashed at the beast cutting it up horribly, he then turned and did a star formation on the beast being the center of it... The beast fell and died.
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PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 9:24 pm


Sorry mate, but we have some issues here.

Speed is alright, along with strength. But bite being as strong as a master beserker? No, it contrasts your strength of being six, while a beserkers is 10.

Also, Vice Grip is too strong, again it contridicts your strength being able to crush bones easily like that.

Thousand Knives Dash is a no go. Being as sharp as scalples? Thats stronger then the werewolves bristling fur. Granted high rank, but your making this as sharp as a sword. Tone it down some mate.


Just adjust those problems and we'll talk. I can suggest somethings.

For the Vice Grip, instead of breaking bones, make it capable of shredding the limb or flesh apart and wide open. I seen dogs do this, and would be more reasonable. And its grip can remain, as bulldogs are like that.

The Thousand Knives, just look at were's skills and you'll get a better idea

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PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 9:36 pm


Alright I edited the Strength stuff so there are only the Stats for Strength and Speed, none of the Master Beserker stuff.

Vice Grip I made it so it would tear and rip flesh along with if strategically placed, can cause internal bleeding. I can remove the Internal bleeding stuff if you want.

Thousand Knives has been so his fur is like a VERY rough piece of sandpaper. I also change the rank to A level.
PostPosted: Thu Jan 27, 2011 10:19 pm



Vice Grip is fine. Its true, if a dog gets ahold of your neck, the inner thigh, your wrists and such it can kill. So its good

Thousand Knives: Nah, I wont make you weaken it that much. Perhaps as sharp as a porcipine (sp)'s quill. They are sharp enough to hurt ALOT, and not be a fatality (unless neck or vitals are punctured). And bring it to B rank, and its accepted after that mrgreen

Oh, one other thing. How big is this thing?

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 7:14 am


Username: Avedis Angelus
Rpc Name: Allenthros Takumuri
Rpc Rank: Novice
Class: Bio Chemist

Summon's Name: Elenex
Summon's Rank: C-Rank
Pic:
User Image
Description of Summon:
Elenex is a beast summon, though it's not meant for battle. It is meant for tracking things, and transportation to that area. It's sense of smell is so great it is able to track anything anywhere with a proper smell sample, of course it's transportation is limited to the ground, and is extremely fast, but has little, to no strength. It's unable to be used in battle, it sleeps if it is not tracking something, so it becomes useless in a battle, or useless for normal transportation.

11 Speed
.5 Strength
Can NOT be used in battle
If something is not meant to be tracked, it will be asleep.

Summon's Name: Lovitris
Summon's Rank: Equivalent to Allenthros' {Uses C-Ranked Energy}
Pic:
User Image
Description of Summon:
Lovitris is sort of human like, with pitch black wings, utilizing the darkness element most people dislike in ways. Her human like appearance allows for some things about her to utilize a special form of dark arts, much like a succubus, or incubus' seduction, though not as powerful as this. Lovitris is able to speak.

Skills:
E Rank: Dark Art - Lovitris creates a small flame of darkness and then draws in mid air with it. The Small darkness comes alive in a way, or rather it moves forwards towards opponents. Though can only move in a straight line.

D Rank: Shadow Vine - Lovitris uses present shadows in the area and control them in an attempt to bind the opponent. The binding will last as long as Lovitris has a D Ranked amount of energy to use per post.

D Rank: Illusive Love - Lovitris uses charms, and energy to make herself appear as a straight male, or bisexual/lesbian female's dream date. Much like an illusion of appearance, but this only lasts for one post.

C Rank: Blackout - Lovitris shoots a ball of darkness from her wings into the air. Much like a flare technique the ball will explode in darkness, the darkness is more like a shot that is meant to alert people, or surroundings. If used in an enclosed area for two posts the area will be blacked out, and holy skills will decrease by half a rank. {-.5}, though will not cause damage to anyone.

C Rank: Wings of Love - Lovitris' wings hold a special energy inside of them that is hidden. By spreading them widely out it is released, it causes a sort of infatuation with her. Target One Rank below will be hard for target to resist, if they can or want to resist, while at same rank and higher assuming that the target is weak-minded, or extremely seducable, it will work, enough to make them hesitate The infatuation will only last for three posts.

B: Rank: Engulfing Fog - Lovitris manipulates existing shadows, and creates a fog of darkness. The fog engulfs any form of light inside of it for 2 posts, and Lovitris is the only being able to see through it. Fog reaches 40-50 feet

Speed: 8
Strength: 7
Energy: 100 at E-Rank, Add 50 Per Rank up.
Can fly with E-Ranked Energy

Rp Sample:
Allenthros sighed as he looked around. He snapped his fingers and from thin air a wolf like creature appeared. Alenthros held in his hand a staff of which it's owner he needed to find. He held the staff out and then allowed the wolf to smell it. Then he quickly jumped onto the wolf as it would dash off. Heading for apparently Yuran. Once they got there, the wolf continued on, as if it would not stop until right in front of who it was tracking. ONce it set in front of a man who looked battle ready it disappeared into a sleep. Then Allenthros would hand the man his staff.

