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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 3:25 pm
j3susfr3ak1991 Truthfully, I added the Chakra control specialty requirement to further reference quincys. Quincys have the natural ability to absorb reiryoku and turn it into weapons. They are exceptionally skilled at controlling it. That's why I made the chakra control specialty a requirement. I get you want to stay Canon as possible, which is why you put it in, but chakra control in our guild only decreases cost, so you can still add it, just shouldn't be required, should give some type of cost decrease, maybe make each arrow cost one for a chakra control specialist, and three for some one who is not. That way the best of the best Quincy will have to be chakra control, but will still stay true to the specialty.
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 3:36 pm
The Criticizer @Sasori: Not only what Havik said, the combination of three elements is a very special technique. The Tsuchikage is known throughout the world for this. Anyway, I don't know if we allow this.
@Hyozo: I believe we have the Kurama Clan set somewhere in VR, maybe Cobra is working on it and will bring it later. You'll have to ask him if he is doing so.
@Freak: You'll have to pass this by Cobra, it's very similar to the lightsaber term we negated the use of. Ok so then what would you recommend as changing this too? I can alter it to less elements I am simply giving what I helped to create... I am more than willing to alter it down to 2 elements and then have the third as just the element the kekkei genkai creates...?
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Posted: Wed Aug 17, 2011 3:40 pm
Yeah, that goes for many bloodlines. Look at mokuton, or hyouton. You need to have Suiton and Doton, you get Mokuton. Do that then I'll take another look at it.
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 11:56 am
j3susfr3ak1991 Truthfully, I added the Chakra control specialty requirement to further reference quincys. Quincys have the natural ability to absorb reiryoku and turn it into weapons. They are exceptionally skilled at controlling it. That's why I made the chakra control specialty a requirement. I'm a big Bleach fan myself, so I understand what you're going for here, but we need to be careful as this is not a Bleach guild.
The Bleach universe and powers are by comparison to Naruto... MUCH MUCH MUCH stronger and are capable of materializing chakra in pure forms, (only thery call chakra reiatsu)... but its all the same.
In the naruto Universe however, VERY FEW techniques are formed PURELY of chakra. that's what makes this entire clan hard to allow. Also, there are many aspects you didn't mention regarding the arrows... do they do extra damage? are they better at piercing? etc.. etc...
Again, it's hard to approve this without more detail, but keep in mind we arent here to remake a Bleach Guild in the Naruto Universe.
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:03 pm
The arrows have no extra abilities except for the fact that they can fly faster and farther than conventional arrows, due to their nature of being made of chakra. As for the pure chakra, deal. What if they would have to incorporate their element into the making of the arrow/bows to make it less pure? The stats would still be the same, just not the "pure chakra" status as you call it.
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:38 pm
How does chakra make it fly faster? Or further?
Strength would do both, but not chakra. I mean, bows do change from type to type, but increasing it by 100 Feet?
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 1:35 pm
I think a easier way to explain this would be to say the way the Quincy (For this guild) mold there chakra to increase the distance, and speed arrows fly.
Chakra can be used in a multitude of ways, so saying this Hiden Clan learned to mold there chakra to form arrows build for speed, and range instead of piercing or power should not be that hard to grasp.
Strength doesn't really effect speed, and range or a arrow, only the bow the archer is using effects that. If the string is pulled to hard, past it's limit, then it breaks, if it is pulled to it's limit, it will shoot just as far, for anyone, regardless of strength. We could easily say the arrows fly more easily through the air, and create less resistance, and the bows made of chakra have a more powerful 'kick' from the bows string which will easily give the added speed, and range.
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 2:01 pm
-o-Havik-o- I think a easier way to explain this would be to say the way the Quincy (For this guild) mold there chakra to increase the distance, and speed arrows fly.
Chakra can be used in a multitude of ways, so saying this Hiden Clan learned to mold there chakra to form arrows build for speed, and range instead of piercing or power should not be that hard to grasp.
Strength doesn't really effect speed, and range or a arrow, only the bow the archer is using effects that. If the string is pulled to hard, past it's limit, then it breaks, if it is pulled to it's limit, it will shoot just as far, for anyone, regardless of strength. We could easily say the arrows fly more easily through the air, and create less resistance, and the bows made of chakra have a more powerful 'kick' from the bows string which will easily give the added speed, and range. Actually, Strength directly effects Arrow Speed and Distance, since arrow speed and distance is based on the draw of the bow.
...The higher the bow's tension, the further it goes. So naturally, the more strength you have the further you can draw the bow and the further the arrow can be propelled.
However, I agree that naturally we could make chakra arrows fly faster and farther. I'm thinking we can change it from a basic "chakra arrow" to a lightning based arrow. And we can make the bow a chakra bow, which generates the arrows.
That could work fairly well I think, but the rest of the abilities and details needs a lot of fine tuning and needs to be ninja-fied in several ways. Me and Freak can work on it.
