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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 11:22 am
Username: Ishtanballa Mare's Name: Anya Mare's Temper: Damaged Prompt Response:
The crimson stained full moon hung high up in the night sky, blanketing the world down below in red. At first, it felt no different than any other night. The pull of those invisible puppet strings that bound her to follow every command the Animal Handler made, were just as strong as ever. Following the pull of those strings, she circled in the air above the expectant audience. As she circled like a vulture over an abandoned corpse, she could feel their gaze upon her bat form. Watching for her to make her move.
When those invisible strings gave a dull tug, she tucked her leathery wings against her sides and dived towards the spectators. The pull guiding her towards her intended target, a young woman with long curly hair the color of wheat. With perfect timing, she swooped up and into the masses of curls, tangling herself within the locks.
Laughter and applause filled the air, accompanying the woman's shrieks and high pitched giggles. This was her existence. Night after night, it was the same thing. The laughter and applause, the humiliation, she wanted it all to stop! She wanted their delight and glee to be replaced with fear. To stain the ground with their blood as they begged for mercy. She wanted....
The laughter ceased as the woman's scream filled the air, warm droplets the same shade of crimson as the moon, cascaded down her cheek. Anya testingly flexed the clawed toes that had cut into the woman's cheek, delighted to find them listening to her. And it wasn't just her toes.
She squirmed within the wheat colored locks, pulling, tugging, and ripping towards freedom. With gleeful chattering, she took to the air once more. She shook the clinging strands of hair from her form, imagining them to be those pesky puppet strings that had held her captive for so long.
After so long, she was free. She could finally escape this hell hole. She could-
The sounds and movement below drew the mare's attention. With a dark satisfaction, she watched as people slunk off, some assisting the woman's whose hair she had been tangled within just moments ago. How long had she dreamed of this moment? Could she really pass up this opportunity?
Fueled by the thirst for revenge, she swooped towards a group of people. Thoughts of escaping disappearing as her body shifted to her true form, crushing her smaller prey beneath her body. Knickering out of ecstasy, she danced upon the fallen bodies, their warm life giving fluid covering her coat.
Now, she truly felt alive. Trapped within her dark glee, the mare fell upon the carnival like a vicious storm. Destroying anything, and anyone, within her path as she absorbed her prey's fear like a drunk consumed liqueur. It felt as if nothing could stop her, as if she would reign all supreme over that night of the blood red moon.
A shadow fell over the batwalker, followed by an explosion of pain in her side. Gasping for air, she fell to the hard ground. With unfocused eyes, she gazed up at her attacker, taking in the dark shadow with the wings of a demon. Before her world could come back into focus, she was knocked into the world of black by something heavy falling upon her head.
When she returned to the realm of wakefulness, she was greeted by the familiar sight of prison bars. She had but a taste of freedom, but it was enough to satiate her, until the next red moon. With that thought in mind, she hummed a soft lullaby and dreamed of bloodshed.
Comments: If it's not obvious, the figure that stopped her rampage was the Kalona form of the Animal Handler xD;
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 2:10 pm
Username: Split personality Mare's Name: Lavidikus Mare's Temper: Despising Prompt Response: It had been too long since she could be free and fly against the night sky! So long since she felt the caress of a full moon... she belonged out there... not here in captivity. In these chains. She stared down at the bindings that held her hind legs. Curse them. She bent down and snapped at them with a growl, her wings tucked up against her protectively.
She hated it here. She never behaved as they wanted and... they had threatened to break the thin and delicate bones in her wings more than once. That did frighten her... nothing else did. Especially them! She bent her head again, sniffing at the chains. Tonight was the night... the night of her escape.
How did she know this! She had been planning it. as of late, she had been acting very beat down and destroyed. To them, she seemed as though her wild streak was broken and they rewarded her with treats and trinkets. All of these she chewed into pieces in secret. Truth was, her escape had been planned out back when her freedom was taken away. You see, these fools knew naught a thing about her... especially the fact she could turn into a bat.
Why hadn't she thought about this a while ago? In fact, she had many many times... but they watched her closely. They had nets and other devices to trap her and ensnare her. Damn them. But now their guard was down. She had no guard standing over her. This was it. With a final sigh, she became small and light and flew, her legs easily slipping past the bindings and she flew, to the ceiling-clinging to it. She looked down at where she had been standing as an attraction for so long.
She slipped out the canvas tent easily, sitting atop it and staring into the night sky. Freedom. These fools... should have watched their little prize more intently.
Comments: One must wait for good things sometimes.
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 3:40 pm
Username: Moon_Princess_Yuki Mare's Name: Sharmaine Mare's Temper: Malevolent Prompt Response: Again she was forced to be the toy of this insignificant little morsel. Again she was forced to act as entertainment for the frivolous bug's below her. If only the power that he had over her would weaken. If only she could free her self and become what she truly was. A terror to all who saw her, that's what she was. She would escape, she would get her revenge on the weak little creature and this bothersome carnival full of readied victims. She would make sure to shed his blood so he understands the lust she gained in this new form given to her by him. This form that she is intent on using to raise terror in the heart's of many and spill blood to the floor as she dances on corpses. She will no longer use it to entertain those feeble minded lout's she hope's to soon call prey.
As she dreamed of her bloody future as the chain's of his magic pull her here and there the full blood red moon, that this horrid show was named for, shed a sliver of it's light onto her matching crescent tattoo and a wave of strength and a hint of weakness hit her. The weakness she felt was in the magic that bound her while the strength was her own. She cackled the new strength filling her every bone, her every muscle. She knew now was the time for her rein of terror to begin. She tightened her wing's around her and burst out as the soquili she was, a free soquili at that but different then before. She was had been a regular Soquili before but with the change to the bat like shape she had changed, she was different now. She was stronger and she could fly, though she soon learnt not for long. She descended slowly watching the tiny prey run in fear of this new creature before them. He wishful future had become her bloody present much to her jubilation. She grinned down at the weak man, taking her eye's from the fleeing crowd, who once was her master and would now be her first victim, a psychotic glint in her eye as she glared. "Oh, master do not tell me you are afraid of me just because I broke your chain's? Do you think I was going to take revenge on your pitiable soul just because you caged a beast such as I?" She asked as she landed close to this tiny creature, her wicked grin and psychotic glint never flickering for a second as she looked down into those fear ridden eye's. Oh how she wanted to gouge them from his face with her new found claw's and dance to the rhythm of his pain ridden scream's before she finally gave mercy to his undeserving soul and crushed him beneath her hooves letting him slip into the sweet embrace of death.
The master of the ring gasped as his prisoner having broken his binding's spoke to him. Her voice did not seem angry or upset, but how could anyone trust those sharp readied teeth or those blood red eye's. Though with this knowledge he was still too scared to move. He waited for the attack even as the monster promised no attack, gulping dry air into his lung's he watched as the monster finished her query those vicious eye's never leaving his. "You are a beast of darkness I knew using you like this would cause my death one day." He didn't actually believe this he was just stalling to prepare. He never thought that the beast would escape those magic shackles. He was gathering up strength for a new stronger binding. He would catch the beast again, before the beast got him. his power ready he flung out his hand's with a laugh throwing his magical net at the fiend. "But that day will not be today!"
