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'and so she tries to hide it her prankster side' - Typo? XD


Her personality and overall design looks good to me! As for other stuuuffff....


I noticed that her species got changed again from when Ary crit'ed her. XD It just really sucks when you have a character idea and can't find the right species! But it seems like you're on the right track now with that. The new species is a horse-thing, so her equine form makes sense, and so does the fact that she can fly as a horse, since the myth-base says that these things can fly. Good job on that! The only thing is, rather than sparks coming from the hooves, maybe she should just glow - as there's no mention of sparks, but it does say some are 'luminous'.

Howeeevvver, now I'm kind of wondering where her Fear comes from. Yea, it kind of makes sense that because the horse can fly, she can hover. But I'm wondering how useful that would actually be? Looking at the myth-base, it might be more interesting to give her something like... hrmn. Maybe something having to do with weather/storms/the sea (or water in general) since those are all things associated with this critter. Or something like super-strength, based on the storis of dragging people into the sea and so on - with cart/plow attached.

Hope that helps! <3 Good luck!

One more picture!

"PENDANTS!" Came the shout from the gnome on the desk.

However, gnome on the typewriter was having a hard time hearing his buddy, considering over the long heaving sobs of the Shredder's last failed attempt to eat the last student application form, which the Acceptance Bin was more than ever happily munching on. "P.. WHAT?"

"PENDANTS! WE HAVE TO FIND.. THE PENDANTS."

"I STILL CANT HEAR YOU WHAT?"

"PENDANTS... PENDANTS..... PENDANTS!!"

The next day, the students were rather puzzled to hear on the school bulletin as to why there was an announcement involving "Ponies Ponies Ponies!!"