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 2:14 pm
That would be the strength of the bow, not so much the user, Havik would pull a bow string back as any bow man, and probably further, but when he did the string would snap,(and probity whack the s**t out him -.-) it doesn't require physical strength to shoot a arrow faster, but more bow strength.
(Luls, think of the dwarf from lord of the rings trying to shoot a arrow faster than the elf... Just a fun site, not to be used as a comparison, but damn... that would be a funny comic.)
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Posted: Thu Aug 18, 2011 2:19 pm
I'm not trying to disturb your job, but I'm currently free...I'm awaiting a reply to my post and I'm interested in these things, so I could help. Strength affects the Speed and Range, but then again it affects the Piercing Damage. This could be added.
The idea with the lightning based arrow could prove to have great disadvantage as we know by now that the electricity causes vibrations [Increasing the Cutting/Piercing Power] but in the arrow case, it could cause the arrow to miss it's target. And the user wouldn't be able to do anything to it. The user could throw the arrow so it would hit an enemy exactly into his ear hole, but while the arrow is in air and it vibrates, it could change direction. You could continue with this idea and add details about the missing chance and have the chances of missing rise with the distance of the target, but I don't really think this is what Freak wants.
You could simply Coat the Arrows in Chakra and fire them normally, and the Chakra would [as mentioned above] reduce air resistance, resulting into the arrow keeping the speed and have more range.
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2011 9:15 am
Alright, I take archery so I thought I might give my say about the bow power vs. the power of the person. Frankly, you're both right. The poundage (quite simply power. it means how many pounds of force is necessary to pull back the bow, thus how much force is unleashed on the arrow when fired) effects the range(as well as accuracy. a higher poundage bow will send an arrow farther before it begins to drop than a low poundage bow) and strengh/piercing power of the arrow. HOWEVER it takes a stronger person to pull back a bow with more poundage. That being said, if I picked up a bow I could pull back and shot it, and then havik did the same thing with the same bow, the shots would be just as accurate/strong and go just as far. The bow is what determines the statistics of the shot, but the stronger the person, the more powerful the bow they can fire. (not trying to step on any toes, just thought I'd give an educated thought on the subject.)
OOC: Actually havik, since the dwarves are stronger generally, they'd probably be able to shoot an arrow farther since they could use a stronger bow. Elves just use longbows while dwarves use shortbows since they're well shorter. Longbows tend to send an arrow farther since they can have more poundage added before the limbs of the bow would break(not that there arent strong shortbows, but longbows are generally the stronger). Plus, elves are just pinpoint accurate do to their skill, so it looks like they can shoot farther since they know how to lob it and such. .......I just got on a tangent about the science behind bows, dwarves, and elves.........I need a hobby lol
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2011 3:48 am
i would just like to say before this gets read that im not very sure about the Chakra costs etc. i tried to model them off allready created things but dont be to harsh if they are way to low or whatever cause i wasnt sure about how to determine them. help refining this would be much appreciated as i do quite like the ideas behind it. Yogen-sha BloodlineUnderstanding, Sensory Clan History The Yogen-Sha clan was First started in the early years of the Second Hokage, at this time there was great turmoil in Konohagakure due to neighboring Villages attempting to destroy Konohagakure in it’s early stages. Among the Clans that made up the Leaf village 2 in particular stood out The Uchiha, bearers of the Sharingan, and the Hyuga , Bearers of the Byakugan. These 2 clans were the pride of the Leaf Village Both clans standing tall and proud using their great powers for the benefit of all, but as with all things something inevitably goes wrong. Members of both Noble clans began to feel unrest and act out against their clan leaders especially the Hyuga clan as even then superiority between the main family and Branch family was heavily enforced. Alternatively the Uchiha had a group of people who were dissatisfied with the present leadership and wanted control of the clan. Before long the issues within the clan bubbled up to the surface and after a large scale attack against the leaf village and the loss of many lower class members of both clans everything boiled over. 6 Branch families of the Hyuga rose up against the Main family in an attempted coup d'état which was easily thwarted by the main House and the loyal Branch families , this rebellion led to the use of the Hyuga curse seal on all Branch members. At the same time The Uchiha also had an uprising and a large portion of the Lower class family members who had lost friends and family in the last attack were convinced to attempt a takeover by a small group of malcontents, this rebellion was also crushed due to the fact that the majority of the clan had remained loyal and were simply outnumbered. All those who survived the attempted rebellions fled the Leaf Village with all the speed they could muster , as they had been branded traitors, with Anbu Black ops in pursuit at some point in the wild dash from the village the two groups of insurgents came across one another and quickly teamed up to protect themselves from the Anbu. After several days of hit and run skirmishes, the fleeing Shinobi stood there ground and used the power of their respective Kekei Genkai’s to defeat the pursuing members of Anbu Black Ops with crushing force, Several Anbu members made it back to the village and had more men sent out in search of the now Rogue ninja but by the time they arrived at the scene of the battle the rogue clan members were long gone. As time passed mention of the Rouge Clan members faded away every now and a again a rumours of Hyuga style Taijutsu and Sharingan like eyes would surface but none were ever proved. As generations passed and the Third Hokage was in the height of his power rumours of a Clan that boasted similar techniques and bloodline traits to the Uchiha and Hyuga began to surface within the land of water. The clan soon grew in strength and was offered a place in the village hidden in the mist. The Clans name was Yogen-sha. Clan Jutsu:The Yogen-sha are