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 Posted: Thu Oct 14, 2010 9:13 am
Ah, gotcha! On that note, how "open" is he to his fellow students learning about his need for medication? I mean, is it something he tries to hide or vehemently deny he has? Is it a "need to know" basis sort of thing where if he ends up having one of these moments (and the other student's throat still intact) would he explain what happened?
And only if you have the time, I wouldn't mind getting feedback on Petro XD
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Posted: Thu Oct 14, 2010 9:26 am
Huni Pi Ah, gotcha! On that note, how "open" is he to his fellow students learning about his need for medication? I mean, is it something he tries to hide or vehemently deny he has? Is it a "need to know" basis sort of thing where if he ends up having one of these moments (and the other student's throat still intact) would he explain what happened? And only if you have the time, I wouldn't mind getting feedback on Petro XD HUH That's something I should have thought about but hadn't yet! I think he would avoid talking about it or bringing attention to it for as long as possible. It's an embarrassing point to him, and something he views as a weakness (although I'm sure most of Halloween town would think otherwise, culturally. He's a nerd, even by monster standards.) I suppose if necessary he WOULD explain, but it would be a torturous, anxiety-ridden, pulled-teeth sort of explanation unless he has had enough history with the peer he's confessing to. I'm sure all of the faculty would know by default, so who knows how long it would actually stay a secret. I'm sure not explaining DOESN'T really help his "I'M NOT MAD" case. I'll totally leave a crit to Petro! I stink at getting rocking on those, I need to just go on a general crit spree and hope I snag all the people I missed who I owe. XD Thanks so much for your help, your questions have been great! And I finally made an FAQ with more refined answers to everyone's questions. XDD edit: Finally added Fear Power! Please lemme know what you guys think!
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Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2010 9:10 am
Added some concepty doodles of his Hyde persona. BEEDY RATTY EYES.
Still looking for feedback on his fear power and anything else!
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Posted: Fri Oct 15, 2010 9:40 pm
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Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 10:41 am
Walking through a dream, I see you...
My light in darkness breathing new hope of life.
Norvie is so adorable! I love his concept that you have. I've always loved the Jekyll and Hyde story and i think you did a wonderful job on him.
As for most of his info i think most of it was covered by you or asked several times already and talked over. You have a great back story for him, covering his mood in Jekyll state and how he may go over to more of his Hyde side. The only thing i would like to know more about is how exactly his personality may play out. You say his Hyde side is more into his anger and stress which he bottles up, and if he is close to the end of his potion to keep his Hyde at bay, what would he more be like exactly? Would he start picking fight for things long past? Would he storm around and be mean to the other students for no reason? Also, would his Hyde side go by another name or nickname? Even seem to want to dress differently since the personality is pretty much different?
Besides toning it up a little on the information about Norvies Hyde personality, i think you have a great character here! I cant wait to see him become an actual student ^-^
Now I live through you and you through me, Enchanting...
I pray in my heart that this dream never ends.
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Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 5:49 pm
Thanks so much for the feedback! I've been postponing explaining Norvie's Hydesona until I had some more illustrations. XD So I'm glad that's the only part that needs more! Will get right on that. wink
I wasn't sure about a second name! I imagined him being very Norvegicus "Never Norvie" Hyde, and go by Hyde when necessary, but he might warrant his own name entirely. XD Any suggestions?
I love Jekyll and Hyde, it's one of my favorite classics man. So glad other fans don't think I've bastardized the concept. rofl
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Posted: Sun Oct 17, 2010 11:12 pm
Did so much edit/purging!!!!! Still looking for crits!
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Posted: Tue Oct 19, 2010 12:41 am
Just added a bunch of info about his family for fun XD Please let me know what you guys think!
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Posted: Sat Oct 23, 2010 12:41 pm
Received arttts!  From Dragain: 
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Posted: Tue Oct 26, 2010 3:35 pm
Oh my goodness, Bill, oh my goodness.
I love him. Plain and simple. He's super unique but he's from a character/stereotype at the same time, though one that has pretty much been ignored through this shop, so kudos to you for being DASTARDLY original! I love his design, both the Hyde and Jekyll forms are very interesting and unique, and his Natural and FEAR abilities seem well rounded and good. Not over powered and definitely interesting.
I actually don't have much to crit o A o At all. I suppose I'm eager to see his personality section fleshed out a bit more but we get tastes of his personality all through out the description of himself, his history, and Hyde.
Really, great work ; A ;; If I can think of anything I'll definitely update but I honestly don't have much to say besides gush!
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Posted: Sat Oct 30, 2010 11:56 am
Snoof you're the best ;A; If you look Christof over even if you can't find anything to add/ask I'll happily crit both of your quests >o> <33 I'll get to Corbin asap I keep being distracted by Halloween related shenanigans XD <3 ALSO I started this quick paint a while ago now and have not revisited it yet so I'll just pop this up here. I need to update my reference, I imagine the proportions of his face more big-foreheaded, I need to just do a bunch of experiments and let his final artist capture him XD 
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Posted: Mon Nov 29, 2010 9:03 am
Got some super adorable giftart for my birthday and love etc!   Still questin'! Let's get this thing off of page three. :C
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Posted: Sun Feb 06, 2011 12:35 pm
Peeps all goin' for their second character.... I'm still on hold back until Christof grows a bit more but I'm totally open for more comments/questions/suggestions here!
NORVIE NEEDS SOME LOVE
And some fine tuning I think. XD
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