The monstrous bat creature heard the magic being made long before she saw him fling it, she was prepared. She jumped into the air away from the vermin's magic. Flapping her wing's in this form she was only able to go so high she would have to shift to her bat self if she was to escape. But should she leave him now? Shouldn't she get her revenge this instant not wait for day's if not year's? She heard it once more, the light vibration that was his magic forming. She growled knowing that at the moment she was not strong enough to break it once more, and knowing she could only avoid this last attempt as he weak bat self. "I will not be caught by you again weak man! I will leave you today so I can savor my freedom and my revenge! This is not the last you will see of me! your blood will paint my hooves!" With that she beat her large wing's once as hard has she could causing her to shoot into the air and a huge gust of wind to blow her old captor to the floor. She flew off in her huge bat form taking in the fresh air of her freedom, and the sweet feeling of blood lust from her coming revenge.
His magic failed, the beast was able to get away from his reach. He was getting ready to try again as a gust of wind blew him down. As he recovered himself and looked for the beast she had already fled and was nothing but a speck in the sky.
Comments: This was fun. I really love this girl. I went for the whole revenge thing but kept he from getting it so she could have something to drive her. I really hope I can play with her more but still thank's for this chance to use her at least once ^_^
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 3:52 pm
Username: Mare's Name: Kanali Mare's Temper biggrin eceiving Prompt Response: She was alone on that fateful day they took her and turnd her into one of them..She never had a chance..Now you see she will stop at nothing to give back what they all deserve..
It was the dead of the night as she spread her wings out.She was plotting something to get free of the life she had been living for the past 13 years. She was not very old brave and strong she was most of all she was cunning. She had a plan and she was going to put it into action before the final curtain fell upon her...
"Ladies and Gentelman we give you.. Kanali! The creature is both bat and horse!" *The conductor lifted his top hat in the direction of Kanali* "Please direct your full attention to the east door!"
There she was her face filled with disgust and hatred. The things they made here do here were so unjust even for humans she hated them all what they had done to her had always been unforgivable. She flashed a smile to the crowd knowing what they thought of her and how she looked.It was not her fault she had to live like this..It started many years ago when she was out alone with not a care in the world. That was when they turned her into this beast of a creature.For now though it was back to the show but she knew before the final curtain fell she would be free of this life even if she had to take some lives down with get.
Kanali could hear someone coming up behind her and she turned around fangs bared wings raised.When she saw who it was though her wings lowered and she frowned
"What are you doing here!!! Its not time for your act get off my stage!!! You going to ruin my plan!!" She turns her attention back to the conductor giving her orders.
"Kanali! Will you please show the crowd what you can do..?"
"No" she thought "I will no longer serve you and your carnival of nightmares!"
At that she snapped at the conductor biting his arm off. she watched his eyes roll into the back of his head as he dropped dead. The crowd started to scream and run to the exits but she would not let them escape never again would she endure this. She let out a laugh and smiled a wicked smile her lips curling to show her fangs.
"NEVER again will i serve you! I will not follow your orders!!!!!This blood here its my oath that i am no longer a servant of this wicked place!" She grins again licking the blood off her face.
"Bats are not vile but you all are! I am just an incontent that was turned agent my will!!! I am a beast and a monster!!! I will admit it!" She spreads her wings out preparing to bolt out of the tent
"I hope you all die a death as i have just avenged myself!! I will never regert what has taken place tonight.. I have killed and i liked it.." She lickes her face again "I am free at last!!!"
She takes off running feeling the wind fun through her fur for the first time since she was taken from her home all those years ago. She then sees the one who was with her in the tent.
"Better take off running i have the taste of blood and i LIKE IT!!!!!!"
She spreads her wings and glides some before landing and leaving a trail of dust in her midst.
"If i was not a monster..i would still not apologize for what i have done...I am free and nothing can ever change that..I will never love or have friends but i am ok with that..I admit what i am and accept myself for who i am..I am Kanali"
Comments: That is one amazing Skinwalker. I tried writing RP style but kind of failed lol better at first person
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 3:58 pm
Username: tefla Mare's Name: Terra Stryker Mare's Temper: Unstable Prompt Response:
The moon was full and bright. It bathed the land in white and lent an eerie atmosphere to the carnival that sat on the hilltop. Many a Soquili heard the rumors of the Blood Moon Carnival troupe and most seemed to believe what they heard. One Soquili believed in the rumors all too well.
Terra Stryker gazed at the moon with an intensity that no one but herself could understand. It held the source of the power that confined the restless mare to the small enclosure that was her home during the hours where she did not have to perform to the amusement of the carnival goers. Chains around her feet kept the mare immobile most days. However over the past few nights there had been a sense of loss to the enchantments that bound her. Terra had sensed the shift and longed to find freedom. She had to wait just long enough that the Animal Handler would not pick up on the change until it was too late.
A few hours passed in which Terra had put on another two shows of flying around in her bat form performing to the merry tune that was demanded of her before she was ushered unceremoniously back into her cage. Her energy reserves were depleted. A small pile of fresh-kill was waiting for Terra after the show and the mare ate ravenously. Savoring the blood that trickled down into her stomach the mare grinned - how nice of the carnival to restore enough of her lost energy for her to escape.
Sounds of the carnival reached her ears and Terra knew that now was the perfect time to escape. Straining against the chains the mare put all her effort into snapping the restraints.
Snap. Snap. Crack. Snap.
Terra froze. The sounds of the links being torn from the walls was nothing compared to the nickering of excitement that passed through her lips. Her left foreleg rose off the ground and she paused to examine it. Possibly badly sprained or broken. Terra did not know and did not wait to find out. Taking to her bat form she soared out into the open sky and chittered softly. Releasing a sharp blast of pure sound Terra waited for the picture of the carnival to be shaped into her mind. Freedom - it never tasted so good. All those Soquili down there had no idea what was to become of the sideshow that was once her. The picture was now complete in her mind. Banking sharply Terra folded her wings and let gravity win its pull over her body. She angled the fall so she would land roughly at the Midway games. There were a lot of Soquili concentrated in this area and it would only take a fraction of time to subdue a victim. Phasing at last the last minute Terra regained her true form and lashed out at a helpless colt. Her teeth sunk into the colt's flank and with the first taste of fresh blood she felt the infusion of her strength return from that single act of devouring another Soquili's life force.
Time however was short and Terra would not be able to enjoy the pleasure of sticking around. Releasing her would-be-meal she took a short hopping run and shifted. The energy she received from her unwilling meal would be enough to see her clear of the carnival. Then the rest of the Soquili world would learn to fear her name ...
Terra Stryker.
What seemed like moments later a resounding snarl was heard from the enclosure holding the infamous bat-mare. The beast inside raged at the thought that her escape and resulting freedom had merely been a figment of her imagination - a dream.
Comments: I wanted to try an avenue that hadn't been explored yet. I had fun writing this.
