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By all that is sadness, you have summon the Crit Ghoul to this thread. Do you accept your fate? Better yet, do you accept constructive crits?! Who knows......

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First off, love his name >D I kinda wanna go around calling him "Archie" as in like...Arch Deacon, but I don't think he'd like it that much. Other than having been called a d-bag, does he have other nicknames? How does he react to such things? With violence (if bad) or with acceptance (if uncaring)? Does he hate or like his name at all?

YESSS, bring on the characters with false faces. It's always fun to see someone who helps others only for the benefit of themselves, though to what degree does his charade go for? Is he willing to go the extra distance if the payout is good, or does he only act that way for a while around someone before he drops the facade? Since you said he likes the ladies, will he never drop it around them, or will only those he finds truly worth his time get that treatment? Does he ever want any of them to accept him for who he really is, should he decide to settle down eventually? Even a player's gotta end a game sometime . . . .

As for his dislike of men, is it because his dominance can be threatened, or does he view them as rivals for his endless future harem? Has there ever been someone he wanted to be friends with in a state of honesty? What would he do if he came across someone far stronger than he was? Would he crumble to them and accept them?

Following the "my parents sent me", it's still good to see that he actually wanted to come to the school. Is there a chance he could have begged to be sent rather than listening to a suggestion from his parents? He seems the type to be proactive in advancing his reputation and wouldn't really need someone to suggest it to him. (That's just how I see him of course.)

BECAUSE he is a Bakeneko and therefore is still a cat in essence, does he have some catlike habits he tries to shake/hide? You haven't mentioned anything, but is there a chance he's got traits he's keeping hidden?

WHERE IS YOUR FEAR AUGH THE CRIT HAS TO STOP WITHOUT YOUR FEAR BOOOO D: !!!

"Eh now, thassa right cute one, right there," Lunchlady Ginger commented at the Bin's newest transformation. "Cute little ears an a tail, oh my!"

The Bin preened a bit, tail lashing.

"Why I bet ya were a cat or sommat in a past life, that's what I bet."

The Bin was suitably thoughtful on this. It could have been cat in a past life. It even liked eating many of the things cats did! Mmmm...bird (students) and fish (students) and of course...

"Oh now, Ginger knows that look right well, she does," the Lunchlady chuckled. Reaching into her hair, she dug around for a few moments and the produced a rather zombie-like rat. "Found thissun in a trap, and liked his look. Think he'd go down a right treat for one such as yerself."