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 Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 6:05 am
What do you mean i didnt use the knollege...i used more than just hardening skin...i referenced it's stupidity and how it attacks wildly and drains chakra, i referenced it's water control ability, how it slows when in demon form, and how it will snap out at close by opponants....also, i cant use any of the bijuu's moves at genin level, all are B and above....but i had it's description open and looked at every main point of the demon while making that RP example...
but you if you still want another example, i'll give you another one i guess
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:15 am
((ok, here is my new RP sample....I know this is like, uber-OP and G-modding, but i'd never go stright ape-s**t like this...))
War had been raging for sometime now. It started with small raids from other villages, to eventual kidnappings of Demon hosts. The mizukage found it best if their Hosts were transfered somewhere safe.
Elizabeth was with her team, on their way to a secret bunker able to mask even demon chakra. She was told it was for the good of the village, so she went along with it. The trip was going smoothly, when suddenly, a ninja jumped out of the shrubbery and landed infront of the group.
Beth could tell by how the ninja was dressed, and from his headband, that he was a rogue Mist ninja. The rogue pointed at Beth and said, "I know of someone who is paying high price for you, so wont you please come with me? I wouldnt wnt to hurt your little friends"
Beth stepped forwards, "yeah, that'll never happen. now, allow me to show you what you've gotten yourself into". In her mind, She talked with the demon. "This man wants to kill us both. Are you going to let that happen?". The demon let out a loud roar, and its chakra began to flood into Beth. This whole transaction took only a second.
On the outside, Beth's eyes were changing, and her skin began to get harder. she drew more and more chakra, till a cloak of blue surounded her body, and a tail formed. She felt herself slowly loosing control, so she stopped taking chakra. She ran at the rogue, Swinging her arms in a slashing motion. He movements were slow, so the rogue easily dodged every attack.
The rogue shot a water stream at Beth. She quickly used the demon's skin hardening ability to make the water jutsu useless against her. Beth did a quick hand seal, and clouds began to form. The water on the ground began to rise into the air, and form a masive water bullet. She snapped, and the bullet shot down at the rogue ninja with high speed. The bullet hit next to the Rogue, and the water hit him. The massive force from the water would send him flying to the ground.
After that, she smiled and clenched her hands into fists. the surrounding lakes and streams began to flood around Beth, swirling in a violent motion. In the midst of this, a second tail formed. Beth was now almost too slow to move. She had lost most control over her actions, and the demon took over.
The water around her began to lash out in all directions, but 2 large pillars shot at the Rogue. The 2 pillars collided aginst him with a powerful, crashing force. The water formed around him, creating a prisson. he was trapped and at the mercy of the demon. Water began to flow into hit eyes, ears, nose, and mouth, filling his lungs. The rogue struggled, then went limp. Beth dropped him, then lashed at her team.
She had no control, and could no longer tell who was friend or foe, well, she could, but the demon, who had most control couldnt. Her commander stepped forawrds infront of her team, and did a few quick hand signs. Beth suddenly found herself encased in powerful hyouton ice. She stuggled and tried to break it, but it quickly regenerated after being hit.
She felt the chakra being drained from her, and the demon slowly began to loose control. The aura of chakra faded, Beth came back to consiousness. The demon's rampaging and constant chakra burning caused her to become very weak, and exhausted. Beth's head slumped forward, unconsious. the ice melted, and the team leader picked her up and continued to their destination.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 8:45 am
Username: Darth Sen
Rpc Name: Akira Mizu
Element(s): Suiton , Fuuton
Village: Kirigakure
Link to Profile: Will make after hearing word of eitehr acceptance or denial for application
Bijuu wanted: Sanbi - Isonade
Why should I give this to you? I am a pretty good rper, though not amazing. However I do understand the limitations of the demon along with its perks and I hope I can incorporate that understanding into my rp sample below.
How much do you know about it? The Sanbi is the three tailed bijuu which has advanced aquatic abilities. Its host is given the ability to manipulate and create water with teh cost fo chakra ofcourse. Also the jinchuuriki is given hard skin and a small suiton jutsu archive exclusive to teh Sanbi and its host. While the host is almost completely immune to SUiton technqiues Raiton type jutsu will have devastating effects.