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 5:40 pm
Username: CheshireKttty Mare's Name: Sans Merci (meaning without mercy) Mare's Temper: Misandric Prompt Response:Beyond the lights of the carnival, the unsuspecting spectators, and the many booths full of games, there remained one lone, foreboding tent. Dark shadows shrouded the tent and all was silent. There were no lights to attract anyone here, no ticket booth, nothing, not even a sign. Inside the tent, beneath the shadows of the night, one wing twitched, and then another, stretching out as if it's owner had just awoken from a restful nap. Sans Merci slowly opened her eyes and observed her surroundings without interest. The look on her face was one of displeasure, nothing amused her anymore... nothing but the screams of the innocent and the look of terror on their faces. A small, sinister smile crept upon her face at such wondrous thoughts. Ah! What fun she could have if only she were not bound by these lowly creatures. They did nothing but disgust her. What was the point of these silly shows they forced her to put on? How could they be amused by such childish displays? The mare shook her head in silent distress. She needed to leave this place, her hunt was not finished and had been delayed for far too long. Gallant was still out there somewhere, likely amused by thoughts of what had become of her. In her tainted memories, she knew he had made her this way. It was his fault, and his alone and because of him that all men MUST die. The hurt that she had once felt was gone now, instead he would pay for that fateful day when he had left her. The sweet, forgiving mare that she had once been was no longer. Not an ounce of Mercy remained. No, she was without mercy now, and forever would be. Deep within her thoughts, the mare hadn't noticed the entrance of the freak. His face looked as if it had been melted by fire, whether or not it had, Merci did not know. Her icy glare looked him over as she noticed his approach. How DARE they send a man? Where was her master? That awful woman who had captured her? Merci had been a fool to allow herself to be brought to this place, but it had been an evil trap, and a well placed one at that. The young man quickly began to feed her as he talked to her. "Hey there missy," He started quietly, as if he were trying to make a friend. "The handler isn't feeling well tonight, they've canceled the show and asked me to feed you." He smiled up at her, as if this was some great task that he had been assigned. Merci snorted lightly at how happy the man sounded. Perhaps she could use this scum, turn him into her minion. Once he was of no use to her she'd be rid of him. Sans Merci put on a false, friendly voice. "Why do they keep me locked up?" She asked him, sounding as if she were about to cry. "I only want to stretch my wings, yet they never let me out! I always do as I'm bid don't I? Why must they be so cruel?" She spoke convincingly. The young man was obviously not familiar with her kind and gave into her feminine charm almost too easily. "I don't know! Why would they keep such a nice girl like you locked up? Is there anything that I can do to help?" He asked. She smiled her vicious little smile, this man was falling right into her trap. "Just let me out for a few minutes? I only want to stretch and I promise I'll be good." She begged him. It was quite obvious that he was torn, he wanted to help her, but he also wouldn't want to get into any trouble. Using her eyes, she gave him a sad, helpless look and he caved. "Alright." He told her. "Just for a few moments, that's all though." He tried to sound authoritative but it didn't work on her. Once he had found the key to her chains, he set about the task of unlocking her. Merci smiled as she felt their weight fall from her body. She was free! Her eyes turned cold once more and she turned to face the man who had freed her. "You!" She spoke harshly, no longer needing to act. "Bring me some men, some of the spectators from the carnival." She noticed the fear on his face and his hesitation. "Do it now or you die!" She roared at him. Within minutes the man returned with a few male companions. She could hear him telling them about an exciting new exhibit, letting them think that they were lucky to be chosen to see it first. As soon as the men had entered the tent she attacked. They were helpless to her onslaught and soon they were no more. Unsatisfied, she ordered the freak out once more. She went on this way for a good hour and then became bored. Her need to hunt and kill was never satisfied and there were only so many men in one carnival, however, none of them were Gallant. Sans Merci turned to face the man who had assisted in her murders, her face covered in their blood she started at him for a few moments. "I have no more use for you." She said calmly, and began to start toward him. Instantly, the look of fear that had been on the man's face, dissolved into a look of shear panic and horror. "But you promised!" He screamed. "I did as you told me too! Please have mercy!" Her eyes flashed at the mention of mercy. "I lied." She said matter of factly. "All men are pigs, they deserve no mercy." She sneered and then finished him off as she had the rest of the men. Now, now she could leave. She was free and no one else would ever ensnare her again. There were more men to kill, and Gallant was still out there somewhere, waiting for her to hunt him down. Comments: I'm really falling in love with this character as much as I have with the soquili XD I've worked on some back story and have some plot for the future. I really had fun with this contest and I'm really happy to see all of the hard work everyone has put into the event! Thank you all <3 Oh, and her character is also slightly based off of La Belle Dame Sans Merci
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 6:40 pm
Username: Alanna the Pirate Queen Mare's Name: Tatiana Mare's Temper: Batty (pun intended!) Prompt Response:
It had been a long time, such a long time indeed. What was freedom again? She couldn't remember... she couldn't remember anything anymore. It was as though a cloudy haze wrapped itself around her mind, keeping her from ever grasping at a thought for too long... Clinging to the shoulder and back of her keeper, she hissed as they stepped into the bright stage light. Twitch, twitch... her head twitched uncontrollably... she wasn't even sure when she'd developed that annoying habit. Twitch, twitch... it had been happening more and more lately...
"Ladies and Gentlemen, feast your eyes on the oddest of oddities! Never before have you seen a bat this size! Never before have you seen a bat so tame! Marvel as I compel this beast to do my bidding!"
The Animal Handler finished up her speech with a discreet twist of one of Tatiana's claws... a warning that if she messed anything up, she would pay for it dearly.
Why were the lights so bright tonight...? The moon, so full and annoying... Her eye and shoulder twitched this time, more violently than before. It was as though there was a net covering her, and her body was trying to shrug it off.
The Animal Handler narrowed her eyes as she noticed the twitching, and opened a small bottle she had hidden up her sleeve. A scent wafted from the vial, and spiraled up to Tatiana's hyperactive nose. The bat snorted and sneezed at the smell, but then her eyes misted over once more and the twitching stopped.
All thoughts exited her mind; everything was perfect, everything was wonderful, she was happy, everyone was happy. With a screech, she swooped through the crowd and landed on a stallion's back, cuddling up into his mane. The crowd laughed and clapped at the sight, but the sounds simply slipped away from Tatiana. She didn't care about anything, everything was wonderful...
The stallion snorted and tossed his head, about to buck her off when suddenly, the Animal Handler called out, "Easy there! She is the tamest bat in the world, you've nothing to fear as long as I am here!"
Tatiana crooned and was about to fly off when she slipped; her drug addled mind making her clumsier than usual. There was something about that moon too; it was as though it was telling her body to do something, but she wasn't sure what it wanted to do. It felt as though her body was too small... too small...
Unwilling to fall to the ground, she grabbed at the stallion, opening a large gash on his neck. The stallion screamed, the Animal Handler cursed, and Tatiana shuddered, freezing in place, her teeth sunk deep into the male's flesh.
A sweet metallic scent buffeted her senses, driving away her drug-induced stupor. She started twitching again, more violently than before. Twitch, twitch... The moonlight suddenly made everything glow as though she were looking through a thermal-detecting lens.
The Animal Handler rushed over to the pair, "Hold still good sir, you startled her is all... don't worry, I won't let the beast get away with it..." And she held out the small vial again.