TaiJutsu/Kenjutsu specialists due to the nature of their Kekei Genkai this allows them to learn Tai/ken jutsu at a much faster pace (5 posts less then normal excluding below mentioned techniques) “Stolen techniques” Ryuuka no Jutsu - Dragon Fire Technique Rank: C Range: Mid (5m ~ 10m) Type: Attack Katon • Ryuuka no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Fire Element. After binding the opponent, the ninja uses a guide wire to unleash a large torrential fire burst onto the target. Goukakyuu no Jutsu - Great Fireball Technique Rank: C Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Type: Attack Katon • Goukakyuu no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilzing the Fire Element. The ninja does the necessary hand seals, draws chakra from their mouth into their chest and them immediately exhales it. They then blow a stream of fire which erupts into a large sphere of flames. To better manage the flames the ninja will bring their hand to their mouth to control it. Juuho Soushiken - Gentle Step Twin Lion Fist Rank: B Range: Close (0m ~ 5m) Type: Attack Juuho Soushiken is a Taijutsu technique. After gathering chakra to the fists, the ninja will skillfully spin towards their target to avoid attack and strike them. Spectral lion heads will then form around their fists. Hakke Kuushou - Eight Divination Signs Air Palm Rank: B Range: Close (0m ~ 5m), Mid (5m ~ 10m) Type: Attack Hakke Kuushou is a ranged Taijutsu technique. Extending chakra from their body, a ninja will thrust his palm at his target. This will send out an invisible wave of chakra that can knock his opponent back. This move cannot damage tenketsu points. To achieve any of these a Clan member must train for an extra 5 posts then needed as they are removed from the original members who knew the techniques and it is no longer clearly remembered. A clan member can choose to specialise them self in either the Hyuga or the Uchiha Bloodline traits training to enhance those specific genes in which case they can learn the Hyuga style techniques or Uchiha fire style as normal but can only use 1 (see Hyuga/Uchiha clan for Jutsu’s) Clan specific: Rīpātatchi- Reapers touchRank : D Stage 2 rank: A Reapers touch is a Jab technique in which the user focus’s chakra into their finger tips and Jabs the opponent pushing Chakra into their body interrupting their Chakra network by flooding it with different chakra Stage 2 the user can focus more chakra into his fingertips making it seem like smoke is billowing out of them the chakra is used to for apart molecules effectively “decaying” whatever was struck. Rules/Abilities Passive state “Locked on” or active stateThe Senkengan (Foresight eye): The Senkengan is an eye based Kekei genkai. This is born from the combination of the Uchiha and the Hyuga clan. It has the ability to allow the user to have accelerated vision (seeing things in slow motion) as well as being able to see ,and comprehend, an opponent’s muscle Expansion’s and contraction’s allowing them to predict physical movements which makes seem as if they can see the future. It also gives the user detailed information about the opponent E.g. Body height, weight, right of left hander, Actual age, the more developed the Senkengan is the more information it can get. As it develops it can also detect weak points in the opponent’s body (like an old injury) at this level it also starts to see through things depending on the thickness of the object. Enpawā Senkengan (Empowered Foresight Eye): This is the upgraded version of the Senkengan, this mode allows the user to see chakra flow to a certain extent (it’s impossible for the Senkengan to detect Chakra points but it can see the “flow” of chakra to make a guess as to what type of Jutsu the opponent will use and see Chakra inside objects E.g. chakra infused threads or stones) Must be at Chunnin level minimum to achieve Enpawā SenkenganDetails/ restrictions:The passive state shown above is the way the Senkengan looks normally , once the users begins to use it the lines slowly extend until they reach the pupil once there the Senkengan has “locked on” and has all the information it can currently gather. The Senkengan is a dangerous tool, it puts a large strain on Chakra reserves and the more information it collects the more chakra it uses up (so if you were to use it on a group it would take more chakra as it has to get information on multiple targets) and therefore is unsuited to group fights. Also if it gathers to much information the brain can’t handle it and begins erasing memories of the user to make room. The Yogen-sha Clan are born with this Kekei Genkai allready activated the Senkengan cannot be turned off or they lose the ability and their sight permenatly. To prevent The Senkengan from simply expending all of the users Chakra the Clan Wears their head bands around their eyes as well as a mask providing 3-4 layers (depending on whether or not their eyes are closed) to stop the Senkengan from using all the users chakra this also means that there is a permanent drain on the Yogen-Sha clan members Chakra to compensate the clan has developed a higher base amount of chakra, Because of this self inflicted blindness the clan has developed heightened hearing to compensate for the minimal use of their eyes. Heightened hearing: increased level of awareness (can detect people 1 rank higher) Higher base chakra: a genin would start with 30 instead of 25 (the extra 5 is purely used as the natural bleed off from the Kekei genkai) Chakra cost: The Senkengan costs Chakra when active: 1st 5 Posts = 1 Chakra Point each // 2nd 5 Posts = 2 Chakra Points each
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Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 4:13 pm
The Hitan/Kuretsou Clan
The Hitan:
Hitan Biography:
Eight years ago, a war between two clans had broken out. This terrible, horrifying war lasted for three years straight. The Clans participating in the war was the Shifting Clan, The Hitan, and the Dark Light Clan known as The Rampuli. Years before, both of this Clans each were powerful allies. The Hitan controlled the natural bloodline to manipulate the physical attributes of anything they touch onto their own body. But a unique feature they also controlled was their very own: “Natural Shift.” This natural form turned their skin hard as the hardest material known to earth. Their skin tone would change to a deep musky blue with black swirling designs over their skin. This new form also gave them an icy touch and feel, though it was unclear what exactly this shift was. While working along side their allied clan, it soon became an issue when land was claimed after wars. The Rampuli eventually began to think that they were being cheated out by the Hitan. Though it was not soon till the Rampuli declared war, and attacked the Hitan!
