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PostPosted: Mon May 16, 2011 10:24 am


Oh my god. I... I think I love the way he hordes weird things like lint to make his bedding and pillows. It makes me think of how hamsters will do EXACTLY that. Nab anything soft and shred it up to use it for their nest. <3

He's got three positives and three negatives... but what about some kind of NEUTRAL aspects to his personality? I imagine he can be a real talker if he's warmed up to somebody and I'd generally consider "Will talk your ear off" as a neutral trait. Some people will like it and chatter happily back, some people won't mind it, and some people will hate it. Things like that. I think at least two would be good to have. *nod*

And his FEAR? I seriously love it. The way you describe it gives me this amazing image in my mind. I think a neat factor to utilize it would be that instead of rolling to see if he manages to speed up you should roll to see if he rams into anything... but then again, it would essentially still be rolling to see if he speeds up. BUT STILL. XD; It's more funny to word it that way.

A neat thing you could do with it would be... now, if it's allowed ((NOTE: I'm still VERY new to this thread and am learning all the rules)) maybe have a factor of if you roll a certain number he'll run into his opponent and potentially do harm. Of course it'd be hurting himself as well but... yeah. XD; JUST A THOUGHT!

All in all this guy seems really well thought out. I can tell how much you love him. He does a good job of standing out and doesn't just blend into the other shy/timid/generally nice students. <3
PostPosted: Mon May 16, 2011 10:46 am


Nim is so adorable! x]

He's got so much growth potential while in the Academy, and I love that about him! His reason for coming is great, and I love his history. Great job on him. c:

-- How would Nim react to someone that caught him stalking them?

-- How would Nim react to someone stealing one of his stuffed toys? Would he pursue them/change into bunny mode, or just cry until someone helped him out?

-- Does he have any other hobbies besides hoarding lint and making things out of it?

I think it would be really cute if he founded a Crafts club. x]

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PostPosted: Mon May 16, 2011 10:48 am


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Thank you for the crit~

I'm still working on his personality a bit. I have this perfect image in my mind of him, but I have a hard time transferring that to words. That make sense? This will be my focus for now.

I love the suggestion for his FEAR. I honestly never thought to have him actually run into his opponent. That is awesome!

And thank you again for all the compliments for Nim~ heart
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Nim is so adorable! x]

He's got so much growth potential while in the Academy, and I love that about him! His reason for coming is great, and I love his history. Great job on him. c:

-- How would Nim react to someone that caught him stalking them?

-- How would Nim react to someone stealing one of his stuffed toys? Would he pursue them/change into bunny mode, or just cry until someone helped him out?

-- Does he have any other hobbies besides hoarding lint and making things out of it?

I think it would be really cute if he founded a Crafts club. x]


Thank you for the crit~ heart

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-- How would Nim react to someone that caught him stalking them?

I guess it depends on the person? Obviously if someone was threatening him he'd be scared and probably want to apologize. If the person was nicer then he'd just explain himself and try to turn the situation so they could be friends.
In both situations he'd be shy at first. But he'd gain confidence as they interacted.

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-- How would Nim react to someone stealing one of his stuffed toys? Would he pursue them/change into bunny mode, or just cry until someone helped him out?

Nim would defiantly be very upset if someone just stole one of his handmade toys. He's very attached to each and every one of them. He would probably try to find them. If he could he'd just steal the toy back. If caught or confronted about it, he'd cry and run to someone else for help. (note: this would be his first year. I'd like to have him gain confidence and became braver as he grew)


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-- Does he have any other hobbies besides hoarding lint and making things out of it?

I am defiantly taking your crafting club idea >w< Nim could make all sorts of things. Even using other materials and making something for a gift. Like, lets say, a student loves plants. Nim could use grasses/flowers/etc to make a blanket, necklace, a piece to hang on the wall, etc. Nim will defiantly be very artsy~

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PostPosted: Mon May 16, 2011 12:43 pm


YESSSS. I love the addition of neutral characteristics. It's definitely seemed to round him out even further and it's interesting to see the more mundane things about him. It's SO AWESOME that he is so crafty! I love that little addition. I also like the added info on how he would interact with others.

The only thing I'd say now is go on a bit more about his fear. What would the different levels of it be like? First level, second, third. I imagine his not running into things is easier to do the better he gets at it but are there any other added bonuses than just being REALLY FRIGGIN' FAST?
PostPosted: Mon May 16, 2011 1:49 pm


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YESSSS. I love the addition of neutral characteristics. It's definitely seemed to round him out even further and it's interesting to see the more mundane things about him. It's SO AWESOME that he is so crafty! I love that little addition. I also like the added info on how he would interact with others.

The only thing I'd say now is go on a bit more about his fear. What would the different levels of it be like? First level, second, third. I imagine his not running into things is easier to do the better he gets at it but are there any other added bonuses than just being REALLY FRIGGIN' FAST?



Thank you~ heart I agree it made him more rounded as a character.

His FEAR hmmm.....I'll really have to think about that.
Year 1:
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When troubled or scared, Nim increases his speed (usually to run away). It is extremely hard to track, much less see him. Nim, so far, will lose focus when using his FEAR. His senses dull from panic and he can easily harm himself (ex: running into something/someone).

Year 2: Nim has more control and usually doesn't run into things unless he wants to. He can now use his FEAR and natural ability at once. Meaning he can use his speed and transform into his bunny form while running. It normally doesn't work but will get better with practice.
Year 3 & Beyond: Nim has mastered not only controlling his speed but also transforming while in mid-run. With some more practice Nim can use both techniques in creative ways. Now he can move so fast it seems like he teleports and he can run and jump to extreme heights.


How's that? >w<

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PostPosted: Mon May 16, 2011 4:57 pm


OAO such a cutie!

I'm concerned about his Fear ability not really having an offensive feature, maybe he could tackle the opponent while running in the future?

His quirks are amazing, its so eccentric and bloody adorable.

He may one of the very few rabbits that Demi might not try to eat.
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