Tatiana hissed and glared at the vial... twitch, twitch. Regaining her balance, she swooped forward and snatched the glass tube, shattering it in her mighty claws... twitch, twitch... Her heart beat faster and faster... twitch, twitch... there was something stirring deep in her soul... twitch, twitch... nothing was perfect anymore... twitch, twitch... she remembered... twitch, twitch... she was trapped by that handler... twitch... chained.... twitch... drugged... twitch... humiliated... twitch, twitch.
With an eerie screech, she swooped down to the ground and suddenly, she wasn't the world's largest bat anymore. There, standing in the middle the crowd, was a bat-pelted skinwalker... and boy was she MAD!
Turning to the Animal Handler with a menacing grin, "Everyone, feast your eyes on the greatest of marvels... AS I FEAST ON ALL OF YOU!!!"
She spun around and snapped at crowd, and panic ensued. In the mass hysteria, time seemed to stop for a moment as Tatiana and The Animal Handler shared one last loathing look. Tatiana mouthed to the handler, because she would not have been heard above the din, "Watch your back..." and she turned around, shoving through the crowd and flapping her powerful wings. Up she flew, barely off the ground, before gliding away into the near by forest to plan her sweet, sweet revenge...
And what ever happened to the stallion that was bitten by the bat skinwalker? No one knows... though some say the newest circus attraction looks vaguely like... nah... it couldn't be... could it?
Comments: Now that she is free, the twitch comes on when she is thirsting for blood.
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:00 pm
Username: Ryuukishin Mare's Name: Severina Mare's Temper: Nefarious Prompt Response:
“Let the show begin!”
Severina despised those words. They signified the start of the plays, the acts, the feats of daring. They made the audience mad with delight. They brought pleasure to those who loved to perform. They were the words that meant she would have to demean herself in front of large crowds, day by day, multiple times in a single night, ever since her handler agreed to a contract that would make her a part of a circus of freaks in the Blood Moon Carnival, whose purpose was to fly around and ease those who seemed worried. Horses were, after all, easily frightened, and a single soquili could send the mass running, ruining the entire show...
She glared at the gathered crowd, her mouth curled in a sneer and her wings tucked loosely around her. The multitudes of soquili that had come in caused a cloud of dust to rise, and she bared her fangs, angry that her handler hadn’t put her higher up, away from all the filth. In response, she could feel her restrictions, especially on her throat, tightening. Under normal circumstances, it would have choked her, taking her breath away. It lasted only an instant, but she knew what it meant: it was a warning from her handler, telling her to look friendly for the audience, that her tricks and reputation all depended solely on the assumption that she was tame and safe – even enjoyable – to be around.
And she hated it. It went against everything she was, everything she wanted. But before, if she rebelled, if she refused, if she showed even the slightest inclination to decline, there was nothing but pain, hunger, and humiliation waiting for her. There was nothing she could have done against her handler. At least, that was what she had believed.
When she had first tried to fight back, she was completely helpless against the binds her handler used to overcome her. The same applied to her second attempt, and her third, and her fourth, and her numerous others tries. The restrictions came as firm as ever, only stronger than before. They hurt her, and if she had her way, she would have already killed the one responsible. And tonight… tonight, she would, and this time, she wouldn’t fail.
Suddenly, a soft, bird-like whistle trilled through the air: her cue. She spread her wings and flew towards the crowd, eyeing the blood-red moon in the pitch-black sky above. She had never seen the likes of it before, and neither had the soquili around her, but because it fit so perfectly with the gruesome themes of the carnival, not to mention its name, the ringmaster had decided to leave the top of the tent open wider than usual so that all could see its foreboding glow. It filled her with a new kind of energy, and not only because it held an uncanny resemblance to the crescent at her breast. Under its light, she found the shackles holding her captive were weakened, to the point where it was as if they didn’t exist at all. When she had first noticed this, she was tempted, so very tempted, to execute her plan and end the life of her tormentor, and then be on her way. But she knew that with so many of the staff about, her chance of escape afterwards was low, ridiculously so. What she needed was a ruse and, returning her gaze ahead, she smiled, for she had found the perfect one.
She flapped her wings harder, daintily slowing herself to stop in front of an eager foal that had pushed its way to the front of the crowd. Putting up a playful front, she let herself get lost in the foal’s mane and received a happy, excited nicker in response. The nicker soon turned into a shrill scream. It was a high, piercing sound, and instantly, everyone was on the alert. A few had bolted at the sound, but most gave uneasy smiles to their friends and neighbors, hoping for someone to come and tell them it was all part of the plan. This hope faltered when the foal fell, dead, blood squirting wildly from a gaping hole in its neck that had been hidden by its mane only a moment before.
More screams filled the air and the crowd was nearly lost to panic, close to stampeding, but suddenly, a calm, controlled voice projected throughout the room from the center of the ring: the ringmaster’s. Reassuring everyone, laughing to ease those that doubted him, teasing a few, and jokingly asking the crowd if they hadn’t seen worse things in this tent before, if they truly believed it was real, he maintained order in his tent. Many had heard positive criticisms about the show and were eager to believe him. This the ringmaster knew, and he was well prepared. As soon as the foal had screamed, two of his henchmen had lured the parents away, convincing them that their foal had gone outside instead. One went to find the Animal Handler and demand to know what had happened. The others, who had merged with the crowd, were now obstinately agreeing with him, encouraging those around them to stay.
Meanwhile, Severina flew along the shadows of the tent, towards the Animal Handler. She had felt a faint tug earlier, knew it would have been a sharp pull had the moon not been there, and had hurried on her way. She was turbulent, crazed, drunk under her newfound feeling of victory, which she hadn’t felt in a long, long while, but she managed to keep herself together. She saw her handler, angry and accusing, but doubtful, for she had set her chains to restrict Severina’s movements should she disobey an order, one of them, obviously, being that she doesn’t hurt another. Before the Animal Handler could even get a word out, however, Severina transformed.
Her wings spread, her legs grew, her previously non-existent forelegs touched the hay-coated earth. In less than a second, she was on her handler, trampling her arms and legs, crushing them to the ground. A hard kick was aimed at the female's abdomen as she tried desperately to regain the control she thought she held. Severina, angered by the familiar gesture, tore out the handler’s throat, leaving her to suffocate slowly, drowning in her own blood, a grotesque picture of one in unimaginable pain.
Behind her, the crowd was going wild, losing their barely-maintained control. They forced the circus workers aside and out, crushing several in their mad rush to escape. Serevina stretched her wings out wide, reveling in her freedom, her anger dissipating as quickly as it had come. She would have liked to stay and watch her handler die, watch her suffer as she herself had suffered. But she couldn’t. Her audience was waiting, after all. Slowly, she turned, a bright, cheerful smile decorating her blood-stained maw, eyeing the retreating flanks of the soquili that had gathered. With glee, she uttered the words that had started it all:
“Let the show begin!”