For three years this war raged onwards. No victor was soon to be found and the war was believed to thrive on for another six years according to studies made by Hitan military scientists. Though something happened that the Hitan never expected. During the war, the Hitan made a side-allieship with a nearby Clan. This Clan helped them by providing military supplies in return for land that Hitan would give them. Though after two years, the clan was contacted. The Rampuli had offered them all of the Hitan’s land if they would help them succeed in this war. One night, when the civilians of the Hitan Clan were asleep, they were ambushed. The Rampuli had used the allied Clan to open the entrance into the Hitan late at night for a perfect surprise ambush. Though the civilian members of the Hitan attempted to fight back, they were overpowered by the Rampuli when a new “weapon” was used against them. The only flaw to the Hitan: When their body is injected or shocked with a large about of electricity, it can disrupt any form of shift that they have taken. The Rampuli had created a type of weapon which harnessed electricity and used it to beat the Hitan to their deaths. The ambush was successful, and only one Hitan Clan Member survived.
Ability Detail:
The Hitan contain the simple ability to absorb the physical attributes of any element/material that their skin comes in contact with. Depending on the element or material it could change their methods of fighting from short range to long range. Normally the most common absorbed material is the element of the earth, since it is much easier to come in contact with than other materials or metals. Though only one element can be absorbed at a time, and manipulated for a limited time. The older the Hitan Clan member, and more experience, the more they can endure their shift and longer the can expand it's own ability.
Ability Weakness:
As stated above in the Bio, It is very difficult to preform a "shift" while lightning is surging through your body or "dancing" on your skin. Due to this factor, lightning is a major weakness of this clan and can drastically injure their ability to use their bloodline during a battle. Also it has only been done once, but Lightning is unable to manipulated through this Clan's bloodline.
Listed Materials/Elements that the Hitan cannot manipulate:
- Water - Lightning - Wind - Occasionally Fire (But Sometimes can be manipulated) - Molten Lava Or anything similar - Light - Darkness - Shadows - More could be added to this list.
Note: There are no set techniques for this bloodline. It normally is only used to help allow the user to easily manipulate nearby elements for his usage and benefit. If need be, I can create some techniques in my free time.
The Kuretsou:
Kuretsou Biography:
Over three centuries ago, a small clan was slowly starting to gain a legendary name for themselves. This clan had the magnificent ability to control and manipulate their own natural form of magnetism. This clan was known as the Kuretsou, and was soon becoming known as "The Mangetic Threat" to other Clans which interefered with their lifestyle or threatened their Clan. The Kuretsou Clan contain their own unique cells, which work alongside the other natural human cells within the human body. These cells are called: Irius Cells. Irius cells contain a element created within the body of the Kuretsou, known as Kureirius. Kureirius is a rare expandable magentic element, which can only be magentized through a Kuretmagentic Field. Kureirius is only found in the Irius Cells of a Kurestou Clan member's inner body. This magnetic element allows a Kuretsou Clan member to create their own magnetic fields. These special magnetic fields are known as Kuretmagentic fields. Kuretmagnetism is much diffrent then the other three types of magnetism. Ferromagnetism are items that create their own magnetic field, Paramagnetism are items attracted to magnetic fields, and Diamagnetism are items that repell magnetism. Kuretmagnetism is a type of magnetism which has it's own magnetic field but needs a functioning organ like structure to create it's magentic field. Kuromagnetism also has traits of Paramagnetism and Ferromagnetism where magnetic items are attracted to Kuretmagnetic fields.
The Kuretsou Clan was considered to be a Strategic Military Clan, during their lifetime. The Clan was rutheless and would take any chance they could to enter another war. Their bloodline is mostly what led them to victory, along with their highly intelligent military leaders. Unlike other Clan's though, the Kuretsou's choice of weapon was much different than others would use. The Kuretsou's main weapon was that of a solid Kureirius chain. With their own elemental chain, they could manipulate it's movements with their own magnetic field thus making them a powerful opponent in the war zone. They had fought many wars, and won almost every single battle they had on foreign soil. No other clans even dared to challenge them on their homeland. Eventually though, every great empire must come to it's own downfall. The Kuretsou during it's time had gained no allies, for they saw themselves as the surpreme unbeatable clan they were made out to be.
