Ziemeyl II
Check my profile. I just finished it and it's my first time to use the site but truly I can say that I love wix! heart
I find that the font that you are using for your name doesn’t suit the look of the profile.
I think you could use a better song, but I wouldn’t know what to suggest. Something with a piano, flute or violin would seem best.
The tabs on the side take away from the light hearted feeling of the profile, in the background you show an animated sky, and in the foreground you show an angelic figure. The tabs being solid, weigh it down. I’d go with transparent tabs for your profile.
Now I’m at the part I would rather not comment about. Your avi art, though it is very nice, is not up to par with the rest of the profile. I would recommend you to commission another artist to redo that for you.
All in all, I give it a 6/10.