Comments: Dunanananana Batma-- -shot- For some reason, I was under the impression she was in a circus, and then later realized it was a carnival. OTL; Edited parts of my entry to match that, but I'll try to re-write the whole thing if I can find the time to do so between now and the closing date. Thanks for taking the time to read this! Didn't expect it to come out this long. @ _@;
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:04 pm
Username: [+Katch+] Mare's Name: Noctis Mare's Temper: Crazed Prompt Response:
" COME ONE! COME ALL! come see the rat that does not crawl! Noctis the cursed bat!" The words rang painfully in her sensitive ears, but the carnies didn't care...they just wanted their show. She always hid in the darkest corner of her cage, her skinny form pressed uncomfortably against the hard metal. A cane rattled piercingly against the bars of her expansive cage, causing her to start and unfurl her wings, making her seem larger, more threatening. They only laughed. She glanced sharply to the familiar one, her "trainer"...her prisonguard... She slunk forward and lowered her head, flattening her ears to her skull and hissing at him, them, everything. But behind the bars and the carnival lights she was just another attraction and fear was what some folk lived for...she grimaced, wrinkling her nose and brandishing her canines at the guests who simply "ooh'd" and "ahh'd" at her. One small child screamed.
It only reminded the half crazed bat of what she had lost. A normal life as a normal filly, parents, friends...family...All lost to the thieving carnival that had snatched her from the daylight and shackled her into the night.
Drool threaded from her lips as she stared balefully at the onlookers. She was no longer a completely sane creature, no carnival attraction ever was, she often teetered on the brink of insanity, only to be dragged back to do the same meaningless drivel every night...carnival life. She rarely spoke but that said nothing for the endless whispering in her mind. The dark feelings seethed inside her breast, oh one day...one day they would scream...when she took their idiot lives for ruining her own!
"Look how this cursed creature can change twixt this form and that of a BAT!" with a crooked look the beast snaped his whip at her, she shifted forms and shrilled at him as she flitted around her cage. No way out, no way, no how... The trainer continued his droll performance" Now who is brave enough to have her tangle in their mane, you sir? no? perhaps YOU madame? nooo no i think not...YOU young stallion, yes, you look brave? mmhmm...i thought you might be, now stand here and get the FRIGHT of your life! GWAHAHA~"
The sliding bar grated against her tender nerves, she eyed the stallion she was to spook...a fidgety one, but strong, his jaw was set...She shrilled and SAW him, using her echolocation, still she violently twisted in the grasp of her trainer as she was tossed into the stallions thick mane. She hissed and tangled herself in the locks, scrabling for the darkness near his throat where she could feel the beating of his heart, the steady thump of sweet blood under his skin...how nice it would be...how easy, to just bite...But as always, it was denied her...the chains that bound her prevented her from harming a fly...much less a customer.
She closed her eyes which were useless to her in this form, and FELT. Just then, as if it had happened in her dreams, the clouds parted and bright red moonlight spilled down upon the carnival, blood drawn by the nights glittering knife. The chains that always had kept her there, physically and spiritually begain to strain. her little furry body thrummed with hope, joy! which was quickly snuffed and replaced with a different feeling, she now brimmed with the thick heated brew of HATE.
Revenge would be hers this night!
The trainer went on, hooting with laughter along with all the other spectators while she clung to a bucking stallion who wanted nothing more than to get her OUT of his hair. The trainer went to snatch her from the silky confines of the customers mane when quite suddenly, the chains that had held her in bondage all those years SNAPPED. She shrilled in delight as a bat, and howled to the blood mooon as a beast, changing back before everyone, unchained and wild. The prey was stunned, perfect, She simply inclined her head and did what she had been dreaming of for ages, locked behind cold iron and laughter. She BIT.
Warm saltysweet blood flowed over her tongue as she was treated to the sound of laughter turning to that of screams. Music to her ears, she did not mind the noise, it was a sweet cacophoney of nightmares and blood. They fled, like mice before a cat, they fled in terror. She dropped her kill, licking her lips of the young stallions blood " delicioussssss..." she hissed" ahhhh...i have waited Sooo LONG for thisss!"half a second passed...she turned and was indeed a "bat out of hell" as she tore through the crowd, bloodcrazed and vengeful, then quickly...there was pain.
The familiar sting of a whip bit her shoulder, causing her to scream in rage. There her keeper stood, mocking her, trying to drive her back to servitude. Her eyes narrowed " You cannot tame me little man...you made me this way...remember!?...i can smell your FEAR!"she howled, and with a demonic snarl she replied by ripping apart the terrified sap that had once been her trainer. By the time she had finished she stood in a circle of beautiful corpses. There was always a beauty in death...any predator knew that. Her eyes rolled up to the moon, mirroring the gorgeous color, her garnet eyes glazed with a blood haze.
The fact that she had once been a sane creature had been erased from her memory...clensed with blood, SHE was Noctis the insane, Noctis the bloody, Noctis the bat. She, with her keen hearing heard the others coming for her, she could smell their vile breaths, hear their dirty hearts. She unfurled her leathery wings, and for a brief glittering moment, which seemed like an eternity...she bathed in the light of the blood moon. And was gone, replaced with the bat she had been cursed to become...it was not so bad now, she thought, her mind a jumble of ectasy and bloodlust. Like a second skin, she had simply grown into it... She shrilled into the starless night, her little wings pumping as fast as they could carry her, reveling in her newfound freedom.
Never would she be caught and bound, never would she be without fresh prey...She was a goddess of the night, a vampire bat that fed upon the sweetest of nectars...no...never would she play to the tune of laughter..." no no my dearssss, i will live to the tune of SCREAMS!" She cried as she winged off into the night.
The carnival had lost one of it's gruesome stars, the only indication she had been there at all, an empty cage, the neat corpses of her victims and, to the most observant indivual ... a trail of blood that seemed to disappear under the sinister wash of blood red moonlight.
Comments: Heeee~!! that was fun~ I totally fell in love with her design when i saw her, i also happen to have a fondness for bats ^^ so i was super eager to try this out. I figured~Skinwalkers are generally nasty and insane, but a caged batty carnival beast had to be ten times more unstable. Thank you for the opportunity to try for her ^^ Good luck everyone~!!
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:23 pm
Username: Divena Mare's Name: Shydia Vaelaeli (Meaning: Bloody Revenge) Mare's Temper: Vengeful Prompt Response: She remembered much from her life as a free Soquili. She remembered her life. She remembered her joys, which seemed petty now. She remembered happiness. She remembered how she came to this wretched existence. She hadn’t been a good, kind Soquili. Niceness had been boring for her, even back then. Her greatest joy in life had come from conning innocents out of their most prized possessions. Things that she often tossed aside once she was bored with them. It was the thrill of the chase that had done it for her. The challenge.
But then, she took on a challenge that was too much for her. She wasn’t too certain how it happened, but she didn’t really care. She’d found a able minded target, and was right in the middle of conning him out of an heirloom that held a great deal of sentimental value when suddenly the world went dark. When she woke, she was consumed with an overwhelming urge to kill the nearest creature, which happened to be a bat. She draped the skin across her back and pain blinded her again. For the second time, she woke, changed.
And it was beautiful! She was stronger, faster, better. Until the old fool slapped a chain around her neck and dragged her off to this forsaken circus, where she was forced to perform disgusting tricks to please able minded Soquili. The kind of Soquili that she would have robbed blind before she changed, and now were too pathetic to even look upon her, let alone be amused by her.
The humiliation soaked into her bones. She wouldn’t let this humiliation pass. She fought against her chains every chance she got, planning, waiting, biding her time. She would shred those smiles off those vapid faces. She would claw out that hated Animal Handler’s eyes, rendering her as blind as the skinwalker had become. She didn’t need sight, not with her advance hearing. She could “see” more than anyone, in every direction. There was no sound that escaped her.