Eventually they had declared war against another clan, though this war would rage on for years. The clan they fought against ironically held no bloodline ability of their own. They also were very talented military strategists and fought using a varied form of weapons, which the Kuretsou were not use to fighting against. On each side of the fronts, each clan took numerous casualties and it seemed the war was never going to end. The other Clan had eventually figured out the Kuretsou's bloodline and how it's magentism works to a certain degree. In a attempt to gain an upperhand on the Kuretsou, the entire Clan melted down all their magentic metals and began forging weapons made out of Diamangetic materal. Though their new weapons preformed exactly what was needed and eventually pushed the Kuretsou to edge of losing their first and final war. A final strategic plan of the Kuretsou was to send a single squad into the enemy base and to take their leader hostage, hoping it would signify the end of the war and the victory for the Kuretsou. Though when the small task force was sent in, the other Clan had a plan of it's own which the Kuretsou had never expected. Up until this war, the Kuretsou had never been attacked on their home soil. The other clan had taken half of it's army and gone around to strike the Kuretsou where they least expected it. By the time the Kuretsou squad had made it's strike, only one of them had survived all the way to the end. It was a squad of three, and two of them died on the way to capture the leader. Sadly their own sacrifice for their mission was a waste. By the time the final Kuretsou had captured the leader, he had received the fatal knews that his village was in a blaze and his people dieing by their enemy's hands. This man was Jishaku Kuretsou.
Ability Detail:
The Kuretsou Clan contain their own unique cells, which work alongside the other natural human cells within the human body. These cells are called: Irius Cells. Irius cells contain a element created within the body of the Kuretsou, known as Kureirius. Kureirius is a rare expandable magentic element, which can only be magentized through a Kuretmagentic Field. Kureirius is only found in the Irius Cells of a Kurestou Clan member's inner body. This magnetic element allows a Kuretsou Clan member to create their own magnetic fields. These special magnetic fields are known as Kuretmagentic fields. Kuretmagnetism is much diffrent then the other three types of magnetism. Ferromagnetism are items that create their own magnetic field, Paramagnetism are items attracted to magnetic fields, and Diamagnetism are items that repell magnetism. Kuretmagnetism is a type of magnetism which has it's own magnetic field but needs a functioning organ like structure to create it's magentic field. Kuromagnetism also has traits of Paramagnetism and Ferromagnetism where magnetic items are attracted to Kuretmagnetic fields.
Ability Weakness:
It is unkown to many, but The Kuretsou's mangetic field does hold a strong weakness against the Element of Sound. Skilled Sound Manipulators can increase their sound on such a high frequency that it is possible for them to create their own sound field which disrupts the magentic flow within the Kuretsou. Certain types of counter magnetic fields have also been noted as a weakness of the Kuretsou.
Materials that Cannot be magnetized by the Kuretsou:
Any material which has a "Diamagentic" field cannot be manipulated by the Kuretsou. A few examples of this magentic field are the elements/materials known as Copper, Silver, Aluminum, Ect.
Current Kuretsou Clan Members:
- Jishaku Kuretsou (Leader and Pure Kuretsou) - Tsurai Kuretsou (Blood Pacted) - Demetri Ikana (Blood Pacted) - Kiyomi Kuretsou (Blood Pacted)
"Blood Pacting" is the medical process where the Kuretsou Bloodline can be passed down to a non-bloodline member from a Pure/Pacted Kuretsou. The process literally involves the drainage/injection of blood between the non-member and the Kuretsou Member.
Other Info:
Jishaku Kuretsou Jishaku's Handsized Notebook
The last article surviving from the ancient Kuretsou Clan's Library contained only knowledge and information on the Kuretsou's Clan main bloodline ability. Filled with questions asked and answered by the top Kuretsou Scientists.
Page One
Kureirius (cure-us)
What is Kureirius? Kureirius is a rare expandable magentic element. Kureirius is only found in the Irius Cells of a Kurestou Clan member' inner body. This magnetic element allows a Kuretsou Clan member to create magnetic fields.