Rp Sample:
The boat gently rocked upon the seas, its wooden deck creaked with the force of the waves. The Kirigakure jounin slept on the deck, the full moon's milky light reflected off his headband. The massive Head Cleaving sword he wielded was placed against the side of the ship, and the night was in all essence serene and calm.
The scene was then interupted by the fading sound of metallic projectiles tearing through the night time sky, the sleek silver sembon impaled their target to teh satisfaction of the cloaked attacker. However, the sound heard was not that of metal piercing skin, but more of metal hitting metal as the weapons fell uselessly to teh ground against the ninja's hardened skin. Akira slowly opened his eyes staring at the cloaked figure, the crimson clouds decorating the darkness of the cloak gave away the ninja's motives. "Was that truly necessary?" His face was expressionless, and his eyes expressed no concern. His voice was laxed and the lack of his desire for combat at the time came through clearly.
"Come with me..." The attacker's voice was that of a woman, her seals were incredibly fast as she placed her palm on the deck, ice surged forth from her location tearing through teh wood. Akira reached out to grab his balde, swiftly sitting up he place dthe balde before his torso as it was impaled by the Ice forcing him up into the sky. Focusing his chakkra Akira landed on the mast of the ship among the flapping sails. "Geez lady...Come on can a guy take a nap in peace?" He watched as ice shards shot from the previous attack and he raised his left hand outstretching it. Flicking his wrist he manipulated the waves behind him to rise sweeping across the deck of the ship the ice shards were washed away and their creater stood in the salty sea where her ice would be much slower formign and difficult to create. Akira elapt forth graspign teh heavy balde in both hands he crashed the sword down on the woman's location. She side stepped the attack, but the manipulated water from the impact created an atatck fo pure blunt force to knoch her backward and off balance. Seeing this Akira formed the seal with his left hand releasing its grip form the sword.
Dark cloud began to enevlop the moon redcuing its light as rain poured from tehir bodies. Droplets of water began to rise form the ocea into the sky as the liquid spheres formed over the battlefield. "Leave now...and I won't kill you." Lightning flashed and the woman's face was clear for a breif instant, A fellow Mizu clan member startled Akira. He had recognized her as the girl that went missing when he was a child.
"Isonade...We cannot kill this woman, she's not in control of her actions...her eyes are empty, this isn't her." Akira, sounded very nonchalant about the matter, while he did not desire to kill the opponent, it may be the only way as she has the eyes of someone who is already desceased. The response he received form the Sanbi however was that of a powerful surge of chakra which was an indicator that it would not restrain itself for the sake of a woman who could potentially kill them. "Understood...my friend."
As the woman charged forth the spheres fell three converged on her location forcing her beneath the surface and nto the murky depths below. Sheathing the wepaon AKira dashed to the impact locationand formed multiple seals. "Depth Cannon..." He inhaled drawing it massive amounts of water from the sea. Focusing the atatck, and hesitant at first he released the powerful aquatic burst into the sea. Then relieving his chakra control he slipepd into the ocean and outstretched his arms taking contorl of the aquatic projectiles with much diifculty. HHis face strained as he sturggled to clasp his hands together forcing the balst to charge the woman. As they hit her body was lost against the chaos and an explosion of water and blood propelled AKira from the sea. The jounin landed catching his footing on the sea he outstreched his right hand to catch a tathered piece of her robe, the crimson cloud was stained with her blood. "You must have surely been controlled and sent here only to test my abilities...for no shinobi belonging to this organization would attack a jinchuuriki where their element is abundant. Goodbye...my sister." He turned from the scene walking towards his boat eagerly awaiting his dreamscape's return.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 9:11 am
Shruikan Tenshi @Kit: Denied. Sorry but gotta be chunin or under lol @Snuff: Hmmm. Denied for now. I want to see more description of you using the demon's powers and techniques. You know about its ability of the hardening skin but that won't be it. Be more descriptive and try again. We'll see how it goes from there. But not bad sample though @Cody: Gotta wait for Incubus's post. But If I were you, redo your post. make it more about how you use the demon. Its goood to know you won't god mod, but you need to know how to properly use it. Of course that comes with training, but you need to understand the basics. @Kash: Accepted. I know your a good rper and you know what your doing. However, I looked at your profile. It says katon is listed as your element, so you need to drop your bloodline and the two elements with it. Unless you want to change your element from fire to something else. @Jedi: Dude, nine tails is only for konoha lol. Eight tails for cloud. dropping bloodline altogether, remember you can't do bloodline and a demon, but you can do clan and demon (its a loophole. Taht and we don't want demon hosts with something like a neo byakugan, so their already OP hits are even more OP.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 9:36 am
((I'll get to both you and snuff in a moment))
@Kash: I know this lol.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:26 am
@Snuff: Approved. Your rp skills needs work and by having this your village should be able to help you. Your sample doesn't suck, but it isn't as good as Sen's. And my opinion by doing this is so you will not only be able to experience the uses of a demon, but also have to work harder and learn.