And it was that hearing that clued her in to the weakening of the chains. She could feel when the weight of them lessoned. The pull faded just a bit with each passing day. They clinked less. Her time was coming, and it was all she could do not to let on that freedom, and revenge, were near.
She would feed on the blood of everyone in this gods forsaken carnival. No handler, no avatar would be allowed to escape. They were all responsible for her captivity. For her humiliation. They would all receive their just rewards for what they did to her. What they allowed to be done to her.
Oh, but it wouldn’t be fast. Oh no. She would make them suffer. Even before she had been blessed, she had understood the value of a good, emotional wound. She had a mental list of those who had wronged her. Her memory had always been very good. Perhaps that was why she could remember so much of her past.
First, she would escape. Anyone in her way would, of course, be slaughtered. It was a pity, but it would have to be done. She would not allow herself to be tormented for even one night longer. So yes, it would be a shame to give them the quick death that a vicious mauling would provide, but she was smart. Enough so that she knew if she hung around too long, there was a chance she would be caught and enslaved again.
She would not settle for just a few crumbs of her cake. She would devour the whole thing, bite by bite. Even if the process took her the rest of her life. So, she would make the necessary sacrifices. She would aim for killing blows that would take awhile to kill. Perhaps yank out an intestine or two. A deep cut that would slowly bleed out. No slices to the jugular, oh no. That would be far too quick. And she would force herself to be satisfied with what little vengeance she could take from that.
She’d make up for it with the rest. Once she was safely away, and certain she would never be enslaved again, she’d revisit her list. She’d tick off the names one by one, and hunt down those who had hurt her. She would study them until she knew what mattered most to them. She had always been so good at spotting what would get a mark to open up. She’d use these talents to rip out her victim’s hearts, shred their souls. And, when there was nothing left but a empty, desolate husk, she would do the same to the body and feed upon their blood and misery.
And it would taste so sweet. She was already savoring it. But that would be in the future. She was patient. She knew the rewards that came from a long and careful hunt. They were so much more pleasurable than a simple, bloody kill. She would never be satisfied with the death of just the body.
But first, she had to escape. The chains were weakening and, after a great deal of clinking and clanging, she found the weakest one. She waited until the Animal Handler wandered off to deal with another. Then she carefully placed the weakest link under her hoof and prepared to yank on the rest of the chain until that single link game.
Before she could, though, the sound of hoofsteps alerted her to the presence of another. She growled, furious that her escape was interrupted so soon. She’d paint the tent’s walls with red.The blue and silver Angeni dropped the key she’d been carrying in her mouth on the ground, causing a soft clanging as it landed. She stayed just out of the Skinwalker’s reach, knowing full well what those fangs could do. “It’s the key to your chains,” she told the other Soquili.She suppressed the urge to snarl, when she wanted nothing better than to shred this mare to dared mock her. Instead she pulled on her past experiences and dropped her head, allowing her wings to droop to the ground. “Have you come to see the show?” she asked, making her voice a pathetic whimper the clawed against her nerves. Weak and helpless, that was the key. She needed this twit to think that she was broken. And then the idiot mare would come just a few steps closer. Enough that she could reach her.”No. I came to give you the key,” Lian answered, softly. “Use it and escape, through the back. In a moment, there will be no one looking. You’ll be able to fly free without having to sacrifice any of your vengeance.” She froze. What game was this feather brained twit playing? This was obviously a trap. Unless… was it possible the moron bought her act? Might as well play it up and make the twit regret it later. “Oh, bless you, kind mare,” she simpered. A bit of bile rose in the back of her throat, but she swallowed it back and imagined how, exactly, she would thank this mare for trying to trick her.”Go quickly, Shydia Vaelaeli,” the mare insisted, kicking the key closer before slipping out of the tent.She quickly grabbed up the key and slid it into the cuffs. A twinge of surprise shot through her when the key caught and clicked. The chains fell away and she was free. Just like that. She didn’t waste time. She dove for the back of the tent and shifted into her bat form. At that exact moment, a cloud moved over the moon, cloaking her in shadows. She flew to freedom, unchallenged as everyone else was busy with their own shows and tasks.
As she flew, she thought of what the mare had called her. She remembered much from her past life, but she didn’t remember her name. The Animal Handler hadn’t given her one. She was just “the bat” to the heathen.
Shydia. She vaguely remembered that meant Bloody in some obscure language. Vaelaeli. Revenge. Bloody Revenge. She liked that. She liked that a great deal. Shydia Vaelaeli. Whoever that mare had been, she had clearly known who she was talking to, which could only mean that she had been mocking Shydia. As she flew fast and hard away from her captors, she added another mental name to her list. She would wait a day, maybe two, to make sure the magic didn’t strengthen around her again.
And then she would hunt. Then she would destroy. And finally, she would kill those who had wronged her. From the relative safety of the well lit carnival, Lian watched the bat Skinwalker fly away to freedom, and a chill passed over her. She knew that people would die, and that when that death came, they would be happy for it. It made the Angeni sick to her stomach that she had released such a monster into the wild. But it had to be done.
Blessed, or cursed, since birth with visions of the future, Lian had seen how the events of this night would play out. She had Seen the Skinwalker, who would be known as Shydia Vaelaeli, escape her chains. But the process had caused such a racket that the Animal Handler had come rushing. She had been the first to fall, with a severe slash to the gut that would take hours to bleed out. The commotion caused by that battle would have attracted more attention, and the Skinwalker would have cut down everyone in her way before finally escaping. At least half of the innocent customers would have died needless deaths. Had Shydia Vaelaeli been allowed to escape on her own.
So, Lian had done the only thing she could to protect as many innocents as possible. She ahd given the monster the key, and delayed her just long enough that she would escape right when the clouds would provide her with enough cover to hide. Lian knew that countless people would still die, horribly, heart, soul, and body. But not nearly so many as would have died had the Skinwalker escaped on her own.
Now the trick was learning to live with what she had done. Comments: The Soq featured in this entry is none other than the lovely Lian. I hope you enjoyed X-D Have to admit, Shydia scares me a bit.
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 7:39 pm
Username: Hot Lolli Mare's Name: Persian for 'Stupid Bat' : احمق بت Mare's Temper: Patient Prompt Response: All of her cursed life she'd been called Stupid Bat in some form or another. In some language or another. It changed from day to day and usually with the mood of her handler, but the sentiment was always the same. She was just another dumb animal to be exploited, abused, and eventually ended. Just another side-show freak to make the audience clap and cheer at her misery. Flopping about on the floor of the performance tent, her wings wouldn't lift her and she wouldn't lift her head. It was as sad a sight as any- Her in her bat form, squeaking in anguish, and generally broken in the dirt. By this point dust mingled with thinly veiled threats and curses in the air. Her handler's tail was lashing at the bat on the ground as much as the whip in her hand. Still- She wouldn't move. Bat wouldn't move. Couldn't move. And the more she didn't do what she was supposed to, the more the animal trainer shrieked and fussed. Eyes scanning the audience the bat wasn't surprised that the audience wasn't doing anything. Not a cry or even word of outrage at the poor animal's treatment was heard though there was slight sobbing from the children amongst the crowd. It wasn't even until an angry boot came down a little too close to one of Bat's wings that anyone even appeared to register what they were watching. And then it was chaos. Some were shouting for the carnival master, some were shoving themselves to the ring to physically stop her handler, and still others were spurring her on and throwing sloppy food at those trying to help. Amidst all of the cacophony no one noticed the slight turn upwards of the Bat's mouth. The faint curve that could have made one suspect she was smiling if such a thing were possible.