But soon after the man attacked Allenthros. Quickly with a snap of his fingers a winged female would appear from the air, and block the staff strike with the black wings quickly. Then pushing back and the winged female set in front of Allenthros would smile. She then looked at the guy, and to the guy would appear as his wife. He would stop moving at this, not wanting to strike his wife, but soon the illusion wore off and Lovitris had snapped her fingers allowing for the shadow of the man to bind himself in place. Allenthros sighed as he walked towards the man. "Why you strike me?" He asked as not waiting for an answer he would begin to dissect the man as if he was a simple experiment. Removing the man's heart and placing it in a container just in case he needed it for some gene modification of sorts.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 10:30 am



@Ave: Ok, the first one is ok. but make him C rank. Battle or not, the stat of 11 in speed is higher then an expert trickster.

As for the other one...

How strong is the shadows?

Dark Arts: do these start the other skills? And more so does it do any damage, just to be sure.

Shadow Vine: Again how strong is ther shadow?

Illusive Love: So does this only affect females?

Black Out: No. Simply no. Being able to cover the sky in darknss and cut the power of holy magic in half? no. You need to edit it, like it can shroud a room in darkness. So this only works inside. As for cutting holy magic in half, your indicating she is weak against holy magic herself. And half is too much, make it -1 in rank. And most of all, how long does it last?

Wings of Love: How strong is the infatuation?

Fog: Ok, this can be done outside, but how big is the fog?

And one more thing, is this summon using your energy to perform skills?

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 10:45 am


Shruikan Tenshi

Vice Grip is fine. Its true, if a dog gets ahold of your neck, the inner thigh, your wrists and such it can kill. So its good

Thousand Knives: Nah, I wont make you weaken it that much. Perhaps as sharp as a porcipine (sp)'s quill. They are sharp enough to hurt ALOT, and not be a fatality (unless neck or vitals are punctured). And bring it to B rank, and its accepted after that mrgreen

Oh, one other thing. How big is this thing?


I editted it all and he is 4 ft tall, not big enough to ride on D:
PostPosted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 10:47 am


First one is C-Rank then, alright.

I figured they'd be as strong as their rank says.

Dark Art, It's literal Art...she draws in mid air with darkness and sends it forwards...

Shadow Vine, maybe they strength of the shadow depends on amount of shadows, and how big they are. since it uses existing shadows, or they are just about as strong as a D-ranked skill...since it's D-Ranked.

Illusive love, says it affects Straight Males, and Bisexual/Lesbian Females... ex, fighting against a lesbian female, or bisexual female she'll appear as if she was the dream date of the girl, whether it be male or female, lovitris appears as it, if she were to use it in battle vs straight male it appears as the male's dream date, even though against a bisexual male, or a gay male she won't be able to appear as a guy though....

I should redo blackout, cause i meant as in it does -.5 to holy energy. XDD

For that infatuation thing...I don't know how strong, I don't wanna say it prevents them from attacking her, but at the same time I don't want to downplay it...because some of my characters would attack someone they are infatuated with if they needed....

The fog, goes to about 40-50 Feet, if that is a problem for a B-Ranked technique I'll change it to A-Ranked.

She uses her own strength...that is why I have her energy at 100 when it'd be E-rank and then for each rank it's added 50. O.o

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 10:53 am


@Ave: Ok first one approved.

The second one....

With black out yeah...redo lol

Infatuation....compare it to the succubus's ratings. It'll be easier then.

Fog: Ok thats fine as B rank.

everything else looks good. So make ze edits!

@Az: You can make it a bit bigger....like say when you reach adept rank he's big enough to be ridden on.

Last thing. does your summon have its own energy? or you use energy to perform skills for him?
PostPosted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 11:12 am


ok, I changed them...

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 28, 2011 1:04 pm


Username: SorceressJacklyn
Rpc Name: Liliana
Rpc Rank: Novice (taking Adept test)
Class: Mage

Summon's Name: Alewar
Summon's Rank: C
Pic:
User Image
Description of Summon:
Speed: 9
Strength: 7

Far less common that their Red or Black counterparts, Guardian dragons are also weaker as well. Since they're weaker, their scales are only as hard as iron and they can't change into a human form but they can decrease their size to that of a large dog. It's at this size that they patrol the paths of the world to watch, learn, and protect. When this dragon recognizes another human is a guardian, or protector, of others, they bond with that person and use their skills out of the human's energy pool and stay with the human as a "pet" of sorts. They are able to use fire skills up to D Rank as well as what's below.

Sizing (Rank D): Allows the dragon's size to go from full size (city bus) to the size of a large dog and vice-versa.

Holy Fire (Rank C): Fires a stream of red and white flames, being both a holy and a fire attack. The flames die out after three posts.

Flight (Passive): self explanatory. When full size, it can carry up to 7 people. When in smallest size (large dog), it can only carry one person under 125 Ibs.

Tail Lash (Passive): The dragon uses its tail as a primary attack form. This is a blunt force attack similar to being clubbed.

Rp Sample: Liliana fell down, the burns on her arms hurting from using the fire bomb. "Alewar! I need your help!" she whimpered. The dog-sized dragon beside her grew, glaring down on the necromancer who was hurting Liliana. "Do you really wish to continue?" he boomed, the fire already churning deep in his throat. The necromancer sneered, rushing Liliana again. White flames rushed from Alewar mouth. The necromancer screamed in pain, his undead minions unable to help him. As he burned, Alewar lashed out his tail to make sure he stayed in the flames. The smell of roasted flesh filled the area as the screams died. Alewar returned to his dog size. "I'm sorry, dear Lady. He meant to kill you." Liliana got back up. "I know, Alewar. Thank you."
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