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 Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 3:24 pm
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Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 3:34 pm
Egam Dnarg II  | Bloodline: N/a | Ninja Types: N/a | Faction: N/a | Genin |
|| Shinobi Profession: Ninjutsu Specialist || Profile ||
[] Victories: N/a [] Defeats: N/a [] S treak: N/a [] Egam felt her hand wrap around his right arm, and he thought for a quick second, poushing off the ground and using her body to swing underneath her a little bit while twisting his body, lacing his right arm on his left side, and his left arm on his right side, his feet reaching the other side. He smiled, feel-ing her twisting his right arm. He began to attempt to twist it back, straining as he did so.he maneuvered the Kunai in his hand, attempting to put the loop of metal at it's end around his finger. With his left arm, which was held by her injured arm, he straightened it, attempting to grab grab onto her forearm as well, and attempting to twist it. He smiled, his arm might hurt a bit, but this was rolling her arm inwards, not only would this seem easy for her to do, but it would rotate her shoulder which held the four shuriken inside of it. If she could continue to hold onto his left hand, then Egam would be worried. The amount of pain that she would be feeling would be excrutiating. He thought about the clone, attempting to keep it in his feild of vision, but finding it hard to see behind his head. ( Ok, basically now he is just sitting on the ground infront of her, with his arms kinda crossed and his feet behind her. That is a legal move right? Fighting is pretty hard. )
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Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 7:31 pm
 「Kiyomi Urashion」
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Genin ◆ Taijutsu Specialist ◆ Free Agency
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With her attempt to grab Egam's left forearm being a success, Kiyoko would be able to have a better control of the fight. Noticing that her opponent planned to get away by moving underneath her, she moved her right leg forward, to quickly send a kick at his stomach while pulling his right arm upwards. With his reckless movement, and by also twisting his body even more in a foolish attempt to get rid of her grip, his right shoulder would probably be dislocated at that time. As she noticed Egam was trying to grab hold of her right forearm, Kiyomi did not worry. When he tried to twist her arm, as she was doing with him, the kunoichi knew that he was trying to take an advantage of her wound, but even so she didn't let go of his arm, and endured the pain, while twisting his arm at the opposite direction he was trying to twist hers. It would be harder to endure if she had to do it slowly, while Egam tried to keep his arms crossed, so Kiyomi gathered her strength to endure the pain and twisted Egam's left arm, while pulling it upwards aswell, with a quick motion. She let out her voice, in single shout, yet it was more of a battle cry than a scream because of pain itself. Her shoulder was bleeding but if her plan goes right, this fight wouldn't last much longer
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Kiyomi's clone, who was aiming for the center of Egam's back, had her kunai still going towards his body. She held the kunai with both hands and followed the movement of her opponent, so she would be able pierce through his back with the whole blade of the kunai while his movements seemed to be restrained by Kiyomi. If he continues to struggle, but doesn't manage to completely get out of the way, there is the possibility that Kiyomi's clone will hit his spinal cord at his back or the back of his neck.
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Ͼhakra Ҏoints - 23/25 (The thought of Hinata going all "Inner Sakura Hinata" while Kiyomi shouted, got on my mind as soon as I finished editing the post ._.)
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Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 7:34 pm
( How are you stepping on Egam if he is behind you? )
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Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 7:51 pm
(Egam attempted to slide underneath Kiyomi, as she was still holding his right wirst, and didn't avoid her left hand, she did not allow him to completely slide and get behind her. If holding him wouldn't be enough for that, Kiyomi had attempted to stomp on him in order to stop his movement.
If you say that he was able to slide under Kiyomi, without her being able to do anything, wouldn't it be called god mod?)
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Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 7:55 pm
( Then what about his jutsu? You can't ignore than, and since you stopped him mid slide he can only hit a more sensitive area. Wouldn't you call that God modding in itself? Completely ignoring his jutsu? Just because you have his wrist doesn't mean you keep him from using his fingers for handsigns. )
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( not to mention her mobility and amount of strain she can put on her right arm is weakened, because of the four shuriken that are currently imbedded in it. So I'm some what wondering why you failed to mention that even though you said she couldn't dodge it. Thusly you've been neglecting a vital part of the environment, because I'm pretty sure your character isn't immune to pain. )
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Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 8:09 pm
(She isn't immune to pain, that's why the tight grip is of her left hand. Egam's attempt to perform a jutsu, with his wrist being tightly held and without even dropping the kunai, while his left forearm is also being held, even though not tightly as his right wrist, would be kinda useless, don't you think?)