@Sen: Dude your a great rper, so good you truely don't need a demon and we both know demons can make good rp development tools. So thats why Snuff is getting it. And with you at mist I know you can help her become a better rper. Your sample was the best one so far fyi, just those who aren't that good at rping need the help, and by this she can get that help. I hope you understand mate. Good job none the less
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:28 am
Shruikan Tenshi @Snuff: Approved. Your rp skills needs work and by having this your village should be able to help you. Your sample doesn't suck, but it isn't as good as Sen's. And my opinion by doing this is so you will not only be able to experience the uses of a demon, but also have to work harder and learn. @Sen: Dude your a great rper, so good you truely don't need a demon and we both know demons can make good rp development tools. So thats why Snuff is getting it. And with you at mist I know you can help her become a better rper. Your sample was the best one so far fyi, just those who aren't that good at rping need the help, and by this she can get that help. I hope you understand mate. Good job none the less This was not just Shruikan's choice, this was made by the crew as a whole. And with you in the same village as Beth, you can help her become a better RPer, and on't forget, cursemarks are coming soon too smile
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 10:30 am
lol, my 2 months of RPing actually payed off...thanks crew, and i loved your RP example sen
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 11:07 am
Haha yea dude I udnerstand...I didn't see her application until after i posted mine, and yea I'll be in Kirigakure probably with hyouton because that woman in my sample gave me a good idea, not the akatsuki part though not doing that here. I'll be back for a curse amrk though...definitely and I'm not going to apply for a kekkai genkai yet just so that i can get a curse mark.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 11:15 am
I think we can allow cursemarks to be put on ppl with bloodline, look at sasuke, and all the other ppl who had them in manga, they almsot all had some bloodline going.
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 11:48 am
you should add my name to the sanbi's page...so no one accepdentily applies for it
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Posted: Tue Aug 31, 2010 7:56 pm
Username: Kevin522Seven
Rpc Name: Owen Hitsguya
Element(s): Earth, Lightning
Village: Sand
Link to Profile: profile
Bijuu wanted: Tailed Bijuu Nanabi
Why should I give this to you? Because sand doesn't have a demon yet... I have an understanding of how to limit myself when it comes to using powerful attributes. I'm an ok rper, not the best but good enough to get the point across. If i can say the least, because I am capable of handling this Bijuu, without the need of using it unless necessary.