How does it work? Kureirius is sealed within grey blood cells known as Irius Cells. The Irius Cells are pumped throughtout the bloodstream and into the many muscles, tissues, and organs. Some Irius Cells live within the bones of the clan member. Because these cells are never used, (because they are inside and on the outer layer of the bone) they attach to the bone and bone marrow. As the bone marrow produces new blood cells it also begins to produce Irius Cells. After a while the built up Irius Cells begin to mix in the the bones' structure and changes the bones into a metalic magnetic state. The new metalic bones help allow the Irius Cells to flow throughout the bodies normal functions. As the irius Cells are sent throughout the body they also form a new layer of skin. The way this layer is formed is when the Irius Cells are being "over-produced." The extra Irius Cells bond together into a storage area between the Epidermis and the Dermis. This new storage area acts as a layer of skin to help protect and release more Irius Cells. When the user losses a fatal amount of blood, at that time the storage layer sends the Irius Cells to the body's main functions to keep the user alive. At this time the user's Irius Cells are limited and over using this limit can cause fatal injuries or even death. Much like oil, which slowly releases from the body's skin, Irius cells also are constantly released from the skin. Alot like blood when Irius cells come in contact with oxygen, they change by evaporating and releasing the Kureirius within them. But unlike blood, Irius Cells do not release, in high amounts, in a opened wound; this is a safety feature that blood creates to prevent accidently over using the Irius Cells. Even though Irius Cells are released with blood they still evaporate releasing the Kureirius into the blood. As the Kureirius comes in contact with blood and oxygen it takes on a silver colored form and becomes known as Liquid Kureirius. As the Kureirius is released, it forms a small and weak magnetic field around the body known as a Kuretmagnetic field. The Irius Cells within the body maintains the magentic pull to keep the Kuretmagnetic field around the user's body.
What is a Kuretmagnetism? (Cure-eh-magent-itsm) As stated above a kuretmagnetic field is created by the releasing of Irius Cells into the oxygen around the skin. When the Irius Cells are released into oxygen they evporate, while letting out the element within them known as Kureirius. With the Irius Cells inside the body, they put off a magnetic pull which pulls the Kureirius to the user making the Kureirius form a magnetic field around the user's body known as a Kuretmagnetic field. Kuretmagnetism is much diffrent then the other three types of magnetism. Ferromagnetism are items that create their own magnetic field, Paramagnetism are items attracted to magnetic fields, and Diamagnetism are items that repell magnetism. Kuretmagnetism is a type of magnetism which has it's own magnetic field but needs a functioning organ like structure to create it's magentic field. Kuromagnetism also has traits to Paramagnetism where magnetic items are attracted to Kuretmagnetic fields.
How does Kureirius affect the body? Kureirius affects has no real effect upon the body, but the Irius Cells it is contained in have certain effects upon the user’s body. One effect of the Irius Cells is the change of the user’s bone structure. Normal human bones are made out of Calcium, Phosphorus, Sodium and other minerals. A normal human bone is hard to break and is breakable. The Irius Cells act as a type of “steroid” you can say for the body. As they attach to the bone, it goes under a mutation and its normal minerals are replaced with the mineral inside the Irius Cells known as the Iriumk. (Er-ri-um, K is silent.) Iriumk is a highly powerful mineral which is also only found in the Irius Cells. Even though Iriumk replaces some of the bone’s minerals the body is still not affected by the loss of the other needed minerals. The Iriumk is 65% nutrients and is 35% *liquid metal. The liquid metal part is stored in the center of the nutrients, as the bone uses the nutrients the liquid metal is then absorbed into the bone which thus leads to the change into metallic bones. The Irius Cells also affect the many major organs of the body. A example being the heart, as the bones produce blood cells and the Irius Cells they are sent to the heart and then pumped throughout the body. When the heart pumps the Irius Cells it gains some of its nutrients during the process, these nutrients (Iriumk) helps the heart maintain a healthy place and steady heart beat. The other organs also maintain their health from absorbing the nutrient Iriumk. Because of the Iriumk’s powerful properties the organs seem to get a “addicted” since to it, so when the body is low on Irius Cells the storage layer of skin must send its cells to the body’s organs or the body will die. *This Liquid Metal is believed to have high traces of Kureirius within it. If the bones are turned to metal because of the liquid metal in the Iriumk, why are the organs and other parts of the body not turned to metal? This question has no correct definate anwser. There is much about this cell that is unkown. The Kuretsou believed it was because the bone was already a solid structure and that the liquid metal inside the Iriumk Cells was actually a form of Kureirius which attached itself to the sold structure and infused itself with the bone.
Does a Irius Cell have layers? Yes, a Irius Cell has a total of four layers. The first layer being the protective layer of the Iriumk nutrients. Iriumk is slowly released from the first layer in very small amounts, so organs near the cell can gain the nutrient. The second layer is the layer of only Iruimk, the first layer is normally torn down and reveals this layer when in need of restoring or healing any internal injuries. The first layer has also known to have been removed for the second layer to attend to the bones’ need for nutrients. The third layer, is to keep the Ikuimk and Kureirius separate like another protection layer. The final layer is known as the Kureirius layer but is only revealed when the whole cell is exposed to oxygen. The Liquid Metal is found through all the layers of the cell but is proven to be none fatal to the body, it seems to act as a coat or back-up energy for the cell.
What is Iriumk? Iriumk is a rare mineral only found in the second layer of Irius Cells. A Iriumk mineral is 65% nutrients and 35% liquid metal. The power of the Iriumk mineral is so powerful that it makes the body’s natural organs addicted to it, it is unkown what exactly makes the mineral so powerful and addicting.