Then she was sky-borne.
All it had taken was one split-second of perfectly time actions. One person had taken a swing at the animal trainer, another had taken a swing at them, and then everyone was fighting. The scent of anger and sweat filled her animal nose and she knew that her plan had worked. It had worked so very well and now she was free with no one in the crowd the wiser for it either. Circling higher and higher, Bat chose to stay in the form the audience knew her for though it wasn't her true one, and as she rose she watched the fighting below. She watched as more and more of the audience turned on her trainer, she even laughed gleefully to herself as it became obvious the woman was outnumbered and no one was going to save her from the angry mob. As much as Bat had dreamed that she would be the one to rip out the throat of the one that had chained her to such a demeaning life she did have to admit to herself that the poetic nature of the scene below suited her well too.
As the woman below her was stomped, beaten, and ultimately killed by those she had been lived her life entertaining; Bat soared out of the hole in the tip-top of the tent and into the night. She would never forget that all those people she was leaving behind had been content to let her captivity bring them joy and she would never forget that they owed her justice. For now though, just for the one night, she would let them survive her first breath of freedom.
She could wait for now; but only for one day. Then they were hers.
Comments: "I will give her one of these, and one of those, and a HI-YAH! And I will kick her, sir!"
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 8:03 pm
Username: Aniira Mare's Name: Mort Mare's Temper: Delusional Prompt Response: A wing twitched as a gust of cool air hit the heated body, idle chatter emanating in the distant throngs of drunken crowd-goers. Fools, were they all. They didn’t see the corruption of the place, the way that, instead of receiving entertainment, they were the ones who would entertain. “Enter if you dare,” the saying went, but frankly, what good did those four words ever do? Were they even real? Did they hold meaning; were they even meant as a warning?
Of course not. The show began before the performers even hit the stage. Those idiotic observers only needed the hint of danger, the smell of blood, the taste of the smallest bit of corruption to be excited. It was their nature, even the supposedly “fair” ones. They were all the same, all predatory and carnal in instinct, and Mort knew this firsthand.
For weeks she had been chained in this place. Chained and humiliated, to say the least, not to mention starved, beaten, and forced against her will to do the most foolhardy of things. Tonight, on the night of a strong moon, she prayed to whatever sick deity might hear her lusty wishes—to escape, to be free and full of anger, able to rip and tear and destroy whatever hit her path. And the animal handler… well, she had special plans for him. She doubted he would think lowly of her ever again when she ate his heart before his own eyes.
She snorted, her breath misty in the dark autumn air. From the outskirts came a cry, perhaps a protest, and from the cage next to her came a soft whimper from an orphaned wolf pup. Poor b*****d… too soft for his own good.
But then a very different sound hit her ears; a soft creak, almost inaudible. Her eyes swiveled towards the door of the cage… which stood as open as the night sky. Her eyes narrowed as she searched for the animal handler, but he was nowhere in sight. In fact, the small compound was completely empty save for the dozen or so cages of broken animals.
Still skeptic, but with heart quickening at the sight of freedom, she took a step forward. The familiar clink of chains met her ears, but as they encountered resistance, they fell free from her bruised legs. She would have been unbelieving, but a soft, blood-chilling, hoarse voice whispered in her ear. “Come... come.” And she was sure that this was a sign, that perhaps the Devil himself had released her. She had heard that he enjoyed chaos—perhaps she should thank him for his work.
And so she jumped from the cage, and as she galloped out of the compound, the first glimpse of carnival goers met her deranged gaze. She grinned, manically, and began her work. Soul after soul was ripped from its body by her lusty teeth, pounded in with her cracked hooves, scraped and clawed with the bony wings. She laughed, cried, screamed, growled, and squealed in joy. This was a Blood Carnival! These people enjoyed the macabre! So why did they scream as the life was torn from their polluted bodies?
And then she spotted him—the animal handler. She shrieked, turning and charging, a wake of blood and spilled insides trailing behind her. He held his whip, shouted and aimed for her face. But the handle broke in his hand, and he was helpless when she bowled him over.
“Enjoying the show?!” she screamed, her eyes red with hatred. She enjoyed the fear on his face, enjoyed the way his heartbeat stood out in the gluttonous neck. Yes, he would enjoy this. She would make sure of it.
His heart was the best meal she had ever tasted.
Satisfied, she turned and faced the open lands beyond the enclosure of tents and booths. What more lay in those dark forests she did not know, but the blood lust was strong in her mind. She needed to be free!
However, as soon as she started running, her vision began to darken. Sinister laughter filled her head, taunting her, pulling her deeper into the darkness. She roared, trying to escape, to understand why the Devil was punishing her for doing his deeds…
And then she woke, in the familiar cage with the familiar feeling of chains and the stench of raw waste filling her sensitive nostrils. A dream… it had all been a dream!
And there, in front of her, stood the animal handler. Hate-filled eyes met those of a cunning master, and with a smirk, he murmured, “Welcome back.”
Comments: Well, I hope I had you going there! Truth is, she never escapes, but lives in a little dream-riddled world where she “half-believes” that she frees herself. It’s kind of like short-term memory loss—she forgets about her dreams every day, and thus, believes that she is actually escaping every night. This only fuels her hatred and drives her to a breaking point of her insanity.
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Posted: Tue Nov 02, 2010 11:53 pm
Username: elfstar89 Mare's Name: Maha Mare's Temper: Demented Prompt Response: Maha stared intently at the crowd gathered to watch her, the softest and sweetest of smiles playing across her lips. Everything about her demeanor was calculated to exude innocence. Her great bat ears pricked for the slightest sound that differed from normal. So far tonight, she hadn't heard what she was waiting to hear, but surely it would come soon...after all, you couldn't have a proper circus without it....
A scream rose above the hubbub of the crowd to pierce the heavens and the babble died away as everyone turned to see what had happened and who screamed.
Crawling out of one of the tents was a nearly mutilated figure, long crimson and sable silk ribbons of the fabric blowing in the breeze as golden bells rang mournfully.
Maha refrained from snickering. So they'd found her "present." Such a terrible and tragic shame that dancers were made of stronger stuff than Maha'd realized. On the other hand, the disturbed and frightened whispers of the crowd were music to her maddened ears.
The Animal Handler was ignoring her and hurried to the dying dancer, Tosca, one of the stars of the carnival. "Tosca?! Tosca! What happened? Who did this to you?"
Tosca couldn't speak, but collapsed, her jewel-bright eyes wide with terror. As she fell, she lifted her head to reveal that her throat had been brutally torn out.
Screams went up from the carnival as more and more gathered to see the horrific final moments of Tosca. It was all Maha could do to not laugh madly. Her keen ears adapted to echolocation picked up all the whispers.
"...Tosca? But...but she was never cruel to anyone..."
"...Who could have done such a terrible thing?..."