How much do you know about it? It is the most intelligent of the Bijuu. It is the smallest. The demon can create small tremers, and fly at great speeds. and when it has clay it is able to transform. This demon normally hunts from under ground before capturing it's prey. It likes to keep to itself,
Rp Sample:
Owen was sitting on his own. Reading a book, while eating an apple. The fact that he was able to do such a thing in the middle of a war, was beyond him. He sat there for a good hour, almost to the most exciting part of the book, when suddenly a huge tremor occurred not so far off. And he only knew the distance because of his abilities. He stood and put away the book and finished his apple. He didn't have a lot of time now that the smaller tremors were getting closer. He quickly changed into his camouflage mode and moved quietly to an area that would be less open. There were to men, blood stained as they were. They ran into the opening. "Dang, that man was scary, but at least he'd dead now." Came the first's voice. then the other, "Yeah, we almost died, it's a good thing that were not the ones on the inside fighting in the village." When Kevin heard this, he analyzed them to notice they were enemy ninja. He quickly formed jutsu and sent tyles of earth at the first one, completely surprising them, this killed the first one since it was a complete surprise. Although the second saw him since due to his use of the jutsu, he had to drop the camoflauge. The man formed seals and shot flames at Owen, who in return used his earth defense and blocked it above him. The ninja started on more handsigns, but, would not finish them as he was pulled under ground, since Owen used earth military movement in conjunction with head hunter jutsu to pull him under leaving his head at the surface. He looked as Owen pulled out of the ground. He was scared." W-why are you doing this!?" Owen smiled. "Simple, you attacked my village, and those that do this, become my prey." He then took out his blade, and in a moments time, a loud ack! sound could be heard. Although if anyone came here, both bodies would be gone. After this the war suddenly started to change tide, The winds were strong that day. Owen stepped into the forest, suddenly a sharp pain in his chest occurred, he had not been completely in control of the demon, since it's thirst for killing took over after the mention of the death of Owen's comrade. He fell to his knees huffing, due to the fact that the demon took over, he was not used to the powers it used to get things done, he'd only just learned how to use camouflage. he stood up slowly and clutching his arm he walked back to the village. The demon chanted in his head. "You will never have control, now that you know I'm here, I will take over when you are weak!"
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 11:46 am
Add a bit more and spruce it up with demon power. Remember, most of the time when you start out with a demon, you hav eno control so your movements are not thought out, they jsut flow.
otherwise it looks good, just needs more length.
Also, we like 2 1/2 line-3 lines for the Why and How parts.
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 11:47 am
Yes, thank you. Sorry I didn't get to it faster, I was designing other things and working a village lol. But yes, once you do that I'll judge
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 12:13 pm
Fenrir Graveheart FINISHED!Username: Fenrir Graveheart Rpc Name: Hirose Kemuri Element(s): Fire, Wind Village: Cloud Link to Profile: http://www.gaiaonline.com/guilds/viewtopic.php?t=20003351&page=2Bijuu wanted: Nibi Why should I give this to you? Because I can create an excellent combo with it and bring out all of the Nibi's powers in ways no other person could. If you remember this character from New Gen then you know what I'm talking about. How much do you know about it? Just about anything you could ask. I know that the Nibi host has basic fire immunity, and that the demon herself is a lazy old lady. I also know that the Nibi user auto-learns the Ressurection of an Impure World jutsu and can willingly use it without a needed sacrifice to summon back anyone previously killed after having the seal put on them, a fact that often gets overlooked by other applicants. Rp Sample:Hirose stood his ground as his sensei punched him square in the face, knocking him to the forest floor. "Where is it!? Show me!" the man shouted and kicked the hooded-man hard in the ribs. It knocked the wind out of Hirose, but even still he did not make a sound. "You'll never get anywhere in your training if you don't unleash it! So, are you!? Are you really the host!? You fraud!" the teacher raised his foot and stomped down on Hirose's head, but suddenly a clawed hand snapped up and grabbed the boot. Holding it in place Hirose turned his head up to look at his sensei, and through the darkness of his hood two golden eyes glowed with a furious rage.
The sensei tried to pull his foot back but Hirose gripped it tight, his sharpening nails digging into the soft leather. Slowly an aura of black demonic chakra poured out of Hirose's hoodie, and covered over his entire body. As it finished layering him the chakra turned a dark blue and formed a single tail out of Hirose's lower back. Suddenly a dark purple ring of flame shot out of the ground around the host and his prey, forming a perfect circle around them. To the teacher though the flame was invisible. Never the less he was starting to panic now. "H-Hirose, thats enough. You've proven that you're truly the host. You can stop now." he said to the hooded young man, his confidence starting to waver. However, Hirose didn't seem to hear his teacher. In his mind an old woman's voice cackled throughout his subconsciousness."Hehehehe, pooor child. Always trying to hold back.....and always failing."Hirose's appearance shifted into that of a wild cat, and a second tail of dark blue flame formed. In a loud roar the student crushed his sensei's foot in his hand and the ring of flame around them suddenly exploded into a widespread storm of demonic fire. The sensei's final screams of life were drowned out by the roar of the Nibi and the cackling applause the burning woods made around them.
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