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Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 9:39 pm
{As a Referee, I'm going to step in on this one. A few things I need to point out:
1. If a jutsu is being used, it is mandatory that you quote the jutsu and it's description in your post. I don't mean describe, but copy & paste, the jutsu from the jutsu list.
2. Neru, you need to list your chakra levels.
3. By the manner in which she has a grip on your arm, Neru, attempting to slip under her would dislocate your shoulder.
4. On an entirely other note, Her grip and the fact that you are still holding a Kunai, would prevent you from performing any hand seals.
5. Neru, your post automatically assumes that your attempt to slide under her succeeds.
As such, my decision requires that you edit your last post with a different escape attempt or another plan of some sort, Neru. Beatriz, you'll need to edit yours to his new one.}
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Posted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 9:47 pm
(I just didn't quote it because the jutsu creates just a clone, plain and simple, with the ability to attack and be attacked nothing else. But anyway, edited it.
Now I just have to wait for Neru to edit his post.)
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Posted: Sat Jan 15, 2011 6:19 pm
( Oh, I thought she was attempting to grab one arm with both of her hands. Ok. Then that makes things different. I'll get to editing right now. )
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 12:28 am
(Edits done, even though I feel something might go wrong as there was something on your post that was censored. What was it?)
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 8:47 am
( Eaither Gaia dislikes the word feeling, or he and began without a space is something bad... )
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( You only get one attack per post... Grabbing, twisting, kicking, twisting, all of these are considerd attacks. At most you'd get two, one from you and the stab from your clone...
If I'm not correct can someone please tell me so? )
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 9:06 am
Egam Dnarg II | Bloodline: N/a | Ninja Types: N/a | Faction: N/a | Genin |
|| Shinobi Profession: Ninjutsu Specialist || Profile ||
[] Victories: N/a [] Defeats: N/a [] S treak: N/a [] Egam smiled, turning his head a bit to monitor the Clone's incoming attack. He raised his feet, placing them securely on Kiyomi's hips. with the hudding of her foot to his stomache he used her own force to roll backwards, his head narowly missing the Clone's Kunai. He had rolled far enough back that she would stumble forwards because his stomache was her right foot's only hold, and by rolling it got caught between his pelvis bone, and his rib cage's lower part. She also would have to follow because of his hold on her body, and by rolling slightly to the left, he was preying on her hurt arm, which inevitably would make the already hurting arm that she seemed to be ignoring hurt much more as it was the one to carry most of the force of his roll. his legs straight, no matter what her left foot would have to leave the ground, because he could easily tell that their legs were about the same length, if not his were longer. This would aid in the fact that he was attempting to roll back far enough that he put her under him, and the clone under both of them. If indeed she did keep her fool hardy grip on his arms, Egam would be leanng forward ontop of her, as she lay on her back ontop of the clone. this way if she kept her hold on him he'd be in thearea of power, capable of exerting more force over her.
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 1:45 pm
(Unfortunately, I have to say that your movement just now would be probably impossible. You stated at the end of your previous post that Egam would be sitting on the ground. Unless he has automatic wheels underneath him or uses some sort of jutsu to move himself without the help of his hands, I don't think he'd be able to slide in his current situation. Even if he could, trying to slide underneath someone's leg that is so close, with a kick aimed for your stomach, would probably just end up causing the kick to hit somewhere else above your stomach, such as your throath, chin or face. It also seems that you forgot the fact that Kiyomi is still holding both of his arms and pulling them upwards, and is physically stronger than Egam. And there is also the fact that Kiyomi's clone was already close enough to stab you since my previous post, meaning it would be really hard for you to dodge the kunai, without breaking free and moving away within an instant.)
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Posted: Sun Jan 16, 2011 3:51 pm
( You're still using two attacks besides the one from your clone in the same post. If you really want to lift, and move you're leg, then technically I can have Egam flip you and use you to hit your clone, destroying it and possibly stabbing you with a Kunai.
And He is sliding by pulling himself under your arms, thusly he would move farther underneath you. to kick him you have to pick up your right foot, he is dodging to the right of said foot, putting him on the outside. This not only puts more strain on your left shoulder, but places YOUR leg between me and YOUR clone. Thusly if you want to, go ahead and get stabbed in the shin. )
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