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 Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 4:48 pm
He looks great and is an interesting character. He's kind of adorable in a deformed way but has a horrible secret. ;n;
I'm pretty sure the only question I have is would overhearing certain conversations or partaking in certain conversations about things that can relate to his past trigger Nogi? Can Yogurt watch some students eat things like organs and be okay?
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Posted: Wed Sep 01, 2010 6:37 pm
oh wow i didn't think of that. when i see him going to school i see him as the oblivious type- thinking that everything is a dream, and everyone's human and is just abnormal or something. XD
so if he ever saw someone doing something a normal human would be disgusted with, he would just edge away. his memories of eating his mom and sis are buried pretty deep so things like that won't really effect him. ;3
thanks for the crit!
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Posted: Thu Sep 02, 2010 12:47 am
i changed some info since humans or even half humans aren't allowed in Halloween. i managed to change it without killing his back story. OTL
so now basically Nogi only remembers the fateful night, and his body is 100% monster that retained human shape. hopefully that's ok.
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Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 6:25 am
I like the bi-polarness to him. That kind of instability can be fun to interact with, both as the owner of the character or someone roleplaying with the character. Then again, I'm a big fan of unpredictable natures in general so it could be biased.
I'm assuming that the teachers use his nickname instead of his real name? What would happen if he came across a teacher that refused to use nicknames? I knew a few of those in school. Seems like it could cause a lot of trouble for him, the teacher and the class?
I think he's an adorable character overall.
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Posted: Fri Sep 03, 2010 5:38 pm
thank you very much for the crit! ;3
Yogurt doesn't respond to his real name but he still recognizes it as his own. He'll get into trouble for not responding but he'll normally respond if he's paying attention to the teacher.
So if he's reading a book and is really involved, then he probably won't respond. But if he's looking at the teacher and he says Nogi, Yogurt will know that the teacher is talking about him.
However he's still uncomfortable with hearing his real name in general and will normally shy away from people who call him with his real name.
thank you! i didn't even think about the teachers.
and thank you for the compliment. > w <
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Posted: Mon Sep 06, 2010 9:32 pm
updated his fear~
and i'll probably be giving Nogi a friend... well an OOC friend named Sheeki. i'll be creating his/her quest thread soon.
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 2:52 am
FIRST : About the race, don't say 'kinda'! That makes it unsure, what or who he is.
SECOND : thats all. ^^
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Posted: Fri Sep 10, 2010 9:49 pm
In his story it explains that he's a fail gluttony incarnate. ;<
that's why it says "kind of"
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Posted: Wed Sep 22, 2010 5:25 pm
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Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 3:01 pm
The only thing I can think of to ask is, Does the demon’s order work both ways? Can a demon command him to turn back into Yogurt from Nogi or only to turn into Nogi from Yogurt?
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 12:30 am
I say, I like the cut of his jib. I can't find anything glaringly wrong or any inconsistencies. I wish you luck with him! ^^
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Posted: Sat Sep 25, 2010 3:14 am
@catmagick
i didn't think of that! ;O
yes, it works both ways but of course, Yogurt won't remember what happened as Nogi even if the demon ordered it as well.
@Avid_RPer18
thank you very much! ;3
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Posted: Sun Sep 26, 2010 1:45 pm
Wow, I really like the Yogurt, it is very original, nice job! I can't find anything overly wrong in your description, it looks great. Are there any special triggers that set him into Nogi, or is it random, or did I miss that? Good luck and *bumps it up heart
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Posted: Sun Sep 26, 2010 2:10 pm
thank you very much! ;3
Yogurt's triggers are high stress and by the demand of a demon. otherwise he's highly reluctant to change.
Nogi's triggers are when he's alone and there are no longer stress inducers. also by the command from a demon.
thanks for the crit!
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Posted: Wed Oct 06, 2010 10:21 am
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