How do Irius Cells heal or restoring internal injuries? It depends on the type of injury, for example if a organ like the heart was injured the Irius Cells would quickly move to the wound in the heart and attach itself to it, as it removes its first layer and allows the second layer to heal the wound. Even with this though, it takes a good few minutes to heal the internal injury.
Can Irius Cells heal external injuries, like a gash wound on the arm? It is possible, for it has its own layer of skin which is full of Irius Cells. If a open wound appears on the top layer of the skin, to protect themselves the Irius Cells would quickly begin to heal the wound the same it would a internal injury by attaching and giving the wound the nutrient needed.
Does a Kuretsou Clan member not age because of the Irius Cells? A Kuretsou Clan member does age but does not age at the normal rate of a human. It is believed it is because of the Iriumk's nutrients that they supply the body with so much that it has enough to live on for years to come, so the aging process slows down. The Iriumk's nutrients also supply the body for energy to restore the tissue, organs, and other parts of the body that need it more as age enhances.
Since Kureirius is a element what state is it in or can become? Kureirius is considered a gas element. As Irius Cells release the Kureririus it becomes a invisible type of gas that surrounds and magentized to the body's magentic pull. The gas is not visible and cannot be caught, touched, or changed like many other natural gases. There are situations where Kureiruis has been found as a solid. A example would be a Kuretsou Clan member's bones. After so much time of constant exposure to the element of Kureirius the bone's natural functions where replaced and there by shifted into a solid Kureirius element. It is also seen as a liquid when blood is released from a open wound on the body where it becomes a silver looking color. This is caused by the Kureirius being released with contact in blood and oxygen at the same time, causing it to fuse with the blood. This gives the blood the full Kureirius effect and creates a liquid Kureirius. liquid Kureirius does contain magnetic properties.
The Kuretsou Clan carried around weapons known as Kuretsou Chains which are rumored to contain Solid Kureirius, How is this possible? The chains are a form of solid Kureirius. In order to make Kureirius into a weapon let alone a solid outside of the body is a difficult task. Kureirius is a unbreakable element but not the strongest element out there, when in a solid form. Kureirius cannot be turned to a solid like other elements because it's freezing and melting point is unkown. In order to forge a weapon with Kureirius Cells you must need a blood member of the Kuretsou Clan. Small amounts of Kureirius are released from the body every second of the day much like oil from the skin. When a Kurestsou Clan member forges a weapon they normally leave a scar like impress in the weapon. For example a deep scar in the side of a sword's blade. After the forging of the weapon is done, a Kuretsou Clan member takes his own blood and poors it down within the grooves of the weapon. As the blood hits Oxygen it turns into a silver color, which is the Kureirius being released and then sealed into it's liquid state. After pouring the silver blood down the groove of the weapon you then wield the groove to cover the "scar." After a while the Kureirius will harden along with the wielding of the groove and it's magnetic abilities will start to spread through the weapon, using itself as a base and the weapon as it's conductor. The kuretmagentic field is not activated until it comes incontact with a Kuretsou Clan member's Kuretmagnetic field. For example if a Kuretsou's chain is lying on the ground and is not within their own kuretmagentic range it would act as a normal chain, at some times it may act as a paramagentic weapon.
How does a Kuretsou member prevent the stealing of his bloodline after being killed in battle? The Kuretsou's body has a safety feature incase the Kuretsou ever dies in battle over the Kureirius in battle. The Irius cells within him, suddenly shut down and die themselves. The whtie blood cells within the body then no longer see the Irius cells as a "friend" and now see them as a virus. Since the irius cell no longer is alive, the white blood cells are no longer weaker and actually destroy the irius cells. The process only takes two mintues to fully extinguish the body of the irius cells. Also even if someone manges to extract the cells before they are extinguished, it would not help them fro the cells would already have shut down and would have no effect if injected into another person's body.
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Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2011 5:27 pm
Sound Sight Otosan Clan Blind, Sensitive, Altering Clan/ Kekkei Genkai Background -Otosan clan began within the City Hidden in Darkness, a byproduct of twisted experiments that occurred during the Great War. Due to their cities lack of light, many of the ninja who came from the city were blind and unable to fight the bright attacks of the ninja in the upper world. But there was one clan who seemed to have a unique ability to fight the takeover none the less. This clan had developed a bat like sonar within their senses, a pattern of vibration given off their bodies that gave them a pulsing sight and allowed them to identify objects. This clan won its respects during the war, remaining hidden under the mountains. But a few younger ninja have ventured beyond the city, bringing with them their unique bloodline.
