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Jesus Crisis

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 8:19 am


i know its not over but i vote cEAz since its pretty much over
so do i really have to give a detailed explanation as to why?
PostPosted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 8:31 am


No, No, it is OVER, people can vote now.

jceaz


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PostPosted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 8:14 pm


For some reason everyone who battles Ceaz thinks it's necessary to name drop me gonk Thus stopping me from voting on the battle.
PostPosted: Wed Jan 12, 2011 9:44 pm


Syllvurr
For some reason everyone who battles Ceaz thinks it's necessary to name drop me gonk Thus stopping me from voting on the battle.
This vote doesn't count because I name dr- Oh, you didn't vote. b*****d.

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jceaz

PostPosted: Thu Jan 13, 2011 7:03 am


1-0 and no one else is voting, if they did It would be for me...Just...forfeit.
PostPosted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 4:17 am


Yeah honestly this battle was over in the first round, Ceaz punches were way strong when he wasn't being lazy. But I see potential in Sauce. Couple small multies were nice to see and the inclusion of wordplay was something I wasn't expecting. The name plays on Ceaz's name were a bit over played by the end though. I did like

applesauce600

I'ma call him Jay 'cause he’s now de-ceaz'd.


applesauce600
Used to just be Jay, then the crowd went "Jay! Cease-
rapping"


but they could've been done a little better to maximise impact, but it's good to see that you can come up with s**t like that. I think you could improve more by not thinking of the battle as a debate. Like you come at it almost logically like "This is why I'm better, don't you agree", and when you're going against someone who goes as hard as Ceaz he'll just be all like "Splendid point sir however I must deject, for I have it on good authority your mother is a whore" and that's how you win battles. Every two lines you write you should think to yourself 'Will someone vote for me because of this line?' That should help you keep up the intensity and stay consistently strong.

So yeah, Vote: Ceaz but Apple, stay at it. Practise makes perfect and all that bullshit.

That concludes today's session of Battle Rapping 101. That'll be 100 thousand gold please...

Lucky Lucifer
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PostPosted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 2:06 pm


i can't be bothered to vote im a lazy ********
PostPosted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 4:54 pm


Lucky Lucifer
Yeah honestly this battle was over in the first round, Ceaz punches were way strong when he wasn't being lazy. But I see potential in Sauce. Couple small multies were nice to see and the inclusion of wordplay was something I wasn't expecting. The name plays on Ceaz's name were a bit over played by the end though. I did like

applesauce600

I'ma call him Jay 'cause he’s now de-ceaz'd.


applesauce600
Used to just be Jay, then the crowd went "Jay! Cease-
rapping"


but they could've been done a little better to maximise impact, but it's good to see that you can come up with s**t like that. I think you could improve more by not thinking of the battle as a debate. Like you come at it almost logically like "This is why I'm better, don't you agree", and when you're going against someone who goes as hard as Ceaz he'll just be all like "Splendid point sir however I must deject, for I have it on good authority your mother is a whore" and that's how you win battles. Every two lines you write you should think to yourself 'Will someone vote for me because of this line?' That should help you keep up the intensity and stay consistently strong.

So yeah, Vote: Ceaz but Apple, stay at it. Practise makes perfect and all that bullshit.

That concludes today's session of Battle Rapping 101. That'll be 100 thousand gold please...


lol

Syllvurr


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PostPosted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 5:19 pm


Lucky Lucifer
Apple, stay at it..
Easier said than done. Contrary to popular belief the name of this place isn't Rapper's Haven it's Rappers Waitin', because no one wants to battle here.
PostPosted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 7:08 pm


Because I'm the Shark in the ******** water and these pussies are bleeding their insides out.

jceaz


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PostPosted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 9:14 pm


ImShizzle
i can't be bothered to vote im a lazy ******** class="clear">

lol thats ******** up lmao
PostPosted: Fri Jan 14, 2011 10:29 pm


jceaz
Because I'm the Shark in the ******** water and these pussies are bleeding their insides out.
This whole guild is playing the most ******** up prank on you.

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jceaz

PostPosted: Sat Jan 15, 2011 12:27 am


applesauce600
jceaz
Because I'm the Shark in the ******** water and these pussies are bleeding their insides out.
This whole guild is playing the most ******** up prank on you.


The only time I ever insulted you was in a battle, yet you stay taking shots at me, comments like this, off hand s**t talking about my punchlines between verses. Come on son. Stop catchin feelings.
PostPosted: Sat Jan 15, 2011 1:05 am


jceaz
applesauce600
jceaz
Because I'm the Shark in the ******** water and these pussies are bleeding their insides out.
This whole guild is playing the most ******** up prank on you.


The only time I ever insulted you was in a battle, yet you stay taking shots at me, comments like this, off hand s**t talking about my punchlines between verses. Come on son. Stop catchin feelings.
Name one time? And you said my verse was so bad I should just forfeit, that's easily makes my comment a balancing factor.

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jceaz

PostPosted: Sat Jan 15, 2011 3:24 am


1, I never said s**t about your verse is bad. Ask anyone here, I might be arrogant but I'm not a bad sport. I never resort to swaying votes.

2. A balancing factor? You started the s**t talk.


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