"...I've heard that this carnival has lost a lot of people lately..."
"...I never thought those rumors of murder were true..."
"...It's struck again! That's seven people in a week, and there were even a few who died last week..."
"...What's the meaning of this? A carnival where the performers are murdered?..."
The Animal Handler was silent and slowly the other residents of the carnival gathered to mourn the fallen Tosca. No one remarked on the ferocious claw marks, or that the attacks seemed to have come both head on and from above, or that the attacks seemed to come from both a very large and a very small animal. But the frightened whispers of carnival performers who were planning to flee was definitely interesting.
In the hullabaloo, Maha cackled very softly. She'd have fresh meat again tonight. Oh, yes, she would: Deserters en Sang. Ohhh, she loved her meals en Sang. The blood was the best part. Dancers en Sang, Gypsies en Sang, Deserters en Sang, Clowns en Sang, and even Beats en Sang. Maha flung back her head in silent, mad laughter.
This carnival had nothing to worry about. They loved Maha, so they'd made her this way. Maha loved the carnival so much, she made sure the carnival denizens never left their beloved Maha. They lived on in the blood she drank when the Beast Master was finally asleep well after midnight.
It occurred to Maha that she'd like a locket someday, a nice antique silver locket in the shape of a heart inscribed with a crescent moon, like the wonderful carnival. A nice big locket, so she could look at everyone whose blood now flowed in her, and a pretty one, because she didn't want her carnival friends to think she didn't love them. Far from it. Only the best necklace and their best flesh and blood would do to honor her carnival friends and keep them nice and safe and close to her at all times.
Comments: I had a few different images of murderous madwomen when I was writing this. Tom Lehrer's Irish Ballad and Drusilla from Buffy the Vampire Slayer seem to have contributed to Maha. I had this image of her being only a little crazy because she had been cursed, and her cutting a rather tragic figure. Sadly, as in pretty much every character I create, she got away from my original image. Frighteningly, I like the batshit insane and bloodthirsty princess persona better from her than the potentially split-personality lady I'd originally considered....
Maha means "wild cow" in Arabic, a motif usually used to compare someone to something beautiful. Maha is beautiful--but she's the kind of crazy the term "mad cow" only begins to express.
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 1:22 am
Username: -[The Spoof]- Mare's Name: Draga (means 'precious in...slavic?) Mare's Temper: Mad Prompt Response:
Noise; it was everywhere. It was in her head...it rose up like a beast and bombarded from all sides...from inside. How she hated. The noise...
There was a time that she could barely recall where the noise brought joy, peace, warmth. That was the time before. It was difficult to recall more than a sense of peace from the time before. It had been so long. Was it really peace? It had been so long she could barely tell at the best of times...
Dim shadows chased each other before her eyes and she snarled, all she wished was for the noise to cease. To be alone. To be free. Like the time before. Then she could have peace?
The noise swelled, she shrank back. They were coming closer....she began to panic. The NOISE! Her ears rang with the images of half formed shadow beings...where were they coming from?!
The one who had brought her here...captured her...changed her? She couldn't remember...the NOISE! Her whole body began to tremble. The one came closer, weaving the noise that would make her change and be controlled. Only...this time...it didn't work?
She flinched violently as the gate to her cage shrieked with the need to be oiled, the One thinking it had her in its spell. The noise...it shivered around her form like an animal itself, but it did not bind her. Not this time.
This time...she surged forward away from the noise. Into the noise? She couldn't tell anymore, all she knew was that this was her chance...to be AWAY. She tumbled onto the ground, the ringing noise confused her, she couldn't hear where to go!
The noise swirled around her, trying to cage her once more. Instead, it infuriated her! She would NOT be CAGED! It would not have her! With a high, piercing shriek she lunged. Impacting with something solid, she clawed desperately. The noise increased, but this time it was drawing away...she shrieked again and could barely make out foggy shapes.
A sharp pain erupted on her back...anger burned through her and she clawed at the thing behind her that gave her pain. The claws on her wings gouged into something with little resistance but then there was pain in her face. She shrieked once more before pulling back and running blindly.
Noise swirled around her again, making it hard to hear, but she didn't care. 'Away, away, get AWAY!' her mind roared. She plowed through anything that stood before her, trampling over everything. Noise bombarded her, but it was all moving away from her, as if afraid. Of HER. The noise...it was fleeing. Her lips twitched and she had a brief moment to think about the action. This was...a smile? She could feel her teeth poking out from her lips and hoped it scared the noise further away. Her wings suddenly rose and fell sharply, then she remembered that she could fly.
With a few beats of the huge appendages, she was floating. The noise...was below. Silence...peace...was above and beyond...she shrieked in joy. This time the noise brought her images of the world. Not the hazy blurs of Before...the noise was within her now. Silently, but there. She could see the world in her mind. Though she only stayed suspended for a few short moments before her wings could not take her any further, she galloped away from the noise behind. The short glide hadn't been for more than a few hundred feet but it was enough of a head start for her to escape any pursuers.
Finally there was silence...the noise could not hurt her now...she would make sure of it.
Comments: ^^' Well, that was slightly darker than I thought it would be...but, I definitely see her in my mind now. Haha, anyway. Inspired by the fact that bats navigate mostly by sound, and that I think she would be rather insane from being confined in the carnival so long. I can see lots of plots where she reacts violently to any other being...: ) Over all this was really fun to write. I'm thinking the Animal Handler might have some new scars...that's what I was trying to imply in the story.
Sorry if it's a bit long...^^'
edit: noticed the thing about the short distance flying...-changes a couple things-
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Posted: Wed Nov 03, 2010 4:09 am
Username: darknightcavalier Mare's Name: Nox Mare's Temper: Bloodthirsty Prompt Response:
This damned place was always hell....
Laughed at and mocked.... Made to do tricks for their amusement.... The shining lights... they burn, they sting and pain. Their laughter? More mockery.... The thought of being put up as a sideshow freak. The thought of performing the same act over and over. This place.... was her prison.
The chains rattled slightly as the Bat struggled. Her head looking up as she cursed the fates, having been here long enough. She was strong...true, years of being put in this tortured prison brought her strength, but this night...it was going to be different.
The moon.... The blood moon, full, red... ancient and primal. Her eyes gazed up to the moon, her light...her time has come. The chains have weakened and her strength shall not falter. Giving a tug, her chains faltered, her hooves and wings finally free. "Oh moon," her heart sang. "This night shall be dyed red....in thy honor." a twisted smirk coursed through her lips, grinning, she turned bat, waiting and lurking, wanting to exact revenge on those who had mocked her, taking her dignity and her freedom, turning her into a freakshow, a puppet for their mere entertainment. And for those many years, those many days, they shall pay.
The ground shall not be littered with popcorn and empty paper bags and treats. The air shall not be filled with the laughter of children. No...It's not going to happen, Not now, not tonight. Screams shall fill the air, blood and gore shall be scattered among the trash.
And it will start on the final act.... and that blasted ring master shall be her first victim.
Oh what sweet blood and the sweet song of the screams of pain shall bring.
Comments:
I like the design of the Batwalker. Good to see a new design from the usual canine and feline walkers. Also after judging may I ask for CnC on my prompt? I need to get better.
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