Clan/ Kekkei Genkai Description - The Otosan clan is blind, however their bloodline is a doujutsu derived off of sonic vibrations given off by objects and humans. Otosani clan members can then use this to help them identify ninja, and navigate through areas. These frequencies are ultrasonic, undetectable to all but their clan due to their highly sensitive ears which then translate the frequencies into a “sight” derived of sound. It is used so they can navigate regions and identify others. This superb hearing, however, can also be a downfall, for loud noises such as explosions can be disorienting due to their disruption of the vibrations, and leave the Otosan sensory deprived. As they grow to learn to use the abilities of this sight, they can alter the pitches to leave others under various effects. With this understanding of wave frequencies, Otoninja can learn Raiton and Suuton jutsu in two less posts than other ninja. Rules & Requirements - ● Members of this clan MUST be naturally blind. ● As with all bloodlines, the clan’s jutsu are limited by rank. ● Members of this clan are extremely noise sensitive. As such, explosions of any type will hurt your ears. ● You must have either Suiton, ototon, raiton, or Fuuton elemental affinities. ((Only one is required as a primary. The rest are optional.)) Cannot have Katon. ● Altering frequencies requires the use of jutsu. ● Your hearing sensitivity increases as you gain rank allowing for greater range. Genin (30meters), Chuunin(40m), special Jounin(50m),jounin (60m) Saanin (70m) Abilities - ● Members of this clan can identify people via their “aura”, the natural vibration they give off ● Due to their blindness, the Otosan clan is immune to sight based genjutsu. ● Clan members may learn Raiton, Sound, and Suiton jutsu in two less posts than normal ninja. ((This bonus does. Not. Stack. With anything besides teaching master. ● Utalizing high pitches, they can alter others frequencies to create adverse effects. This requires jutsu. ●Members of this clan can speak to others using their vibrations. Others of the clan will understand, normal ninja (unless included) will not.
Clan/ Kekei Genkai Jutsu -
● Sound Sight- Passive Ability This allows the members of the Otosan clan to detect the frequencies which allow them to see. They can detect things within a range as determined by the rank rules and guidelines. If an explosion occurs this ability is disrupted as by the guidelines. Genin ● Disorientation: D-ranked By using their chakra to manipulate an opponent’s frequency, they can cause their vision to waver. This is useful to avoid attacks and cause mild effects such as nausea and dizziness. Any opponents speed rank is cut by one rank. This jutsu lasts for 5 posts and cannot be used for 3 after it wears off. ●Sound Wave: D-ranked. The user of this jutsu claps their hands together to create a wave of sound. Like a wave of wind it can strike objects in the air and halt their progress. This jutsu also can be used to push opponents back 2m, but may not be used more than once every four posts. ● Echoing Steps: D-ranked The user can alter the frequencies of an area to conceal their own noise while echoing the sounds of an opponent’s movements. This allows them to move silently until they attack.
Chuunin ● Pitch of Hell: C-ranked This jutsu alters a frequency from ultrasonic to a high pitch squeak that can damage an opponents hearing temporarily (3 posts). This pitch can also be used against summons to negate physical attacks. ●Twenty-one gun salute: C-ranked This jutsu fires off seven balls of concentrated sound that are three meters across. They move much like wind jutsu and produce a low tone when fired. If an opponent is struck by one of these balls they can be thrown back several meters. ●Mimicry: C-ranked This jutsu alters a person’s frequency so that they take on the appearance and voice of another ninja. This disguise can be held up to 15 posts unless discovered.
Special Jonin ●Sound Wave- B ranked This jutsu creates a solid wave of sound that travels at medium speeds. This wall has the substance of earth and makes a middle tone C pitch when fired. It can be manipulated by the users chakra. ● Oto Shield: B-ranked This jutsu creates a shield made of sound around the user that can block all C-ranked and lower techniques. B-ranked techniques create an explosion. This shield can be maintained up to 4 posts. ●Slicing Current: B-ranked This jutsu creates a blast of slicing sound which covers an area of 3 meters wide and several hundred deep. This tunnels wind can cut flesh to ribbons, and slice through all defenses except doton. ●Sound Copy: B-ranked This jutsu creates a replica of the user that acts as a bushin. It can be independent of the user and acts like a shadow clone until destroyed. When its destroyed the clone bursts to create a wave which bursts ear drums if the opponent is close. ●Silent Fury- B-ranked This allows the user to move silently for up to 5 posts with an increased speed. During this brief period, if they manage to get in hand to hand combat range, they can alter an opponent’s frequency so that they are put into a genjutsu like state. By altering the pitch and frequency, they can control this world. This jutsu can be broken in the same way as genjutsu.
Jounin ●Torture of the Body: A ranked A burst of sound that alters a persons pitches to cause a series of pains to shift through their nerves on contact, causing pain similar to being cut by alcohol dipped knives. ●Dog Whistle: A ranked Most commonly used against animal summons this creates a frequency that is painful for animals to hear, immobilizing them for two posts.
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Posted: Mon Aug 29, 2011 6:48 am
Sorry to be so late in replying to you, and I wish I could give a more amiable response... but I cannot accept this bloodline. I can see you worked hard on the storyline, but it's just too non-canon to allow and it does too much to merge Sharingan/Hyuuga... which are two popular and powerful bloodlines into one.
So, unfortunately, I can't allow it. I would however suggest to you to simply take the ideas you had for an RPC and just make either a Sharingan user, or a Hyuuga.
Sorry again for taking so long only to deliver bad news.
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